Lesson 8 黄山 2016 new.ppt

Lesson8,教改内容,1.加强译前准备：译入语阅读观看CCTV9英文视频黄山2.教师个性翻译与学生个性翻译的碰撞3.以学生为主体的课堂教学模式启发式、讨论式4.增加“五分钟翻译理论讲解”部分，以言简意赅的方式导入翻译策略，更多关注学生实践。,TeachingFocus,1.翻译的重构单位(合译与拆译)2.TextAnalysisof“黄山”,1.Five-minutelectureontranslationskills翻译的重构单位、合译与拆译,一个周期处理的片断可称为翻译的重构单位(unitofrestructuring)在绝大多数情况下，重构单位是一个句子。但这并不排除两个相邻的句子合译为一句，以及一句分译为两句或三句的情况。这就是所谓“合译”与“拆译”。,1.湖南民歌采槟榔，歌词纯朴，曲调优美。这首歌表达了青年男女纯真的爱情。（槟榔betelnut）PickingBetelNuts,(whichis)aHunanfolksongwithsimplewordsandabeautifulmelody,expressesthepurelovebetweenyoungmenandwomen.（合译）2.草原上的机场是没有跑道的，飞机起飞和降落都在草地上滑行。Aerodromesontheprairiehavenorunways.Planesglideonthegrasswhentakingofforlanding.（拆译）,柯林斯高级英语学习词典第5版Anaerodromeisaplaceorareawheresmallaircraftcanlandandtakeoff.(BRIT;inAM,useairdrome)=airfield,3.Thisideaofhomeasbeingaplaceofprivacyisemerginginmycountry,wheretheyoungareabandoningtheirparentshomestolivetheirownlife.把家作为独处之所的这种观念正在我的祖国形成。在那里，年轻人纷纷离开父母家独立生活。（拆译）4.Shelovesherstudentsandcaresforthem.Shetreatsthemwithpatienceandteachesthemwell.她热爱学生，关心学生，耐心地教，而且教得很好。（合译）5.Hediedinhis88thyear,amightyageforonewhoat40wasconsideredaconfirmedinvalid.他去世时享年88岁。他40岁时就被认为痼疾在身，对于这样一个人来说，这真是了不起的高龄了。（拆译）,Aninvalidissomeonewhoneedstobecaredforbecausetheyhaveanillnessordisability.(形声。从疒(chung),表示与疾病有关。固声。“固”(顽固)也具有表意作用。本义:疾病经久难愈的)痼,久病也。玉篇邓太后以皇子胜有痼疾。后汉书周章传痼瘵zhi(积久难治的病。亦指患痼疾的人),panoramaApanoramaisaviewinwhichyoucanseealongwayoverawideareaofland,usuallybecauseyouareonhighground.,望岳,岱宗夫如何，齐鲁青未了。造化钟神秀，阴阳割昏晓。荡胸生层云，决眦入归鸟。会当凌绝顶，一览众山小。Trytoascendthemountainscrest;Itdwarfsallthepeaksunderourfeet.WhenshallIreachthetopandholdAllmountainsinasingleglance.,才与福难兼，贾傅以来，文字潮儋同万里；地因人始重，河东而外，江山永柳各千秋。Onecantpossessbothtalentandfortune,sinceJiaYi,HanYuandSuShiwereexiledfaraway/inadistance/tenthousandmiles/Theplacebecomesimportantforgenius,sinceHedong,Yongzhou,andLiuzhoubecomeimportantforLiuZongyuansessays.Talentrarelybringsfortune,asJia.wereexiledtenthousandmiles;Butgeniusadornshisland,asYongzhouandLiuzhouarewidelyreadwithLiuswritingstyles.,2.Pre-translationreadinginthetargetlanguage,Huangshan(simplifiedChinese:黄山;traditionalChinese:黃山;pinyin:Hungshn;literallyYellowMountain),isamountainrangeinsouthernAnhuiprovinceineasternChina.Theareaiswellknownforitsscenery,sunsets,peculiarly-shapedgranite(花岗岩)peaks,HuangshanPinetrees,andviewsofthecloudsfromabove.HuangshanisafrequentsubjectoftraditionalChinesepaintingsandliterature,aswellasmodernphotography.Today,itisaUNESCOWorldHeritageSiteandoneofChinasmajortouristdestinations.,PhysicalfeaturesforwhichHuangshanisknownincludesunrises,pinetrees,strangegranitepeaks,andviewsofcloudstouchingthemountainsidesonmorethan200daysoutoftheyear.TheHuangshanmountainrangecomprisesmanypeaks,somemorethan1,000meters(3,250feet)high.Thethreetallestandbest-knownpeaksareLotusPeak(LianHuaFeng,1,864m),BrightSummitPeak(GuangMingDing,1,840m),andCelestial（relatingtosky）Peak(TianDuFeng,literallyCapitalofHeavenPeak,1,829m).,Themountaintopsoftenofferviewsofthecloudsfromabove,knownastheSeaofClouds(Chinese:云海;pinyin:ynhi)orHuangshanSeabecauseofthecloudsresemblancetoanocean,andmanyvistasareknownbynamessuchasNorthSeaorSouthSea.OnewriterremarkedontheviewofthecloudsfromHuangshanasfollows:Toenjoythemagnificenceofamountain,youhavetolookupwardsinmostcases.ToenjoyMountHuangshan,however,youvegottolookdownward.Avistaisaviewfromaparticularplace,especiallyabeautifulviewfromahighplace.(WRITTEN),3.Presentationanddiscussion,原文(SourceText),黄山,Mt.HuangShan,黄山位于安徽省南部，是国家重点风景名胜区1。(信息？)黄山占地约154平方公里，有72个重要山峰2。自古以来，无数游客被她的美丽和奇观所吸引，人称“天下名景集黄山”3，“黄山归来不看岳”。,译,参考译文：MountHuangShan,locatedinsouthernAnhuiProvince,isakeystate-listedscenicspot.HuangShanhas72peaksinanareaof154squarekilometers.Sinceancienttimes,numerousvisitorshavebeenattractedbyitsbeautyandwonders.Therearesuchsayingsas“HuangShanboastswhateversightsthereareunderheaven,”and“atriptoHuangShanendsyourinterestinothermountains.”Rose:MountHuang,situatedinSouthAnhuiProvince,isanimportantnationalscenicspot,coveringanareaofabout154squarekilometers.Ithas72majorpeaks.Sinceancienttimes,alargenumberofvisitorshavebeenattractedbyitsbeautyandwonders.Therearesayingsas“Huangshanembracesthebestsightsintheworld”and“SeenMountHuang,nomoretheothermountains”.,位于besituated,belocated,sit,stand,例句:重点的：Key(veryimportant)Youusemajorwhenyouwanttodescribesomethingthatismoreimportant,serious,orsignificantthanotherthingsinagrouporsituation.岳：高大的山：五五岳归来不看山，黄山归来不看岳SeentheGreatFive,seenallmounts;SeenMountHuang,nomoretheFive!,五岳，又作五嶽，是中国五大名山的总称，分别为东岳山东的泰山、西岳陕西的华山、中岳河南的嵩山、北岳山西的恒山、南岳湖南的衡山TheFiveMountainSwordSectsAllianceisafictionalallianceformedbyfivemartialartssectsmentionedinthewuxianovelTheSmiling,ProudWanderer1byJinYong.ThefivesectsspecializeinswordskillsandarebasedontheFiveGreatMountainsinTaoism:MountHua(華山);MountTai(泰山);(South)MountHeng(衡山);(North)MountHeng(恆山);andMountSong(嵩山).,黄山前山以三主峰为首，分别是莲花峰、光明顶和天都峰。天都峰是最险峻的山峰，最险处在“鲫鱼背”，它实是一块狭长石岗，长约20米，宽约1米。,参考译文：Thefrontpartofthemountainhasthreemajorpeaks:thoseofLianhua,GuangmingandTiandu.TianduPeakismostperilous.Itsmostdangerouspoint,called“JiyuBei(CarpsBack)”,isanarrowstoneridge,20meterslongandonemeterwide.Rose:TheFrontpartofMt.Huanghasthreemajorpeaks,namely,Lianhua(Lotus)Peak,Guangming(Bright)PeakandTiandu(CapitalofHeaven)Peak.,险峻（山势）高而险dangerous;steep;perilous;precipitousanarduoushillperilousadj.Fulloforinvolvingperil;dangerous.充满或包含危险的；危险的precipitous(fml文)dangerouslyhighorsteep*aprecipitouspathdownthemountainside沿山腰而下的一条陡峭的小路*,岗：岗子gngzi不高的山或高起的土坡：土。mound,hillock,ridge,crestmound:alargepileofearthorstones;asmallhill:hillock:asmallhillAridgeisalong,narrowpieceofraisedland.Thecrestofahillorawaveisthetopofit.,纯石无土，中央隆起，形如鱼背。岗上山风强劲，(?)两侧万丈深渊，时有迷雾扑来，颇多险中之趣(信息中心？)。登顶可见大字石刻：“登峰造极”！,1.“鲫鱼背”(It)纯石无土，2.中央隆起=形如鱼背,Theridgeiswhippedbystrongwind(mountainbreezes).OnthesidesoftheridgeareabyssesFogsometimessweepsbytheridge.Itmakespeopleinterestedinitsperil.,登峰造极：比喻达到顶峰。Best;perfectLiteralmeaningorrhetoricalmeaning?,纯石无土，中央隆起，形如鱼背。岗上山风强劲，两侧万丈深渊，时有迷雾扑来，颇多险中之趣(信息中心？)。登顶（视点转换）可（？）见大字石刻：“登峰造极”！,译文1：Itdoesnthaveasinglespeckofearthonit,andrisesinthemiddlelikeacarpsback.Itoffersaperilousinterest,withstrongmountainbreezeswhippingit,abyssesonbothsidesandfognowandthensweepingpast.Onthetop,visitorscanseebigcharactersinscribedinthestone:“Hereweareontheextremesummit.”Rose：Itgetsitsnamesinceitisasinglepieceofrockcoveredwithoutaspeckofearthandshapedlikethecarpwithariseonitsback.Itstrikesthetouristswithitsperil:strongmountainbreezeswhipitandfognowandthenfloatsamongtheabyssesonitssides.Ifyougettothetop,youwillseestoneinscriptionslike“Dengfengzaoji”(Literally“Hereweareontheextremesummit.”ItisalsoaChineseproverbmeaning“somethingisdonetoperfection”.),Agustofchillyautumnwindisblowingfromthenorth.登峰造极-登上最高峰。常比喻学问、技艺等达到最高境界或事物发展到极点。登：攀登。造：到达。极：最高点。南朝宋刘义庆世说新语文学：“不知便可登峰造极不?”,莲花峰海拔1,873米，是黄山最高峰。此峰状如莲花，登上峰顶，直觉顶天立地6。,LianhuaPeak(LotusFlowerPeak),1,873metersabovesealevel,isthehighestpeakofMt.HuangShan.Itisshapedlikealotusflower.Onthesummit,onemayfeelasifstandingrightbetweenheavenandearth.,AlotusoralotusflowerisatypeofwaterlilythatgrowsinAfricaandAsia.,光明顶海拔1841米，是黄山第二高峰，山顶平旷7，视野开阔(逻辑关系？)，幸运之时可看到“日华”奇观云海之上，一轮内紫外红的美丽光环显现在太阳周围，由于这轮光环，光明顶也因此得名。,IthasaflatandwidetopOnecanhaveabroadview-Fromitsflatandwidetop,onecan,日华：阳光通过云中的小水滴或冰粒时发生衍射，在太阳周围形成的彩色光环，内紫外红。coronalightaringofpurple（light）ontheinnersideandredontheouteraroundthesunabovetheseaofclouds,whichearnedthepeakitsname.Sheearnedherlivingbysinging,光明顶海拔1841米，是黄山第二高峰，山顶平旷7，视野开阔，幸运之时可看到“日华”奇观云海之上，一轮内紫外红的美丽光环显现在太阳周围，由于这轮光环，光明顶也因此得名。,GuangmingPeak(BrightnessPeak),1,841metersabovesealevel,isthesecondhighest.Fromitsflatandwidetop,onecanhaveabroadview,andsometimesmaybeluckyenoughtoseethewonderofacoronalightabeautifulringofpurpleontheinnersideandredontheouteraroundthesunabovetheseaofclouds,whichearnedthepeakitsname.,狮子峰、始信峰和西海群峰是黄山后山诸峰中最精彩的景点。狮子峰好象是上苍的杰作8，(logic?)有“天然图画”、“面面受奇”的石刻，有“说也不信，到者方知”的名联，有“不到狮子峰，不见黄山踪”的评语。,ShiziPeak,ShixinPeakandtheXihaiPeaksarethebestsightsonthebacksideofthemountain.ShiziPeaklookslikeamasterpiececreatedbyHeavenhimself,inpraiseofwhicharethestoneinscriptionslike“naturespainting”and“wondersoneveryside”,thecoupletslike“Hearingisdoubtingandseeingisbelieving,”andthecommentslike“ToomitcomingtoShiziPeakistoseenothingofHuangShanatall.”,Youcanuseliketointroduceanexampleofthesetofthingsorpeoplethatyouhavejustmentioned.TheyneglectthatlargecitieslikeNewYorkhavereceivedoverthepast12yearsistremendous.Hecouldsaythingslike,LetsgotothecarorLetusgoforawalkinFrench.=suchas,始信峰小巧秀丽，奇松挂壁，雾漫峰尖，云飘谷底。西海群峰千姿百态，云雾飘渺、万壑深渊，似有群仙(逻辑关系？)游荡，变幻莫测9。,静态：始信峰小巧秀丽，奇松、壁、峰、谷底2.动态：挂、雾漫峰尖，云飘谷底,静态:西海群峰千姿百态万壑深渊ravines动态：云雾飘渺，变幻莫测，似有群仙游荡shroudedin,Aravineisaverydeepnarrowvalleywithsteepsides.rvi:nAprecipiceisaverysteepcliffonamountain.悬崖,始信峰小巧秀丽，奇松挂壁，雾漫峰尖，云飘谷底。西海群峰千姿百态，云雾飘渺、万壑深渊，似有群仙游荡，变幻莫测9。,ShixinPeakissmallbutofexquisitebeauty,withfantasticpineshangingdownfromprecipices,andcloudsfloatingabout(touching)thepeakandonthebottomofthevalley.TheXihaiPeaksareofvariousshapeswithdeepravinesinbetween,allshroudedincloudsthatarealwaysmovingandchanging,asifcarryingimmortalsontheirwanderings.ShixinPeakissmallbutofexquisitebeauty,(with)fantasticpinesgrowingontheprecipices,fogenveloping/shroudingthetop,andcloudsdriftingoverthebottomsofthevalley.,Whensomethingdriftssom