letter-of-thanks313.ppt

Letterofthanks,Amy8,Problems?,Ijustdontknowhowtowriteit.,Dontworry!Letslearn!,Step1:Standardforevaluation,划档：13-15/10-12/7-9/4-6/1-3/0评分使先根据文章内容和语言初步确定档次，然后再按要求适当调整给分。词数（60-100）,100的总分中再扣除2分评分时注意的主要内容：要点，词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性以及上下文连贯性。标点和拼写也是语言准确性的一个方面，须予以考虑。如果书写较差以至影响交际，分数降档。,写作格式format第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助；第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。Vocabulary：(感谢)v.thank,appreciate;n.thanks,gratitude,appreciation;adj.thankful,grateful,appreciative.,obligedadj.感激的,Step2:letterofthanks,Phrases：因而感激sb.,thankyouforappreciateonesdoingbegrateful/thankfultosb.forexpressmythanks/gratitudeforOwe(欠)sb.alotforbeindebtedtosb.for,Step3:layoutofaletterofthanks,Errorsinyours:1.ForBarry:2.ToBarry.3.DearBarry:4.(notitleatthebeginningornosignatureintheend),Correct!DearBarry,.Yourssincerely,LiHua,Step3:layoutofaletterofthanks,DearBarry,Howiseverythinggoing?Iamwritingtoyouto.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua,Youcanuseitineveryletter!,Step4:beautifulsentencesopening,IamwritingthislettertothankyouforIamwritingtoexpressmysincerethanksforIwouldliketoconveyinthislettermyheartfelt(adj.衷心的)thankstoyouforWithdeepestgratitudeIwriteyouthisletterforIamwritingthisletterbecauseIamindebtedtoyoufor,Step4:beautifulsentencesdetails,Itwasyourkindhelpthat(强调句型)Itwasnice/kind/thoughtful(adj.考虑周到的)ofyouto.Remembertocoverallthekeypointsasrequired!,Step4:beautifulsentencesending,Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.IappreciateitmorethanIcansay.Mytruegratitudeisbeyondthewordsdescription.IfeeldeeplyindebtedtoyouandIreallydonotknowhowtothankyouenoughforyourhelp.Pleaseacceptmysincerethanksforyourhelp,whichIwillneverforget.,Step4:coherence(连贯性),First,/Firstly,Secondly,/Then,/Afterthat,Intheend,/Finally,Meanwhile,/Whatsmore,/Inaddition,/Besides,/Furthermore,上次作业题目：,假定你是高二学生李华，暑假参加了再墨尔本的姐妹学校YerraValleyGrammar的游学活动。回国后给hostfamily的小伙伴Barry写一封感谢信，要点如下：感谢他们一家的照顾，分享游学的体会，询问寄给他们的礼物是否收到，邀请他们一家来中国玩。注意：词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,Step6:possibleversion,Step7:writingtemplate,Dear_，Iamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudefor_(感谢的原因)Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistancein_(对方给你的具体帮助),IfearthatIwouldhavebeen_(没有对方帮助的后果)Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwho_(给出细节).Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.Yourssincerely，LiHua,Practicemakesperfect!,Step8:practice,在这两年多的高中生活中，13班这个大集体已经成为我们的另一个家。我们一起经历了分班，运动会，篮球赛等等，在这个大家庭里，肯定有你想要感谢的同学或老师，现在请你写一封感谢信给那个他/她，内容包括：感谢的原因具体事件等细节邀请他/她国庆节有空去你家玩。注意：80词左右，可以适当增加细节使行文流畅。,Amysversion,Dearclass,Iamwritingtothankyouforyourcompanionshipformorethanaschoolyear.IstillrememberwhenIfirstmetyou,youallworebigsmiles.Thissummer,IheardsomeofyoufeltsorrythatImightnotteachyou.IwasalittlemovedbecauseIdidhavesomefeelingforyou