2012高三英语任务型写作专项

高三英语专项任务型写作,概况表解：近五年高考读写任务的总体情况如下表所示：,具体分析：阅读短文和写作要求有以下几个特点：(1)长度：约200个词。(2)难度：较阅读理解的文章容易。(3)体裁：多种多样，五年五体裁各不相同。(4)来源：来自于外国网站或英美报刊,概况表解：近五年高考读写任务的总体情况如下表所示：,具体分析：阅读短文和写作要求有以下几个特点：(1)长度：约200个词。(2)难度：较阅读理解的文章容易。(3)体裁：多种多样，五年五体裁各不相同。(4)来源：来自于外国网站或英美报刊,考生得分情况本题满分25分，近五年全省高考考生得分率均还在40%左右，即大约只有10分，还有很大的上升空间。据此，我们有理由相信，在这种选拔考试中，该题是使你获取高分，与其他考生拉开距离的有效突破口。师生备考务必重视！,广东高考英语读写任务考查内容,a.阅读概括能力；b.语言组织能力;,c.内容组织能力d.分析问题、解决问题的能力,谋篇布局遣词造句,summary,正文,议论,记叙,夹叙夹议,Injuniorhighschool,oneofmyclassmates,Ethan,wasaddictedtoTV.ThisboysimplykneweverythingaboutsuchpopshowsasWhostheBoss?ThenonedayEthansmothermadehimanofferinordertodrawhimbacktohisschoolsubjects.Shepromisedthatshewouldgivehim$200ifhecouldgoafullmonthwithoutwatchinganyTV.NoneofusthoughtEthancoulddoit,buthedidquitewell.Hismompaidhim$200.HewentoutandboughtaTV,thebiggesthecouldfind.Inrecentyears,hundredsofschoolshavecarriedoutexperimentswithpayingkidswitheachforshowinguporgettinggoodgrades.Allschoolkidsadmirethistrend.Butitupsetsadults.Teacherssaythatwearerewardingkidsfordoingwhattheyshouldbedoingoftheirownwill.Psychologistswarnthatmoneycanactuallymakekidsperformworsebymakingtheactoflearningcheap.Thedebatehasbecomeatypicalbattleoverwhyourkidsarenotlearningattheratetheyshouldhedespitedecadesofreformsandbudgetincreases.,夹叙夹议,叙,夹叙夹议,议,Ethansmothergavemoneytodrawhimbacktohisschoolsubjects,Adultsrewardchildrenmoneyforshowinguporgettinggoodgrades,ThepassageismainlyaboutparentsgivengmoneytotheirchildrensothattheycanshowuporgetgoodgradesrecentlybythewayoftakingtheexampleofEthanandhismother.,叙,夹叙夹议,议,Ethansmothergavemoneytodrawhimbacktohisschoolsubjects,Adultsrewardchildrenmoneyforshowinguporgettinggoodgrades,ThepassageismainlyaboutparentsgivengmoneytotheirchildrensothattheycanshowuporgetgoodgradesrecentlybythewayoftakingtheexampleofEthanandhismother.,叙,夹叙夹议,议,Ethansmothergavemoneytodrawhimbacktohisschoolsubjects,Adultsrewardchildrenmoneyforshowinguporgettinggoodgrades,ThepassageismainlyaboutparentsgivengmoneytotheirchildrensothattheycanshowuporgetgoodgradesrecentlybythewayoftakingtheexampleofEthanandhismother.,叙,夹叙夹议,议,Ethansmothergavemoneytodrawhimbacktohisschoolsubjects,Adultsrewardchildrenmoneyforshowinguporgettinggoodgrades,ThepassageismainlyaboutparentsgivengmoneytotheirchildrensothattheycanshowuporgetgoodgradesrecentlybythewayoftakingtheexampleofEthanandhismother.,写作内容1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：(1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：(2)你的父母(或其他亲人)是如何鼓励你学习的；(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。写作要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。,谋篇布局,表明观点,列举例证（引出经历）,提出建议,表述自己的观点一定要旗帜鲜明，不要做墙头草，两边倒。不需要为了凑词数而对各方面问题都平均用力进行论述。,观点要积极向上,记叙,1、时态2、人称,过去时第一、三人称,2.Brainstorm,有话可说,起因经过结果,表明观点,列举例证（引出经历）,提出建议,谋篇布局,1.合理、具体、多层面,表明观点,列举例证(引出经历),提出建议,表示支持或赞同的句型IapproveoftheideathatIagreewiththestatementthatIaminfavorofImconvincedthatIcantagreemorewithwhatthewritersaid/says,表示反对或不赞同的句型IdisapproveoftheideaIdisagreewiththeideaIamopposedtotheideathatInsomeway,Iagreewith,but,ItremindsmeofthetimewhenItremindsmeofanaccidentwhichhappenedseveraldaysagoAfterreadingthestoryabove,Irecalltheexperienceofmyfriend,whoAfterreadingthestory,IcanthelpthinkingofThestoryaboveremindsmeofoneofmyexperiences,WeshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasuresInorderto.,effectivemeansshouldbetakentoWeshouldtryourbesttoovercome/conquerthedifficulties.Weshouldsolvetheproblemsthatwearefacedwith.Itisnecessarythatproperactions/stepsshouldbetakentoendthephenomenon.,谋篇布局,Idontagreewithwhatthewritersaid/says,WhatEthansexperienceremindsmeof,Itisnecessarythatproperactions/stepsshouldbetakentoendthephenomenon.,谋篇布局,Thepassageismainlyaboutbythewayof,Summary,正文,(1)标题(有时不一定要求拟标题)(2)summary：用一两句话概括所给短文内容要点，约30词。(3)正文：按照“写作内容”所列要点的顺序(4)总结：套语配名言来进行点题，要前后呼应，三位一体。,正文不能只写一段，一段式作文是拿不了高分的！,谋篇布局,贯穿主题,三步作文,However,Ithinkencouragingkidswithcashwillcreatesomebadconsequencesandinthelongrun,itwillreallyhaveabadeffectonthechildrenslifeevenaftertheyhavegrownup.Takeoneofmyclassmatesforexample.Hisparentsoftenrewardedhimwithcashforhisgoodgrades.Hedidntbecomeagoodstudent.Onthecontrary,hedroppedoutschoolearlytomakemoney,becausehethoughtthatstudyingwasonlyformoney.Withoutexception,myparentsalsocareaboutmystudy,buttheyneverpromisememoneytomakemebehavewell.,谋篇布局：文章简要总结所给材料，并表明立场，然后通过一位同学的故事和自己的经历的鲜明对比，生动地介绍了教育孩子的最佳方法，最后再用一句话总结点题。文章结构清晰，衔接自然。,Theyusuallypromisemeanoutdoorpicnic,amountainclimbingorsomethingelseifIgetagoodscoreintheexams.Parentsalwayspaymoreattentiontomylifeandgivememorepraiseandencouragementratherthanmoneyorscolding.Finally,Ibecameatopstudentinmyclass.Onlyinthesewaysmentionedabovecanparentsmaketheirkidsgrowuphealthily.,However,Ithinkencouragingkidswithcashwillcreatesomebadconsequencesandinthelongrun,itwillreallyhaveabadeffectonthechildrenslifeevenaftertheyhavegrownup.Takeoneofmyclassmatesforexample.Hisparentsoftenrewardedhimwithcashforhisgoodgrades.Hedidntbecomeagoodstudent.Onthecontrary,hedroppedoutschoolearlytomakemoney,becausehethoughtthatstudyingwasonlyformoney.Withoutexception,myparentsalsocareaboutmystudy,buttheyneverpromisememoneytomakemebehavewell.,使用V-ing作主语,运用了原因状语从句、宾语从句,Theyusuallypromisemeanoutdoorpicnic,amountainclimbingorsomethingelseifIgetagoodscoreintheexams.Parentsalwayspaymoreattentiontomylifeandgivememorepraiseandencouragementratherthanmoneyorscolding.Finally,Ibecameatopstudentinmyclass.Onlyinthesewaysmentionedabovecanparentsmaketheirkidsgrowuphealthily.,正确运用了倒装结构,遣词造句：1、Consequence,inthelongrun,asaresult,onthecontrary,withoutexception,ratherthan等词汇的正确运用显示了作者扎实的语言基本功底；2、句型丰富，如原因状语从句、宾语从句、倒装句和非谓语动词结构等；,Idontthinkitrighttorewardchildrenfortheirgoodacademicperformance.Thepotentialdisadvantagesoutweightheadvantagestothegreatestextentbutmanyparentsareblindedbytheseeminglygoodresult.Asaresult,childrentakeitforgrantedthatwhattheydoshoulddeserveareward,ortheywilllosemotivation.Onthecontrary,myparentsoftenrewardmewithbooks,hopingthatIcanmakefurtherprogressinstudy.ItisinthiswaythatIhavegainedmuchthatcantbelearntinclass.Inmyopinion,parentsshouldattachmoreimportancetochildrensspiritualgrowth.Afterall,whatcountsisnotmaterialreward,butspiritualencouragement.Forexample,avisittothemuseumorplacesofinterestisagoodchoice.,形式宾语,本句用到了非谓语动词结构,本句是强调句式,本句既用到了what引导的主语从句，也用到了notbut句型,本句中的outweigh,beblinded用得很妙，使用很形象、准确,遣词造句：本文在完整表达了要点的同时，充分运用了很多高级句型和短语，显示出考生扎实的语言功底。（1）句型丰富，如强调句、倒装句和非谓语动词结构等；（2）语意连贯，多处使用过渡语，如asaresult,onthecontrary,afterall等。,谋篇布局：第一段非常明确地表达了自己的观点”dontagree”；第二段用“onthecontrary”引出一个正面的，与原文故事相反的案例来进一步说明作者的观点第三段通过“Inmyopinion”开始了建议的阐述,25分,3、恰当的连接词,1、丰富的词汇,2、多样的句型结构,1）长短错落有致2）各种句式：强调句倒装句With复合结构非谓语动词各种从句虚拟语气,1）多实少虚2）短语优先,表并列:表递进:表转折:表原因:表结果:,Someparentsgivemoneytochildrenandtakeforgrantedthatchildrencouldsolveproblemsontheirown.Onthecontrary,withthemoneytheirchildrenareaddictedtocomputergamesandforgetallabouttheirstudy.Besides,givemoneytochildrenwouldencouragethemtowanderoutsidewithnothingtoworryabout.,takeitforgranted(that)“认为是理所当然的”,givingmoneytochildren现在分词短语做主语,第一段：列举了用金钱鼓励孩子的负面影响，并表明立场；第二段：通过自身讲述如何鼓励孩子学习第三段：最后进一步表明观点。,Asfarastheproperwayofeducationisconcerned,IllsayIappreciatemyparentsverymuch.Firstly,myparentsoftenconductmylessonsafterschooltoprovidehelp.Secondly,myparentsusuallyworktogetherwithme,andinthisway,theycankeepwatchonmeandencouragemetoworkharder.Lastbutnotleast,myparentsencouragemetotakepartinsomeafter-schoolactivitiestohelpmedevelopinanall-aroundway,andthenImnowatopstudentinclass.Thus,byhelpingthestudentwiththeabovethreeways,Ibelieveitisquitepossibletoimprovehisresult.,keepwatchonsb.“监视某人”，用在此处不恰当。,andthen后直接跟“Imnow”略显突兀，可以在后加上“withtheirhelp”,用什么方法，把with改为in,firstly,secondly,thelastbutnotleast的使用使得文章逻辑更加清晰，不足之处是句式不够多样化，语句不够流畅，且出现了一些常见错误。,18分,在正确使用基本句型的基础上恰当运用较复杂的语法结构。,温馨提示,高考作文中，无论是复杂的句子还是简单句，句子的正确性是作文的基础，让人赏心悦目的卷面是最直接最简单的加分法宝。,2011年读写任务阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文WhenSamfirstgottohisboardingschoolwithhisparents,hewasveryhappy.Hethoughthewouldbeabletogohomeeveryweek