历年高考英语作文样本

1、 历年高考学生作文样本2007 假设你就是信中的ari，父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲50岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好)：1以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；2以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：(1)读信后的感受；(2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。2008学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“preparing myself for college life”，内容要点包括：1. 以约30

2、个词概括mike的发言要点；2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括： (1) 对中学生活的感受； (2) 理想的大学生活； (3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。20091以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；2然后以约120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括： (1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照； (2)假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应； (3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。1.5+2020101.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：(1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：(

3、2)你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的；(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习_w w.k*s*5 u.co m考试院公布答案：概要应包括以下要点：1）ethan used money to encourage her son but fail 2) kids are happy3) teachers and psychologists are upset. ethan, a boy addicted to tv, quit watching tv and got paid from his mother , with which he purchased a tv. recently

4、many schools pay the kids for good performances . school kids are satisfied with it while some other adults worry about its bad effects. the authors classmate who was addicted to tv used the mother his mother rewarded him to buy a new tv. there is a debate about rewarding kids with cash. teachers an

5、d kids admire it while adults and psychologists show their concern. 专家们的点评2010版高考作文如何抓住评卷老师的心1以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；2然后以约120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括： (1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照； (2)假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应； (3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。15分“should ban the tourists take photos with the animals”?the passage tells us that a

6、ll the koalas are easily unhappy and complaining with the reason is that many tourists are hugged and photographed them, which lead to they cant sleep.different people will offer quite different ideas. some people think that they should take photos with the animals when they go to visit them, so, we

7、 shouldnt ban it. however, others believe that we can not affect the animals sleep and they also have the freedom of sleep, so, they think should ban it.some may proclaim that it is a pleasure to take photos with the animals and it is also a nice memory thing. in the contrary, the objectors think th

8、at we should respect the animals idea and do well with them.in my opinion, i think we should ban the tourists take photos with the animals. if i were animal, i must hate others affect my sleep.no matter what we do, we should always get along well with all animals. animals is our friends. （1+14）点评：得分

9、点： 基本能表达出个人观点（虽然语言结构出错）：i think we should ban the tourists take photos with the animals； 大致都涉及到题目要求的三方面的内容； 尝试运用高级的词汇，如proclaim，和多样的语言结构，如it is a pleasure to take photos.; no matter what we do等。失分点：1概括部分：过分概括，把澳大利亚某些动物园里考拉的情况说成是所有考拉的情况：all the koalas are easily unhappy；只有一句话的概括，语言表达错漏百出：with the rea

10、son is that.这是run-on sentence，要拆开两句话来写；many tourists are hugged and photographed them这一句主动、被动不分；which lead to they cant sleep这里lead要用单数形式leads；介词to后不能直接加句子；此外，概括也不够全面，没有提及政府部门的态度，因此，概括部分1分。2写作部分：（1）标题不规范，为什么要用引号？问号也不应该写在引号之外；标题的句子表达不正确，没有主语，也不能说ban sb. do sth.；（2）语言结构出错较多，除了在概括部分提到的之外，第二段so的使用，不能前后逗

11、号；they think should ban it 从句没有主语，多个谓语堆在一起，根本没有英语句子的概念；第三段in the contrary应改为：on the contrary。第四段都是“run-on sentence”（句子堆在一起表达）：we should ban the tourists take photos., i must hate others affect my sleep. 另外，in my opinion和i think是意义上的重复，只用其一即可；（3）不注意使用冠词、名词的单复数等，并且，随心所欲地堆砌词语表达，读起来没有英语的语感，感觉是生硬的中文式英语，例

12、如第三段a nice memory thing，if i were animal, animals is our friends.（4）照套固有的模板（different people have different ideas. some think.others think.i think.），没有按题目要求的内容要点展开写作，而是写了些无关的内容。第二段开始different people will offer quite different ideas. 令读者不明白，因为上文并没有提到任何话题，不同的人到底对什么提出不同的观点呢？接下来写一些人认为应该拍照，一些人认为不应该拍照，这都没

13、有根据题目的内容要点去写；接下来第三段其实是第二段的重复：一些人认为拍照好，反对者认为要尊重动物。考生只是在第四段才提出自己的观点，但没有展开应有的讨论。启示与提升：（1）题目没有要求，不必自拟标题；（2）多朗读英语文章，培养语感，尤其要留意冠词、名词的单复数、动词的正确形式等。英语的表达不是简单的单词堆砌；（3）切不可不顾实际而生硬套用事先背好的写作模板，尤其是那些三段论，平常的训练不要只是用一种模式，要切合题目实际，灵活运用各种写作的方式。2011年广州“一模”第六号文章2011年广州“一模”基础写作： p62“ on one hand, some students suggested t

14、hat we should drive private cars less by sharing a car with others more often . on the other hand.these solutions are beneficial as they are money-saving , time saving as well as envrionmentally friendly.审题： 假设你是英语周报的编辑big paul, 你准备给刘军回信，以下是信的内容（信的开头和结尾已经为你写好）：1 以约30词概括上文小华面临的困难。2 以约120个词谈谈你对所概括的困难提

15、出自己的看法， 并包括如下要点：（1） 你读完这封信后的感受；（2） 你对小华面临这些困难的建议或看法；（3） 表达你对小华的评价和祝福。dear liu jun i am glad to receive your letter._学生样本：“ according to the passage, lixua had trouble with others. ”“after reading your letter, i feel sympathy for you. you are so kind-hearted and broad minded but you are often laughed

16、 by others. ”09佛山二模阅读下而的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 if you got 100,000 dollars by chance，how would you spend it? here are some answers of our readers：elizabeth stahl：i would donate it to an arts program for young boys and girlsthe decrease in the creative arts programs such as music，art and drama in th

17、e schools have left many young artists out in the cold in academicsmuch like sports，art in any form，can and does make a difference in young peoples lives marjorie c：although i agree with elizabeth stahl 100，id give my money to each of my children to ensure the very best of educations for my two gran

18、ddaughters. clark：with one hundred thousand dollars1 would distribute it among those whom i know that are in need and ask that they inturn then share half of what theyve received with others that they personally know are in needcarol wilson：first, i would take care of all my debts and gain good cred

19、it again，and then i would spend the rest on a new carafter all said and done，take a nice long vacation写作内容 美国某网站的论坛就 “how would you spend 100,000 dollars?” 为主题进行调查。上文是一些网友的回复，你阅读了上文后，准备就该主题发表白己的观点，内容要点包括： 1以约30个词概括上述网友的观点； 2然后以约120个词谈谈你的观点，并包括以下要点： (a) 你想用这笔钱做的一件或几件事情； (b) 说明你这样做的原因。summary : _?参考答案

20、：people would spend 100,000 dollars in different ways if they got it by chancesome would donate it to charity for various purposes while some others would take care of their own business with the moneyi decided to divide the money into 3 parts. first of all, i will deposit half of it to pay for my t

21、uition. secondly i will give some to my parents .last but not least , i will donate the rest to the affected area, helping the children in wen chuan.the reason why i donated it is that most of children are suffering from the hardship. 2009届六校联考：就“态度决定一切”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词左右。1 你从三兄弟的

22、故事中得到什么启示？2 你对“态度决定一切”如何理解？3 举一对比事例说明不同的学习态度产生不同的结果。 in our daily life, we should take positive attitude towards the trouble we meet. only with active attitude can we beat the difficulties. for example, i found it hard to improve my english at the beginning of senior 3. i didnt lose heart but worked

23、 harder than before. with my great effort, i got no.1 in the final exam.英语周报35期：if you put a buzzard in a pen six feet square and open at the top, the bird (in spite of his ability to fly) will be an absolute prisoner. when a buzzard begins a flight from the ground, he always starts with a run of te

24、n or twelve feet. without space to run, he will not even attempt to fly, but will remain a prisoner for life in a small cage with no top. the ordinary bat cannot take off from a level place. if a bat is placed on the floor or flat ground, all it knows to do is shuffle about helplessly until it reach

25、es some slight elevation from which it can throw itself into the air. then, at once, it takes off like a flash. a bumblebee, if dropped into an empty drinking glass, will be there until it dies unless it is taken out. it never sees the means of escape at the top, but persists in trying to find some

26、way out through the sides near the bottom. it will seek a way where none exists, until it is completely exhausted and dies. in many ways, there are a number of people that feel like the buzzard, the bat, the bee and the flea. they are struggling about through life, feeling trapped with all their pro

27、blems and frustrations, not realizing that the answer is right there “above” them.（写作内容）1 以大约30个词概括以上文中第三段的内容；2 以执信中学2010届高三第一学期期中考试阅读下列短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 dear patti, im writing to you for some advice on my studies. as you know, football is a very popular sport in the world and i am attracted

28、to it and i have fallen in deep love with it, which makes me feel so crazy. i have been spending lots of time doing many things related to it, like watching football matches, reading newspapers and magazines, and searching the web for more information about football. as a result, it has certainly di

29、sturbed my normal study. though i know to be a football fan is my hobby and my major objective is to learn more knowledge in school, i cant concentrate on my lessons and gradually i am tired of them. i am still a senior two middle school students, and ill have my own business even when i grow up, so

30、 i am not likely to do a job in the field of football. but now i cant stop myself from getting involved further with football. so i feel very depressed and want to know how to deal with the contradiction (矛盾) between my studies and hobbies. sincerely yours, li ming写作内容 假如你是李明的笔友patti,请根据他信中所诉说的苦恼回封信

31、。以下是回信的内容（信的开头和结尾已经为你写好）：以约30个词概括李明的苦恼；以约120个词发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：你认为李明应该如何处理好他的学习和业余爱好的关系；以自己的事例说明你的理由；表达你对他的希望。【写作要求】可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；1. 信中不能出现真实姓名和学习名称。dear li ming, thank you for your letter. from your letter, ive known something about your situation. sincerely yours, pa

32、tti参考答案也跑题了？why?dear li ming, thank you for your letter. from your letter, ive known something about your situation. you are very depressed because of the contradiction that you cant tear yourself away from football, which has been disturbing you so much that you cant concentrate on you lessons. hob

33、bies are very important to a person, without which life wont be as colorful as it should be. they can cheer you up and improve your comprehensive abilities, but they also require time and devotion. you are still a student, whose main task should be gaining knowledge, so you must know which is more i

34、mportant thing to do in different life periods. otherwise, you would regret having been too much addicted to that in the future. a hobby is like gold under the ground, and it will not come to you unless you dig it out yourself. if you can treat study as one of your hobbies, it will be more enjoyable

35、. i hope you can find yourself in the right place and have fun from your study. sincerely yours, patti基础写作目的：考察学生整理信息、并用适当的词语、句型和语言手段产出的篇章能力。要求：只能用5句话表达全部信息。常规题型：信息整理+信息呈现（08-2010年）；信息听取+信息呈现（07年）预期的语言手段：同位语手段、关于主题的呈现手段、呈现某人观点、比例的表达、排位的表达、建议的表达、 提示的表达（很多学生只是翻译，但信息不一定是字对字的，决定因素是所掌握的语言手段。）反思：基础写作的技巧？

36、上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据：.写作内容 根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容： 1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象； 2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异； 3“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异； 4男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同； 5你的偶像及理由。last week , we did a survey among 2,600 students on the “ who is your idol “ the survey shows that half of the girls choose film and tv stars

37、 as idols , while 48% of the boys figure sports stars . as the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls , but the for the boys. however , the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. as for myself, thomas edison is my idol because his inventions h

38、ave greatly changed our life.你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。写作内容请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断1928：中断1932：重回奥运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport

39、only in the late 19th century. the sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 games. the sport returned to the olympics in 1932. women were first allowed to compete in the olympic shooting in 1968. the sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 olympics, and now there are seventeen vents in all.2009你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况： 时间：上周末 对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授 主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题 基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50 (2)人数：世界第一 专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂 (2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示：如何握