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1、2012 考研冲刺班【浙江工业大学之江校区】作文参考范文Test 1 Part A Dear Sir: (也可以 Dear Editor:)I am writing this letter to express my serious concern about the issue of cohabitation before marriage which becomes increasingly common around us today.It is hard to say it is right or wrong. For a girl, if she really believes th

2、at her boyfriend is her Mr. Right, I think she can live together with her boyfriend as wife and husband before getting married. If she is still not sure about it, she should wait for some time, because cohabitation before marriage may cause some physical and emotional problems for her.So I strongly

3、suggest that both should think it twice before they take a step. Thank you very much for your time.Sincerely, Li Ming Part BRecently, there has been a widespread concern over the issue of cosmetic surgery, because an increasing number of people, including students in middle school, go to hospital to

4、 have such a surgery. As is shown in the cartoon, a young man asks a surgeon (或 doctor) to have plastic surgery on his face because his girlfriend wants him to look like the movie star in the picture! Why are there so many people nowadays want to have this plastic surgery? Any discussion about this

5、issue would probably involve the following factors. First, the movie stars, especially those in Hollywood movies, have a deep influence on the younger generation. This fans take great delight, or even pride, in taking after ( 或 resembling 或 looking like) them. Second, this phenomenon is triggered (或

6、 caused) by cosmetic surgery commercials ( 或 advertisement) on TV. In addition, beautiful or handsome looks, in a sense, play a decisive role in getting a nice job.In my humble opinion, cosmetic surgery will do greater harm to ones health, both physically and mentally. My body is given by my parents

7、, and I will definitely not make any change of it. (也可以预测： In short, it can be predicted that with the further development of society and the improvement of medical technology, more people will join the group to take plastic surgery.)Test 2Part ADear Sir:I am writing the letter to express my opinion

8、s on the argument about housework whether it isfor women or for men.It is a lot of work to keep a home clean and nice. Traditionally, the wife does most of the housework in most families in China, because female in those days didnt work outside the home. But times have changed, and the role played i

9、n handling housework has changed, too. Most female also have a job outside, so male have to do some of it.In my opinion, both should share housework, or they can hire professionals to do it, or the one who has more time should do more.Sincerely,Li MingPart BConcerns on celebrities advertising for pr

10、oducts have been raised recently not only among the general public but in the mass media as well. Just as the cartoon describes, a fish (a star) is pointing to the bait (fake and inferior quality products) on fishing hook, and persuading a group of fish (the audience) to eat it. He promises that the

11、 bait is in high quality and very effective, because he ate it before!This cartoon reminds me of quite a number of stories. The most persuasive example is Sanlu milk powder, which is promoted by some famous CCTV anchor. Another example that occurs to me is that some direct sale ads on TV by a talk s

12、how star whose name I should not mention here. Obviously, those celebrities movie stars or famous athletes dont necessarily use or even dont like the products that they advertise. They do ads just for money. Accordingly, they more often than not exaggerate the effect or quality of those products and

13、 neglect their social responsibility for consumers.I myself dont like to watch star advertising, and therefore dont buy this product. There is little doubt that effective measures should be taken to stop such activities, because the present situation, if permitted to continue, will surely lead to se

14、rious problems.Test 3Part ADear Friends:Im writing to express my heartfelt thanks to all of you for the photos youve sent me and for the wonderful holiday with you last month. The photos are so nice, and they remind me of those terrific moments we were together in your country.Im terribly sorry that

15、 I didnt write in time to you when I came back to China. Hardly had I returned home when I caught a severe flu and was in hospital for a whole week. Although I was eager to tell you about my return journey, I had to take my doctors advice and had a rest in bed. I should be greatly obliged if you wou

16、ld come to China and stay with me next summer holiday. Many thanks again for your hospitality and kindness!Yours,LiMingPart BFrom ancient time till now, domestic violence has been always a global phenomenon, which includes parents beating their children, husband beating wife or vice versa. As is sho

17、wn in the cartoon, a man is beating a lady who is obviously his wife violently. Strangely enough, his wife just endure it because she “wants to keep the family integral ( 或 as a whole). ” Domestic violence greatly threatens family stability, and does serious harm to the victims health of body and mi

18、nd, and eventually it will threaten social stability. Anyway, any discussion on this issue would unavoidably involve the following possible factors. First, it results from too haste in marriage, that is, wife and husband do not know each other well before marriage. Second, stress from work or life c

19、an also lead to some psychological problems which will definitely result in domestic violenee.(令邻居：is a good case in point, which can illustrate this well.) And above all, alcohol or drug addiction may be the leading cause for this violence. ( 李教授： A recent survey by World Bank shows that 25-50% of

20、women suffer physical assaults after their husbands drinking too much alcohol or drug abuse.）Accordingly, immediate measures should be found to this problem, because the present situation, if permitted to continue, will certainly give rise to more serious social problems.Test 4Part ADear Editor:I am

21、 writing this letter to say a few words about beauty contest, which is quite popular in the world.As I know, many people hold a negative attitude toward it. They think that beauty contests are bad because they are sexist they look only at a womans body, and not at important things about a woman. I b

22、elieve they are wrong. A womans body is only part of a beauty contest. You have to be beautiful and intelligent and talented to be in a beauty contest. It is a good chance for many women to realize their dreams. To win a beauty contest, you have to get well prepared. For example, you should study a

23、musical instrument, say, piano, for several years, and besides, you have to study how to speak in public, and so on.So, I hope some people will change their mind about beauty contest. Thank you for your time.Sincerely,Li MingPart BPopular concerns on the issue of drunken driving have been raised rec

24、ently not only among the general public but by the government as well, especially after the tragic accident happened in Hangzhou city last year. Just the cartoon shows, a drunken driver driving a car is stopped by a policeman, but to our great surprise, stepping out of his car, he says to the police

25、man with a bottle of wine in his hand, “ Im not in the liquor, if you dont believe, we can compete drinking and to see who first drinks under the table. ”Drunken driving can lead to tragedies. According to a recent survey made by BIT, a national research institute in Traffic Ministry, about 64% of c

26、ar accidents are caused by drivers drinking alcohol. It results in great damages to families as well as the society. Such a serious problem has been be realized by the department concerned as well as the whole society. And currently, strict laws and regulations for banning driving after drinking hav

27、e been enacted. Those who violate the laws will be severely punished.To conclude, if drivers further strengthen their sense of safety and dont drive after drinking alcohol, the rate of accidents can be expected to decline dramatically in future.Test 5Part ADear Sir: （也可以写 Dear Editor: 但注意 Editor 要大写

28、 ）I am writing the letter to express my opinions on cyber love. Frankly speaking, I totally object to it because I think it is a waste of time.（ 开门见山点出写信目的，并把提纲的第1 点完成 ）.Unfortunately, we can see that nowadays quite a few students spend much time making friends on the Internet. They just indulge the

29、mselves in the chat rooms, meeting their so-called lovers in this virtual world. （ 充分改造、利用 Direction 中的句子 ）. In my opinion, as students, they should concentrate on studies. Besides, cyber is not a real world, and it is easier for one to be deceived, especially for those girl students. Accordingly, m

30、aking friends online is OK, but talking about love on the Internet? No! It should be avoided. （ 完成提纲的第 2 点 ）.Thank you very much for your time, and I sincerely hope you and our readers would agree with me.Part BCurrently, the doctor-patient relationship has become a prominent problem in the society,

31、 which results in much discussion among people from all walks of life. As is shown in the cartoon, an old accidentally cuts his finger, but funny enough, the doctor asks him to take a check-up of cardiogram, and the good excuse is that “ all ten fingers are linked to heart ” !There are various kinds

32、 of reasons responsible for such a tense relationship between doctors and patients. First, some hospitals, especially those in rural areas, cannot attract gooddoctors andnurses because of poor welfares. The limited funds provided by the local government fail to update medical equipment in time. Seco

33、nd, as we all know, some doctors, in a sense, have little professional morality. They just take advantage of their positions to seek personal interests, such as prescribing more expensive medicine for patients, or imposing on their patients unnecessary check-ups, just like what happens in the cartoo

34、n. In addition, the neglect of administration control by some local governments is also one of the factors for this problem.Accordingly, we must look for an immediate solution to this problem. Otherwise, the present situation, if permitted to continue, will definitely give rise to serious problems,

35、even threatens social stability.Test 6Part ADear Editors:I am writing the letter to express my idea about the restrictions on cigarette smoking in public places. I am completely in favor of this action.Unfortunately, however, it has not been so successful in most cities, and we can see that there ar

36、e still a lot of people smoking in some public places like railway station, hospital, and office building. So more severe regulations should be enacted to punish those public smokers. Besides, families as well as primary schools should educate children to enhance their awareness of the great harmful

37、ness of smoking, especially the second-hand smoking.I sincerely hope everyone would take this issue into serious consideration. Thank you!Yours,Li MingPart BIn such a competitive society, stress is inevitable, and each is faced with various kinds of stress. As is shown by the cartoon, a poor man fee

38、ls exhausted because of the heavy burden on his back house, furniture, child, and so on.Long-suffering stress may lead to serious problems. My neighbor, a manager in a big company, is a good case in point, which can illustrate this well. It is said that he beats his wife madly because of great stres

39、s from work. According to the statistics released by World Bank, about 85% of suicide in Japan results from various stresses. This observation is also frequently made of South Korea. As a result, it is of crucial importance to find proper solutions to the problem. From my point of view, slowing down

40、 the pace of life may be the best choice. Listening to music or sometimes go to the movies are also helpful to relax. Besides, traveling now and then is a good way to free one of anxiety or stress.In short, one should find an immediate method to solve the problem of stress; otherwise it would defini

41、tely lead to serious problems.Test 7Part ADear Susan:Im writing this letter to give you some suggestions concerning your question you asked in your last letter: which you should choose as your major English or Law.In my opinion, I strongly recommend you choose law as your major in university. As you

42、 know, nowadays its hard for university graduates to find a well-paid job, especially English major students, and law students definitely have better chances in future career. As a tool of communication, English is also very important, and you mentioned in your letter that youre very interested in E

43、nglish, but I think you can cultivate your interest in your spare time.I hope you will take my suggestions into serious consideration. Good luck!Yours,Li MingPart BWith the rapid development of the Internet, e-commerce has gained great progress, and increasing people, even those seniors, go shopping

44、 online nowadays. Just as the cartoon shows, an old man asks his wife to go shopping on street, but to his surprise, the old lady has already taken a stroll in stores online! （ 如果不会写 take a stroll ，就重复说 is doing some shopping online! 注意： go shopping = do some shopping）Online shopping （ 也可以说 Shopping

45、 online） has a lot of advantages. First, it is of great convenience. Just linking a computer to the Internet, we can go shopping anytime anywhere instead of going to the real stores on street. Accordingly, it can relieve traffic jam to some extent. Second, it is time-saving, because we dont need to

46、spend too much time selecting our goods in real stores. What we should do is to click a mouse to choose what we want to buy in a few second! Even at midnight we can do it. Online shopping, nevertheless, may give rise to various problems. A recent survey, which is conducted by World Bank, about 24 %

47、online shoppers have experienced swindles while buying commodities online. （如果字数够，本句可以不用） Myneighbor, an Otaku girl （宅女 ）, is a good case in point, which can illustrate this well. She buys almost everything on the Internet, and was cheated a large sum of money last month.（ 如果字数 够，本句可以不用 ）In short, t

48、here are both advantages and disadvantages in shopping online, and the problem lies in how to make good use of it. Anyway, it can be predicted that with the further development of e-commerce, online shopping will surely become more popular.2012考研（浙江传媒学院冲刺班） （12月 17-18日）参考答案Part ADear Sir: （也可以写 Dear

49、 Editor: 但注意 Editor 要大写 ）I am writing the letter to express my opinions on cyber love. Frankly speaking, I totally object to it because I think it is a waste of time.（ 开门见山点出写信目的，并把提纲的第1 点完Unfortunately, we can see that nowadays quite a few students spend much time making friends on the Internet. Th

50、ey just indulge themselves in the chat rooms, meeting their so-called lovers in this virtual world. （ 充分改造、利用 Direction 中的句子 ）. In my opinion, as students, they should concentrate on studies. Besides, cyber is not a real world, and it is easier for one to be deceived, especially for those girl stude

51、nts. Accordingly, making friends online is OK, but talking about love on the Internet? No! It should be avoided. （ 完成提纲的第 2 点 ）.Thank you very much for your time, and I sincerely hope you and our readers would agree with me.Yours,Li MingPart BCurrently, the doctor-patient relationship has become a p

52、rominent problem in the society, which results in much discussion among people from all walks of life. As is shown by the cartoon, an old man accidentally cut his finger, instead of treating the wound right away, his doctor arrogantly imposes on him an unnecessary but expensive check-up, which is fo

53、r the case of heart disease.We do not trust hospitals as we did before for obvious reasons. First, currently the state-owned, nonprofit hospitals, in a sense, fail to attract good doctors and nurses. Since the now government funding to these hospitals cannot offer good payrolls to doctors or to upda

54、te the medical equipment, some undesirable phenomena occur, even fake medicine is used in some small hospitals, especially in rural areas. Second, some doctors take advantage of their position to make money by prescribing expensive medicine or imposing on their patient unnecessary medical checkups,

55、just like what happens in the cartoon.Accordingly, we must look for an immediate solution, because the present situation, if permitted to continue, will definitely lead to serious problems.p.35Model Tests for Writing:Test 1Part ADear Sir: （也可以 Dear Editor:）I am writing this letter to express my seri

56、ous concern about the issue of cohabitation before marriage which becomes increasingly common around us today.It is hard to say it is right or wrong. For a girl, if she really believes that her boyfriend is her Mr. Right, I think she can live together with her boyfriend as wife and husband before ge

57、tting married. If she is still not sure about it, she should wait for some time, because cohabitation before marriage may cause some physical and emotional problems for her.So I strongly suggest that both should think it twice before they take a step. Thank you very much for your time.Sincerely,Li M

58、ingPart BRecently, there has been a widespread concern over the issue of cosmetic surgery, because an increasing number of people, including students in middle school, go to hospital to have such a surgery. As is shown in the cartoon, a young man asks a surgeon ( 或 doctor) to have plastic surgery on

59、 his face because his girlfriend wants him to look like the movie star in the picture!Why are there so many people nowadays want to have this plastic surgery? Any discussion about this issue would probably involve the following factors. First, the movie stars, especially those in Hollywood movies, have a deep influence on the younger generation