高二英语作文建议信公开课

Aletterofgivingadvice,1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。,写作攻略,Heading表明写作意图；一两个句子2.Body提出具体建议；层次分明3.Ending总结；呼应主题,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,建议信写作的注意事项：a这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。b这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。,DearXXX,Iamglad/sorrytohearthatyouhavedifficultyinlearningEnglish.Ifeelthatitismydutytomakesomesuggestionsconcerningenvironmentalprotection.Hereissomeadvicethatmaybebeneficialtoyou.Firstly，.Secondly,Thirdly,.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful.Yours,XXX,写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句,A.建议信开头常用句式(对应材料,表明写作意图)1AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper/ontheinternet,Iamsorrytoknowthat2Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto3Iknowyouhavetroubleinafterreadingyourletter.4.Ifeelthatitismydutytomakesomesuggestionsconcerning.5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadviceonwithyou.,B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议及理由，井然有序。1.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould我想如果你能可能会更好2.Inmypersonalopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingactions.在我看来，如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。3.Firstly，Secondly,Thirdly,.4.Tobeginwith,.Inaddition,.Whatsmore,.Lastbutnotleast,.,建议信结尾常用句式,1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoseriousconsideration.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。,假设你是李华，在校园英语论坛（forum）上看到一些同学的帖子，他们在就如何学好英语寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回帖，结合自己的经验提出一些建议。内容提示：1）培养学习兴趣；2）找到适合的学习方法；3）勤学好问，多实践。词数100左右,改错,1.IllhelpyouinyourEnglish2.MyEnglishisnotverywell.3.Finishitonyourself.4.Therearesomeadvise.5.DontafraidofEnglish.6.Setupalearningaim,goaheadtoachieveit.7.Setdowntheknowledgeintheclass8.Youmustlistencarefullyandfollowteacherssaid.9.Onlyifyoureadaboutitaheadofschedule,youwilllearnitbetter.,with,/Onyourown,is,be,and,what,advice,willyou,Well-good,On-by,Iamsureyoullbesuccess.Youcansetdownthatyouthinkisimportant.,successful,Youcansetdownwhatyouthinkisimportant.,all,Beautifulsentencesinyourcompositions,1.HereissomeusefuladviceforyouabouthowtolearnEnglishwell(class2JirunZe)2.HearingthatyouareintroublewithEnglish,IdliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtogetalongwellwithEnglish.(Class1MaguoQin)3.NoonecanfailtonoticethefactthatlisteningandreadingareplayinganimportantroleinlearningEnglish.(Class1HanXu),4.IwillgiveyousomenecessaryadvicewhichcanimproveyourEnglish.(Class7XieShuang)5.Noonecandenythefactthatitisimportanttolistentotheteachercarefully.(Cass7LiuxinYan)6.Onlyintheseways,canyouhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.,假设你是李华，在校园英语论坛（forum）上看到一些同学的帖子，他们在就如何学好英语寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回帖，结合自己的经验提出一些建议。内容提示：1）培养学习兴趣；2）找到适合的学习方法；3）勤学好问，多实践。词数100左右,DearFriends,Fromtheforum,IvelearnedthatmanystudentshavesomeproblemsinEnglishlearning.(IamsorrytoknowthatyouhavedifficultyinlearningEnglish.)NowIamwillingtosharemyadvicewithyou.,Hereissomeadvicethatmaybehelpfultoyou.Firstly,itisimportanttocultivate/developyourinterestinlearningEnglish.Asyouknow,interestisthebestteacher,whichcanencourageustolearnEnglishactively.Secondly,findingasuitablemethodissignificant.OnlyifyouuseeffectivemethodscanyouimproveyourEnglish.Thirdly,itissuggestedthatyoushouldaskyo