英语环境保护作文.ppt

环境保护,【话题解读】环保是当今社会的一个热点话题，和我们每个人息息相关。它能考查学生对现实生活的关心程度、对事物的观察能力，而且能够培养学生的环保意识。考查形式通常是要求考生介绍一些保护环境的做法，或针对一些环境现象或环保措施发表自己的观点，也会要求考生写环保倡议书。,基础篇,【真题回放】为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，某校开展了“绿色港城，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“TheGreenCity,theHealthyLife”为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。,注意：1)词数90左右，短文开头己给出，不计入总词数；2)不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。TheGreenCity,theHealthyLifeAsacitizenofLianyungang,itsourdutyto_(2016江苏连云港),【真题分析】这是一篇命题作文，题目为“TheGreenCity,theHealthyLife”，写作时要紧紧围绕这个话题展开。根据文字提示，可分两段来写：第一段介绍一些环保的做法；第二段发表自己对这一主题的观点。在介绍环保的做法时要注意语言的条理性；在发表观点时可以从自己对环保的认识、环保对健康的影响等方面来阐述。,【标准范文】TheGreenCity,theHealthyLifeAsacitizenofLianyungang,itsourdutytohelpbuildagreencitysothatwecanliveahealthylife.Whatcanwedo?Wecanreduceairpollutionbytravelingaroundbybike.Itsalsogoodforourhealth.Itsnecessaryforustoputrubbishintotherubbishbin.,Inthisway,wecankeepourcityclean.Andwedbetterplantmoretreestoprotectthenaturalenvironment.AsacitizenofLianyungang,Illtrymybesttomakeourcitycleanerandmorebeautiful.Inmyopinion,everyonecandosomethingtomakeadifference.,【高分突破】TheGreenCity,theHealthyLifeAsacitizenofLianyungang,itsourdutytohelpprotectourcitysenvironmentandmakeitagreenerplacetolive.Herearesomesmallthingsweallcandoandshoulddo:,提高篇,Firstofall,wecanridebicyclestoandfromschoolasmuchaspossibletoreduceairpollution.Secondly,whereverwego,weshouldthrowrubbishintorubbishbinstokeepourcitycleanandtidy.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldplantasmanytreesaspossibletoprotectourcitysnaturalenvironment.,Inmyopinion,agreencityisthekeytoahealthylife.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontobuildingagreencity,Lianyungangwillbecomeabetterplacetolive.Letstakeactionnow!,【高分揭秘】1.习作内容紧扣主题，段落层次清晰，语言准确地道；2.在介绍一些环保的做法时作者用了firstofall,secondly和lastbutnotleast，使得习作富有条理性；,3.在表达观点时作者用了两个短语thekeyto和makeacontributionto，提升了习作的语言档次。4.在结尾部分作者用了一个Lets开头的祈使句来号召大家一起行动，为创建绿色家园而努力，语言简洁、生动、有力。,【素材积累】1.词汇观点：inmyopinion,frommypointofview,asforme其他：climatechange,globalwarming,green,recycle,reusable,2.句子Ifwegoonpollutingtheearth,itwontbefitforustolivein.ThatsaproblemweChinesemustpayspecialattentionto.Thedevelopmentofprivatecarshasbroughtaboutaseriesofproblems.Ibelievewecanmakeourearthabetterplacetolive.Letstakeactionandbeagreenperson!,【写作任务】荣光学校九年级(2)班就“环境问题”召开了一次班会，并且以“OurEnvironmentinTenYears:forBetterorWorse?”为题进行了一次讨论。许多同学对未来表示乐观，但也有些同学对未来有些担心。请根据表格中的内容提示，用英文写一篇短文。,提示：1.不得出现真实的人名和地名。2.短文中应包含至少4个要点。3.书写工整、语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于80。注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：optimisticadj.乐观的governmentn.政府takemeasuresto采取措施privateadj.私有的,OurEnvironmentinTenYears:forBetterorWorse?Manystudentsareoptimisticaboutourenvironmentintenyears._(2016湖南衡阳),OurEnvironmentinTenYears:forBetterorWorse?Manystudentsareoptimisticaboutourenvironmentintenyears.Infact,theythinkthattheworldwillbeabetterplacethanitisnow.Moreandmorepeoplearebecomingvolunteerstoprotecttheenvironment.Also,thegovernmentwilltakemoremeasurestoimprovetheenvironment.,However,otherstudentsareworriedaboutthefuture.Theythinkthatmoretreeswillbecutdownandtherewillbemoreprivatecarsontheroads.Theysaytheenvironmentwillbecomeworse.In