2015高考英语作文_公开课

全国卷1作文,高二（1）班6月16日16周星期二C2001,LearningGoals,1Learnaboutwritinginthelatestcollegeentranceexamination.2Haveabetterideaofwhattodoinwritingpartandtherefore,concludesomekeypointsabouthowtodoitwell.3Analyzestudetsworksanddrawaconclusion.4Enjoysomeexcellentworksandlearnfromthem.,AlthoughwevebeendelightedtohaveyouasourEnglishteacher,werehopingtosettlesomethingthatbothersus.Inaword,theendlesshomeworkandtests-practice.Wevetalkedseveraltimesaboutourdaily,weeklyandmonthlyassignments.Itisdifficulttounderstandwhywehavetofinishallthesestuffthroughourenergeticandlivelyyouth.Thementalstressalongsidehasbeendisturbingus.Thismorningallofmyroommatesgotupevenbefore5oclocktorecitethepassageonPage25.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhowvaluablethesemorninghoursare.Weappreciateyourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigureoutagoodwayofsettlingthematter.(125words),1Whatisthestyleofthiswriting?2Whydidtheywritesuchaletter?3Whomightbethewriterandwhoisthereader(theirrelationship)?4Howdoyouthinkofthisletter?,2010-2014全国卷高考作文,咨询预约,自我推荐；参加意图,人物描写,活动信息说明,演讲比赛安排,who(relationship)&why(purpose),1Inordertopublishmyarticleinit,Ihopeyouuseaboutfourhundredwordstowritealetter,whichincludesalltheinformation.2Youcanneverusetoomanyvividandcomplicatedwords.RememberthatyouneedtohandinthepassagebeforeJune28th.3Youarerequiredtohandinthemanuscriptwithapproximately400wordsbeforeJune28th.4Thelengthofthedraftisabout400words,andyouhadbetterpostittomebeforeJune28th.Goodluck!5Ihopeyoucanseizethechancetoimproveyourwritingskillandgivemeyourbestpassage.,2015年全国卷1作文题目,假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。要点如下：1、栏目介绍2、稿件内容3、稿件长度：约400字4、交稿日期：6月28日前,who&why,who(relationship)&why(purpose),1Imverygladtorepresentourschoolsnewspaper,“ForeignCulture”toinviteyoutowriteusanarticle.(邱李涛)2Ifpossible,Ihopethepassagecouldcoverabout400wordsandyoucansendittomebeforeJune28th.(方钦豪)3Bytheway,IwishyoucanfinishitbeforeJune28th.Thanksamillionandbestwishes!(庄之涵),TheEnglishnewspaperinourschoolisgoingtopublishapassagewhichintroducesAmericanfestivalsandcustomsaswellasAmericanstudentslifestyleinthecolumncalledForeignCulture.Iwonderifyoucanwritea400-wordarticleforme.Ifyouareinterestedinit,youcanpostyourworktomebeforeJune28th,whichisthedeadline.Ifyourworkisaccepted,youcangetpaidforyourhardwork.(75words)Ihopeeverythinggoeswellwithyouandpleasewritemesoon.(87words),1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。,评分原则,写作（25分）,准确+连贯,评分标准,写作（25分）,完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的。覆盖所有内容要点。准确应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,评分标准,写作（25分）,虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,2015年全国卷1作文题目,假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。要点如下：1、栏目介绍2、稿件内容3、稿件长度：约400字4、交稿日期：6月28日前,注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。,栏目介绍&稿件内容,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。1Whomightbethewritersofthiscolumn?2Whoarethereaders?(Whoisthesectionintendedfor?)3Howdothestudentsthinkofthiscolumnandwhatkindofinformationandstoriesareexpectedinit?4WhyisPetertherightpersontointroducesomethingaboutAmerica?5Inaddition,isthereanythingelsethatcancatchstudentseyes?,OurschoolEnglishnewspaperhasacolumncalledForeignCulturewhichhasagoodmanyfanscuriousaboutfestivalsandcustomsaswellascampuslifeinothercountries.（之涵）BecauseyouaremyAmericanfriendandhaveabetterunderstandingofAmericanculture,Idecidedtoinviteyoutocontributetoournewspaper.(馥婷)ThereisacolumnaboutforeigncultureinmyschoolEnglishnewspaper,whichhasearneditspopularityforitisinformativeandinstructive.(子凯)Youcandescriberelevantactivitiesorstoriesaboutyourfestivalsandcustoms.MostChinesehighschoolstudentsarelivingabusylife.Howaboutyou?(可之),IamwritingtoinviteyoutowriteanarticlefortheEnglishnewspaperofmyschool.Recently,wesetupanovelcolumn-ForeignCulturetointroduceforeignculturessincemyfellowstudentsarereallyinterestedinthediversityoffestivalsandcustoms.Consideringthatyouaredistinguishedforwriting,IdesirethatyouwriteanarticletointroduceAmericanfestivalsandcustoms.Itwouldbebetterifyoucouldshowusyourcolorfulcampuslife.Ithinkitisproperforyoutowriteaboutfourhundredwords.Ifyouarewillingtoacceptmyinvitation,pleasecallmebackandpostyourarticletomebeforeJune,28th.Icanthelpwaitingtoreadyourarticle.(119words),IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.TheForeignCulturessectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartoftheUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasitsinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldwehaveyourarticlebeforeJune28?Imlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.,(110words),Summary,仔细审题写作目的和任务合理扩展内容准确、完整注意连贯文章结构紧凑润色文章高级词汇，多变句型,当堂训练,Matchthesentencestakenfromtheletterswiththestatements.Forexample:2015年(A)Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasitsinterestingandinformative.201420132012.,A.IhopeIwillbeacceptedasamemberofyoursummercamp.B.Iveseenyourad,andIdliketoknowsomethingmoreaboutyoursix-weekEnglishcourse.C.Iamavail