2021中考英语作文评分标准

1、2021中考英语作文评分标准英语作文评分标准评分原则：1. 总分15分，按5个档次给分。中档属于第三档（7-9分）。2. 评分时，先跟据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的 要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.总词数不足的，可在本题总得分 中扣去1分。4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和正 确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。各要素的权重大体为：卷面书写（1分）， 内容9分（其中要点5分，语意连贯4分），语法结构、单词拼写、标点（4分）， 词数（1分）。5. 拼写与标点符号是语言正确性的一个方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程 度予以考虑。【各档

2、次的给分范围和要求】第一档（13-15分）：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅。基本无语法和词汇方面 的错误，少数错误主要是山于较高级词汇或复杂结构所致。词数达到要求。基本 无单词拼写及标点错误。第二档（10-12分）：写出大部分要点类容。语句较流畅。有少量语法和词汇 方面的错误，但不影响理解。有少量单词拼写及标点错误。第三档（7-9分）：写出部分要点。语句基本通顺。有一些语法和词汇错误， 有少量单词及标点错误。第四档（4-6分）：写出少量内容要点，语句不通顺。语法、词汇、单词拼写、 标点错误较多。只有少量句子表达正确。第五档（0-3分）：基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词汇、单词拼写错误较 多。基本上

3、没有通顺的句子。只写出一些单词，不知所云。【说明】1、要点可用不同方式表达。2、对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。凡不写任何内容，抄袭、所写内容无法看清者一律给0分。2021河南中考英语作文预测（一）1. 每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功。 请你用英语写一篇80词以上的短文，谈谈你在成长过程中所经历的最大的一次 蜕变。内容要求：1.变化前后分别是什么样子的？ 2.促成你转变的主要原因是什 么？ 3.你为变化而付出了怎样的努力？注意：短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关 的真实姓名和校名等信息。1 used to be a naughty boy and my mother

4、used to be angry with me. Now I d like to say I ve changed a lot In fact, It is because of my mother s diariesOne day I saw my mot her s diary book by accident while I was looking for my notebook I was surprised and began to read my mother* s diaries In her diaries, she1showed her deep love for me.

5、She also expressed her disappointment when I made mistakes She said she loved me so much and she believed I could be a good boy. I couldn* t help crying after reading my mother * s diaries Since that day, I have changed a lot I work hard and share some housework I 11 try to understand my mother * s

6、feelings2 最近，你们班就“幸福是什么”进行了一次讨论，学生们发表了自己的看 法，他们认为：1.认真学习是幸福，父母总是关心他们的生活与健康，是幸福2. 有时当他们做错了事，周围的人会帮助他们改正，他们感到幸福。3.你同意 同学们的看法，你认为当你做你也会感到幸福。要求：第三要点的内容需 用三到四句话展开合理想象，进行适当发挥；词数80左右，开头与结尾已给 出，不计入总词数。Happiness is for everyone Some students think happiness comes from studying hard at their lessons Their par

7、ents are always taking good care of their life and their health They feel happy. Some students say when they do something wrong, people around them will help them to correct it. They believe this is happinessI agree with them I love my friends congratulating me when I enjoy success When I do somethi

8、ng kind to others, like congratulating them, I feel happy, too.When we think of these things, we realize that happiness is all aroundUS3. “安全你我他，幸福千万家”，关爱生命，确保平安，让我们的生活更加幸福安康。请以Keeping safe (at home/ at school /on the road)为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。要求：补全标题：条理清晰，语言流畅；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。内 容包括：(1) Is it important to

9、keep safe.?(2) Why do you think so?, (3)How can you be safe?Keeping safe at schoolIt s important for us to keep safe at school and it will make us study better and live more happily. In order to keep safe at school, we must do like these First, be in order when we are going upstairs or downstairs Se

10、cond, make sure to be safe when we are doing sports Try not to be hurt Third, know about some knowledge of safety It s helpful to us.If we follow the advice, we 11 make ourselves safe at school4. 醉酒驾车，已经成为严重的社会问题，越来越受到人们的关注，根据下面提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你的看法。现许多人不遵守交通规则，仍 酒后驾车，对自己和他人的安全不负责任 象后因为酒后驾车，给自己和他人和

11、很多家庭带来伤害 果 建为了自己和他人的安全，呼吁司机不要酒后驾车，呼吁 更多严格的规则议和制度出台提示词：酒后驾车drunk driving不负责的 irresponsible 交通事故 traffic accident 对造成伤害 do harm toEveryone should obey the traffic rules Yet there are still many people drunk driving.It s irresponsible（彳、负责任的）not only to the drivers themselves but also the others Many d

12、rivers drive very fast in the street, or even in the crowded traffic while they are drunk Drunk drivers caused a lot of accidents Thousands of people were killed and many more were injured every year In order to keep the public safe, we shouldn t drunk drive We must obey the traffic rules If you dri

13、nk too much, you shouldn，t drive by your sei f You d better take a taxi or ask others for help The government is supposed to make more serious rules and laws as soon as possible 5. Keep HealthyEvery one wants to keep healthy today, especially our students. But we don t pay attention to our health So

14、me of them go to school without breakfast in the morning Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, especially at weekends Many boys think it is cool to drink or smokeIt is important for us to have good habits We should eat breakfast every morning We can watch TV or play games

15、 for a short time, then have a rest We also can take part in some clubs I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy.6. 以 UI want to do something for my school （我想为学校做一件事）”为 题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现 考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple But

16、 I dont think so. Our teacher said, done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmates to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground I also threw the rubbish on the ground So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I

17、 will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates We will make school clean every weekends next term as wel 1 Now, do you think it is simple?7. 全国实施公共场所禁烟规定，针对这一话题，某中学对该校学生的吸烟情 况进行了一次调查，结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.对 调查结果进行描述；2. 表明自己的看法并提出建议；3.词数在80左右。提示词：do a survey a

18、bout（做一个有关的调查）3% of the students（百分之三的学生）A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. In other words, 10% of the students smoke That * s terribleAs we know, smoking is harmful to our health Every year, thou

19、sands of people lose their lives because of it. Smoking not only does harm to your health, but also wastes money Because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends It s a pity to learn that one ends in death by smokingIn short, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep away from it.8. LT前，越来越多的中学生利用周

20、末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这 一现象，存在两种不同观点：有些人认为有必要另一些人认为没有必要3跟老师学比自己学好 可以巩固课堂所学内容可以学到更多的东西容易养成依赖习惯学生需要时间休息请您根据以上提示,以 Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Necessary ? 为题，写一篇120词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点。文 章开头已给出，不计入总字数。要求：层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译。参考词汇：巩 固 strengthen；Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessar

21、y?More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend There are two different viewpoints aboutit.【参考范文】Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes

22、or having family teachers at weekend There are two different viewpoints about it. Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, it s more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves Secondly, it can strengthen what we learnt in class Besides, they can learn a lot more Others think it unnecessary. For

23、one thing, students can easily formthe habit of dependence For another, students need time to relax from time to time In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it s OK for you. But be sure

24、 to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money9. 最近，你班同学就“父母是不是最好的老师”这一话题展开了讨论。有些 人认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，写一篇短文 介绍讨论结果以及你的个人观点。观点原因同意不完全同意1教会如何生活过分溺爱2指出缺点，指明方向强加兴趣、价值观3教会富有爱心 希望值过高要求：1、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯；2、词数110左 右；3、开头已给出，不计入单词总数。【参考范文】Rece

25、ntly, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life What s more, parents love helps to teach them

26、how to love others So parents are4their most important teachersHowever, not all of us hold the same views Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. Moreover, their parents sometimes expect too much of them, which make

27、s them feel their goals too difficult to reachIn my opinion, parents are our important teachers But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the generation gap10. 新农村-A New VillageYesterday we went to visit a village On our way to the village, we were glad to see a lot of

28、nice rice, vegetables and fruit in the fields Also we saw new schools, factories and buildingsWe got a warm welcome at the village Some farmers invited us to their houses They had moved to the new buildings Their living room was large and bright In it there were all kinds of new furniture Nearly eve

29、ry family had color TV sets, fridges, washing machines and some of them even have bought motorbikes Everyone had a smile on their faces It was said that some guests from a foreign country would come to visit it.8 / 8We were very glad to find the farmers? life had changed a lot. We hope their life will become better and better.11. 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们 中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你 准备发言稿，谈谈你的一