商志四六级写作

1、龙腾启航内部资料四六级、考研英语复习的整套方法，请登录商志老师新浪微博：商志考研英语第一节历年四级作文总览2013年6月（注：1.2013年6月的试题是多题多卷，共考了3个不同的图画作文题；2.新四级给出的样题就是下面的第一个图）1. directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. you should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the i

2、mportance of doing small things before undertaking something big。you should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.( in the cartoon there is a father talking with her son. having heard his sons words that “ dad, i am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapon.” the father replies t

3、hat “ if you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”. )2. directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. you should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of learning basic skills.you should write

4、 at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.3. directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. you should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of reading literature。you should write at least 120 words

5、but no more than 180 words.2012 年12 月education paysdirections: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled education pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (weekly earnings in 2010). please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comm

6、ents on it. you should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.2012 年6 月on excessive packagingdirections: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled excessive packaging following the outline given below. you should write at least 120 words but no more than

7、180 words.1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象2.出现这一现象的原因3.我对这一现象的看法和建议2011 年12 月nothing succeeds without a strong willdirections: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled nothing succeeds without a strong will by commenting on the humorous saying,”quitting smoking is the easiest thing

8、 in the world. ive done it hundreds of times” . you should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.2011 年6 月online shopping1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3.我的建议2010 年12 月how should parents help children to be independent ?1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2. 为了让孩子独立，父母应该2010 年6 月due attention should be

9、 given to spelling1. 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2. 出现这种现象的原因是3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为2009 年12 月creating a green campus1. 建设绿色校园十分重要2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该2009 年6 月free admissions to museums？1. 越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是2. 有人认为这样做会带来一些问题3. 在我看来2008 年12 月limiting the use of disposable plastic bags1.一次性塑料袋曾广为使用2.由此带来的

10、问题3.限制一次性塑料袋的意义2008年6月recreational activities1. 娱乐活动多种多样2. 娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能带来危害3. 作为大学生，我认为2007年12月what electives to choose1. 各大学为学生开设多种多样的选修课2. 学生出于各种原因选择不同的选修课3. 以我自己为例2007年6月通知welcome to our club1. 本社团的主要活动内容2. 参加本社团的好处3. 如何加入本社团第三节段落写作第一段：1. 图画型as is subtly depicted in the given drawing, a father

11、 is talking to his daughter, with the dialogue between them thought-provoking. what can be clearly seen in it is that when asked how her school was today, the daughter replied to her dad that all about it was in her blog. however simple this image may seem at first glance, its intended meaning goes

12、undoubtedly far-reaching: the internet has exerted significant influence on interpersonal communications.2.表格型as is apparently illustrated in the statistics provided in the chart/graph/table above, the unemployment rate is in opposite proportion to the level of education - the higher the degree, the

13、 lower the unemployment rate. the unemployment rate is 1.9% for those with a doctoral degree, while it is 14.9% for those without even a high school diploma.3. 评论一个社会现象the previous couple of years has witnessed the prevalence of a widespread social phenomenon - an increasing number of youngsters are

14、 crazy about participating in many a tests. it has already been brought into public concern and we can easily find bulk of relevant discussions among the mass media. obviously this is an issue that most people are not only interested in, but also hold opinion about.nowadays, people in mounting numbe

15、rs are very much concerned about the problem that . indeed, the past few years has witnessed the growing incidence of such happenings. its so widespread that a great deal of attention is being paid today to such a trend.4. 对引言评论型when it comes to abraham lincolns famous observation - “it takes years

16、to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it.” - a heated discussion has come up among the general public. the vast majority of people are in strong favor of maintaining trust deliberately, while still others seem to contend that we dont have to spend too much time on trust maintenance. i am stro

17、ngly convinced that trust is one of the most important relationships among people and thus deserves sustained attention.5、观点对比型when it comes to the popular trend of long public holidays, a heated discussion has come up among the general public. a majority of people are in strong favor of taking long

18、 holidays, while still others seem to contend that this holiday style is not suitable for a developing country like china. i am strongly convinced that the benefits of long holidays outnumber its disadvantages in various ways.第二段：1. 不同观点2. 分析利弊is this phenomenon a blessing or a curse? the mass media

19、 and the general public have focused on the advantages of this phenomenon, but few have looked at the side-effect. the following list of advantages and disadvantages can well explain everything. indeed, moreover,. given all these disadvantages, it seems to have a host of strengths. to begin with,. f

20、urthermore,3. 分析原因what might account for the phenomenon mirrored by the chart / picture ? it is no difficult job for us to come up with some possible factors that underlie the above complicated phenomenon (event / changes). for one thing, . for another, besides, one more important factor worth our c

21、oncern is that 或why should this phenomenon take place? there are generally three factors accounting for it. initially, whats more, finally,第三段1. 发表自己的看法as any coin has two sides, the above issue can also be approached from a different perspective. therefore it is quite normal for people to hold rath

22、er opposite opinions. however, its my firm belief that any action concerning the issue should be highly encouraged (discouraged) in the present case.2. 提出建议confronted with ，we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. initially, 解决方法一。in the second place, 解决方法二。或consider

23、ing the current issue, we should call for immediate actions imposed by the authorities(universities). in other words, our government of various levels (they) must make relevant plans or rules to guarantee a proper order and justice. besides, as citizens, we should also be aware that any prompt solut

24、ion is of benefit to all. therefore, its the duty of ordinary people to actively participate in the action.第四章篇章写作（一） 图画或漫画，就可以这样套写(以2012年6月6级的漫画为例):as is subtly portrayed in the given drawing, a father is talking to his daughter, with the the implications thought-provoking. what can be clearly seen

25、 in it is that when asked how her school was today, the daughter replied to her dad that all about it was in her blog. however simple this image may seem at first glance, its intended meaning goes undoubtedly far-reaching: the internet has exerted significant influence on interpersonal communication

26、s.what might account for the phenomenon mirrored by the picture ? it is no difficult job for us to come up with some possible factors that underlie the above complicated phenomenon. for one thing, . for another, . besides, one more important factor worth our concern is that considering the current i

27、ssue, we should call for immediate actions imposed by the whole society. our government of various levels could make relevant plans or rules to guarantee a proper life. moreover, as citizens, we should also be aware that any prompt solution is of benefit to all. in other words, its the duty of ordin

28、ary people to actively participate in the campaign to curb similar practices.（二） 表格，就可以这样套写(以2012年12月4级的表格为例):as is apparently illustrated in the statistics provided in the chart/graph/table above, the unemployment rate is in opposite proportion to the level of education - the higher the degree, the

29、 lower the unemployment rate. the unemployment rate is 1.9% for those with a doctoral degree, while it is 14.9% for those without even a high school diploma.what might account for the phenomenon mirrored by the chart/graph/table? it is no difficult job for us to come up with some possible factors th

30、at underlie the above complicated phenomenon. for one thing, . for another, . besides, one more important factor worth our concern is that considering the current issue, we should call for immediate actions imposed by the whole society. our government of various levels could make relevant plans or r

31、ules to guarantee a proper life. moreover, as citizens, we should also be aware that any prompt action is of benefit to all. in other words, its the duty of ordinary people to actively participate in the campaign to promote education.（三） 评论一个社会现象，可这样套写(2012年6月四级作文题、2011年6月以及之前的所有四级作文题都属这种类型；2011年6月及

32、以前的所有6级作文题都属这种):the previous couple of years has witnessed the the growing incidence of an upsetting social phenomenon - an increasing number of people are crazy about participating in many a tests. its so widespread that a great deal of attention is being paid today to such a trend and we can easil

33、y find bulk of relevant discussions among the mass media. obviously this is an issue that most people are not only interested in, but also hold opinion about.what might account for the phenomenon ? it is no difficult job for us to come up with some possible factors that underlie the above complicate

34、d phenomenon. for one thing, . for another, . besides, one more important factor worth our concern is that considering the current issue, we should call for immediate actions imposed by the whole society. our government of various levels could make relevant plans or rules to guarantee a proper life.

35、 moreover, as citizens, we should also be aware that any prompt action is of benefit to all. in other words, its the duty of ordinary people to actively participate in the campaign to curb such happenings.附录1：其他可能要用到的句式模板一、如果是“对比观点型”，也可以写成：when it comes to _，opinions may vary. some tend to claim tha

36、t 观点一. they point out that 换个说法. （additionally, 补充说明. ）on the contrary, others hold the view that 观点二. they argue that 换个说法.a case in point goes to ， who/which 举例. therefore, . 或者 may serve as a convincing illustration. she 举例. accordingly, 小结.i am strongly convinced that 我的观点. the reason is that 理由

37、一. and also, 理由二. so, 总结自己的观点.2、 如果说明利弊，也可以写成：whenever we hear people say that 主题，well instantly have the idea that it is a good/bad thing. indeed, its advantages outweigh the disadvantages. we can take _for an example. it will benefit 好处一. in addition, 好处二.given all these advantages, it has a varie

38、ty of disadvantages. first of all, 坏处一. moreover, 坏处二. to sum up the above arguments, i think a proper attitude towards 主题 is that 我的观点.附录3：话题与例文分析exercise 1: scientific discoveries, curse or blessing ?as the science develops, there has been a strong debate on what on earth scientific discoveries ca

39、n bring to our society, curse, or blessing? nowhere in history has the issue of whether scientific discoveries can contribute to happiness or disaster been talked about so much as in our society today.when it comes to the pros and cons of scientific discoveries, opinions differ owing to their respec

40、tive point of view and diverse backgrounds. the majority of people may claim that scientific discoveries are blessings. to them, scientific discoveries do enjoy an indispensable role in every part of our life and society, and the past decades has witnessed dramatic changes in our county, where all p

41、eople are living a well-off life. however, still others argue that the reverse seems to be the case. the scarcity of resources, deforestation, greenhouse effect, and the list goes on, they do believe, are the aftermath of scientific discoveries. just as the proverb goes，“every coin has two sides”, t

42、here is likely some truth in both arguments. yet, personal experience and actual observation convince me that the benefits from scientific discoveries outweigh the harms.judging from all arguments offered above, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that if we can make full use of the scientific di

43、scoveries to serve our society, life and work, and meanwhile, do our utmost to avoid their side-effects, we will surely benefit tremendously from them. only when the problems attached to the scientific discoveries are well handled can we maintain a harmonious and prosperous society.with the rapid de

44、velopment of the nowadays society, there has been a strong debate on scientific discoveries, which are, virtually, of great controversy.（或：what on earth can scientific discoveries bring to us? with the rapid development of the nowadays society, there has been a strong debate on whether scientific di

45、scoveries, which are, virtually, of great controversy, are curse or blessing.）when it comes to this topic, opinions vary owing to peoples respective point of view and diverse backgrounds. most people tend to claim that scientific discoveries are of great benefit. to them, scientific discoveries not

46、only make their lives more comfortable, but also make their work more effective. whats more, it is scientific discoveries that prompt considerably the development of society. yet, still others argue that the reverse seems to be the case. scientific discoveries are , they believe ,not so optimistic .

47、 they maintain that many discoveries are employed by the evil to develop things such as weapons which have threatened peoples life and work, and the environment is ruined fiercely too. however, personal experience and actual observation convince me that scientific discoveries have advantages as well

48、 as disadvantages, just as every coin has two sides.on my part, great importance should be attached to the proper use of scientific discoveries. as long as we take advantage of the scientific discoveries to serve our society, life and work, and meanwhile, strive to avoid their side-effects, we will

49、surely benefit tremendously from them.exercise 2：directions: migrant workers (外地民工) have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities. in this part, you are to write within 40 minutes a composition of 200 words about the role of migrant workers. you can agree and/or disagree, completely or

50、partially to above statement. but no matter which position you take, you should give sound supporting reasons.as is known to all, migrant workers have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities. they are an indispensable part of our work force. most of them work on construction sites. the

51、re is no doubt that without migrant workers many of the construction projects would have to be held up for lack of manpower. in addition, a large number of migrant workers are a beneficial factor, which enhances the consumption of food and daily items. this in turn helps to develop food industry and

52、 service trades in cities. all these are positive aspects of migrant workers in cities.however, as a popular saying goes, “everything has two sides”. the same is the case with migrant workers. firstly, most of them are not well educated and professionally trained. some of them have had very little s

53、chooling. as you know, illiterate people, who are usually ignorant of the law, tend to make trouble, thus endangering social order. secondly, most of the migrant workers swarm into big cities just to make money. being illiterate or unskilled, some of them would stop at nothing to get what they are a

54、mbitious for. therefore, they are a potential threat to the peace and stability of society.in my opinion, in the appraisal of migrant workers, it is one-sided to affirm everything or to negate everything. we should appreciate the great contribution made by them, and at the same time pay enough atten

55、tion to the problems caused by them.exercise 3recently, museums in mounting numbers become admission-free to the public both home and abroad. the purpose of this practice is to offer more opportunities for citizens to explore and get easy access to the world of history, culture and knowledge。althoug

56、h free admission to museums enjoys distinct advantages, it also brings harmful effects. in the first place, these valuable cultural relics displayed may be damaged or destroyed consciously or unconsciously by the crowds. in the second place, it becomes a huge economic burden for museums to run as us

57、ual without any profits from the visitors。it is my view that free admission to museums is of utmost significance. for one thing, we should appeal to our authorities to legislate strict laws and regulations to protect these museums. for another, we should cultivate the awareness of people that museum

58、s are extremely vital to us humans. it is high time that we attached great importance to our motherlands splendid and glorious culture of more than five thousand years。nowadays, an increasing number of museums are admission-free to visitors home and abroad. the hidden reason behind this is not hard to analyze as theres a growing awareness for the authorities regarding the urgency of popularization of culture,