高考英语看图写作

高考书面表达专题训练（一）看图作文,如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,连接词,Practice1.Connectthefollowingsentenceswiththeconjunctionsinbrackets(用括号中的连词将每组句子连到一起。),1.Ididntknowthewaytomyhotel.Iaskedaporter.(so),Ididntknowthewaytomyhotel,soIaskedaporter.,2.IspokeEnglishverycarefully.Ispokeveryclearly.(notonlybutalso),IspokeEnglishnotonlyverycarefullybutalsoveryclearly.,3.Irepeatedmyquestionseveraltimes.Atlastheunderstood.(and),Irepeatedmyquestionseveraltimesandatlastheunderstood,4.Heansweredme.Hedidnotspeakslowly.Hedidnotspeakclearly.(butneithernor).,Heansweredme,buthespokeneitherslowlynorclearly.,5.IntheeveningMrBrownlikesreadingnewspapers.IntheeveninghiswifeoftenwatchesTV.(while),IntheeveningMrBrownlikesreadingnewspapers,whilehiswifeoftenwatchesTV.,书面表达历年分值与要求,看图作文如何写？,五个步骤,1、审题,人称、时态、要点,2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。,3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。,4、联句成文：,注意：,句子结构完整,逻辑关系，正确使用联接词,句型多样化，避免呆板直译，汉式英语,开头与结尾,5、检查修改，规范抄写,练习2根据右边六幅图的提示，寻找要点,第六页,审题,1、体裁：记叙文体，叙述一男孩浪费水，另一男孩提醒别人爱惜水的过程。,2、主要时态：一般过去时,3、人称：第三人称XiaoMing和XiaoLong,4、要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住五个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过、事情的结果。,练习2根据右边六幅图的提示，寻找要点,第六页,Commentontheformercomposition:,Onedayafterschool,XiaoMingturnedonatapandsplashedwaterhereandthere.Atthismoment,XiaoLonghapenedtopassby.XiaoMingsplashedhimwithwaterandmadehimallwet.XiaoMingranawaywithoutturningoffthetap.WhenXiaoLongsawthis,hewentoverandturnedoffthewater.Heangrybecausehethinkswatershouldntbewasted.Thenhewenthomeandwroteanotice.Heputituponthewallnearthetap.Aftersometime,XiaoMingwentbackandlookedthenotice.Hefeltsorryforwhathehaddone.,2加was,3thought,4whichread“Savewater”.,5saw,Attention:,1单词拼写要正确,3时态语态要准确,2句子结构要完整,5词语运用要无误,4短文要点要完整,1.改为happened,练习3，假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生，暑假打算去乡村度假。请根据下面两幅画提供的信息，写一篇短文。简要说明城市生活环境的不足，重点说明你去乡村度假的原因。注意：1.短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥，使短文内容连贯、完整。2。词数：100左右。,审题：,1、人称：第一人称2、主要时态：一般现在时,3、抓要点：,3、抓要点：,1）.暑假去乡村，度假,2.）城市生活环境的不足,1）拥挤（交通、人、住房）,2）空气污染,3）噪音,3）.乡村环境的优美（空气、树、水、阳光、动物、农舍）,4.）乡村生活的乐趣(钓鱼、爬山、游泳、划船、摘果子、放牛、散步）,5.）结尾,OnePossibleVersionIwillspendthissummerholidayinthecountryside.Althoughthecityismodernandconvenient,therearestillsomeproblems,suchasairpollution,crowdednessandnoise.InthecountrysideIcanenjoyacomfortableandquietlife.There,theairisfreshandthewaterisclean.Treesaregreenandbirdsaresinging.Icanalsogoboating,fishingandswimminginthelake.Whatsmore,Icanclimbthehills.Allthiswillbeinterestingandgoodformyhealth.Aboveall,Icanlearnmoreaboutnature.SoIwanttogotothecountrysideforachange.Imlookingforwardtocomingofmysummerholiday.,练习4，假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在的城市的新建华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房，请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：1.词数：100左右。2.参考词汇：房租rent(n.),DearBob,ImsogladtolearnthatyourecominginSeptember.Ivefoundaplaceforyou.Itsasmallflatof25squaremeterswithabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.Inthebedroomthereisabed,asofa,adeskandachair.Therentis500yuanpermonth.TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyoustraighttotheschool.Infact,itsonlyonestop.Doyouthinkyoudlikeit?Ifnot,Icantryandfindanotherplaceforyou.Justletmeknow.,策略：1、平时多写。2、及时更正错误，避免再犯。3、注重积累单词、词组、固定短语、常用句型。4、多背诵模仿。,Maybethefollowingadvicewilldogoodtoyou.,未完待续,补充：1、次重点：“内容要点”中涵盖的内容2、大错：句子结构谓语构成词序语态时态,3、小错：名词单复数第三人称单数拼写标点符号字母大小写介词、冠次词等小词,少量错误：1个大错或34个小错一些错误：2个大错或56个小错较多错误：3个大错或78个小错错误多：4个大错或910个小错错误很多：5个大错或10个以上小错,如在整篇文章一致使用与过去时间相关的时态，尽量不予扣分；如果混合使用，可酌情扣分,记住这些使文章层次清晰，行文连贯的关联词，并在写作中学习使用。,1.表示平行、对等或选择关系and,bothand,aswellas.Neithernor,also,notonlybutalso,2.表示转折关系But,yet,however,nevertheless(然而),inspiteof(尽管仍),although,otherwise,while,3.表示对比关系Onthecontrary,insteadof,ontheonehandontheotherhand,justlike,unlike(不象),4.表示因果关系So,for,therefore,asaresult,because,owingto,dueto,thanksto,onaccountof(=becauseof),5.表示时间关系Inthepast,now,atpresent,inthefuture,intheend,shortlyafter(不久之后）,6.表示顺序关系Firstsecond,then,next,finally,foronething;foranotherthing,7.表示递进、强调关系Besides,furthermore（而且，此外）,inaddition,moreover,whatsmore，worsestill,aboveall,certainlyimportantofall,tomakemattersworse,8.表示解释、说明关系namely,actually,suchas,forexampleinstance,thatistosay,inotherwords,andsoon,totellyouthetruth,accordingtothis,9.表示结论inshort,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,asyouknow,asfarasIknow,onthewhole,Practice2Doyouthinkthefollowingpassageisagoodone?Whyorwhynot?,ZhaoGanggotsomefireworksandwasgoingtosetthemoffontheNewYearsEve.Thishappenedtobeseenbyhisclassmate,WuLi.ShetoldhimthatitwasnotallowedtosetofffireworksinBeijing.ButZhaoGangthoughtitwastheSpringFestivalandhecouldenjoyhimselfforawhile.SoWuLishowedhimsomepicturepostersandexplainedthatsettingofffireworksmightcausepollutionandbigfires.Theworsetohappenwasthatitwoulddoseriousharmtopeopleseyes.Havingheardthis,ZhaoGangagreedwithWuLi.Hethrewhisfireworksaway.,ZhaoGanggotsomefireworksandwasgoingtosetthemoffontheNewYearsEve.Thishappenedtobeseenbyhisclassmate,WuLi.ShetoldhimthatitwasnotallowedtosetofffireworksinBeijing.ButZhaoGangthoughtitwastheSpringFestivalandhecouldenjoyhimselfforawhile.SoWuLishowedhimsomepicturepostersandexplainedthatsettingofffireworksmightcausepollutionand