(精品文档)高中作文提分技巧PPT演示课件.ppt

.,1,方向正确,努力才有意义.方向正确,目标才能快速到达.,.,2,成功作文之我见,准确的审题清晰的提纲规范的语言仔细的检查整洁的书写,.,3,准确的审题,内容:即写什么,对中英文提示,图示要认真思索,明确要求.形式:即用何种体裁,要清楚几种文体之间的区别.细节:字数、人称、是否要标题等。,.,4,清晰的提纲,文章要有层次，各段的主题句是否合理，是否紧扣主题。常见的结构有：,表达意见,客观陈述主题内容,一部分人的观点，另一部分观点,自己的观点,分析问题结构,是什么,为什么,怎么办,.,5,清晰的提纲,不要遗漏任何信息要点句与句之间，段与段与段之间注意过渡，并且过渡符合逻辑。,启、承、转、合四步骤,启-创造良好的开端,承-承上启下,转-巧妙转折过渡,合-完美结束全文,.,6,启-创造良好的开端,常用表达启的过渡词语和词组InthefirstplaceFirstofallFirstlyGenerallyspeakingTostartwithTobeginwith,常用表达启的句型有AsisknowntoallAsweallknowAstheproverbsaysItissaidthatAsanewwayofItisclear/obviousTherehavebeenmanychanges,.,7,承-承上启下,常用表达承的过渡词语和词组Secondly,inaddition,Besides,furthermoreMoreover,whatsmore,forexample,Inotherwords,obviouslyAtthesametime,常用表达承的句型有ComparedwiththatAsfarasIknowItistruethatItcanbeeasilyprovedthatThereasonwhyThereisnodoubtthatItisnowonderthatWhatsmoreseriousisthat,.,8,转-巧妙转折过渡,常用表达转的过渡词语和词组ButhoweverontheotherhandonthecontraryinanycaseorWhileinspiteofRegardlessof,instead,常用表达转的句型有Everycoinhastwosides.ButforAnotherexampleisthatTakingeverythingintoconsiderationThatswhyIfeelthat,.,9,合-完美结束全文,常用表达合的过渡词语和词组InawordingeneralInshortaboveallFinally,inconclusionAtlastasaresultOnthewholeInsummary,常用表达合的句型有SomethingmustbedonetoItcanbesafelyconcludedfrom-thatInmyopinionWecandrawtheconclusionthatItcanbebrieflysummedupasfollows,.,10,规范的语言,用自己熟悉的句型和词组:保证所写句子的正确,尽量使用常见的单词,短语,同时,避免生搬硬造汉式英语,避免原创英语,避免使用偏词.在正确的前提下,尽量使用高级表达:使用高级词汇,必要的情况下使用从句结构,同一个词避免重复,学会变通.,.,11,作文中常见的错误,两个典型错误,Therebe结构后加动词(应改为从句或非谓语动词)Moreandmore的正确表达(betterandbetter),其他常见错误,帮助withthehelpof表发生不能用被动happenbreakouttakeplace实现realisecometrue倒装only后加状语才能倒装,.,12,常见的高级变通,1.Theyswamtothebankoftheriver.(toward)2.Ilikeswimmingbest.(Myfavoritesportisswimming.)3.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.(Youwillhavenotroublefindingmyhome.)4.Ilikelisteningtopopularmusic.(enjoy)5.Inourschool,thereare26classrooms.(Ourschoolismadeupof26classrooms.),toward,.,13,常见的高级变通,6.IdecidedtobeadoctorwhenIgrowup.(havemadeupmymind)7.Theboydoesntliketocleanhisroom.(isunwillingto)8.MyhometownisinthesouthofChina(islocatedin)9.Therearemanytreesandflowersinourschool.(Ourschooliscoveredwithtreesandflowers.),.,14,常见的高级变通,10.Onesummerholiday,myparentswenttoshanghai.Theytookmysisterwiththem.(Onesummerholiday,myparentswenttoshanghai,takingmysisteralong.)11.Mybravedogsavedmylittlesister.(Itwasmybravedogthatsavedmylittlesister.)12.Myfathersatinthesofa.Hewassmokingandreadinganewspaper.(Myfatherwassmokinginthesofawithanewspaperinhishand.),.,15,例文赏析,Todaynothingspecialhappened.Ireallyhavenothingtowriteabout.Asaresult,Idecidenottowriteanythingtoday.ImafraidthatourEnglishteacherwontbehappyandperhapshewillscoldmefornotfinishingmyassignment.,.,16,仔细的检查,体裁格式是否正确合理.内容是否有遗漏.语言是否有规范,准确,时态是否正确一致,主动被动是否混淆.句子是否缺少成分,特别是动词.动词,名词的形式是否正确.单词拼写,大小写,标点符号是否正确,字数是否合乎要求.,.,17,整洁的书写,书法口诀横平竖直点要圆,笔画流畅点丰满,先直后弯写好撇,斜度一致才美观,连笔书写速度快,点画横画最后添,书写到位很重要,慢中求好讲规范,好中求快多多练,书写高分笑开颜.,卷面书写整洁,一目了然做到左齐右不齐,尽量少用连字符.首字母大写要明显,分段要清晰.字母大写适当,单词之间隔一字母左右的距离.,.,18,持之以恒的积累和训练,多背例文,学会欣赏例文.把不同的文章类型分清,并了解每种文体的写作要求及特点,做到有的放矢.勤动手勤创作,可多尝试同学之间相互监督,批改,共同进步.,.,19,成功是追求完美,勤奋工作,从失败中学习,忠于职守和坚持不懈的综合结晶.,.,20,高考专家预测高考英语作文,高考英语作文题目经常与考生直接关心的社会热点话题无直接联系，但仔细琢磨，又会发现一些联系，就是说“热点归热点，关键找角度”。不要身陷逐字逐句“英汉对号”式的字面翻译，要把表达的主动权始终握在自己手里。,.,21,高考专家预测高考英语作文,有关“跨文化”话题例：假设你叫李华，你的外国朋友John想了解中国的春节，请根据以下提纲，给他写一封短信：1、春节在中国人中的地位2、春节前，人们3、春节期间，人们参考词汇：对联couplet爆竹firecracker,.,22,Howtimeflies!Fourmothshavepassedsincewesaweachotherlasttime.Icannothelpbutmissyou.YouaskedmeaboutChineseSpringFestival.NowIwouldliketotellyousomethingaboutit.TheSpringFestivalisaChinesetraditionalfestival.Itisthemostimportantandenjoyableone.Afewdaysbeforethefestival,housesarecleanedandredcoupletsareputuponthedoorsofeveryhousehold.Theyaresaidtofrightenawaytheghosts.Onthatday,peoplearedressedup.Firecrackersringoutintheair,whichaddstotheatmosphereofthefestival.Peopleafterayearshardworkbegintorelaxandvisitoneanother.Presentsanddinnersaregiventocelebratethehappyreunionoffriendsandrelatives.Familiesgettogether.TheyhavejiaoziandenjoytheNewYearTVshow.Customsmayvaryfromplacetoplace,butthesamehappyatmosphereistobefoundeverywhereinthecountry.Now,IhopeyouhavesomeideaofChineseSpringFestival.Bestwishes,.,23,有关“财富、健康、幸福”话题,根据下面提示，写一篇财富与快乐的短文。(1)一些人认为财富能带来快乐。(2)另一些人认为钱多了不是一件好事。(3)提出自己的看法。注意：单词数120个左右。,.,24,Somepeoplethinkwealthcanbringhappinesstothem.Itistruethatmostofthemtrytoacquirewealthbymeansofhonestlabor.Theyworkhardandovercomemanydifficulties.Afterdoingthis,theyfeelveryhappyandpleased.Eventheirspendingmoneyisakindofhappiness。Butsomepeoplebelievewealthcantbringthemhappiness.Forexample,whenonegetsafortune,thefamilymemberswillcomefromdifferentpartsofthecountryandtrytosharethewealthwithhim.Andafterwards,theywillquarrelwithoneanother,tryingtosharemore.Andsometimesevenappearbloodyfightandkilling.Whataterribleresult!Inmyopinion,Ithinkthereisnodoubtthatwealthbringshappiness,especiallyinthemodernsociety.Ifyouhavemoneyyoucanleadacomfortableandcolorfullife.Butweshouldtakeaproperattitudetowardswealth.Remember：moneyisnoteverything。,.,25,有关“教育、校园类”话题,假设你叫李华，你将作为高三毕业生代表，根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用英文作一简短的告别演讲：1、对三年高中生活的怀念；2、对老师的感谢；3、对母校的祝福。,.,26,Myteachersandfellowstudents,Inacoupleofweeks,wellsaygoodbyetoourmotherschool.Howtimeflies!NowItsreallyhardformetoputmyfeelingsintowords.Thepastthreeyearshasbeenreallyawonderfuljourneywithyouguys,fulloflaughterandtears.Tomakethejourneysafeandfruitful,ourgreatteacherscontributedtheirtime,energy,loveandthewholeheart.Here,weareextremelygratefulforallthatyou,dearteachers,havedoneforus.Itllsoonbethetimeforustodepart,thoughunwillingly.Butitisnottheend.Itjustmeansthatweregoingtobeginanewjourney.Finally,onbehalfofallthegraduatespresenthere,letmeextendoursincerewishesforourmotherschoolandrespectableteachers.Thankyou!,.,27,有关“环境友好型、资源节约型社会”话题,近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向EnglishHorizons杂志编辑部投稿：有人建议你的建议1。不浪费粮食和纸张2。尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋3。毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用？注意：1。不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节；2。词数：120字左右，开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数；3。参考词汇：方便筷disposablechopsticks,.,28,Recently，therehasbeenanactivityof“doingyourbitforanenergy-savingsociety”inourschool.Ourschoolmatesarehighlyconcernedabouttheincreasinglackofenergyandprovidetheirownsuggestions.Somestudentssuggestthatweshouldntwasteanyfoodorpaper,thoughtheyappearveryeasytoget.Meanwhile,someotherstudentsthinkitadvisabletorefusetousedisposablechopsticksandplasticbags.Besides,itisalsostronglyrecommendedthatthoseusedtextbooksaswellasreferencebooksofgraduates,whicharestillingoodcondition,notbethrownbutrecycled.Actually,therearestillquitealotthatwecaneasilydo。Suchas,trytotakebusesorridebicyclesinsteadofdrivingcars,etc.Allofthesewilldefinitelyhelptobuildanenergy-savingsociety.,.,29,低碳生活low-carbonlife,地球温室效应是全世界人类共同关注的焦点，如今世界各国都在倡导低碳生活以减少二氧化碳的排放，请写一篇关于从我做起的英语文章。参考消息：1每周有一天吃素2不使用电器，关掉他们，包括灯。3尽量使用自己的杯子等餐具。4不要购买不必要的衣物。5外出尽量走路或骑自行车6