最新上海高三英语一模作文范文汇编

1、学习-好资料2018年高三一模作文汇编1. 黄浦区2017年已接近尾声，还记得年初你为自己定下的小目标吗？不知你是否实现了你的小目标？发一个 微信朋友圈来回顾一下吧（文中请不要出现真实的校名人名）。你的朋友圈文字内容需包括：1. 你的2017年度小目标；2. 你为实现年度小目标所作的努力；3. 你实现（或没有实现）年度小目标的经验总结。范文：My new year s resoluti on for 2017 was that I should be able to com muni cate with foreig n people in En glish. To achieve this

2、goal, I had asked my En glish teacher for help. Accord ing to her suggesti on s, I made up a pla n.Firstly, I started with simply reading English articles and found many pronunciation errors in my reading after listening to the video tape of its recording. Then, I tried to learn phonetics and practi

3、ce one syllable after another aga in and aga in. I started with a sin gle word, the n a phrase, a sentence, a paragraph and fin ally the whole passage. After 3-m on th practice, I was able to read an article flue ntly without mak ing any mistakes in pronun ciati on. I felt happy. Next, I practiced m

4、y listening. By listening to a passage four times, I required myself to take it down without spelli ng errors or any in formati on bla nk. Last but no t least, I in stalled an app called Shan bei Oral En glish on my phone to practice both my liste ning and speak in g. It s like hav ing con versati o

5、ns with a robot. I had to un derstwhat it said to me and an swer its questi ons accord in gly. After practici ng for almost 8 mon ths, I had my first talk ing sessi on with an America n teacher in our school. I was proud of myself.What I have lear nt from this experie nee is someth ing as a say ing

6、goes: no pain no gain. Though the process of learning could be dull and tiring, it s worth all the efforts after I achieved my goal. Even if I didnpart of my life.阅卷作文8+8+4=20The wonderful year of 2017 is drawing to an end. I remember that I set an annual goal to keep fit at the beginning of 2017, s

7、ince staying healthy is crucial to ensuring my study, thus better prepare myself for Gaokao.To achieve my goal of keeping fit, here are some efforts I ve taken throughout the year. On the very fof 2017, I dow nl oaded a fitn ess app called Keep. Follow ing the fitn ess in struct ions the app offered

8、, I exercised every other night before I go to bed. Also, I did some research into the daily nutrition I need in order to stay healthy both physically and men tally, after which I devised a moderate diet ing pla n. Apart from the above, I family members and friends to join me so that we can en coura

9、ge each other and excha nge fitn ess experie nee.So far, the record shown on my fitness app shows that I ve done well this year, reaching a record high otraining times in total. Although at times I felt like giving up because of too much study pressure and limited time, I m glad I have stuck to my p

10、lan. It seems to me that anything is possible if I throw in all of my energy and passion, and most of all, persevera nee. Some rules apply to study. So I hope I will keep such passi on and stre ngth to do my best in the comi ng 2018.（ 237 words）点评：1. 文本结构段落清晰，符合作文题目要求。1）第一段明确告知自己的年度小目标是什么；2） 第二段有总起句

11、，段落中有清晰的标记词（如also, apart from）告知读者自己所做的努力，且努力 的行为都非常具体。3） 第三段对经验的总结可以再和第二段的三个努力匹配些，a.借助科技的力量（app）； b.借助科学的 力量（did research into the daily nutrition ） ; c.组团抗击惰性。2在语言表达能力比较强的基础上，可以考虑文字的进一步精炼。是否有“废话”？字数建议不超过200 （此学生语言能力强，中等学生160左右即可）。精练而准确的表达也是思维和表达功力的体现。7+8+4=19Greeting from the end of 2017! It s now

12、 the time to conclude our yearly goals again. On the new yearset up two goals for the year: to getter better grades and to lose weight and I rproud to announce that I ve accomplished the first one.To realize the goals, much effort has bee n put in throughout the year. First of all, I cha nged my att

13、itudes towards various subjects. I ve spent more time on them, as you might already know, and try to find my own strength and weaknesses and strived hard to overcome my weak points. In addition, I ve found my own pace of studyi I regard as the most precious reward of this year s effort. Secondly, I

14、began to take a more active part in sports year. I took every opportunity I have to exercise, and take sports lessons at a gym near my apartment. Though I haven t lose much weight, I feel myself much healthier than ever before.To conclude how I ve made these progress, here comes my years motto: no p

15、ains, no gains. No matter how hard it might be, stick to the goal and never quit, and never dream of shortcuts to success. So if you want to achieve something, just try hard, no matter what the result might be, you re surely going to benefit from the proc luck everyone, and I wish you a happy, succe

16、ssful new year in 2018! (241 words) 点评：1， 有读者意识，明确知晓是在朋友圈发的年度总结，所以开头结尾很应景。2， 段落结构总体比较清晰，符合作文题目要求。1) 第一段告知了自己的两个年度目标。2) 第二段中有总体句、标记词(如：first of all, in addition )，方便读者阅读。但总体表达都比较含糊，建议可以更加清晰化具体化(改变的行为不具体是因为目标不具体导致的) ；特别是第二点，如 果学生把目标定位，今年我要参加多少节健身课，或者我要完成多少公里的跑步，那么行为可以 更具体，对是否可以达到自己年度目标的检测也可以更明确。3) 第三段

17、的经验总结与之前努力的匹配度不高。如果要写no pains, no gains ，那么第二段里应该有具体的自己在遭遇瓶颈或者难以坚持的时候是如何咬牙坚持下来的。4) Good luck 建议可以另起一段。3， 文本字数偏长。7+6+3=16At the beginning of this year, I have made up my mind to achieve a goal. That was I hoped that I could lose my weight. With the passing by, I have achieved my goal. The following a

18、re some of my conclusion of this objective.To reach my objective, I worked out a series of plans. To begin with, I designed a healthy diet menu, which excluded unhealthy foods that I was fond of before. That s the basic of losing weight. Secondly, I went to par sporting places regularly to do variou

19、s sports. As we all know, the more exercise you do, the more heats you will consume. Last but not least, I took an active part in every kinds of school activity which can not only help me lose weight but also enrich my life.From this experience, I conclude that once you have a goal, you should stick

20、 to every hardship so that you mayreach the mountain top. The process may be full of difficulties and you are likely want to give up. Go ahead, andthen you will find there is nothing can hit down you. (191 words)点评：1， 段落结构比较清晰，符合作文题目要求。2, 第二段中的标记词(to begin with, secondly, last but not least)不恰当。第三个努

21、力的行为( I took an active part in every kinds of school activity which can not only help me lose weight but also enrich my life.) 的内容不恰当，部分与主题无关(如： enrich my life )。3, 第三段的总结too general,基本与第二段的努力行为没有关系。根据第二段的内容，经验应该是：管 住嘴，迈开腿。4, 字数偏多,建议 160 左右。5+6+2=13At the end of 2017, I cant help thinking the aim wh

22、at I have set about making a great profess in math beforethe 2017 come.Math is a terrible for me to study well. To study math well, as I firmly believe, only by practicing more, can I gain a good mark. In order to realize this aim, I get up earlier everyday so that I can have more time to do the mat

23、h exercise. I ask teacher many questions about the math. My mother always encourage me to study math when it comes to the problem of math. I always feel nervous, because I think it is very difficult for me to study math well. But being encouraged by the parents and teacher I have confidence. Finally

24、, I realized it.I want to share my experience to the students which have the same problem as me. Practice makes perfect. If we want gain a good mark we should practice more. (162 words) 点评：1, 涵盖了作文题目要求的三个部分。2, 第二段的内容需要重新梳理，做了三个努力：a每天早起做数学题目；b.有问题勤问老师；c.心理焦虑时向妈妈倾诉（要说我做了什么，而不是文中My mother always en cou

25、rage me to study math whe n itcomes to the problem of math.）。3，由此，第三段的经验总结是：a. practice makes perfect； b.多向他人求助4+4+1=9The year of 2017 will be over. I always think it is a year with my ambition. I still rember the day which is the first of 2017. On that day I praied I could get higher scores in the

26、test. I made my pla n to get close to the top of the rank.For the sake of good marks, what I must have is a serious attitude. It was the most importa nt things for me to in sist the pla n. I decided to read books of En glish. It was the most difficult subject for me. I recited the words and vocabula

27、ry day by day. And the readi ng is an ano ther problem. Because of the lack of vocabulary I could nt understand the passage clearly. I started reading the English lessons in every morning. That sI could n ever forget.Although I still not get my pla n, I still want to get higher score in n ext exam.

28、It was my ambiti on, I believe I can do it next year. Even though the life is tough to me. （179 words）点评：1，结构性缺失，没有“经验总结”。2，第二段的内容需要重新梳理。a.每天背多少单词；b.每天早晨读多少时间英语；c.每周（或每两周或每个月）读1本英语书。2.普陀区学校图书馆优美的学习环境和丰富的文献资源为学生们综合素质的提升提供了良好的平台。为了进一步 提高图书馆的服务水平，图书馆现向学生们征集建议。假如你是李华，写信给图书馆负责人对图书馆的 现状进行分析，并就此提出一些实用性的改进建

29、议。Dear Sir,In response to your collecting suggestions to further improve our school library s service quality, I am writing to put forward my humble advice, hoping to be of some value.Our school library, with beautiful environment and a wide range of books and reference materials, serves as a golden

30、 platform to promote students overall ability. However, there are still some problems remaining unsolved. The available seats are always tight, some vacant ones are occupied by students with their personal stuff and to make things even worse, some of them do not appear in the library at all. Besides

31、, sometimes it is no isy because the discussi on area is not separated, which makes stude nts while lear ning hard to concen trate. Also, the n etwork in our lab doesn t work well that it s not easy to havewhDsnsset（alit collecting information online.For the above situati on, I suggest an exclusive

32、room should be appo in ted as a meet ing room where stude nts are allowed to discuss. Moreover, rules should be made about the usage of the seats that if one person leaves his seat over 20 minutes, the seat can be available to others. And if possible, put some fund to update our existing network.I w

33、ould be so glad if my advice is adopted. I appreciate your devotion to the construction of our library and may our library be better and better.Sincerely yours Li Hua3. 徐汇区)。你是否同意这一说俗话说 “万事开头难”( All thi ngs are difficult before they are easy.法？请用英语写一篇短文，内容包括：1.你对这句俗语的理解；更多精品文档学习-好资料2. 结合生活中一个具体事例加以说

34、明。 注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。范文1【上中一模最高分 20分】As an old say ing goes, “ All things are difficult before they are easy. The widespread n ”ti on reveals the truth that we are likely to encoun ter setbacks whe n we start to do someth ing but if we face them with persevera nee and determ in ati on, we will find

35、 the rest of the work easier.Pers on ally, I am stron gly in favour of the proverb and my own experie nce can well serve as case in poin t.Whe n I was a Senior One stude nt, I made up my mind to set up a scie nce fiction com munity in our school.I thought it would be a piece of cake, but the first f

36、ew weeks follow ing my decisi on tur ned out tough. To my disappo in tme nt, few stude nts showed in terest i n the com muni ty. Filled with the bitter ness of failure, I was almost going to give up but the bottom of my heart urged me to keep calm and go on.After weeks of struggle and every possible

37、 means tried, I man aged to find several members and once we started to hold activities, more stude nts became in terested and joined our com mun ity.What can be lear nt from my experie nce is that persevera nce carries true weight in our pursuit of success. Life is never like those fairy tales and

38、we in reality all tend to meet frustrations and setbacks in our lives. Tricky as the situation might seem in the beginning,we must always bear in mind that “ Every cloud has a silver lining” and ouiefforts won t go in vain. Nevertheless, if we give up halfway, chances are that we ll never see ththe

39、difficulties and he who is easily beate n to the gro und by hardship is certa in to end up achieve no thi ng.To sum up, the say ing“ Ajlstah difficult before they are easy” us a perfect remin der that things all see mtough at the begi nning. Faced with difficulties, we should cheer up and work with

40、persevera nce. Thus, success is bound to be within arm s9reac+.2) (334 words)范文2It is said that: all things are difficult before they re easy ” , I couldn t agree with it more. Lno thi ng can be achieved with ease uni ess you have the quality of devoti on and persevera nce.Once I went fish ing with

41、my father. I nitially, I was very excited and full of con fide nce, figuri ng hard can it be? You just sit there and wait for the fish to bite. It s a piece of cake. Howe、sat there for almost one hour, yet I got nothing. Soon I was distraught and impatient. Just when I was about to quit, my father t

42、urned around and said,“ Be focused and wait. ” Having nothing else to do, I did what he said. I calrmyself dow n and re-c oncen trated on the pole. Two hours later, I gained my reward.The experie nce has in deed taught me someth ing. That is all things are difficult before theyyou devote yourself an

43、d hang on, you ll succeed.范文3The old saying goes like“ all things are difficult before they are easy,” which suggests that thn eeds go through is the begi nning of a task.As for me, I simply hold the opposite opinion. Pers on ally. I believe that it s always easy to nbut hard to carry it out strictl

44、y. Because of the com mon passi on at the begi nning, efforts are willi ngly made. Nevertheless, it is persevera nce that is n eeded to complete it.The topic n aturally reminds me of the days whe n I struggled for physical exam in ati on, in which I n eed to get a high score to be addicted to my dre

45、am ing high school. I make up my mi nd firmly three mon ths before the exam that I would go joggi ng every ni ght and kept on doing so for one mon th. When the in itial passi on faded and the tiredness stroke me every evening. I was so eager to take a breath from the exhausted training and almost ga

46、ve up the pla n. It was the stro ng-will power that kept me going on.This un forgettable experie nce taught me the importa nce of persevera nce, which con firms me that things are especially difficult in the middle stage.范文4As the famous say ing goes“ All things are differe nt before they are easy.”

47、 From my perspectivemeans that we re all inexperieneed and might meet numerous frustrations before handling the task well. There is no exception that we have to go through a certain period to familiarize ourselves with the practice, during which the perspective is most required.Take myself as an exa

48、mple, once I was assig ned to deliver a speech on my En glish lear ning method. Never had I got such experie nce before, I was totally overwhelmed by the task. Despite the shyn ess and lack in con fide nee, I know it clear that the capability of express ing on eself to the public is of great importa

49、 nce in future work. Therefore, I started to practice trying to keep off n ervous ness. I looked out for videos on TED to music, the gesture of speakers and spoke aloud before my pare nts. Thanks to these hardships,I man aged to give a satisfy ing speech.One must be equipped with en dura nce and fai

50、thfu In ess duri ng the course of exploratio n. Few of us are born to be geni us.4. 杨浦区马拉松(marathon)比赛需要志愿者发放矿泉水，学校校庆需要招募引导员。请你从中选取一个感兴趣的志愿者岗位，写信给负责老师完成报名，并在信中具体谈谈你的理由。范文1Dear sir,Hearing that the marathon match and school celebration need a lot of volunteers and guides, I think I am qualified for t

51、he positi on of guides and it will be my great honor to do the job, so I write to you to en ter for the guide.First, I have a great sense of directi on, which en ables me to lead actors and actress to arrive at their positi ons without difficulties. It very essential when the back of stage is crowde

52、d with people and different kinds of decorati ons and all the performers are hurry ing to dress them up and get their n eeded things ready.Secon d, I have the experie nce of being a guide before and I knew how to deal with un expected accide nts and mistakes. Such experience is helpful to calm mysel

53、f down to arrange things in order. Besides, I am familiar with my schoolmates an d have great abilities to communicate with them, which makes it possible for me to find the right pers on and talk to them to relieve their nerve for the performa nce.According to all the abilities above, I think I m su

54、itable for the position and I really hope that you can gia chance to use my power to add a touch to our School Celebration. Thank you for reading my letter.Yours sin cerelyLi Pi ng范文2Dear Sir,I ve learnt that our school is recruiting guides for the celebration of school anniversary and I a self-reco

55、mme ndati on.First of all, an acute sense of direct ion and my familiarity with all the locatio ns on campus put me an adva ntage. Considering that some of our alumnus may take a long and tiresome journey to attend our celebration, I am sure that my air of delight will sweep them off tired ness in n

56、o time . Besides, informing them of the cha nge in recent years and sharing anecdotes about the school can remind them of their precious memories here so that they will no Ion ger be shrouded in a sense of un familiarity. Furthermore, it is my outsta nding com muni cati on skills and ability to arti

57、culate that distinguish me. I wouldn forget to leave them private space for nostalgia after fulfilling my obligati ons.I would be greatly obliged if you would allow me this golden opportunity to enhance my social skills and to con tribute to the as a volun teer.Yours sin cerelyLi Pi ng范文3Dear Sir,I

58、am writing to apply for the volunteer who gives mineral water to marathon runners. Why i think am qualified for this positi on can be con cluded in the follow ing three aspects.First and foremost, i am an experieneed choice both in marathon and in the work of volunteering. Although i have n ever run a marath on before, i have accompa nied my uncle to atte nd this eve nt for many times, so i am quite familiar with the running route and some com mon kno wledge of it. Secon d, i possess the kno wledge of first