Persuasive Writing 英语写作——劝说建议

,高二,英语,写作,之,劝说,建议,PersuasiveWriting,SomeQuestions:,Canyouimaginesomecaseswherewepersuadeothersorgetpersuaded?,SomeExamples:,TVShopping,Fake“Babaka”,SarahsspeechonthefuneralofDiana,TheLayersofPersuasion（劝说的层次）,Attitudethesis(论点)Reason/goalargument（论据）ClosingConclusion(结论),Self-intro,Conclusion:Youdoneedthis,TheFlowofPersuasion（劝说的流程）,Writingtask,假设你是某大学天文系的一名学生，请你写一封建议信，劝说哥白尼发表他的理论。你可以从以下几点阐明理由：(1)现存理论存在的问题；(2)哥白尼为证实自己的新理论多年来所做的努力；(3)科学的发展需要新理论的提出。请注意书写工整，标点正确，层次分明，表达清晰。,1.Attitude,我非常想阅读你的关于太阳系的新理论。我希望你能发表它。,Iwouldverymuchliketoreadyournewtheoryaboutthesolarsystem.Ihopeyouwillpublishit.,2.Reason/goal(1),我明白现在的理论所存在的问题。,Iunderstandtheproblemswiththepresenttheory.,2.Reason/goal(1),如果地球是宇宙的中心，那么行星的运行方式不是你所预料的那样。提示：Theway.isnotwhatif,Thewaytheplanetsmoveisnotwhatyouexpectediftheearthwasthecentreoftheuniverse.,2.Reason/goal(2),我了解你的观察已经认真地进行了多年。,Iknowyourobservationshavebeenverycarefullycarriedoutovermanyyears.,我理解你担心自己的理论发表后会发生什么事。,Iknowyouworryaboutwhatwillhappenifyoupublishyournewtheory.,2.Reason/goal(2),不管人们怎么反对这个新理论，时间会证明你的理论正确与否。,2.Reason/goal(2),Nomatterhowpeopleareagainstit,timewillprovewhetheryourideasarerightorwrong.,3.Conclusion,因此我希望你能认真地思考我的建议。,SoIhopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsiderationseriously.,IamacollegestudentmajoringinAstronomy.Imwritingtoyouwiththehopethatyoucanpublishyourtheory.Thereasonsareasfollows:,The1stParagraphIntro&Attitude,Tostartwith,Iunderstandtheproblemswiththepresenttheory.Thewaytheplanetsmoveisnotwhatyouwouldexpectiftheearthwasthecentreoftheuniverse.SoIagreewithyouthatweneedanewtheory.,The2ndParagraphPresentArgument,Inaddition,Iknowyourobservationshavebeenverycarefullycarriedoutovermanyyears.Nowyoumusthavethecouragetopublishthem.Sciencecanneveradvanceunlesspeoplehavethecourageoftheirbeliefs.Lastbutnotleast,Iknowyouworryaboutwhatwillhappenifyoupublishyournewtheory.Buthoweverpeopleopposeit,timewillshowifyourideasarerightorwrong.,The3rdParagraphPr