高考英语漫画类作文指导

1、attention please! 2011江苏高考说明江苏高考说明高考英语书高考英语书 面表达示例面表达示例2-看图作文：看图作文： 看图作文的看图作文的 “图图”不局限于某一类型不局限于某一类型 的图，如漫画、广告，也包括其他图片的图，如漫画、广告，也包括其他图片 、照片、图表等情景材料。考生们可根、照片、图表等情景材料。考生们可根 据图示的寓意、内容或情节线索，自己据图示的寓意、内容或情节线索，自己 组织文字，进行描述、叙述、比较或表组织文字，进行描述、叙述、比较或表 达思想观。作文应覆盖提示的要点，但达思想观。作文应覆盖提示的要点，但 应避免仅根据提示文字作简单翻译。应避免仅根据提示文

2、字作简单翻译。 writing based on cartoons are you familiar with this cartoon? what abilities should we have? 1. 读图读图 3. 谋篇谋篇 2.解意解意 .读图：读图：topics of cartoons topics of cartoons environmental/ natural problems social phenomenon attitudes towards life .解意解意(theme)-to the point 注意注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息文字说明部分往往含有重要

3、信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！切记要认真阅读！ 1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度辨明褒贬，找准角度 (angle) . 联系生活，明晰主旨联系生活，明晰主旨 (theme) 下面的漫画反映了一种社会现象下面的漫画反映了一种社会现象 ，请你根据对，请你根据对 这幅漫画的理解，用英语写一篇这幅漫画的理解，用英语写一篇 短文，描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决短文，描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决 此问题发表你的看法。此问题发表你的看法。 example1. _ 角度角度 comparison 主旨主旨 education inequality the comparison indicates

4、 the phenomenon of education inequality in modern china. 角度角度 criticize 主旨主旨 the students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards. example2 judge the themes of the following cartoons as quickly as possible. come on! cho

5、ose me! 213 45 6 people lack communication. picture1 protect animals. no buying, no killing. picture2 people cant afford heavy medical fees. picture 3 picture 4 one false move may lose the game. look before you leap. money cant buy everything. health is the best wealth. picutre5 下图是某人寿保险公司的一则经 典广告招画

6、，这则广告想要告诉我们什么？ if unexpected cant foresee protect ourselves buy insurance picture6 the advertisement above shows us that there are always some unexpected “ifs” in our life, but not all of us can foresee them clearly. so buying insurance for life is likely the best way to protect ourselves from a dea

7、dly “if”. conclusion: when it comes to attitudes towards life, using proper sayings makes sense. .谋篇谋篇 -organization step1. description step2. analysis step3. solutions 发现问题发现问题 解决问题解决问题 分析问题分析问题 step 1 description （人称（人称/时态）时态） to what degree should we describe the cartoon? organization example a c

8、ountry boy crying long for education a city boy enjoy all the benefits of education as is vividly shown in the picture, as can be seen in the picture, in the picture, there are the picture shows a common phenomenon. sentence structures: _, a country boy is crying helpless in the darkness, longing ea

9、gerly for school education, in contrast, the city boy on the right is enjoying all the benefits. as is vividly shown in the picture, step2 analysis(联系实际分析联系实际分析) ( facts / reasons/results) sentence structures 1.what are the reasons for this phenomenon? 2.it seems very ridiculous thathowever, this ki

10、nd of story is performed everywhere. 3.the picture shows thatit is the exact reflection of 4.the picture indicates that we/nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that 5.this is a ironic (讽刺的讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among clues：描述一下他们：描述一下他们 的的不同境遇不同境遇，并就，并就如如 何解决

11、此问题何解决此问题发表你发表你 的看法。的看法。 indicate: education inequality facts: drop out of school suffer from low standards of comparatively better opportunities results: lower enrollment rates worsen the problem example the comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern china. (facts) school

12、-age country children are often dropping out of school due to poverty. even those who managed to stay in school are still suffering from the low standards of educational facilities and academic quantities. comparatively, city children have much better opportunities to receive good education. (result

13、s) thus, school in the countryside generally have much lower enrollment rates than those in the city, which in turn worsens the problem of educational inequality. as far as im concerned/in my opinion, from my point of view, only in this way can./only if, can we step 3 solutions (opinions /suggestion

14、s) it is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ immediate measures should be taken to the government should make laws to the media should appeal for we should raise peoples awareness of everyone should make great efforts to 从大到小从大到小 从意识到行动从意识到行动 the government the media b

15、e aware of only if social justice harmonious society example to solve this problem , the government should spend more money on the improvement of education in rural areas. meanwhile, the media can appeal for the public donations for rural education. moreover, all people in the community should be aw

16、are of the seriousness of the problem and do whatever to help. only if we do these can we have more social justice and thus make our society more harmonious. practice 目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费 而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有 效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“he

17、alth care”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容， 重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。 _ _ clues: 简要简要说明图画中所表达的说明图画中所表达的内容，内容， 重点重点阐述这种现象所带来的阐述这种现象所带来的后果后果和你的和你的观点观点。 steps contents description analysis solutions an old man suffer from go to hospital medical bill cant afford another attach

18、results: 1.in debt 2.bear the pain 3.wait for death 1.reduce medical expenses 2.build up medical insurance /care system health care (description) from the picture, we can see that the old man was suffering from heart trouble/attack. he had to go to hospital for medical care. when he saw the medical

19、bill with $5,0000 from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldnt stand on his feet. it was beyond what he could affordits really another heart attack for him. sample analysis at present, many people cant afford heavy medical fees. (results) because of this, they may get into deep debt in order

20、 to get proper medical care . worse still, some cannot borrow any money so they have to bear the pain of diseases or wait for the last day of their life. what a pity! solutions to solve the problem,we strongly call for the medical expenses to be reducedthe government should build up medical insuranc

21、e system ,and try its best to explore and develop a new health care so that everyone will be able to enjoy their life as long as possible. /only in this way, can we enjoy our life as long as possible. whatever the picture is, just remember: proper description accurate analysis reasonable solutions o

22、nly if you keep these rules in mind, can you make it. lets draw conclusion consolidation 第五部分第五部分 书面表达书面表达( (满分满分2525分分) ) 下图描述的是全球环境问题。请仔细观察这幅漫画， 用英语写一篇短文，阐明漫画中所反映的问题， 并提出解决此问题的方法(至少三点)。 _ consolidation _ _ description analysis solution from the picture, we can see that pollution is posing a threat

23、 to our earth, which comes in many ways. millions of chimneys of the factories are pouring heavy somok into air, which causes serious air pollution. a large amount of waste water from the factories pollutes water, making our rivers fishless and our water unfit to drink and swim in. furthermore, a lo

24、t of trees have been cut down without proper plans, which contributes to the soil being washed away. it seems that we really have no clean place to live (description + analysis) the pollution is so serious that we have to find effective solutions to it. as far as i am concerned, the government shoul

25、d pass laws to reduce polluted air. some measures should be taken to purify the water before it is poured into the rivers of the seas. we should plant more trees to keep the soil in place. whats more, people should be further educated to realize the importance of environmental protection. only in this way, we will have a clean and tidy environment. (sol