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短文改错,Mydreamistobecomeaschoolteacherinthefuture.Infact,Ihashadthedreamofbecomingateachersincemychildhood.Inmyopinion,withoutteachers,nosocietycouldmakeprogresses.Thereisnodoubtwhetherteachersplayanimportantroleinchildrengrowth.,Notonlyteacherspassonknowledgetochildren,buttheyalsoteachchildrenhowtobehavethem.Comparingwithotherjobs,teachingisharderandthepayislower.Buttome,howgreatfunitistobewithchildren!TheymakemetofeelyoungforeverbecauseIllstudyharderandtrymybesttorealizemydream.,短文改错,Mydreamistobecomeaschoolteacherinthefuture.Infact,Ihashadthedreamofbecomingateachersincemychildhood.Inmyopinion,withoutteachers,nosocietycouldmakeprogresses.Thereisnodoubtwhetherteachersplayanimportantroleinchildrengrowth.,1.hashave,4.childrenchildrens,2.progressesprogress,3.whetherthat,Notonlyteacherspassonknowledgetochildren,buttheyalsoteachchildrenhowtobehavethem.Comparingwithotherjobs,teachingisharderandthepayislower.Buttome,howgreatfunitistobewithchildren!TheymakemetofeelyoungforeverbecauseIllstudyharderandtrymybesttorealizemydream.,5.onlydo,8.howwhat,6.themthemselves,7.ComparingCompared,9.to,理由陈述类（）,第一段：交代写作背景（翻译题干中的某些句子）Ilearnedfromthat（我从中了解到）,第二段：陈述个人理由（有要点根据要点写；没有要点的自己想）Firstofall/Atfirst,（第一，）Whatsmore,.（其次,）Thirdly,（第三,）Atlast,（最后,）,第三段：总结Inaword,IhopethatandImlookingforwardtoassoonaspossible.（如是写信，则要。）,假设你是李华。正在你校就读的美国交换生Tom在校园网上发帖，想找一个人作为假期游览北京的导游。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：表明意愿；2.说明理由。,第二段：说明理由。,我住在北京，熟悉本地。(befamiliarwithBeijing/knowBeijingverywell.）我对北京的历史文化感兴趣，之前去过很多景点。(IaminterestedinthehistoryandcultureofBeijingtouristspots.我英语好，可以详细地给你介绍景点。(IhavesuchgoodspokenEnglishthatIcanintroducethetouristattractionsindetailsinEnglishtoyou.),末段：总结IhopethatandImlookingforwardtoyourcomingassoonaspossible.,必修四：阶段质量评估（三）,理由/观点陈述类（）,第一段：交代写作背景（社会现象）Recentlytherehasbeenaheateddiscussionabouthowto(最近，人们就如何展开了热烈的讨论。)或者此句子：Whenitcomestothecasethat（当提到这种情况的时候）Peoplesopinionsaboutvaryfrompersontoperson.关于人们的观点各不相同。,第二段：陈述别人观点和自己的观点Somebelievethat,othersholdanideathat一些人认为，另一些人认为AsfarasIamconcerned/Personallyspeaking,（就我个人而言）,第三段：总结Allinall,itisimportant/necessaryfortodo,最近，人们就如何减轻高中生学习压