2017-2018学年高中英语 UnitComputers Section Ⅴ Writing-想象类作文教学案 2

1、学必求其心得，业必贵于专精unit 3 computers section writing-想象类作文想象类作文是作者根据已有的生活经验和知识，超越现实生活来勾画出从未见过或者不曾出现过的生活图景的文章。一、基本结构想象类作文可分为三段:首段，进行概述；中间部分,具体描述；结尾，对文章进行总结。二、增分佳句1my ideal robot in the future will be like .and .。or perhaps it will help me 。.。2my ideal robot in the future is called .。3he/she does all the wor

2、k around the house。4he/she is very patient and never complains .5he/she can be with me whenever i feel lonely。6my ideal robot in the future can work as/serve as/be used as 。.。7great changes will take place in the future。8i believe our dream will come true some day。9have you ever thought about .。 in

3、the next 30 or 50 years?10in addition, there will be super computers or robots which can help us do 。.。 题目要求你们班进行了一次关于未来机器人的讨论。作为你们小组的代表，请你以“my ideal robot in the future”为题写一篇英语短文，向同学们介绍你心目中的理想机器人。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为说明文;2确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3确定时态：本文的主要时态应用一般现在时态。二、构思开头：对我理想的机器人进行总体说明。主体：对我理想的机器人

4、的形态、功能作细致描述。结尾：再次概括评价。第二步：核心词汇想周全1look_like看上去像2remind_sb._of_sth.提醒某人某事3feel_lonely感到孤独4emotion情绪5share_the_joys_and_sorrows分享快乐和痛苦第三步：由词扩句雏形现开头:总体说明1我未来理想的机器人是个漂亮的小女孩，她是蓝色的，身高一米六。my ideal robot in the future is a beautiful little girl, and she_is_blue_and_ about_1.6_metres_tall。主体：描述形态、功能用途2她是世界上最

5、新的,并且看上去像一个真正的女孩。she is the newest in the world， and she looks_like_a_real_girl.3她很聪明,并且能懂我所说的全部，能做我让她做的事。she is very clever, and can understand all i say and do what_i_ask_her_to_do.4不管我什么时候遇到困难，她都可以帮助我写作业并给我一些建议。she can help_me_with_my_homework and give me some_advice_whenever_i_meet_with_difficul

6、ties.5她能提醒我任何重要的事，比如:考试，甚至是我的生日。she can remind_me_of_anything_important，_such as exams and even my birthday。6她干的家务最多且不用休息。she does the most of the housework without_having_a_rest。7有了这样的机器人，我就不会再感到孤独，因为不管我什么时候需要,她都能给我唱歌，还会和我一起跳舞。with such a robot， i wont_feel_lonely_any_longer because she can sing an

7、d dance to me whenever_i_need。8她会和我一起打网球，并能用话语和手势表达她的感情。她也会分享我的快乐与痛苦。she can play_tennis_with_me and can express her emotions with words and gestures. she shares my joys and sorrows as_well。结尾：再次概括评价9在将来拥有这样一个机器人一定会很有趣。it will be very interesting to_own_such_a_robot in the future.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用非限制性定语

8、从句改写句1my_ideal_robot_in_the_future_is_a_beautiful_little_girl，_who_is_blue_and_about_1.6_metres_tall。2用反问句改写句9wouldnt_it_be_very_interesting_to_own_such_a_robot_in_the_future?第五步：过渡衔接联成篇my ideal robot in the futuremy_ideal_robot_in_the_future_is_a_beautiful_little_girl，_who_is_blue_and_about_1.6_met

9、res_tall。she_is_the_newest_in_the_world，_and_it_looks_like_a_real_girl。_she_is_very_clever，_and_can_understand_all_i_say_and_do_what_i_ask_her_to_do。_she_can_help_me_with_my_homework_and_give_me_some_advice_whenever_i_meet_with_difficulties。_she_can_remind_me_of_anything_important，_such_as_exams_and_even_my_birthday._she_does_the_most_of_the_housework_without_having_a_rest._with_such_a_robot，_i_wont_feel_lonely_any_longer_because_she_can_sing_and_dance_to_me_whenever_i_need._she_can_play_tennis_with_me_and_can_express_her_emotions_with_words_and_gestures._she_shares_my_joys_and_sorrows_as