2010高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导课件

高考英语开放作文指导,开放作文试题的要求：1）文章扣题：描述有的放矢，突出主题；2）思维活跃：发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。3）内容健康充实：内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。,Describeapicture,InterpretitsimpliedmeaningPointoutitsimplicationsinourlife,Giveyourowncomment/suggestion/solution,Structure,漫画的画面细节漫画的夸张寓意(与现实的矛盾之处）,细节,夸张,寓意,Dontcopyotherswayofsolvingtheproblem.Doeverythingintherightway.,读图与立意,细节,夸张,寓意,Thestudentsaswellastheirparentsonlyfocusontheiracademicachievements,neglectingpsychologicalqualityandmoralstandards.,Dontbetooconfidentinreallife.Behonestandmodest.Dontjudgeabookbyitscover.,Describethepicture:,Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,AscanbeseeninthepictureInthepicture,thereare/is(are)doing,withthedetailsandforthetheme,3.,aglassbottle,withonlyalittlewaterinit,istryingtoattachalabeltoitsbody,toannouncetotheworlditisfull.Itsexpressionsuggeststhatitsveryproudandlookingdownontheothers.,1.Inthepicturewecanseeabottleoflesswaterwhoselabeliswrittenfull.,2.Fromthepicturewecanseethatthereisabottle.Ithastwohandsandtriestoputanlabelwritten“full”onitsbody.Asmileisontheneckofthebottle.Insidethebottleistherealittlewater.,HowToDevelopYourArguments,Sample1:,Thebottlewantstocoveritsweaknessandwantstosaysomethinggoodtoit.(purpose)Actually,whatthebottledoesisverystupid.(attitude/judgment)Nowadays,therearesomepeoplelikethebottleinsociety.Theyalwayscovertheirdisadvantagestomakeothersthinktheyareperfectandfullofabilities.Butifwegetalongwiththemforawhile,wellfindthattheyalmostcandonothingbuttelllies.(reality/purpose)So,inmyopinion,weshouldshowotherstherealabilityofus,andshouldntcoverourweaknesses.Whatsmore,wealsoneedmoreknowledgetomakeusfull.(suggestion),Sample2:,Thepictureistryingtoconveytheinformationtousthatweshouldnotbefooledbytheappearance.Weshouldknowwhattheyreallyare.Justlikethebottleinthepicture,onlyseeingthelabelweareeasytoconsiderthebottlefullofwater.Butactuallyitishalf-empty.Inourdailylife,peopletendtofocusontheappearance,sowhatweshoulddoistryingtodigoutthetruth.Justastheproverbgoes,“dontjudgeabookonlybyitscover.”Dontbetakeninbythefalse.,(Theme),(Explanation),(Reality/Solution),(Proverb),(Suggestion),Arguments,InterpretitsimpliedmeaningPointoutitsimplicationsinourlife,Giveyourowncomment/suggestion/solution,HowToDevelopYourArguments,Interpretationandimplication,Byprovidingpurposeandreasonsoreffects/attitude/judgment,Byprovidingexamples/proverbs/explanation,Byanalyzingthepracticalsignificance/reality,Asaresult,itiswisetoenrichourselveswithknowledgeandtrytomakeourheadsfull.,(Description),(Interpretation&Implication),(Suggestion),AnalysisFortheWholePassage,Asisshowninthepicture,thereisahalf-emptybottleisgoingtostickalabelonitsbody,feelingproudandconfident.(details),Thepictureseemstobereflectingakindofsocialphenomenon.Wemightoftenmeetsomepeoplewholookconfident,tryingtoimpressotherswiththeir“rich”knowledge.(reality/purpose)However,justlikethebottleinthepicture,whattheyreallyknowisjustalittle.Thereisnodoubtthattheyneedtolearnmorebecausewhattheyhaveintheirmindisfarfromenough.(result)AsanoldChinesesayinggoes,“emptybottlesmakestheloudestnoise.”(proverb),InyourspokenEnglishclass,yourteachershowsyouthispicture.Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit.,Description:Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,2.Ascanbeseeninthepicture3.Inthepicture,thereare/is(are)doing,Transitionsentences:ThepictureshowsthatItistheexactreflectionof2.ItseemsveryridiculousthatHowever,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.,Opinion/suggestion/solution:AsfarasImconcerned,/Frommypointofview,Itisbetter/advisabletoIconsideritnecessary,Inthepictureaboywithaheavybagistypingquicklyonacomputerwhichhangsoverhischest.Thoughitseemsconvenientsincehecanusethecomputerwhereverhewants,thereisnodoubtthathecantgetridoftheattractionofthecomputer.Thefunnypictureistheexactreflectionofthekidsinmodernsociety,thatistheaddictiontotheelectronicproducts.Somekidsrelyonthemsomuchthattheycanhardlykeeptheirhandsoffthem.Benefitsastheadvancedproductshavebrought,beingaddictedtothemdoesnogoodtothekids.Actuallyawasteoftimeinplayingthemwillhaveabadeffectonkidshealthandstudy,worsestillleadtocommittingcrimes.,Possibleversion:(negative),AsfarasImconcerned,itisacceptabletospendpropertimeinplayingtheelectronicproducts.However,overdoingistospoilthefuture.Instead,thekidsshouldjoininsomeothermeaningfulactivitiestoenrichtheirlife.,Inthepicturewecanseeclearlyaboyplayinghappilywithacomputer,whichhangsoverhischest.Iguessheiswalkingonthewayhomeafterschool,withaschoolbagonhisback.ItisobviousthatheisenjoyingsomethinginterestinglikewatchingaTVprogramthroughthepowerfulInternet.Asisknowntoall,withtherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,advancedelectricproductslikecomputersarebecomingsmallerandlighter.Thusitismoreconvenientforthestudentstocarrywherevertheygo.Youmaytakeitforgrantedthattheboyistooaddictedtocomputergames.ButIadoptapositiveattitude.Foronereason,youngpeopleincludingstudentsarealwaysthefirsttotrynewproducts.,Possibleversion:(positive),Anotherreasonisthatthestudentsburdenissoheavythattheyhavel