江苏省永丰初级中学中考英语专题复习 书面表达课件2

1、中,考,专,题,Writing,书面表达,20,分,评分说明,各档次的给分范围和要求主要看,1,行文,2,要点,第五档,1720,分,能写明全部或绝大部分内容要,点,语言基本无误,行文连贯，表达清楚,运用,了,较高级的词汇,运用了复合句，语言流畅,第四档,1316,分）能写明全部或大部分内容要点,语言有少量错误,行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚,要点基本齐全，都是简单句，行文基本流畅。,第三档,912,分,能写明大部分内容要点；语言,有较多错误；尚能达意,第二档,58,分,只能写出少部分内容要点；语言,错误很多，只有个别句子可读,第一档,04,分,只能写出与所要求内容有关的一,些单词,1,短语及句子

2、结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用,均为大错。一处大错扣,1,分,2,通篇人称、时态、标点错误，统扣,2,分,3,拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错,3,个小错相当于,1,处大错,4,相同错误，只扣一次,5,词数不足,100,词扣,2,分,6,文中若出现自己及学校等真实名称扣,3,分,7,书写潦草，卷面不清，乃至影响阅卷，扣,2,分,注：禁用胶带或修正带或涂改液，不要涂改,Teaching aims,1,学会作文审题，构建文章结构,2,能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连,词成句,3,通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分,等学会组句成篇,随着年龄的增长，我们的课外活动领域会扩大，关注点也会增多,你们

3、学校的,English Newsletter,正在以,My After-school Activities,为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容用英语写一篇征文,要,求,1,表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯,2,必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥,3,词数,100,词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词,数,4,不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等,theme,person,structure,tense,wrods,number,the simple present tense,the simple past tense,我们在成长，我们应该,家庭,现在,1,和家长交流,2,做志愿者,3,以

4、前,1,看电视,2,关注点,活动,自己,Introduction,Main body,Conclusion,in the past,now,1,看电视,2.,1,和家长交流,2,做志愿者,3,Your,opinions,1,2.,Task 2: Write an outline,1,List some keywords about after-school activities in the past,Phrases,_,_,2. List some keywords about after-school activities now,Phrases,_,_,3. List some keyw

5、ords about opinions,Phrases,_,_,Task 3: List key points and words,chat with parents, work as a volunteer,play football, watch TV ,play computer,games,1,Make sentences with the keywords about past after-school,activities,Sentences,_,_,2. Make sentences with the keywords about present after-school,act

6、ivities,Sentences,_,_,3. Make sentences with the keywords about,your opinions,Sentences,_,_,Task 4: Make sentences with words or phrases,I often,watched TV,and,spent much time,Playing computer games,I,chat with my parents,Also I,work,as a volunteer to help people in need,conjunctions,表并列,and, also,

7、too, as well, as well as, both and , not only,but also, either or, neither nor, in addition,另外,besides,而且, Whats more,而且,表对比,but, however, yet, although, though, while,表条件,if, unless,表原因,because, because of, for, since, as,表结果,so, therefore, as a result, sothat, suchthat,表说明,like, such as, for examp

8、le,表强调,surely, certainly, of course,表顺序,first(ly), second(ly),first of all, then, next, afterwards, finally,表总结,in a word, in all, in my opinion,以我之见,表目的,in order to, so that,抄,组,集,连,抓,审,作文,审清题意,构建框架,集句成段,添连接词,抓住要点,列关键词,连词成句,变换句式,组段成篇,加主题句,抄写规范,避免错误,活,动,关注点,以,前,1,看电视,2.,自己,现,在,1,和家长交流,2,做志愿者,3.,家庭,我

9、们在成长，我们应该,随着年龄的增长，我们的课外活动领域会扩大，关注点也会增多。你们学校,的,English Newsletter,正在以,My After-school Activities,为题举行征文活动，请根据,下列表格提示的内容用英语写一篇征文,要求,1,表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯,2,必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥,3,词数,100,词左右,征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数,4,不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等,My After,School Activities,As we grow, both our after-school activities and what w

10、e care about are becoming,more and more,In the past, I_,Lets enjoy your own compositions,范文展示,My After-school Activities,As we grow, both our after-school activities and what we,care about are becoming more and more,In the past , I often watched TV,Sometimes I played,football with my friends until i

11、t was dark. And I often,spent much time playing computer games,All I cared,about was myself instead of anyone else,However,with the time going, I realize I should,not only,think about myself,but also,care about others,Now, I,often chat with my parents and help them do some,housework in my spare time,Besides,I work as a,volunteer to help more people in need,Whats more,I at,times make posters with my classmates to make people,realize it is important to protect env