高三写作专练 --道歉信.ppt

高三写作专练书信写作-道歉信,Attention！,道歉信通常包括三个部分：1）重述自己做错的事，表示歉意；2）说明道歉的具体原因，可以描述做错事的经过，提出补救措施；3）再次表明承认错误的态度，请求原谅。注意事项：1.道歉信主要是想收信人表明歉意，请求对方谅解自己的过失。写道歉信时要明确不是找借口为自己辩护，不要强词夺理，而是承认自己过失并提出弥补的具体建议和方法。、2.此类信件的关键是用词准确，表达真诚。3.详略得当，明确本文重点写的是什么，信结尾的客套语句要简要明了的处理。,常用句型：,开头：Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyregret/howregretfulIamfeelingnow.IamwritingtoapologizeforIwouldliketogiveyoumysincereapologyfor道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Ihopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation/trustthatyouwillbeabletounderstand.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies.,【道歉信写作模板】,模板1：过去没有完成的事情Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouformyfailingto_.Thereasonisthat_.IamsorrythatIcannotfinish_intime,butisitpossiblethatImakeupthelossby_?Ifso,Iwillputeverythingelseasideto_.Idohopethatyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.模板2：将来不能做的事情IamterriblysorrythatIamunableto_(goonajourneywithyounextweekend)_.ItismainlybecauseatthattimeIwillbefullyoccupiedby_(mygrandpasvisit/anEnglishcompetition_whichisquiteoutofmyexpectation,andthatconflictswithyour_(plan/schedule)_.Therefore,Iamforcedtoadjustmyscheduleandcannotmakemypresenceonyour_(trip/party).Isincerelyhopethatyouwillenjoyagoodtime.Bytheway,canwe_(visitBeijing/havedinner)_togethersometimelaterthissummer/nextweek?Ihopetoseeyousoon.IamreallysorryagainandItrustthatyouwillunderstand.,范文：,同事张大力昨天举行生日宴会，你因由朋友来访，没能应邀参加，对此你写信向他表示歉意DearZhang,IamreallysorrytotellyouthatIwasunabletoattendyourbirthdaypartyyesterdayevening.Thatisowingtothefactthatmyoldfriendsvisitedmyhousewithouttellingmetheexacttime.Ihadtoentertainthosefriendswithmypassionintheentireevening,andIwillcontinuetoentertaintheminthefollowingtwodays.IreallyregretthatIhaventgottocelebrateyourbirthdaypersonallyandhadmissedawonderfulchancetoenjoymyselfwithourkindcolleagues.Ihavepreparedaprettygifttoyouyesterdayandwillsendtoyouthisafternoontoshowmybestbirthdaywishes.Besides,Itrustthatyouwillunderstandme.Bestwishes,yourssincerely,Writingtask,假设你是李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：表达歉意解释原因另约时间注意：1.140词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯。,APossibleSample,DearTom,IamterriblysorrythatIamunabletogoonajourneytoBeijingwithyounextweek.Ifeelbadaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappened.Justnow,mycousin,wholefthometoAustraliaforhisfurtherstudylastyear,informedmethathewouldreturnChinasoon,whichisquiteoutofmyexpectation.HeaskedmetopickhimupattheairportwithhisfamilythisSaturdaymorning,andthatconflictswithyourplan.Youknow,wehaventseeneachotherfornearlyayear,whichItrustthatyouwillunderstand.Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandmysituation.IamsorrythatIcannotkeepmyword,butisitpossiblethatImakeupthelossbyinvitingyoutoadinnerthisFriday?IwouldalsoappreciateitifyouallowmetomakeanotherdatetoshowyouaroundBeijing.Onceagain,Imsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Sincerelyyours,LiHua(168w),情感态度+主题句,合理细节添加,补救措施,陪伴？,accompanyvt.陪同,陪伴travelorgosomewherewithsb;gowithsb,especiallyonajourney(正式用语,口语中有时可以用gowith,see代替)作为静态动词可表示陪伴某人;作为动态动词可表示“陪某人去某地/做某事”,多接“on+表示动作的名词”或“in+v-ing”,accompanysbindrinkingaglassofwine陪某人饮酒accompanysbonhisvisittoaplace陪同某人参观某地accompanysbonawalk陪同某人散步她要求我陪她到机场去。Sheaskedmetoaccompanyhertotheairport.我的女儿陪着我旅行。Mydaughteraccompaniedmeonthetrip.我们老师陪外宾到校门口Ourteachersawaforeignguesttotheschoolentrance.,陪伴？,companyUbeingtogetherwithanotherorothers(作名词指“客人”时前面不加冠词a或the,在表示“同伴,朋友,客人”的意思时,主要指想法相似,但没有深交的“同伴”“朋友”,常用于人数比较多的场合,可表示“交际,交往,陪伴”)Avoid/enjoycompany避免/喜欢与交往keepsbcompany陪伴某人,陪某人同走havesbforcompany陪同incompanywithsb与结伴我很高兴在航海中会有幸和您在一起。Imgladtohavethepleasureofyourcompanyonthevoyage.注意不要交上坏朋友。Takecarenottogetintobadcompany.看一个人的朋友,就可以了解这个人。wecanknowamanbythecompanyhekeeps.,Writingtask2,假如你是新华中学的学生李华，上周在外教Mr.Jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现，手机被收走。请用英语给外教写一封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点：1.表示歉意；2.解释上课使用手机的原因；3.提出自己的请求并适当表态。注意：可适当添加细节使文章连贯；字数120词。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,参考范文,DearMr.Jackson,Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyregretforusingthemobilephoneinyourlecturelastweek.Pleaseacceptmyheart-feltapologyforbeingsorudeastudent.Iknowanywordmightsoundamade-upexcuse,butIdidnotusethemobilephonefornoreason.IwastryingtoseekanearlieradmissiontouniversitylastweekendandthatdayIgotanofferfrommydreamcollegeandtheyneededmyfurtherinformationimmediately.Therefore,IhadnochoicebuttotrysendingthematextmessageinclassandthatwasexactlywhatIwasdoingwhenyoudiscovered.Anyway,usingamobilephoneintheclassroomisnotacceptabletoa