新高考书面表达之事例写作

1、Passage 1: I made my dream of becoming a leader of the Students Union come true.,plain appearance no chance to win an election strengths plans a whole year ahead of time a course on effective public speaking,2016考试说明参考试卷书面表达 回顾人生中经历的一些事情有助于我们对 过去进行思考。请用英语写一篇100 120 词的 短文，描述一件对你或你的家庭产生重大影响的事情，并略加评论。,

2、Passage 1: I made my dream of becoming a leader of the Students Union come true. Passage 2: My husband got his lost suitcase back. Passage 3: I succeeded in finishing my first 10,000m race.,I had long dreamed of becoming a leader of the Students Union. _, my plain appearance prevented me from winnin

3、g the elections, which _ me. But I didnt give up. _, after weighing my strengths against my weaknesses, I began my election plans a whole year earlier, even attending a course on public speaking. _, my hard work paid off. The next year saw my _ in the election.,I had long dreamed of becoming a leade

4、r of the Students Union. However, my plain appearance prevented me from winning the elections, which depressed me. But I didnt give up. Instead, I made good use of my strengths, began my election plans a whole year earlier, and even attended a course on public speaking. As a result, my hard work pai

5、d off. The next year saw my victory in the election.,connect sentences concise and precise,Several days after my husband arrived in Sydney from India, he lost his suitcase with all his important papers, feeling lost and lonely in a strange city. Beyond expectation, however, a stranger phoned to say

6、he had found my husbands suitcase with all his papers and documents. Words failed to express the gratitude of my husband as well as my whole family.,concise and precise connect sentences-coherent,Passage 3: I succeeded in finishing my first 10,000m race.,didnt know if finish a 70-year-old man ran pa

7、st me,When I took part in my first 10,000m race, _. A 70-year-old man even ran past me, _. At that defining moment, _ that each man has different capacities and goals for himself and my goal was only to finish. Thus, _ and crossed the finish line with pride.,When I took part in my first 10,000m race

8、, I couldnt keep up with the pace. A 70-year-old man even ran past me, making me feel defeated. At that defining moment, it suddenly struck me like lightening that each man has different capacities and goals for himself and my goal was only to finish. Thus, I turned my embarrassment into inspiration

9、 and crossed the finish line with pride.,Make it true to your life and to the point Use _ words and _ and _ expressions to make it logic and well organized Limit the number of words to about 70,Some changes are necessary when employing the experience in your writing!,Use connectingwords and concise

10、and precise expressions to make it logic and well organized,2016考试说明参考试卷书面表达 回顾人生中经历的一些事情有助于我们对 过去进行思考。请用英语写一篇100 120 词的 短文，描述一件对你或你的家庭产生重大影响的事情，并略加评论。,beginning an experience your reflection,When it comes to the thing that has a great effect on me, never will I forget the day when I lost my bag. It

11、 was the first day that I went to high school. Unfortunately, I lost my bag on my way to the classroom. How desperate I was. I didnt know what to do but searching for it without hesitation. When I lost my patience and went to the classroom, I found there was a man with my bag. So delight was I that

12、I rushed to him. After thanking him for a lot and saying goodbye to him, I went to the classroom with a big smile. What a kind of person he was! And what a thing that brightened my day! He not only restored the important bag to me that day but also restored my faith and trust in people. I still reme

13、mber his kindness and send a warm wish his way. (156),_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,not natural,not concise,not precise,not to the point,When it comes to the thing that has a great effect on me, I cannot help thinking of the day when I got my lost bag back. It was the first day of my high school. Unfortunately,

14、 I lost my bag on my way to the classroom. How desperate I was! I searched for it everywhere but without success. I was on the point of losing all hope when I found there was a man with my bag in front of my classroom. So delighted was I that I rushed to him without hesitation. Words failed to expre

15、ss my thankfulness to him. What a kind person the man was! And what a thing that brightened my day! He not only restored the important bag to me that day but also restored my faith and trust in people. Even to this day I still remember his kindness and send a warm wish his way.,In life we all have m

16、oments when we compare ourselves to/with others. Once I took part in my first 10,000m race and I couldnt keep up with the pace. A 70-year-old man even ran past me, making me feel defeated. At that defining moment, it suddenly struck me like lightening that each man has different capacities and goals

17、 for himself and my goal was only to finish. Thus, I turned my embarrassment into inspiration and crossed the finish line with pride. Its natural to compare ourselves to others, but from that race I have learned to let those moments inspire me instead of weakening me as every struggle is rich with o

18、pportunities, showing you what is possible.,When it comes to the thing that has a great effect on me, an inspiring experience will never fade from my memory. I had long dreamed of becoming a leader of the Students Union. However, my plain appearance prevented me from winning the elections, which depressed me. But I didnt give up. I