2021年托福写作29分4大类实用功能性句式合辑word版

1、精选word文档 下载可编辑大家都知道作文一科无论中文还是英文，想要拿到满分难度是非常高的，今天给大家带来了托福写作29分高手经验,希望能够帮助到大家，一起来学习吧。托福写作29分高手经验 4大类实用功能性句式汇总托福写作29分高手作文句式 强调重要性的句式(1) the importance of . can never be overestimated.注释这个句子可在全文的任何地方出现，可以用于表达观点as far as im concerned, the importance oflearning english can never be overestimated.也可以用于总结th

2、us, the importance ofcultivating a sense of independence can never be overestimated.(2) . has been playing an increasingly important role in .注释这个句子可用于开头today, internet has been playing an increasingly importantrole in our society。也可以在段落首用于表达观点，不过我个人通常用于表达观点，因为开头我有固定模板。(3) . is a strong determinant

3、of .注释这个句子类似(1)句，也是可以在任何地方出现，比如whether a student has developed some skills isa strong determinant of whether he can get a good job. 权衡对比表达观点的句式(1) when ., we need to give full consideration to .注释这句话很显然是用于表达观点的，我一般在第一段的最后一句使用when deciding on building a chemicalplant, the government should give full

4、consideration to the advantages anddisadvantages it will bring to the community.(2) . is valued more than .注释这句也是用来表达观点的，我一般用在第一段developing economy is valued more than protectingenvironment by some people。(3) favor . as opposed to .注释相比之下更喜欢，也是用于表达观点many people favor protecting the environment as op

5、posedto developing the economy alone. 举例常用句式表达有三种常用表达a perfect example can be found in . serves as a perfect example. has well illustrated this例如a perfect example can be found in microsoft which insists on cleantechnology.microsoft, which insists on clean technology, serves as a perfectexample.micro

6、soft, which insists on clean technology, has well illustratedthis.举完例子觉得不够，就再加一个. is not alone in .比如microsoft is not alone in holding the idea。然后就开始举另一个例子吧。 描述结果的句式(1) the attempt by . to . has been a tremendous success.注释这个句子也可以用于举例也可以用于总结the attempt by the government to help gaint panda hasbeen a

7、 tremendous success.(2) a better understanding of . will enable .注释这个句子超有用，可以用于表达观点，可以用于总结，可以用于引出例子a better underdtanding of ourselveswill enable us to live better lives.(3) an examination of . will confirm such a fact that .注释这个也超有用，我主要用来引出例证和表达观点an examination of those students with excellentacade

8、mic performance will confirm such a fact that diligence and efficientmethods contribute a lot to their success.(4) . have generally come to recognize the wisdom of .注释这个句子可放在开头most people now have generally come to recognize the wisdom ofbeing able to speak english.托福写作注意这些容易犯的错误1、用词不当学生们在托福写作中或多或少都

9、会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。in the show，if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentionedcorrectly，they will get five hundreds thousand u。s。dollars as a blems应改为questions2、拼写错误还请备战托福考试的同学们注意，这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。in conclusion，issue of whether parents are the

10、 best teachers is a complexone，requiring subjective judgement，consequently，there are no easy or certainanswers。judgement应改为judgment3、乱用大词first of all，children can earn money from their jobs，although there isnttoo much，but they will keep their salary gingerliness。这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题1)该作文

11、题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;2)although和but是不能连用的;3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;表达中式the second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in someoccasion， it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parentsare a kind of people， teachers are a kind of vocation.表意重复they sho

12、cked their friends， devastated their families， crushed their bestfriends.前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。the show is so compelling but pelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。固定用法错误to some extends， i agree with the authors general assertion that ifparents also have a comprehensive sense of professional

13、 knowledge.to some extends应改为to some extent例证夸张for example， when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer， the doctorcannot tell the truth， for the truth may cause the patients immediatedeath.虽然善意的谎言是必要的，但是其功效显然没有这么大。成分多余according to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by chineseac

14、ademy of social sciences shows that there is an increase in the number ofuniversity students who are taking part-time jobs.该句中的shows that是多余的成分。词性混乱however， the questions such as have you ever regretted marrying yourhusband may be very privacy and embarrassingly.句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private

15、和embarrassing。1.文体不正式all of the players gonna to tell the truth in attempt to win $5，.gonna过于口语化。in addition， i think people shoudnt always tell the truth to others.在托福作文中尽量不要用缩写，这里应该写should not。1两个独立句子间无连词another point is that young people are more aggressive and energetic， andits suitable for them

16、 to choose such jobs， which will provide them with richexperience that is essential for their future success.这个错误犯的频率相当高，一定要注意。1时态错误托福大作文一般使用现在时态，除了拿过去事件作为例子用过去时态。some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is adetrimental creation. claimed应该改为claim1不知所云they also mention that in m

17、odern society there are too much entertainmentbothering them as the huge gap lying between them and the success.托福写作部分出题规律总结独立写作最常见话题类型仍为教育话题几乎每年托福独立写作考题中三成以上的题目都跟教育相关，同时在政府和成功话题中也会涉及到教育。不用多说，教育话题真的是官方最爱。每年都会有一定比例的新题从近几年考试新题情况来看(15年出现7道新题、16年12道、17年3道，而18年已出1道)，平均每年会有近两成的新题出现，所以总的来说还是以出旧题为主，尤其是16年题目。以下两道题，tracy老师课上必讲呢。 综合写作常考学科仍为考古和生物。先来看看今年综合写作涉及到的学科主题brendan thenavigator是否去过美洲、欧洲人到没到过澳洲、欧洲人