2015-2016年英语必修北师大版Unit4课件英语写作地点描写

Howtodescribeaplace,基础写作技巧指导,地点描写,Supposeyouareaguidetodescribeaplacetotourists,whatsubjects(主题）willyouintroduce?,Possiblesubjects：,1.介绍地理位置（Location）belocatedinbesituatedinliein坐落于脚下/顶部standsatthefootof/onthetopof,常用词语,1.日本在中国的东方。2.这房子朝南。3.新教学坐落在学校的中央。,翻译,Japanis/liestotheeastofChina.,Thehousefaces(to)thesouth.,Thenewteachingbuildingliesinthecenteroftheschool.,4.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。,China,located/lyingintheeastofAsia,isoneoflargestcountriesintheworld.,2.介绍人口（Population）:,hasapopulationof,（acity）withapopulationof,北京是中国的首都，是一个有1200多万人口的大城市。（用一句话）,Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isalargecitywithapopulationofover12,000,000.,3.介绍面积（Area）,has/coversanareaofsquarekilometers（acity）withanareaofsquarekilometers,城镇面积100多平方公里,Itsatownwithanareaofover100squarekilometers,4.介绍历史（History）:,hasalonghistory(ofyears)withalonghistory(ofyears),历史悠久,它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。,Itisamoderncitywithalonghistory.,5.介绍交通（Transportation）,takeabus,atrainoraplanetogotobybus/train/plane,坐汽车、火车、飞机到,交通便利hasconvenienttransportation（acity）withconvenienttransportationbothonlandandwater,经济迅速发展economyhasbeendevelopingrapidly多次进入全国经济十强城市hasbeenlistedamongthetoptenstrongestcitiesineconomyseveraltimes,6、介绍经济（economy）,7.名胜古迹,有很多名胜古迹：placesofinterest/historicalspots,承德是全国24个历史文化名城之一，也是44个风景名胜之一。ChengdeCityisnotonlyoneofthewell-known24historicalandculturalcitiesbutalsooneofthe44majorscenicspotsinChina.,一些其它表达方式：,发生了很大变化greatchangeshavetakenplace,特色鲜明的地方文化distinctlocalculture,海岸线总长公里Itscoastlinehasatotallengthofkilometers.,Nowletstry!,基础写作-情景说明,西山镇依山傍水。过去，这里的人们生活极其贫困。解放后人们的生活在各方面都发生了很大的变化。,写作要求：1.短文标题自拟2必须使用个句子介绍全部所给的内容；3将个句子组织成连贯的短文,titleifnecessary(标题）tenseandvoice（时态和语态）person（人称）style（文章题材）theimportantpoints（要点要全）,1.Howtoanalyzethedirections(审题)?,GreatChangesinXishanTown,一般现在、一般过去、现在完成时,第三人称,应用文,Listtheimportantpointsout:,解放后人们的生活发生了很大的变化。西山镇的人口约10万；,Sinceliberationgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinpeopleslife,XishantownhasapopulationofaboutThepopulationofXishantownisabout100,000.,面积约126平方公里,Itcovers/hasanareaofabout126squarekilometers.Thesizeofitisabout126squarekilometers.,坐落在粤北一座山脚下，面临一条大河,XishantownislocatedatthefootofamountainofNorthGuangdongProvinceandfacesabigriver.Xishantownislocated/standsatthefootofamountainofNorthGuangdongprovinceandinfrontofitflowsabigriver.,新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校,Manyfactories,shops,hospitalsandschoolshavebeenbuilt/setup.,解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学。现在有10所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等,Nowthereare10schoolsandeverychildcangotoschool.,Beforeliberationtherewasonlyoneschoolforchildrenfromwealthyfamilies.,Afterworkpeoplegoshopping,seefilms,godancingandhavesports.,用个句子介绍全部所给的内容；用适当的连接词或在必要的地方改变句子结构将个句子组织成连贯的短文,1.Xishantownisasmalltown,_islocatedatthefootofamountainofNorthGuangdongprovinceandinfrontofitflowsabigriver.,which,Letstry!,2.Xishantownhasapopulationofabout100,000_coversanareaofabout126squarekilometers.Xishantown,_anareaofabout126squarekilometers,hasapopulationof.Xishantowncoversanareaofabout126squarekilometers_100,000.,and,covering,withapopulationof,多种表达法灵活表达,3.Beforeliberation,peopletherelivedahardlife_sinceliberationgreatchangeshavetakenplace_manyfactories,shops,hospitalsandschoolshavebeenbuilt.,but,andnow,4.Beforeliberationtherewasonlyoneschoolforchildrenfromwealthyfamilies_nowthereare10schoolsandeverychildcangotoschool.5.Afterworkpeoplegoshopping,seefilms,godancingandhavesports.,but,Letsshare!,Onepossibleversion:1.Xishantownisasmalltown,whichislocatedatthefootofamountainofNorthGuangdongprovinceandinfrontofitflowsabigriver.Ithasapopulationofabout100,000andcoversanareaofabout126squarekilometers.Beforeliberation,peopletherelivedahardlifebutgreatchangeshavetakenplacesinceliberationandnowmanyfactories,shops,hospitalsandschoolshavebeenbuilt.,Theschooleducationhasalsoimproved,forexample,beforeliberationtherewasonlyoneschoolforchildrenfromwealthyfamilies,butnowthereare10schoolsandeverychildcangotoschool.Afterworkpeoplegoshopping,seefilms,godancingandhavesports.,南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖Antarctica,isthecoldestcontinentintheworld.Antarctica,iscoveredwithcoldthickiceanddeepsnowallyearround.,1.使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达,whichiscoveredwithcold,thickiceanddeepsnowall（the)yearround,thecoldestcontinentinthe