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1、 A visit to a farm Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the owner of the farm showed us around. We were so pleased to see the fruit and vegetables growing well! At noon we had a picnic lunch in

2、the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. we had to say good-bye to the workers at 5:00. We really enjoyed ourselves there! 中考高分范文中考高分范文 假设你叫假设你叫Sally,刚刚度完暑假。你的英国朋友刚刚度完暑假。你的英国朋友Ann

3、ie给你给你 发来了一封电子邮件想了解你是如何度过假期的。发来了一封电子邮件想了解你是如何度过假期的。 你准备给她回信，信的要点如下，词数约你准备给她回信，信的要点如下，词数约80左右，开头左右，开头 已给出。已给出。 1.表示你度过了一个很开心的暑假。表示你度过了一个很开心的暑假。 2. 在暑假期间，开始学习弹吉他。在暑假期间，开始学习弹吉他。 3. 经常与同学一起去游泳。经常与同学一起去游泳。 4. 还与父母一起去了一个小岛上度假。还与父母一起去了一个小岛上度假。 5.希望跟希望跟Annie 一起分享照片。一起分享照片。 Dear Annie : I am so happy to rece

4、ive your email. Yours Sally 准备工作准备工作 .仔细审题，明确要求。仔细审题，明确要求。 确定时态，审清题意，列出要点。确定时态，审清题意，列出要点。 .紧扣要点，寻求思路。紧扣要点，寻求思路。 草拟提纲，确定开头，根据内容写下一些草拟提纲，确定开头，根据内容写下一些 短语或句子，拟好结尾（可适当发表自己短语或句子，拟好结尾（可适当发表自己 的观点）。的观点）。 写作之中写作之中 .开门见山，紧扣主题开门见山，紧扣主题 。 .语言正确语言正确, 规范地道。规范地道。 参观农场的日记：参观农场的日记： 关于度假：关于度假： 句型、结构，避免中国式英语。句型、结构，避免

5、中国式英语。 I spent 10 yuan buy the book. He by bike to school. 标点符号标点符号 Last Sunday we visited West Hill Farm. We had a wonderful holiday in Jiaxin last weekend. .重短轻长重短轻长, 就易避难就易避难, 巧用绕障法。巧用绕障法。 .过渡自然过渡自然, 表达流畅。表达流畅。 以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。 You should keep quiet in the library. 正确使用连词，保持行文的流畅。正确使用

6、连词，保持行文的流畅。 She is seven years old, she can speak three languages. 不重复使用可置换的词。不重复使用可置换的词。 .适当评论适当评论, 发表己见。发表己见。 How friendly they are! We can learn from them. They enjoyed themselves very much. What a happy family! 3.成文之后成文之后 一般语法项目的检查一般语法项目的检查 人称: Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in the

7、ir office. 时态: One day, they are going to the island. 主谓一致: Everyone in our class work hard. 习惯用法: He helps me in my English. 符合习惯符合习惯 My work is very busy. I very much like it. Im very busy with my work. I like it very much. 书写规范书写规范, 卷面整洁。卷面整洁。 假设你叫假设你叫Sally,刚刚度完暑假。你的英国朋友刚刚度完暑假。你的英国朋友Annie给你给你 发来了

8、一封电子邮件想了解你是如何度过假期的。发来了一封电子邮件想了解你是如何度过假期的。 你准备给她回信，信的要点如下，词数约你准备给她回信，信的要点如下，词数约80左右，开头左右，开头 已给出。已给出。 1.表示你度过了一个很开心的暑假。表示你度过了一个很开心的暑假。 2. 在暑假期间，开始学习弹吉他。在暑假期间，开始学习弹吉他。 3. 经常与同学一起去游泳。经常与同学一起去游泳。 4. 还与父母一起去了一个小岛上度假。还与父母一起去了一个小岛上度假。 5.希望跟希望跟Annie 一起分享照片。一起分享照片。 Dear Annie : I am so happy to receive your e

9、mail. Yours Sally Dear Annie: Im so happy to receive your mail. To tell you the truth, I really had a wonderful time in the summer holiday. During the holiday, I began to learn to play the guitar and I can play it well now. Since it was very hot, I often went swimming with my classmates. I also went

10、 to a small island with my parents during the holiday and it was fantastic. It is the most island that I have ever seen. I took a lot of photos there and I hope I can share them with you. I really enjoyed myself in this holiday. 仔细检查，认真抄写仔细检查，认真抄写 抓住主题，描写细节抓住主题，描写细节 开门见山开门见山 发表己见，画龙点睛发表己见，画龙点睛 收集信息，列出提纲收集信息，列出提纲 结尾有力结尾有力 假如你叫假如你叫Dick，两个月前去英国的一所高中读，两个月前去英国的一所高中读 书，前天收到了书，前天收到了Michael的一封信。请你写一的一封信。请你写一 封回信，信中要涉及以下内容：封回信，信中要涉及以下内容： 1.祝贺他在校运会上获得了男子祝贺他在校运会上获得了男子400米冠军米冠军； 2.你已给他寄了一本