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1、百度文库让每个人平等地捉升自我 四步作文法： 一、审题 1、明确体裁 记叙文(时间顺序)A Job Searching Experience 描写文(空间顺序)My School Campus 说明文，着重客观陈述(罗列法、例证法、因果法、比较法、对比法、定义法、时间顺序法和分类法)How I Overcome Difficuilities in Learning English,My Ideal Job.Make Our Cities GrccnenThc Successful Interview. 议论文，着重发表口己的看法(归纳法,演绎法，因果法，举例法，对比法与较法)My View o

2、n Job hopping,Dont Hesitate to Sa/cNoDo Lucky Numbers Really Bling Luck? 2、根据体裁确定写作方法 Trying To Be a Good University Student 1) 做合格大学生的必要性(议论文，从正反两个方面) 2) 做合格大学生的必要条件(可从德智体等方面谈)(说明文) 3) 我打算这样做(描写文) 二、确定主题句 8分作文最保险的做法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。如： Trying To Be a Good University Student 1) It is very necessary to

3、be a good unversity student. 2) Thcre are several respects of necessities to be a good university student. ( moral qualities, intellectual ability, physical fitness) 3) What I will do in the future is as follows. 三、三段十二句作文法 1、开头段。引用法，提问法，定义法，数字法，故事法，开门见山法，间接开头法，概括法。 2、中间段。例证法，比较与对比法，因果法。 3、结尾段。总结法或重

4、述法，建议法，评价法，引语法，预测法，展望或期望法，反问法。 四、修改完善。 1、语篇水平上的检査； 2、段落水平上的检査； 3、句子水平上的检查。(大小写，单词拼写，词性，动诚的时态语态、人称是否正确，主谓关系是否一致， 名词的单复数、代词及指代关系是否一致，句子是否完整，标点符号是否正确) 四级作文模板参考 说明原因型模块 Currently, XX has been the order of the day. This docs demonstrate the theory - nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that (1).

5、If you (2), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (3) .Failurc will be following with you. It turns out that all your plan falls through No one can deny another fact that (4) .You dont have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).It will exe

6、rt a profound influence upon (6).With reference to my standpoint, I think (7)注释:1:XX 第一个优点 2:支持 XX 做法 3:不支持 XX 做法4:XX第二个优点5:举例证明优点二6:说明XX优点三影响 相应作文： The importance of self-confidence Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory 一 nothing is more valuable

7、 than sclf-confidcnce It is clear that (self-confidcnce means trust in ones abilities). If you (are full of self-confidcnce, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your drcams will come true On the contrary, if yo

8、u (have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through No one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you a

9、rc dismayed).You don*t have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (the secret of MMe Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular). It will exert a profound influence upon (the achievement of ones ambitions). With reference to my standpoint,

10、I think (he that can have self-confidence can have what he will). 说明原因型模块(2) In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on (1). The factors for (2).First of all,.Then, there comes a case that (4). Moreover, (5). Especially when (6).Indccd, these unique points can be collected the remind people t

11、hat (7).In this way, we should behave just like (8). The impact of Television In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV. offering as many as 50 channels Il has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children).

12、Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children The factors for (parents1 worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all, (with so many programs to choose from, children arc not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then

13、there comes a case that (some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school). Moreover, (the effect on childrens minds are more serious than the effect on children bodies). Especially when (the children are too small to

14、 judge what programs arc suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that (they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their childrens TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply. 说明原因型模块For most of us today, (1). F

15、rom above, we can find that the reasons why (2)are as primary reason, I think, is (3).Second,(4). The third reason, actually, is .The significance for (6)。Therefore, (7)注释:人 们针对XX态度和举措(2)归纳现状第一个原因第二个原因(5)第三个原因重申造成现状最重要原因 Pollution Most of us today (recognize that environmental pollution has been a g

16、reatly serious problem .lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air. many fish die of poisonous water, thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas. therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that arc disabling, or bringing death not

17、only to human beings, but also to wild life.)From above, we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows, the primary reason, I think, is (the reason of harmful substances into environment for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great am

18、ounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests, however, they pollute air, water and land ).Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly ) the third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world, everyday, so much litter a

19、nd waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment ). The significance for (controlling pollution) noted that its high time that more effective measures should be taken Therefore, (new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories, moreover, in the households,

20、 there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste, lets make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us). (I)说明原因型模块(5)These days we often hear that (l).It is common that (2). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (3).For another, (

21、4). What is more, since (5)Jt is natural that (6 ).To solve the problem is not easy at alt but is worth trying. Wc should do something such as (7) to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the futurc.(l)提出论题说明现状理由一理由二理由三理由三 引起后果解决方法 Pollution of environment These

22、 days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social

23、protects? For one thing, (the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another/the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ) What is more, since (the industrial revolution )jt is natural that (a great number of fact

24、ories have been springing up like mushrooms. The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment). To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worthing Wc should do something such as (planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and 2 百度文库让每

25、个人平等地捉升口我 learning to recycling natural resources ）to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future 写作模板图表式作文 It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes It has gone up/grown/fallcn/droppcd considerably

26、in recent years （as X varies）. At the point of XI, Y reaches its peak value of （多少）.Wliat is the reason for this change? Mamly there are .（多少）reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, .（第一个原因）.More importantly, .（第二个原因）.Most important of all, .（第三彳、原因）.From the above

27、 discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time （if necessary measures arc not taken括号里使用于那些不太好变化趋势）. 写作模板一提纲式作文 1. 对立观点式 A.有人认为X是好事，赞成X,为什么？ B.有人认为X是坏事，反对X,为什么？ C.我看法。 Some people arc in

28、 favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持 X 第一个原因。They also argue that 支持 X 另一个原因。However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对 X 第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in b

29、oth arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 有一个坏处。 2. 批驳观点式 A. 一个错误观点。B.我不同意。 Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点进一步解释。An example they have presented is that

30、 一个例子。（According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个 错误观点或者受到这个错误观点影响）。Tliere might be some element of tmth in these peoples belief. But if ve consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反观点 There are a number of reasons behind my belief.（

31、以下参照辩论文议论文写法）。 3. 社会问题（现象）式 4. A. 个社会问题或者现象B.产生原因C.对社会和我们生活影响D.如何杜绝。（如果是问题话）E.前 景预测。 Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmcntal problem（X has increasingly become a common concern of the public）. According to a survey,调查内容说明这种现象情况。（或者是一个例子）。There are a couple of reas

32、ons booming this problcm/phcnomcnon下面参照辩论式议论文写法。X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects 参照辩论式议论文写 法。 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more hai*m. 同上 Based on the above discussions, I

33、can easily forecast that more and more people will 4辩论式议论文模版 1 Some people believe （argue, recognize, think）that 观点 1 But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点 2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all,论据 1.

34、More importantly,论据 2. Most important of all,论据 3. In summary,总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心或:From above, wc can predict that 预测. 模版 2 People hold different views about X. Some people arc of the opinion that 观点 1, while others point out that 观点 2. As far as I am concerned, the forme

35、r/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing, 论据 another, 论据 2. Last but not the least,论据 3. To conclude,总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测. 模版 3 There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（争论焦点）。Some people are of the view that 观点 1

36、while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点 2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious First of all, 论据 1。 Furthermore, 论据 2。Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据 3。A natural conclusio

37、n from the above discussion is that 总、 结观点。As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测. Opportunity and Success Opportunities dont come often. They come every once in a while. Very often, they come quietly and go by without being noticed Therefore .it is advisable

38、 that you should value and treat them with care When an opportunity comes, it brings a promise but never realizes it on its own. If you want to achieve something or intend to fulfill one of your ambitious, you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared. Otherwise, you will take no advantage of op

39、portunities when they come to visit you. The difference between a man who succeeds and one who docs not lies only in the way each treats opportunities The successful person always makes adequate preparations to meet opportunities as they duly arrive. The unsuccessful person, on the other hand, works

40、 little and just waits to see them pass by. In my opinion, there arc plenty of opportunities for everyone in our society, but only those who are prepared adequately and qualified highly can make use of them to achieve their purpose. Private car Outline: 1) Advantages of owning a private car. 2) Disa

41、dvantages of owning a private car. 3) Should it be necessary to enlarge the private car market? Why or why not? Nowadays, any Chinese can enjoy the luxury of owning a private car if he or she can afford it. Having a car of your own means no more traveling to work on crowded buses or subway trains, a

42、nd you can drop off the children at school on the way. Moreover, it also means that you can enjoy the weekends and holidays better, because with a car you can go to places where the regular buses and trains do not go, and so you can find a quiet scenic spot with no crowds. However, there are drawbac

43、ks to owning a car. For one thing, with the increase in car ownership in recent years, the roads are becoming more and more crowded, often making the journey to work more of a nightmare than a drcam For another, it is not cheap to run a car, as the prices of gasoline and repairs are constantly risin

44、g, not to mention the prices you have to pay for a licence and insurance coverage Having considered both sides of the argument, I have come to the conclusion that the advantages of owning a car outweigh the disadvantages Therefore, it seems to me that China should increase its output of automobiles

45、and enlarge the private car market. The result would be that cars would become cheaper, while at the same time the extra demand would encourage the auto industry to produce more efficient and family-oriented vehicles On Developing Tourism Tourism, a ”smokeless industry0, is developing rapidly in Chi

46、na With the open and reform policy being carried out, thousands upon thousands of foreign visitors are crowding into our country. The are eager to see this old mysterious land with a splendid culture of more than 5000 years. Tourism brings China a lot of benefits First it enables the Chinese people

47、to know more about the outside world and promotes friendship and mutual understanding Second , it is financially beneficial to China, which needs more foreign currencies for its modernization program. Tourism, however, gives rise to a number of problems. For instance, it becomes a burden to our inef

48、ficient transportation system. Besides, the living standard of the average Chinese is still not high enough to be able to afford the many different sorts of expenses during long distance travels As for me, I believe that with the development of our national economy, all these problems will certainly

49、 be solved step by step. A much better and brighter future awaits On University Tuition System in China Tuition system has become one of the hottest topics in China since it was put into effect. Different people have different opinions on it. Some people think that there is no university in the worl

50、d which is open to students without tuition. As far as China is concerned, it is a developing country with the largest population in the world. The government is unable to allocate enough funds to pay for various teaching facilities and many different kinds of expenses. One of the ways to relieve th

51、e problem is for students to pay tuition. The money raised in this way can be used to improve the conditions for running schools. Others ,however, are opposed to the tuition system. They argue that the living standard of the Chinese people especially of those in the poor rural areas, is still low, c

52、ompared with that in the Western World. The university tuition will certainly add to the already heavy burden of the parents, who live on their salaries or wages Moreover, tuition may become an obstacle to the development of Chinas higher education. This is because it hinders some talented people fr

53、om entering the university just on account of their poverty 1 问题解决型 2000 年 1 月真题：How I Finance My College Education? 1) 上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多种途径解决： 2) 哪种途径适合我(说明理由) 3) (1) With the development of national economy, a worrying social problem also arises-.The. Phenomenon will bling many tmfavor

54、able consequences. First and foremost, Wliat makes matters worse, . Finally, if tlus matter is not properly settled, it will pose a thieat to . 4) It is high time that we called on the efforts from all sides to deal with this problem properly. For one thing, the go-eniment should. For another, . sho

55、uld seize eveiy chance. Finally, the mass media should also play a positive role m . 5) No matter whether this problem is a natural result of social development, it is important that we find a satisfactory solution to it in this social transformation era. 6) (2) At present, many people take it for g

56、ianted that. because. Consequently it is not necessaiy for us to worry about. 7) In fact, the situation has become so serious that every one should be aware of it and take immediate actionsWliat s more, with the development of science and technology,. Thirdly . 8) We should take urgent measures.Oil

57、the other hand,. Last but not least,. 9) (3) The recent years have witnessed an unfavorable social phenomenon-. 10) After contemplation and meditation, we can find three possible reasons to account for this trend For one thing,.For another. 11) The solutions to this problem seem more than clear on t

58、his occasionMoreover, . Last but by no means least, . 12) (4) It is self-evident that the present fast developmg society calls forIf we ever want to we must remember the following advice 13) In the first place, . In the second place,Only when . can we hope to put an end to this unfavorable situation

59、 14) The problem is of gi*eat importance to anybody at any tmie and place. If a person refuses to leam cooperation and discipline, how can he enjoy the privilege of higher living quality? 2. 说明利弊型 1999年6月真题：Reading Selectively or Extensively (选择性读书或博览群书) 1) 有人认为读书耍有选择 2) 3) 有人认为应当博览群书 我的看法 4) (1) No

60、wadays, . is playing a more and more significant role ni peoples daily life. However, peoples opinions are still divided on this point 5) Those who are m favor of. claim that it has a lot of advantages. For one thing. For another. Those who are opposed to . hold that disadvantages aie many. On the o