东北师大附中2020届英语高三二轮复习专题 短文改错无答案

1、 三、解题技巧： 学年高三年级下学期 2019-2020 全面把握文章时态，一些浅显的错误和逻辑错误可以在此步骤挑出。 第一步通读全文，掌握大意。 逐读各句，查找错误。第二步 题型专项短文改错 从词法，应把注意力放在单句上，判断句子的表达是否符合语法要求。了解大意基础之上， 注意：有些句子要占二、三行，单从一行（句子的一部分） 苏亮亮句法等角度去查找错误所在。 审稿人：高三英语组 组稿人： 一、考纲要求：同时，短文改看很难判断，所以应以句子为单位进行审查，句子与行结合起来加以验证。错有别于单句改错，要重视文章的整体内容和前后照应。既要从单句入手检查语言错误，10考纲说明对改错题型的描述如下：“

2、满分分。本题给出一篇约100个单词的短文，文中（行文逻辑的错误一般不容易辨认，需要仔细鉴从全文着眼发现行文逻辑方面的错误又要处错误，错误类型包括词法、句法、行文逻辑等。要求考生对每个句子进行判断，如有错即有10 ，进行全面改正。将其改正。”由此可见，短文改错题设题目的在于测试考生判断、发现、纠正语篇中语言错误的能别，为改错题的难点） 回读全文，根据改错题的设计规律和特点，核对、调整。例如：一般来说，错一词、力，考查考生在语篇中对语言的观察能力、评价能力，以及综合运用的能力。 第三步 二、命题特点： ，考生可据此进行综合判断。17：2：1多一词、缺一词之间的比例为8：1或? 注意事项 选择的语篇

3、都是浅显易懂的多以第一人称的记叙为主，高考短文改错的取材类似于书面表达，1. 答题规范：在训练和考试中要严格按照试题要求和解题说明，用规定的符号去改错。不要用文难故事或信件。篇章结构的难易程度符合中学生的认知水平，基本上无生僻的语言障碍和怪、偏、字来说明或用箭头去表示，更不能随意在原题中乱划。的语句结构。 2. 短文改错题大部分都是语法错误，但是又不单纯的检验语法错误，而是对学生写作过程中校验1. 只能改动一个词，而不是两个词；改动后也只是一个词，不能是两个。即：不能二合一或一分二句法和行文逻辑三个角度考查考生在语篇中综合运用英语的。能力的考查。题的设置一般是从词法、 3. “四不考”：大小写

4、、标点符号、语序、单词拼写一般不作改正要求。 能力。4. 实词只改变形式，而不能改变其词义，也不能改换成另一个实词，(如果改为另一个实词，也只 1（）从词法角度考查，主要涉及：动词的时态、语态，非谓语动词及情态动词的用法，名词，代能是它的同义词，反义词或是同形词)词的数、格，形容词、副词的比较等级，连词及关系词的使用，主谓语一致等。，一般不能随便添删。 例如： 1) Would you mind do me a favour? ）从句法角度考查，主要涉及：简单句、否定句、疑问、倒装、省略、替代等变化。（2解析 此处考查mind后面应该跟动词的V-ing形式。但有些学生把mind给删去了，使原句

5、成为 3（）从行文逻辑角度考查，主要涉及：人物的性别及与之相对应的物主代词、句意的并列与转折、Would you do me a favour? 这样改形式虽然对，但语气出现偏差，不符合不改实词的原则。 时间的顺序、数量的增减以及因果的倒置等。2) Im sure well have a wonderfully time together. 短文中主要有多词、少词和错词三种错误类型。 2. 解析2016-2019年高考全国卷短文改错测试考点分布统计表 把wonderfully改为wonderful。wonderfully是副词，不能作定语。有些学生把wonderfully改为good，这样改也

6、不符合改错原则。 情 动5. 原意保持不变：一般应遵循保持句子原意的原则，即不能改变文章或作者所表达的意思，包括 非形数态 连 冠代 词 名 副 介语时 其语气和上下文的逻辑关系。只对短文中的用词错误、语法错误、行文关系错误进行改正，且要 容 试卷谓 词动 词词 词搭 词态态 词词 小改而不大改。 例如： 词语 词 配1) Modern people know more about health, have better food, and to live in cleaner surroundings.年新课201 解析 去掉to。因为and连接的是三个并列的谓语动词know，have和li

7、ve。部分学生误将anI201年新课 去掉而保留了to，to live in cleaner surroundings成了目的状语。这种改正使句子的结构和意义年新课201I了，故不是正确答案。 卷II 1 1 2017 1 1年新课标 2 2 112) Thats why Americans get uneasy when a listener is silence and shows no change of expression. 卷年新课标2018I 1 1 1 1 1 121 1解析 silence改为silent。 学生对silence前加介词构成in silence短语很熟悉，所以

8、一看此处 1 121卷 11 1 1 II年新课标 12018 silence前无介词in，即判断为少介词in，但忽略了介词短语in silence相当于副词silently，表示 I卷 1 2 2 11 21 年新课标2019“安静地，无声地”，多用作状语，修饰动词。而此处应把silence改为相应的形容词silent, silent1 1 1 1 1111 1年新课标2019卷II 与前面的系动词is构成系表结构，表示状态。 ? 冠词的固定用法 短文改错口诀(12) As we all left home at early age. (13) My teacher advised me t

9、o keep my diary. 动词形，名词数，注意是形还是副；谓与非谓细辨别，介动短语要记住；(14) My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the short period of time. (2016全国I) 3. 代词 情态动词用明白，连冠缺误别糊涂；句为单位逐行改，七个一致须关注；? 前后代词指代不一致 句子成分多分析，逻辑关系不能误。(15) Some students may also save up for our college or future use. (16) I looked at the o

10、range drink and decided I couldnt face them. (the orange drink指药) 主谓一致、名词的单复数一致、代词的指代一致、时态语态一致、非谓语（七个一致：(17) This picture brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days. (2017全国III) 动词与逻辑主语一致、虚拟语气句中前后一致、行文逻辑关系的一致）? 反身代词宾格的误用 (18) I felt very pleased with me. (19) On Thursday I will h

11、ave to decide what I want myself to do over the weekend. 四、单句改错分类解析练习(20) In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment which is created for them. (2019全国III) ：缺词的含义是句中漏掉了的词，致使句子结构不完整，这类错误一般多见于冠词、介词、 词缺? 代词it的用法 to等功能词。系动词、代词和不定式符号(21) This is not surprising that the Sil

12、ver Ghost was “the best car in the world”. ：多词的含义是句中多余词，致使句子结构混乱错误，这类错误一般多见于冠词、介词、系 词多(22) I thought that was dull to watch a game. to等功能词。动词、代词和不定式符号? 在定语从句、名词性从句中引导词的误用 词：错词涵盖考点多，所占比例也较大，平时写作时所犯的错误都可能出现在此处。错 (23) Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke down. (24) We would

13、return at night to hear that hed picked up from the radio in the day. (he指小鸟) 词法考查 (25) Around me in the picture are the things they were very important in my life. (2017全国III) 1. 名词? 不定代词的误用、代词的主格与宾格混用 可数名词与不可数名词? (26) If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help

14、him out. (1) We can broaden our view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. (2016全国II) (27) It is us who are to blame for the poverty . . II)(2) Since I was a kid, Ive considered different job I would like to do. (2019全国(28) They were living in a small house with dogs, ducks and another anima

15、ls. (2018全国I) 名词的词义辨析、名词固定搭配误用? 4. 形容词、副词 (3) My grandma was the best cooker in the world.? 形容词和副词的语法功能误用 (4) They make their lives by collecting and selling used things.(29) It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. 所有格问题(30) I would describe myself as shy and quietly. (5) His eyes are

16、as blue as you.(31) I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of the road. (2017全国I) II) 全国(6) When I was little, Fridays night was our family game night.(2018 ? 形容词、副词比较级、最高级及其程度状语的误用 2. 冠词(32) We hope youll teach us a lot many songs in the future. ?冠词的增减 (33) Both the diet and the exercise will

17、 help me to lose weight and feel more better. (7) I hope youll have pleasant journey home. (34) They were also the best and worse years in my life. (2016全国III) (8) We have made a great progress. ? 误用多余的副词(要根据上下文进行判断) (9) I still remember how hard first day was. (2017全国II)(35) I was a few miles far a

18、way from anywhere on a cold, wet night. ?冠词的误用(36) Though I am a student now, I will work as very hard to make my dream come true. (10) He would greet us in a tree outside our bedroom, calling “Hello” as we lay in bed in a morning. I)全国(37)I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which directi

19、on was left. (2017 II)全国(11) As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons. (2018(61) When I reach at the end of a cigarette, my money has gone up in smoke. 介词5. 8. 非谓语动词 动词后的介词固定搭配误用? (38) It is not surprising that the Silver Ghost was regarded “the best car in the world”. ? 动名词 (62) I am looking forward t

20、o see all of you again in the near future! (39) Will you join in the tourist group organized by our school? (63) If I succeed in manage one, I will open more (2019全国III)I) (40) My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in a short period of time. (2016全国? ? 介词的辨析 现在分词与过去分词 (64) He would also c

21、atch the food throwing to him from the other side of the room.(41) They would not have to ask their parents for money or for permission to do things by the money. (65) I knocked at the door and was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the door.(42) In a particular afternoon my mother brought th

22、e drink in. (66) Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his or her paragraph aloud. (2017浙江(43) My father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. (2016) 全国III) ?介词的添加与删除 (44) the teacher allows to it.? 不定式 (67) Jack would fly away and bring it back

23、for us throw again. (45) When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal and decided to be a doctor.(2019年全 (68) I want my cafe have a special theme such as “Tang Dynasty” (2019全国III) 国II)(69) No matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not let me. (2018全国II) I)(

24、46) I told my father that I planned to return for every two years. (2018全国 6. 连词? 动词与非谓语动词误用 (70) All the football players on the playground cheered loudly，say that I had a talent for football (2019全 ? 连词的并列、转折、因果、让步等逻辑关系 (47) Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play.国I) (48) a pleasan

25、t old man opened the door but listened to my story carefully. (49) Unfortunately, I wont be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon.句法考查 (50) He told me that Id probably have a heart attack if I started eating less.1. 一致性 (71) My mother used to tell me: Seeing is bel

26、ieve. (51) I thought I had learned his orders, so once I started the car, my mind went blank. (2017全国 I) (72) We named him Jack and keep him for about three years. （时态、语态、主谓一致）7. 动词 (73) Every time he arrived home at the end of the day, wed greet her at the door.(2016浙江) 主要是过去时间段的时态与现在时间段的时根据行文逻辑，考查

27、动词前后文的时态是否一致。 ?2. 简单句、并列句、各种从句 态混用。(74) For the most part, students working to earn money for their own use. (52) I will write again and send you the photos we take together. (75) Clever as she is, but she works very hard. (53) During the World Cup in 2002, my dad stays up late just to watch his fav

28、orite sport. (76) My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.(2016全国)浙江 II) (54) While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me. (20163. 句型和用法 近年有涉及到有关完成时的错误，值得引起注意? (77) At night, I was sometimes very tired to do my homework. (55) Since long ago, many adults and children cal

29、led their friends together to spend hours, even days (78) It has been five years before I smoked. playing games. (56) It is bad manners in the classroom to look at what our neighbors had written. (57) I had grown not only physically but also mentally in the past few years. (2017III)全国 ? 主谓语在人称和数上是否一

30、致以及主、被动语态的混用 (58) Having fun with their friends make them happy. (59) My friend and I are doing some study and the findings will be using as materials for our research. (60) The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks and mistakes as well. 全国(2018III) 及物动词与不及物动词混用

31、? 五、高考真题 direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to (1) 2018新课标II卷 a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.When I was little, Fridays night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games 卷(5) 2016新课标IIof al

32、l sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games wou

33、ld We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didnt realize how right my parents need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go

34、 on a trip abroad, we can are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to useful later in my life. places of interest nearby. I thought that

35、it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 新课标(2) 2018I卷 卷(6) 2016新课标IDuring my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restauran

36、t is change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal time. Some people even had to wait outside. animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to r

37、aise dozens of chicken. They My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or also had a small pond, which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that

38、 he never dreams becoming rich in the short period the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. return for every two years, but he agreed. 浙江卷(7) 2016 新课标II卷(3) 2017Whe

39、n I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a Every time he arrived home at end of the day, wed greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pre

40、tend hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and wate

41、r the vegetables together. would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be

42、up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables. putting us there. 卷I(4) 2017新课标(8) 2016新课标III卷 In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how The teenage year fro

43、m 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructors orders, so once I years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, star

44、ted the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even my parents didnthe word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could h

45、ardly tell which was I them showed I them. from freely be could I hoped I so me understand couldnt parents my felt decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At las

46、t, I will be on my own, but a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. 卷 in need.(9) 2017新课标III(13) 2019新课标When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast t

47、ime flies. I had grown not only physically III卷 Ive had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a caf. Though it may appear and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I

48、 want is not just an ordinarily caf but a very special year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the one. I want my caf have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”. In the caf, customers will enjoy things they were very important in my life at that time, car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This