人教版英语必修二unit5Writing.ppt

Unit5,Unit5Music,写信征求建议,WriteanemailtoFreddy.Basedonyourdiscussionabouthowtoformyourownband,tellhimyourideasandaskhimforadviceonhowtomakeyourbandsuccessful.Hereissomehelp.,DearFreddy,MynameisLiHua.Imbeginningabandwithmyfriends.However,wehaveneverbeeninabandbefore.Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadvice?Iwouldliketoknow.,Inpairs,readthebeginningoftheletterandFreddysreply.Workoutthequestionsthatmaybeasked.Forexample:Isitbesttoplayonekindofmusicordifferentkindstostartwith?,Workoutareasonforeachquestion.Preparetowritethefirstdraft.Usethequestionsyouhaveworkedout,andthenfinishtheletterpolitelybythankingFreddyforhishelp.Swapthewritingwithyourpartnerandimproveeachotherswork.Writetheseconddraft.,DearLiHua,Imhonoredthatyouwouldaskmeforadvice.Asyouknow,ourbandwasformedinaveryunusualway.However,wehavelearnedalotaboutbeingabandsincethen.First,youwillneedtoagreeonwhatkindofmusicyouwanttowriteandplay.,Freddysreply,Youhadbetterplayonekindofmusicifyouwanttobecomefamous.Nextyouwillneedtocomeupwithanameforyourbandsomethingthatisdifferent.Then,makeaspecialtimeforpractisingandsticktoit.Youwillalsowanttogiveseveralperformancesforfriendsandfamilytogettheirideasonyourmusicalability.Aboveall,justhavefun!Yourssincerely,Freddy,根据讨论的内容和结果给Freddy写一封信，询问如何组建一个成功的乐队。体裁属于实用性写作(practicalwriting)中的征求建议(askingforadvice)信。话题组建乐队与单元话题贴近，有趣味性，可以提供较为真实、具体的语言使用情景。,审题要素1.确定文体：注意书信写作的形式特点。2.主体时态：以一般现在时为主。3.主体人称：就自己遇到的问题向对方征求建议，多用第一人称。4.内容要点：说明主旨；提出问题；感谢对方。,要求针对组建乐队一事写一封信征求建议，任务明确，需要将咨询内容进一步细化。谋篇布局时应注意：首先，提出具体问题之前应简要说明写信的目的及咨询事宜。,其次，有针对性地提出问题，能够获得有效的建议和更好的解决方案。应注意表述清晰，条理分明，重点突出。此外，以咨询为主，写作中应注意疑问的多种表达形式，灵活使用疑问词、情态动词等。恰当使用主从复合句，或以陈述句形式表达疑问，使得篇章语言富于变化，行文自然。,Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadvice?Couldyoutellmehowto.?Imnotsure.Iwouldliketoknow.Iwonder.Whatsyouropiniononthismatter?,常用句式,Doyouhaveanysuggestionsfordoing.?HowcanIgiveabetterperformance?Whatkindofpreparationcanbemade?Isthereanythingelseweshoulddo?Whatdoyouthinkisthebestwayforus?Doyouthinkitsagoodideato.?,Idontknowwhatweshoulddotoachievethisgoal.PleasegivemesomeadviceandIwillappreciateitverymuch.,DearFreddy,MynameisLiHua.Imbeginningabandwithmyfriends.However,wehaveneverbeeninabandbefore.Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadvice?Iwouldliketoknowwhatweshoulddotomakeourbandsuccessful.,Sample,Thereareseveralbandsinourschool.Howcanwemakeourbandwell-knownquickly?Doyouthinkaspecialnameforthebandwillbehelpful?Besides,Imnotquitesurewhatwearesupposedtodointhedailypractice.Whichisthebestwaytoimproveourmusicalability?,PleasegivemesomeadviceandIwillappreciateitverymuch.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua,Usetheinformationandideasyouhavecollectedtowriteaboutthemusicianyouhavechosen.Therearesomemoreinformationonpage74.,TheBeatlesTodayIamgoingtotalkaboutmyfavoritewesternband-theBeatles.Therewerefourmembersofthisband:theirnameswereJohn,Paul,GeorgeandRingo.ThesongthattheywrotewhichIreallyloveisYesterday.Ithassuchabeautifultuneandalwaysmakesmefeelalittlesad.,IgottoknowtheirmusicwhenIsawthemontelevision.Theyseemedsokindandfriendlytotheirfans.Theyhadsuchagoodsenseofhumortoo.TheirsongsseemtotalkaboutthingsthatIfeelstronglyaboutlikegrowingoldorbeinglonely.Theirmusicisalwayssobeautiful.,Itmakesmefeelhappyandsadatthesametime.Ithinkthatthey