高中英语作文训练

1、高中英语作文训练高中英语作文训练 渭源一中：石建军 2011.10 提高英语作文成绩的提高英语作文成绩的 六种基本方法六种基本方法 一、适当地使用一些单词、词组、习语来代替一些单词，一、适当地使用一些单词、词组、习语来代替一些单词， 以增加文采，丰富语气的表现力。以增加文采，丰富语气的表现力。 1.a new building is being built in our school. 2. he pretended not to see the pretty girl. hear what i said. he turned a blind eye to the pretty girl. a

2、 deaf ear to what i said. a new building is under construction in our school. 3. it is raining heavily. 4. the prc was founded in the year 1949. it is raining cats and dogs. the year 1949 saw the foundation of the prc. 二、尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词。 1.i like reading while he likes playing football. 2. when summ

3、er comes, the day is getting longer and longer, and the night is getting shorter and shorter. i like reading while he enjoys playing football. when summer comes, the day is getting longer and longer, and the night shorter and shorter. hardworking and careful, the girl passed the test. its i who hit

4、him in the face. how glad im that you have made so much progress. 三、可适当地打破常规，用一些倒装句、强调句或三、可适当地打破常规，用一些倒装句、强调句或 感叹句感叹句,可以为文意的表达增添一点新意。可以为文意的表达增添一点新意。 1. the girl was hardworking and careful, and she passed the test. 2. i hit him in the face. 3. i am glad that you have made so much progress. 四、使用主从复合句

5、、分词、不定式等来代替简单句，四、使用主从复合句、分词、不定式等来代替简单句， 能使书面表达行文更加流畅有力。能使书面表达行文更加流畅有力。 he lay on the grass, counting the stars in the sky. in order to pass the entrance examination, we are studying hard. he lay on the grass, counting the stars in the sky. 1. he was very humorous. we all like to play with him. 2. we

6、 are studying hard in order to pass the entrance examination. 3. he lay on the grass and counted the stars in the sky. 五、改变句子开头方式，适当地把一些成份提前位五、改变句子开头方式，适当地把一些成份提前位 于句子的开头，使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏，增加于句子的开头，使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏，增加 书面表达的表现力。书面表达的表现力。 between the two buildings stood a temple, in which an old monk lived. on

7、 the surface of the river is floating the remains of tom. deep in thought, he forgot his lunch. 1. a temple stood between the two buildings , in which an old monk lived. 2. the remains of tom is floating on the surface of the river. 3. as he was deep in thought, he forgot his lunch. 六、注意语句间的衔接与连贯，可使

8、全文结构紧凑，层次清楚六、注意语句间的衔接与连贯，可使全文结构紧凑，层次清楚 过渡自然。过渡自然。 英语中的关联词语可以称之为英语中的关联词语可以称之为“篇章的纽带篇章的纽带”，这些关联，这些关联 词词 语可以是表示顺序的，如语可以是表示顺序的，如 ; ;表示时表示时 间间 的的: ; : ; 表示并列表示并列 或选择的：或选择的： ; ; 表因果的表因果的: : 等。等。 after graduation, he worked as a teacher, in a post office, he quitted his job and did business, he became a mi

9、llionaire. first, later, then,finally now, at present, in the past, during the day and, orbecause, so, thanks to later then finally first 高考英语优秀书面表达赏析高考英语优秀书面表达赏析 原题原题 假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友dickdick听说中国的中小学听说中国的中小学 正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下 面提供的信息，写一封回信，面提供的信息，写一封回

10、信，談談一一談談减负给你的学习和生活减负给你的学习和生活 带来的变化。带来的变化。 周末活动（减负前）周末活动（减负前）周末活动（减负后）周末活动（减负后） 白天：上课、做作业白天：上课、做作业白天：参加博物馆、白天：参加博物馆、 学习电脑、绘画等学习电脑、绘画等 晚上：做作业晚上：做作业晚上：看新闻、读书、晚上：看新闻、读书、 看报看报 就寝时间：就寝时间：11 11：3030就寝时间：就寝时间：1010：0000 dear dick, how nice to hear from you again. in your letter, you asked me about the reduct

11、ion of learning load in china. now, ill tell you something about it. in the past, we had lots of homework to do and had little time to do other things. even on weekends, we went to school and did homework in the daytime, and still did homework at night. i usually went to bed at 11:30, so i felt slee

12、py the next day. now, after reducing learning load, we have much more spare time. on weekends, i usually go to museums, study computer, and do some drawing and so on. at night, i often watch tv or read some books and newspapers. whats better, i go to bed at 10:00, so i no longer feel sleepy. best wi

13、shes, li hua. 书面表达 你校“英语角”下周交流的话题是“了解月球”， 请根据下面的要点提示，用英语准备一份发言稿， 简单介绍有关月球的情况，以参加会话交流。 距离距离月球距地球约月球距地球约38万公里万公里 年龄年龄大约是大约是46亿年亿年 大小大小是地球大小的是地球大小的149 引力引力月球引力只有地球的六分之一月球引力只有地球的六分之一 物质物质月球上没有水和空气月球上没有水和空气 气温气温月球上昼夜温差很大月球上昼夜温差很大 探索探索人类已登月人类已登月6次，对月球进行了一系列的科学考察，对月次，对月球进行了一系列的科学考察，对月 球有了更多的了解。球有了更多的了解。 注意

14、： 词数：120左右； 发言的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 boys and girls, its a great pleasure for me to say something about the moon here ,i hope that you will be interested in it , thanks for your listening. 对距离的表达对距离的表达 it is+数词+里程单位+fromto it is 1,500 kilometers from beijing to guangzhou. 从北京到广州有1500公里。 it is about 380,0

15、00 kilometers away from the moon to the earth. 距离距离 月球距地球约月球距地球约38万公里万公里. as you know,设置一个定语从句 it is about 380,000 kilometers away from the moon to the earth. as you know, the moon is the nearest neighbor of our globe, which is about 380,000 kilometers away from the earth. 对年龄的表达 it/he/she is - year

16、s old . lit is about 4.6 billion years old l十亿 lbillion l年龄年龄大约是大约是46亿年亿年 1/3 a (one) third 2/3 two thirds 1/4 a (one) quarter (fourth) 3/4 three quarters (fourths) 2/5 two fifths 1/49 a (one) forty-ninth times +as +adj (much/many)/adv原级原级+as times+the+n(size,height,weight,length,wid th )+of lit is

17、one forty-ninth times as big as the earth. lit is one forty-ninth times the size of the earth. l大小大小是地球大小的是地球大小的149 according to the latest study,根 据 lit is about 4.6 billion years old . lit is one forty-ninth times the size of the earth according to the latest study, its about 4 .6 billion years ol

18、d and is one forty-ninth times the size of the earth. 引力引力月球引力只有地球的六分之一月球引力只有地球的六分之一 its only one sixth of the gravity of the earth. the gravity on the moon is only one sixth times as big as the earth. 物质物质 月球上没有水和空气月球上没有水和空气 there is there is no water or air on the moon . 气温气温 月球上昼夜温差很大月球上昼夜温差很大 be

19、cause of because of the lack of water and air and its bad climate ,it is impossible for human to live there . 在白天 in the day 在晚上 at night is different the temperature is greatly different in the day and at night . the temperature in the day is greatly different from that at night . 用上 as for至于就而 言 t

20、he temperature is greatly different in the day and at night . as for the temperature, it is greatly different in the day and at night . 探索探索:人类已登月人类已登月6次，对月球进行了一系列的次，对月球进行了一系列的 科学考察，对月球有了更多的了解。科学考察，对月球有了更多的了解。 sb have done sth the human beings have already been to the moon for six times and have don

21、e a lot of scientific researches on the moon. we have known more about moon. 用上so far,到目前为止 ，再给句子加个定语从句 the human beings have already been to the moon for six times and have done a lot of scientific researches on the moon. we have known more about moon. so far , the human beings have already been to

22、 the moon for six times and have done a lot of scientific researches on the moon ,which has made us know more about moon. its a great pleasure for me to say something about the moon here, i hope that you will be interested in it . as you know, the moon is the nearest neighbor of our globe, which is

23、about 380,000 kilometers away from the earth. according to the latest study, its about 4.6 billion years old and is one forty-ninth times the size of the earth. how about its gravity? its only one sixth of the gravity of the earth .it has been proved that there is no water or air on the moon . as fo

24、r the climate, it is greatly different in the day and at night .that means it is sometimes extremely cold and sometimes terribly hot .because of the lack of water and air and its bad climate ,it is impossible for human to live there . so far , the human beings have already been to the moon for six t

25、imes and have done a lot of scientific researches on the moon ,which has made us know more about our neighbor. thanks for your listening. 书面表达（一）书面表达（一） 前几天，一些同学就英语学习现状前几天，一些同学就英语学习现状 进行了一次讨论。发现有如下问题：进行了一次讨论。发现有如下问题： 1. 对学习英语没有兴趣；对学习英语没有兴趣； 2. 记忆单词有困难；记忆单词有困难； 3. 怕出错，不敢参与小组讨论；怕出错，不敢参与小组讨论； 4. 阅读中不知如

26、何处理生词；阅读中不知如何处理生词； 5. 写作中写作中 假如你是方华，在英语学习中也遇到假如你是方华，在英语学习中也遇到 了一些类似的问题，你以邮件的形式向英了一些类似的问题，你以邮件的形式向英 语报社的编辑语报社的编辑(bob)咨询，希望得到帮助咨询，希望得到帮助。 要求：要求： 1. 提出三个英语学习中的问题；提出三个英语学习中的问题； 2. 可以参考以上提示，也可以根据可以参考以上提示，也可以根据 自己实际适当发挥；自己实际适当发挥； 3. 中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰 书写规范；书写规范； 4. 不少于不少于80词，词， 5. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总

27、词数。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 dear bob, im very pleased to write to you, _ _ _ _ _ yours, fang hua dear bob, im very pleased to write to you, i know youre an expert in english learning.ive so many problems to trouble you now. english is so difficult that i nearly want to give it up! in english class i cant f

28、ollow my teacher because of the poor listening. also i cant remember the words clearly. although i spend much time on it, i still cant use words in the right way. whats worse, when i read english, i am often trapped in the unknown words. it stops me from receiving the main information. you can imagi

29、ne what the result of my english learning is! those worry me a lot. what should i do? would you please help me? i will be very grateful to get your reply. yours, fang hua 书面表达（二）书面表达（二） 假设你是张林。近段时间，你读了许多有关洪战辉假设你是张林。近段时间，你读了许多有关洪战辉 的感人故事，还听了他的报告。你很想把他的事迹告的感人故事，还听了他的报告。你很想把他的事迹告 诉远在美国的笔友诉远在美国的笔友alex。请

30、根据下表内容写一封信。请根据下表内容写一封信 （或发一个邮件）。（或发一个邮件）。 姓名姓名 洪战辉洪战辉 年龄年龄 24 情况情况 介介 绍绍 1出生于一个贫困家庭。出生于一个贫困家庭。 2小时候，母亲因生活困苦离家。小时候，母亲因生活困苦离家。 3照顾弟弟、领养的妹妹照顾弟弟、领养的妹妹(adopted sister)和生病的父亲。和生病的父亲。 4带妹妹上大学，生活艰难，学习刻苦，课余工作。带妹妹上大学，生活艰难，学习刻苦，课余工作。 5谢绝他人帮助。谢绝他人帮助。 要求：要求：(1)语言规范，格式正确，并发表个人感想；语言规范，格式正确，并发表个人感想； (2)信中不可用真实姓名，只能

31、用所给姓名；信中不可用真实姓名，只能用所给姓名； (3)词数词数60一一80； (4)开头已给出，不计入总词数。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 dear alex, hows it going? id like to tell you something about hong zhanhui, a great chinese boy. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ yours, zhang lin dear alex, hows it going? id like to tell you something, about hong zhanhui. a great chinese boy

32、. hong zhanhui is a 24-year-old college student. he was born in a poor family. hongs mother left home because of the hard life when he was very young. so he had to take care of his brother, his young adopted sister and his sick father. he took his sister to the college with him. hong studies hard an

33、d works after class. life is difficult, but he refuses others help. hong has done so much for his family. dont you think we should learn from him? yours, zhang lin 书面表达（三）书面表达（三） 根据中文提示，写出相应的英语，根据中文提示，写出相应的英语，50-60个词左右。个词左右。 我们学校是一所乡村学校，我们学校是一所乡村学校， 它建于它建于3年前。现在校年前。现在校 内有两幢建筑物，内有两幢建筑物， 一幢是教学楼（一幢是教学楼

34、（teaching building）, 另一幢是个图书馆。在它们的前面有一个运动场。每年另一幢是个图书馆。在它们的前面有一个运动场。每年 春天春天, 我们在学校周围种上很多树，在花园里种上一些花。我们在学校周围种上很多树，在花园里种上一些花。 我们的学校越来越漂亮了。我们的学校越来越漂亮了。 our school is a village school. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ our school is a village school. it was built three years ago. now there are two buildings in it. o

35、ne is a teaching building, the other is a library. in front of them there is a playground. every spring, we plant many trees around our school and grow some flowers in our school garden. our school becomes more and more beautiful. 书面表达（四）书面表达（四） 情景设定：学校运动会正在进行之中。校广播台情景设定：学校运动会正在进行之中。校广播台 “荣辱广角镜荣辱广角镜

36、”栏目小记者萧鸣看到了下面两组镜头。栏目小记者萧鸣看到了下面两组镜头。 镜头一：男子接力比赛最后一棒，二班王强同学镜头一：男子接力比赛最后一棒，二班王强同学 跌倒受伤，仍然坚持跑到了终点。跌倒受伤，仍然坚持跑到了终点。 镜头二：赛场周围，有部分同学说笑嬉闹，还将镜头二：赛场周围，有部分同学说笑嬉闹，还将 剩余的饮食和废弃物随手乱扔。假设你是萧鸣，请你剩余的饮食和废弃物随手乱扔。假设你是萧鸣，请你 从上面两组镜头中任选一组，并根据其内容为校广播从上面两组镜头中任选一组，并根据其内容为校广播 台写一篇台写一篇80词左右的短讯。词左右的短讯。 要求：要求：1.确定并围绕所选镜头进行表达，短讯内确定并

37、围绕所选镜头进行表达，短讯内 容应给予情景想象和细节扩展；容应给予情景想象和细节扩展； 2.对所选的镜头要有个人观点，提出表扬、对所选的镜头要有个人观点，提出表扬、 倡议或批评、建议；倡议或批评、建议； 3.词数词数80词左右，开始语已给出（不计入词数）。词左右，开始语已给出（不计入词数）。 提示词语：（镜头一）提示词语：（镜头一）last lap, fall, hurt, get up, go on, shout, give up, highly, (镜头二镜头二)out of, talk, laugh, waste, play, take part in, environment。 sch

38、ool sports meeting was still going on _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ reported by xiao ming writing: (one possible version) scene one: it was the last lap of the boys 100-metre race! all the runners were trying their best to run fast. suddenly, wang qiang, the runner from class 2, fell and hurt his le

39、g. but he didnt give up. instead, he got up and went on running to the finishing line. all the teachers and students shouted “come on!” to him and spoke highly of him. i think we should learn from wang qiangnever give up, and try our best to do well in everything. (85 words) scene two: but out of the playground, a few of the students were talking and laughing loudly. some students were even playing cards under the trees. it seemed that the sports meeting had nothing to do with them. some food