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1、1,基础写作-建议信,2,写作攻略 1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力,3,写作步骤 首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。 主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。 结尾段：对提出的建议进行总

2、结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受,4,建议信常用写作句型 1.开头：表对对方的情况表示理解，并乐意帮忙： 1.I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter 2.I am writing to share some advice with you. 3.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to 4.You have asked me for my advice onand 5. In order to, I am going to make the follo

3、wing suggestions,5,二、正文： 提建议的句式 1.It is useful / helpful / important / necessaryfor you to do 2.It should be a good idea for you to do 3.It will certainly help a lot to do sth / It also helps to do sth 4.In my opinion, it would be better if you do 6.If I were you, I would 7.I feel that it would be m

4、ore beneficial if you could 8.You may consider doing,6,三：表意见并列的连词 表先后次序： First, second, third.Finally Firstly, secondly，eventually to begin with/ to start with, at last 递进关系： furthermore; moreover; besides; meanwhile; in other words; at the same time,7,四、结尾：建议信常用句式 1. I believe you will take my advi

5、ce into consideration. 2.I hope you will find these suggestions useful / helpful / practical. 3.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 4. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this matter. 5. Im willing to discuss this matter with you whenever you need,8,写作模板,Yours sincere

6、ly, Li Ming,9,基础写作（5句话） 假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。 内容提示： 1. 一定要做好课前预习 2. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记 3. 课后认真独立完成作业 4. 每天进行英语听说练习 5. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量,10,Dear Zhang Ming: I know that you are not good at English after reading your letter. Id like to give you some advice on learning English. Firstly,

7、 you should preview/ prepare for the next lesson. Secondly, youd better listen to the teacher carefully and take some notes in class. Then, I hope you can finish your homework by yourself /on your own. Whats more, you must practise listening and speaking every day. Finally, read more books after cla

8、ss in order to enrich / enlarge your vocabulary . Practice makes perfect! I hope you find my advice useful,Yours, Li Hua,11,第一步：列举要点 英语学的不大好 You are not good at English You are not getting along well with English,12,提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。 give you some advice on English / learning English,13,1.做好课前预习 Previe

9、w / Prepare for 2.课堂上认真听讲 Listen to the teacher carefully 记好笔记 Set down/ take some notes,14,3.课后认真独立完成作业 Finish your homework by yourself / on your own. 4.每天进行英语听说练习 Practise listening and speaking every day,15,5.加强课外阅读扩大词汇量 Enrich / enlarge your vocabulary,16,Dear Zhang Ming: I know that you _ Engl

10、ish after reading your letter. Id like to give you some advice on learning English. Firstly, you should _ the next lesson. Secondly, youd better _ and _ in class,are not good at,preview/ prepare for,listen to the teacher carefully,take some notes,17,Then, I hope you can finish your homework _. Whats

11、 more, you must _ every day. Finally, read more books after class in order to _ your vocabulary . Practice makes perfect! I hope you find my advice useful,Yours, Li Hua,by yourself /on your own,practise listening and speaking,enrich / enlarge,18,Dear Zhang Ming: I know that you are not good at Engli

12、sh after reading your letter. Id like to give you some advice on learning English. Firstly, you should preview/ prepare for the next lesson. Secondly, youd better listen to the teacher carefully and take some notes in class. Then, I hope you can finish your homework by yourself /on your own. Whats m

13、ore, you must practise listening and speaking every day. Finally, read more books after class in order to enrich / enlarge your vocabulary . Practice makes perfect! I hope you find my advice useful,Yours, Li Hua,19,实战演练 广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观 众的英语节目, 新聘任了来自英国的John作为节目编辑助理。现在, John就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。 写作内容 假

14、如你是学生李华, 建议开办“广州全接触” (All-round Guangzhou)节目。请根据以下节目设想给John写信,20,21,Dear John， I know youre going to set up an English program for middle school students. So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round Guangzhou”. . I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration. Sincerely yours, Li Hua,22,23,例

15、题导写 1、审题：养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要,24,2、信息重组。我们可以把题中信息整合成以下5个汉语句子： 节目包括广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮 食、名人。 建议每周六、日举办，方便学生周末观看。 建议邀请中学生参加节目, 激发学生的收看兴 趣。 这个可以使中学生更多地了解广州文化, 还有助于提高中学生的英语水平, 这样他们就能向外国游客介绍广州。 我肯定这个节目一定会收到中学生的欢迎,25,词语翻译 翻译或完成下列词或短语。cover / include句1：(1)包括(节目) _ (2)历史，教育，景点 ，饮食，名人 _ _,cover / in

16、clude,history,education,scenic spots,tourist attractions,food,famous people,places of interest,26,句3： (3) 激发某人的兴趣 _句4：(4)提高英语水平_ 句5： (5)受到欢迎,spark / arouse ones interest,improve ones English,be popular among / with sb,be well-received,by/be welcomed by,27,3、难句翻译。 翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。 句2： (1) (这个节目将于)每周六、

17、日(播放)。 It would be better to broadcast it on weekends. I suggest that the program be broadcast on weekends. It is a good idea to broadcast it on weekends. 2)方便学生周末观看。 We students can have the chance to watch it. It will be convenient for us students to watch it. 合并: It would be better to broadcast i

18、t on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it,28,句3： (3) (你也可以)邀请中学生参加节目。 You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in / take part in the program. (4) (这个节目可以)提高学生的收看兴趣。 It will surely arouse /spark other students interest in it. 合并：You can also invite some

19、middle school students to get involved in / take part in the program, which will surely arouse / spark / stimulate other students interest in it,29,句4： (5)(这个节目帮助)中学生可以更多地了解广州文化。 This program can get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou. (6) (中学生可以)向外国游客介绍广州。 The students can introduce G

20、uangzhou to foreign visitors. (7) (这个节目)有助于提高中学生的英语水平。 This program helps students improve their English. 合并：Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors,30,This program

21、will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Guangzhou. It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it. Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which

22、will surely arouse other students interest in it. Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors. I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students,31,Dear J

23、ohn， I know youre going to set up an English program for middle school students. So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round Guangzhou”. This program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Guangzhou. It would be better to broadcast it on weeke

24、nds so that we students can have the chance to watch it. Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will surely arouse other students interest in it. Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more abo

25、ut the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors. I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students. I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration. Sincerely yours, Li Hua,32,Dear John， I know youre going to set up an English program for middle schoo

26、l students. So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round Guangzhou”. I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration. Sincerely yours, Li Hua,33,由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存, 为鼓励大家节能环保,你们学校将举办一次“低碳行动”的环保活动, 假设你是高三6班的一名学生, 将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活”的倡议,以下是倡议的内容： 1. 尽量绿色出行：采取步行或自行车方式; 2. 少喝一次瓶装水； 3. 尽量不用一次性制品, 如一次性木筷子和塑 料袋； 4. 每周至少手洗衣服一次； 5. 每周少开手机、电视一天。 写作内容 1. 活动背景; 2. 倡议目的; 3. 倡议内容,34,Hello everyone, I am Li Hua from Class Six, Senior Three. . I believe everyone, as a member of this global village, should take responsibility to take part in the