高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化ppt课件

高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,1,.,2,.,3,.,【特点】1.英语不好。2.经常用小事麻烦别人，例如写信、发邮件。3.好高骛远，肚子里连点儿墨水都没有就想要参加学生会组织活动，还让别人出谋划策。4.曾经喜欢过唱歌，曾经喜欢过跳舞，曾经参加过朗诵比赛，当过奥运志愿者，还想去世博会当志愿者，曾幻想过去支教。5.经常在网络上结交世界各地的笔友，并把他们骗到家里来住。6.不断留级，几十年还没有毕业。7.他会分身术，能同时以多个年级身份出现在多个地方。8.他热心公益，每次活动都要当志愿者，天天给报社投稿，但是一直没有见到回复。,4,.,我有什么办法，我也很绝望啊！,5,.,假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑假课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(LearningCenter)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1.本人简介；2.求助内容；3.约定时间；4.你的联系方式(Email:lihua;Phone:12345678)注意：词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,6,.,7,.,“应用了较多的词汇”,Whatdoesitmeanbythis?,8,.,1)Weseeitasimportantforthesuccessofdevelopment.Weseeitasessentialforthesuccessofdevelopment.2)SuddenlyIhadagoodidea.SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.3)PlentyofmemoryworkisgoodtoEnglishstudy.PlentyofmemoryworkwillcontributetoEnglishstudy.4）Thequestionisreallydifficulttounderstand.Thequestionisreallyconfusing.,对比分析,9,.,1)Wefinditimportantforthedevelopmentofsuccess.Wefinditessentialforthedevelopmentofsuccess.（高级单词代替普通单词）2)SuddenlyIhadagoodidea.SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.（词组短语代替普通单词）3)PlentyofmemoryworkisgoodtoEnglishstudy.PlentyofmemoryworkwillcontributetoEnglishstudy.(高级词组替代普通词组)4）Thequestionisreallydifficulttounderstand.Thequestionisreallyconfusing.(高级词汇代替常见表达）,对比分析,10,.,1)Weseeitasimportantforthesuccessofdevelopment.Weseeitasessentialforthesuccessofdevelopment.形容词：goodexcellentdifferentcarefulcautious动词：spend_thank_meet_名词：wayopinionperspectiveduty_/responsibility副词：greatly-strongly/sharply/_so_/accordingly,一、高级单词代替普通单词,11,.,1)Weseeitasimportantforthesuccessofdevelopment.Weseeitasessentialforthesuccessofdevelopment.形容词：goodexcellentdifferentvariouscarefulcautious动词：spenddevotethankappreciatemeetencounter名词：wayapproachopinionperspectivedutyobligation/responsibility副词：greatly-strongly/sharply/enormouslysoconsequently/accordingly,12,.,SuddenlyIhadagoodidea.SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.1)Ihopetogetsomehelpfromyou.Itogetsomehelpfromyou2)Iwonderhowtosolvetheproblem.Iwonderhowtothetheproblem.3)Youdohavetoconsiderthefeelingsofothers.Youhavetothefeelingsofothers.,二、词组短语替代普通单词,13,.,SuddenlyIhadagoodidea.SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.1)Ihopetogetsomehelpfromyou.Iamanxioustoobtainsomehelpfromyou2)Iwonderhowtosolvetheproblem.Iwonderhowtofigureouttheproblem.3)Youdohavetoconsiderthefeelingsofothers.Youhavetotakethefeelingsofothersintoconsideration.,二、词组短语替代普通单词,14,.,三、高级词组代替普通词组,PlentyofmemoryworkisgoodforEnglishstudy.PlentyofmemoryworkwillcontributetoEnglishstudy.Ithoughtofagoodidea.AgoodideameWeshouldtryourbesttopreventtheenvironmentfrombeingpolluted.Weshouldtopreventtheenvironmentfrombeingpolluted.IammakinguseofeachopportunitytopracticemyoralEnglish.IameachopportunitytopracticemyoralEnglish.,15,.,三、高级词组替代普通词组,PlentyofmemoryworkisgoodforEnglishstudy.PlentyofmemoryworkwillcontributetoEnglishstudy.Ithoughtofagoodidea.AgoodideaoccurredtomeWeshouldtryourbesttopreventtheenvironmentfrombeingpolluted.Weshouldsparenoefforttopreventtheenvironmentfrombeingpolluted.IammakinguseofeachopportunitytopracticemyoralEnglish.IamtakingadvantageofeachopportunitytopracticemyoralEnglish.,16,.,四、高级词汇替代常见表达,Thequestionisreallydifficulttounderstand.Thequestionisreallyconfusing.IaminterestedinlearningEnglish.IcherishmyenthusiasmforlearningEnglish.Ihavenoideawhetherornottogoabroad.Iaminadilemmaofwhetherornottogoabroad.Sheaimstowinthematch.Towinthematchisherpriority.,17,.,总结：,高级词汇代替普通词汇词组短语代替单个词汇高级词组代替普通词组高级词汇代替普通表达,18,.,假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑假课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(LearningCenter)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1.本人简介；2.求助内容；3.约定时间；4.你的联系方式(Email:lihua;Phone:12345678)注意：词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,19,.,20,.,“应用了较多的语法结构”,Whatdoesitmeanbythis?,21,.,高级句型,简单句的高级形式，即简单句中含非谓语动词(特别是作定语和状语)、介词短语等复合句，包括状语从句(特别是表示时间、条件、让步、目的、结果的从句)，名词性从句(特别是主语从句、同位语从句)，定语从句(特别是非限制性定语从句)。特殊句型如：被动句强调句型：Itisthat.；用do,does,did强调一般现在时和一般过去时的谓语动词。倒装句型：only的倒装句、notonlybutalso的倒装句、sothat的倒装句及notuntil的倒装句。,形式主语句型：Itis+adj./n.+forsb.todosth.Sb.was/weredoingsth.,whendid正在做某事时，突然又发生另一事。Thereisnodoubt/denyingthat毫无疑问等并列句和平行结构也可以适当添加，特别是and,but,bothand,notonlybutalso,eitheror,notbut等并列连词的用法。修辞手法，如比喻句、感叹句、排比句及双重否定句等恰当引入名言,一、原因和时间状语从句变非谓语,一、原因和时间状语从句变非谓语,Whentheyheardthenews,theyalljumpedforjoy.,Hearingthenews,theyalljumpedforjoy.,时间状语从句变非谓语,Whenthegirlrealizeshermommustbeverytiredafteradayswork,shehelpstoremovethebagfromhermomsshoulder.,优化_,25,.,一、原因和时间状语从句变非谓语,Whentheyheardthenews,theyalljumpedforjoy.,Hearingthenews,theyalljumpedforjoy.,时间状语从句变非谓语,Whenthegirlrealizeshermommustbeverytiredafteradayswork,shehelpstoremovethebagfromhermomsshoulder.,优化：Realizinghermommustbeverytiredafteradayswork,shehelpstoremovethebagfromhermomsshoulder.,26,.,一、原因和时间状语从句变非谓语,TheydidnotgototheSummerPalacebecausetheyhadalotofworktodo,Havingalotofworktodo，theydidntgototheSummerPalace.,原因状语从句变非谓语,TheboyCaterwentuptohisteacherandsaid“sorry”becausehewasgreatlytouchedbyhiswords,优化：_,27,.,一、原因和时间状语从句变非谓语,TheydidnotgototheSummerPalacebecausetheyhadalotofworktodo,Havingalotofworktodo，theydidntgototheSummerPalace.,原因状语从句变非谓语,TheboyCaterwentuptohisteacherandsaid“sorry”becausehewasgreatlytouchedbyhiswords,优化：Greatlytouchedbyhisteacherswords，theboylaterwentuptohimandsaid“sorry”.,28,.,2016全国卷I第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr.Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯,Knowingthatyouaretheexpertinthisfield,Iamwritingthislettertoaskforsomeadviceon.,二、notonlybutalso用于倒装,Televisionnotonlyappealstothosewhocanreadbuttothosewhocant.,Notonlydoestelevisionappealtothosewhocanreadbuttothosewhocant.,Thepoormannotonlyhadbeenfined,butalsohehadbeensenttoprison.,优化：_,二、notonlybutalso用于倒装,31,.,四、notonlybutalso用于倒装,Televisionnotonlyappealstothosewhocanreadbuttothosewhocant.,Notonlydoestelevisionappealtothosewhocanreadbuttothosewhocant.,Thepoormannotonlyhadbeenfined,butalsohehadbeensenttoprison.,优化：Notonlyhadthepoormanbeenfined,butalsohehadbeensenttoprison,32,.,（2015全国卷I）假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：,（2015全国卷I）假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：,NotonlyareweinterestedinarticlesconcerningtheirholidaysandfestivalsbutalsothelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.,我们不仅对节日风俗的文章感兴趣，也对中学生生活文章感兴趣。,(15四川卷）假如你是李华，你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿；2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由；3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议；4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。,SeeingyourpostontheInternetthatyouarelookingfor