高考英语作文典型话题——灾难.ppt

写作高手,灾难性事件的写作方法指导,基础写作方法指导及难点点评,第一句：Asisreportedonawebsite,(点明消息来源）morethanfivehundreddogstobekilled/butcheredwererescuedonApril15thnearatollgate/stationontheBeijing-Haerbinfreeway.(直接交代事情，不要拐弯抹角,当然也可以用强调句式itisthat来展示实力）,第二句：Onthenoonofthatday,52volunteersstoppedatruckinthehopeofrescuingthedogsonit.(进入细节阐述，注意紧扣提示内容，如中午，52名志愿者，拦住卡车）第三句:Afteralongnegotiation,thevolunteerspaid110,000yuanforthedogs,savingallthedogseventually.(继续细节阐述，紧扣提示内容，如谈判，11万人民币，此处花钱的英语句式一定要表达准确，务必区别用好spend，take，cost，pay等这些动词的用法。）,第四句：Thenewssoongotaroundonline/ontheInternet,resultingaheateddebate/discussiononwhetheritisright/advocatedtostopthetrucktorescuethedogs,onwhichpeopleviewsvariedfrompersontoperson.(进一步阐述细节，紧扣提示内容，如网上消息传播，引起争议，是否提倡这种行为),第五句：AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion/Asforme，weshouldprotecttheseanimals,ourhumanfriends,butitisbettertousemoreproperandsaferways.(按要求表明自己的观点，注意简明扼要，点到为止）,灾难性事件我们讲的灾难性事件,主要指fire(火灾)，flood(水灾)，drought(干旱)，landslide(山崩)，earthquake(地震)，tsunami(海啸)，typhoon(台风)，hurricane(飓风)，tornado(龙卷风)，volcano(火山)，snowstorm(暴风雪)等。,一、写作内容报道这类事件,一般应包括事件发生的时间、地点、灾情、损失,以及救援情况等。二、套语背诵1.发生某地anterriblefirehappenedin/hit/struck.2.造成后果失踪：missing,destroy,受伤：getinjured死亡：bekilled/loseoneslife/causesbsdeath电力中断：theelectricitywascutoff房屋倒塌：housescollapse/falldown（6）财产损失：propertylosses,冲走房屋：washawaybuildings成为废墟：beinruins;fallintoruin菜地被毁坏了：vegetablefieldswereruined.造成经济损失：causeeconomiclosses,3.救援捐赠：受灾地区：strickendistrict/area救灾工作：rescuework恢复正常：returntonormal,地震灾民：thevictimsoftheearthquake/earthquake-strickenpeople被困人员：trappedpeople拯救：rescue.from呼吁人们捐赠：callonpeopletomakedonations,三、超级仿写基础写作昨天的火灾引起社会各界极大关注,以下是一些基本情况：,写作内容请根据以上内容给学校广播站写一篇英语简讯,内容包括：1.火灾发生的时间,地点；2.火灾的影响和各界对此火灾的反应；3.你的态度。写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。,基础写作Everyone,attention,please!I,msosorrytotellyouthataterriblefirebrokeoutinamountaininourcityyesterday.Lukily,thefirefightershurriedthereatonceandfoughtagainstitbravely,butthefirewassobigthatitlastedfivehours.Tooursorrows,halfoftheforestwasdestroyedbythefire.What,sworse,twopersonwasbadlyinjured.Atlast,accordingtothepolice,sresearch,theterriblefirewascausedbyalivecigaretteendwhichwasthrowncarelesslybyapasser-by.,Theterror/horroraccidenthastaughtusalessonthatusefulmeasuresshouldbetakentopreventforestfires.Forexample,morenoticeboardsmustbesetuptowarnofthedangerofthrowningoutlivecig