高三英语课件：高三英语基础写作五个句子写法

BasicWriting,基础写作,基础写作的命题特点：考生按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语句子描述所给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。,基础写作的评分标准？1234,句子内容的完整性(Completeness),句子结构的正确性(correctness),句子结构的复杂性(Variety),句子内容的连贯性(Coherence),1Readthetopic,thenorganizethemessagesin5sentences,2Thinkofthewords,phrases,sentencestructuresyoumayuseinwriting.,3Changethesentencestructurewherenecessary;,4Addsomeconjunctionsifneeded.,Shortessaywritingis,infact,totestastudentsfourabilities,asshowninthefollowingdiagram.,Letstry!,PracticeOne,一、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。,要求：1.标题:SomethingaboutLihua2.必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给内容.3.将五个句子组织成连贯的短文.姓名:李华学校:育才中学地址:中国广州育才路138号身高:180cm头发颜色:黑色全家人口:3人父母职业:教师爱好:集邮和硬币掌握外语情况:英语,写作指导：先写成简单句子，然后再做组合，连成通顺的5句短文:,1.LihuaisastudentfromYucaiMiddleSchool.2.Heis180cmtall.Hisfairisblack.Hisfamilyisat138,YucaiRoad,Guangzhou,China.Hisfamilyhasthreepeople.Bothhisparentsareteachers.Lihuahastwohobbies:collectingstampsandcoins.HeknowsEnglishwellandcanspeakperfectEnglish.,一、SomethingaboutLihuaLihua,whois180cmtallwithblackhair,isastudentfromYucaiMiddleSchool.Hisfamily,whichisat138,YucaiRoad,Guangzhou,China,hasgotthreepeople.Bothhisparentsareteachers.Lihuahastwohobbies,whicharecollectingstampsandcoins.HeknowsEnglishwellandcanspeakperfectEnglish.,PracticeTwo,二、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。,1、标题：TopMealoftheDay2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。原因：晚上学习太晚，不吃早餐可以多睡一会。结果：上课总想睡觉。注意力下降。考试成绩不理想。建议：早餐不可少，它提供全天所需的能量的30%，青少年健康应从早餐抓起。,Somestudentsstudylateintothenight.Theychoosetomissbreakfastsothattheycanhaveafewextraminutesinbed.Asaresult,theytendtobesleepyallday.Theyhavebadmemories.Itishardforthemtogethighmarksinallkindsofexams.Asamatteroffact/Infact,morningmealplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife.Itcanprovide30%ofthewholedaysenergy.Westudentsshouldstartwitharegularbreakfast.,二、TopMealoftheDaySomestudents,whostudylateintothenight,choosetomissbreakfastsothattheycanhaveafewextraminutesinbed.Asaresult,theytendtofeelsleepyalldayandhavebadmemories,soitshardforthemtogethighmarksinallkindsoftests.Infact,themorningmealplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife.Itcanprovide30%ofthewholedaysenergy.Foracreativemindandbetterjudgmentschoolstudentsshouldstarttheirdaywitharegularbreakfast.,PracticeThree,三、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。,1、标题:WhatCanWeDofortheOlympicsof2008?2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。(1)2008年奥运会是21世纪重大体育比赛之一，包括中国在内的每个国家都在为此做准备。(2)奥运会的作用。(3)中国为举办奥运会，将要做些什么？(4)你个人该做些什么？,1.TheOlympicGamesof2008willbeheldinBeijing.2.Itisoneofthemostimportanteventsinthehistoryofsports.3.Everycountryintheworld,includingChina,ispreparingforit.4.ItwilldogoodtothefriendshipbetweenChinaandanyothercountryintheworld.5.WeshouldtrytoimproveourenvironmentandbuildenoughstadiumsaswellaswideningtheroadsinBeijing.6.Asastudent,ImusttrytolearnEnglishwellandtrytodosomethingfortheOlympicGames.,三、TheOlympicGamesof2008TheOlympicGamesof2008,whichisoneofthemostimportanteventsinthehistoryofsports,willbeheldinBeijing.Everycountryintheworld,includingChina,ispreparingforit.ItwilldogoodtothefriendshipbetweenChinaandanyothercountryintheworld.WeshouldtrytoimproveourenvironmentandbuildenoughstadiumsaswellaswideningtheroadsinBeijing.Asastudent,ImusttrytolearnEnglishwellandtrytodosomethingfortheOlympicGames.,PracticeFour,四、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。,1、标题:ItsNoGoodusingMobileforStudents2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。学生不宜使用手机的理由：手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且加重经济负担。若课堂接听手机会影响听课，也会影响老师和其他同学。学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。手机会引起学生之间的相互攀比，带来不好的影响。,1.Itcannotbringconveniencebutaddstothestudentsburdeninfinance.2.Somestudentsmakeacallwiththeirmobilephonesintheclassroom.3.Itstopstheotherclassmatesfromfixingontheirstudy.4.Theycantpayattentiontotheirteachersteachinginclassbysendingmessagestoothersorplayingthemobilephonegames.5.Itmayleadtostudentsshowingoffthemselvesbyowningniceandexpensivemobilephones.,四、ItsNoGoodusingMobileforStudentsTheanswerto“Isitgoodusingmobilephoneforstudents?”is“No”forthefollowingreasons:Firstly,itaddstothestudentsburdeninfinancetogetherwithitssideeffects,suchastheirnotpayingattentiontotheirteachersteachinginclassbysendingmessagestoothers.Itmayleadtostudentsshowingoffthemselvesbyowningniceandexpensivemobilephones.Somestudentsmakeacallwiththeirmobilephonesintheclassroom,whichstopstheotherclassmatesfromfixingontheirstudy.SoIdontthinkitgoodforstudentstousemobilephoneatschool.Ithinkitsnotwrongtofollowthefashion,butthemostimportantthingistousethemobilephoneinarightway.,Practice5：暑假打工文体：记叙文【题目要求】1.暑假过后，你的外籍教师要同学们汇报自己假期所从事的社会活动和自己的感想。请写一书面材料交给外教：2.你在2005年暑假到一家肯德基（KFC）快餐店做保洁员（cleaner）工作，你每天工作7个小时，为期3周，这项工作辛苦且枯燥，并使你感到非常的疲惫，这几乎使你半途放弃。3.在新学期开始之前，你终于坚持完成了这项工作，并且认识到了劳动（labor）的意义，你认为这是一次成功的体验。4.注意：必须用第一人称字数120个左右,1.Duringthesummerholidayof2005.2.IgotajobataKFCfastfoodrestaurantworkingasacleaner.3.Iworkedsevenhoursadayforthreeweeks.4.TheworkwashardandboringandIwassotiredwithitthatIalmostgaveuphalfway.5.Finally,Ifinishedthejobbeforethenewschooltermbegan.6.Now,Iunderstandwhatlabormeans.Ithinkitwasreallyasuccessfulexperience.,SummerHolidayPart-timeJobDuringthesummerholidayof2005,IthoughtIshoulddosomethingmeaningfulinsolongatimeinsteadofstayingathomeandwatchingTV.SoIgotajobataKFCfastfoodrestaurantandworkedthereasacleaner.EverydayIwenttoworkearlyinthemorningandgothomelateintheevening.Iworked7hoursadayforthreeweeks.Thejobwashard,boringandseemedendless,whichmademesotiredthatIalmostquithalfway.However,Istucktoitwithmydetermination.Finally,Ifinishedthejobbeforethenewschooltermbegan.Now,Iunderstandwhatlabormeans.Infact,labormakesmeknowImustvaluewhatIhaveatpresentandIthinkitwasreallyasuccessfulexperience.,你想在2010年暑假期间去看上海世博会(WorldEXPO)。你父母不会给你钱，除非你自己去打工(part-timejob)赚钱。在2009年寒假期间，你在一家小餐馆当了一个月的服务员，你每天工作八小时，工作辛苦且枯燥，你的一个好朋友甚至劝你放弃。但你还是坚持做完了一个月，拿到了800元工资。你非常高兴，觉得这样的经历很有意义。,ShanghaiExpoinvitestheworldtoChinaTheShanghaiExpoisaboutinvitingtheworldtoChinatocommunicateandshare,theopeningceremonysartisticdirector,IgnatiusJones,believes.Chinaabeaconofhopefortheworld,saysjazzgiantHerbieAmericanjazzlegendHerbieHancocktooktipsfromhisChinesesoulbrotherLangLangwhentheytouredEurope.Now,heisexcitedtoseewhattherestofChinacanteachtheworldattheExpoandbeyond.GECEO:ChinacomingoutofExpoaverypositiveimageTheongoingWorldExpoinShanghaiisgoingtohelpChinabuildaverypositiveimageintheworld,justliketheBeijingOlympics,FerdinandoBeccalli-Falco,CEOofGEInternational,aglobalinfrastructure,financeandmediacompany,saidMonday.ChancetoshowcaseachievementsThe2010WorldExpoisagreatopportunitytoshowcaseacountrysachievements.The1851LondonExpodemonstratedthemightoftheIndustrialRevolutioninBritain.The1876PhiladelphiaExpowasthecomingoutpartyofthethenfast-risingnewpower-theUS.The1970OsakaExpomarkedtherevivalof,JapanfromtherubbleofWorldWarII.UKaimstoinspirewithdifferentpavilionTopresentvisitorsamodernanddynamicBritaininsteadofanold-fashionedone,thedesignerscameupwithastriking,futuristicdesignwhichtheyhopedwouldchallengestereotypesaboutBritain.ExpoexamineswaterssignificancetocitiesWhatisthesignificanceofwatertoacity?TheShanghaiWorldExpoistryingtoanswerthequestion.ExpositetotransformcityskylineforthebetterShanghaishostingoftheWorldExpomarksamomentousoccasioninthecityshistoryandonethatwillultimatelyimprovethelivesoflocalresidentsinthelong-term.Shanghaiaworld-classcity?Please.WiththegrandioseWorldExponewlyunveiled,Shanghaiseemstobetellingtheworldthatithaseverythingeverymajorinternationalcityhas.SupachaiPanitchpakdi:Newvisionsformega-citiesSupachaiPanitchpak