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1、读写任务谈论文写作高分技巧读写任务谈论文写作高分技巧一、读写任务谈论文写作框架任务型写作是 “有法可依的,只要明白和把握其写作框架,就能保证不离题,从而获得比拟高的分数;下面就谈论文写作模式或框架谈谈详细的操作方法;一、确定标题不管好坏,肯定要有标题,标题是文章的点睛之处;依据所给材料和所规定 的论题或要点确立自己论述的内容或观点后进行命题;命题要表达整篇文章议 论的中心;如: opinions towards fast food; is failure a bad thing. learn frommistakes 等;二、进行概括概括文章要点,要语言要精炼,概括要全面,行文连贯,表达精确;

2、谈论文那么用自己的话表达论点、论据和结论;概括经常用的句式有:1. this article deals with / discusses / analyzes/ strongly emphasizes 2. this article not only describes but also suggests 3. this article compares and summarizes key findings4. this article gives an account of / provides an analysis of / provides a method of 5. this

3、article reports the news on6. the problem of sth. is discussed in the passage. most people think that., but7. this article shows / tells us that 8. the author finds it necessary to 9. the author holds the idea that,giving it an example of sb. who 观点+例证10. the author strongly emphasizes the benefits

4、of doing, suchas观点: 什么的什么+例证三、自然过渡写完概括后,用句恰当的过渡语引出自己的观点反对或赞成;过渡语起承上启下的作用,使文章显得自然、连贯;常用的过渡句式有:1. the story is so instructive that after reading it i cant help beginning to think more about.2. in some way, i agree with ,but 3. this idea/point about. sounds right, but i think that it is more important

5、to do somrthing than.4. however, i think 5. i definitelybelieve第 15页6. in my opinion,7. personally, i feel that 8. as far as im concerned, 9. i cant agree more with the father/./. such cases are often seen in our life.10. attitudes towards are various.11. the passage reminds me of my experience. whe

6、n i was.12. the passage reminds me of what i experienced when i did sth.13. i have the same opinion as the author. i hold the view that 观点.14.i do agree with the author 四、列举例证提出自己的观点后就要用详细的事例来论证自己的观点;常用的句式有:1. firstly , secondly, thirdly,finally2. on the one hand, on the other hand, 3. for one thing

7、 andfor another 4. furthermore/besides/in addition,5. some think ,while others may .五、总结点题总结句约 30 词, .进一步总结作者的观点,提出详细做法或号召,升华文章的主题;可以用套语配名言来点题,并留意文章前后照料;常用的句式有:1. in conclusion, 2. in short, 3. in a word, 4. in general, 5. all in all,6. all these things considered, 7. to sum up, 8. therefore, 六、最终一段

8、,得出结论;可以有三种方式:重复中心思想,回到文章开头提出的中心思想或主题上,到达再次确定和强调的成效;引用;用格言或名人名言总结全文,既言简意赅,又有较强的说服力;得出结论;文章最终用几句话概括全文内容,并进一步确定文章的中心思想或作者观点;2021 周报 17 期第 8 版下文是 “归纳式的写作方法,是先列举事例,或论据,最终得出结论;读写任务,假如是谈论文,正文的最终往往需要类似这样的结论,回应文章观点论点;give students a chance to grow.do you mold them for one of a thousand patterns. let them se

9、ek knowledge, but do not find it for them. on them. let them take their own time to grow; donot set rigid/ stiff time schedules. most of all, do not push them against a stone wall, crushing them with knowledge gained from the experience of others. let them learn patience; do not force it.experience

10、cannot be taught; it must come slowly through personal search.在这个段落中 ,主题句先不显现 ,而是先举出很多详细的experiences,在段落结尾时才予以 归纳, 得出中心结论 : experience cannot be taught; it must come slowly through personal search.这样的段落结构一开头简单使读者产生悬念,从而收到特别的表达成效七、实例分析阅读下面短文,然后依据要求写一篇150 词左右的英语短文;the generation gap between students a

11、nd their teachers is becoming more significant with only 3. 3 per cent out of a survey group of 1, 000 students from 30 key middle schools in the city saying they would be willing to tell their teachers of their inner thoughts.in today esducational environment, teachers are positioned to be the auth

12、ority figure for learning instead of also becoming a good friend in the lives of students.as only students with good marks in exams are considered the“ applesin the eyes of the teachers, most students think their teachers to be partial偏心.“ifeel sad to hear such remarks, said yu yi, a well-known spec

13、ial-class teacher.she recalled that in the past, teachers and students would play basketball together or comment on novels while sitting on the grass during a break. but today, study and good marks are the only topics of conversation between students and teachers.“ schoolsare not only the place wher

14、e knowledge is imparted 传授 but also where students are taught how to be an upright person, yu said. “ thesuccessof a person is not merely determined by intelligence but also by emotional state.yang xiong, director of the juvenile research institute, said the educational system which focuses on exami

15、nations should be held to be substantially responsible.写作内容 1. 以约 30 个词概括同学不愿告知老师内心想法的缘由;2. 然后以约 120 个词就 “现代师生关系这个主题发表你的看法, 并包括如下要点:(1) 你是否情愿告知老师你内心的想法?为什么?(2) 你期望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的?如何才能建立这种关系? 写作要求 (1) 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子;(2) 标题自定;(3) 文中不能显现考生真实姓名和学校名称评分标准 概括精确、语言标准、内容相宜、篇章

16、连贯;套用写作模板进行写作:1. 拟出标题: love and concern make ideal relationship2. 进行概括: students are becoming unwilling to confess to their teachers because they are not equal in position and teachers lay too much emphasis on the academic performances of the students.3. 自然过渡;答复 “你是否情愿告知老师你内心的想法,给出观点情愿或不情愿,直截了当, 一语概

17、之;如“我情愿告知老师我的内心想法; while some students might have doubts, i am willing to share my inner thoughts with myteachers.4. 列举例证;答复“为什么, 给出一两个理由;they show love and concern for their students and they are also good listeners. i always find it easy to seek support and advice from them, from which i benefit a

18、nd learn a lot.5. 答复“你期望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的, 可以是 “重要的, 和谐的, 伴侣式的等等; in this case, an ideal relationship between teachers andstudents is very important. in my opinion, this relationship should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which teachers and students show respect for each other and

19、exchange ideas freely.6. 答复“如何才能建立这种关系,即师生双方应当如何做;to build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to place more trust in their teachers and give voice to their feelings frankly.7. 总结;如可说 “只有这样,我们才能拥有和谐的师生关系;only in this way can we enjoy a warm re

20、lationship between teachers and students.全文整理如下:love and concern make ideal relationshipstudents are becoming unwilling to confess to their teachers because they are not equal in position and teachers lay too much emphasis on the academic performances of the students.while some students might have d

21、oubts, i am willing to share my inner thoughts with my teachers. they show love and concern for their students and are good listeners. i always find it easy to seek support and advice from them, from which i benefit and learn a lot.in this case, an ideal relationship between teachers and students is

22、 very important. in my opinion, this relationship should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which teachers and students show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. to build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to pla

23、ce more trust in their teachers and give voice to their feelings frankly. only in this way can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students.二、读写任务谈论文写作高分技巧一阅读下面这篇短文,按要求写一篇150 词左右的英语短文;no one can believe that the over 6,300-kilometer great wall might disappear some day. believe it or no

24、t, the great wall is being destroyed by people. less than 20 percent of the great wall built in the ming dynasty is still perfect, butabout 80 percent is in danger. the great wall can be called“ greatmostlybecause of its amazing length. but we should realize that the length was made up of one brick

25、at a time. if we do nothing to save the great wall, it will become a series of separate wasteland rather than a historic site.the great wall is actually a series of walls built and rebuilt by different dynasties over the past 2,000 years. it began in the rule of chinas first emperor, qin shihuang of

26、 the qin dynasty 221 bc206 bc, and lasted into the ming dynasty. the parts built before the ming dynasty have nearly disappeared. the bricks on the great wall are carried off by countryside people to build theirhouses, sheep corrals and pigsties. some were taken away to build roads. bricks carved wi

27、th people nsames are put away as remembrances. rubbish is spread over the battlements. the bricks can be sold for 15 yuan per tractor load. those who destroyed and are destroying the wall know its name, but are not clear about its cultural meaning. it will take a long time to let them know this. the

28、local farmers not only carried off the body of the wall but also dug out the entire base.写作内容 1) 以约 30 个词概括短文的要点;2) 然后以约 120 个词就 “如何爱护我国的文化遗产的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:a) 你是如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象的? b爱护文化遗产有何意义;c爱护我国的文化遗产的建议;注:因 写作要求 评分标准 与第一篇相同而省略,以下同 写作指导 (1) 确定体裁:阅读材料,可以明白到万里长城目前由于种种缘由遭到了破坏, 并以小见大,引发对我国其它历史文化遗产爱

29、护的必要,要求写一篇谈论文;(2) 拟定标题: how to protect the cultural heritages in our country?(3) 如何概括:找出论点 great wall might disappear some day 和论据 the great wall is being destroyed by people: to build their houses, sheep corrals and pigsties; to build roads; sold for 15 yuan per tractor load ;用自己的话将上述论点和论据表达出来;(4)

30、发表看法:提出问题并加以分析:如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象,并分析其产生的根源;问题的支持:写爱护文化遗产有何意义;问题的解决:提出爱护我国文化遗产的详细措施;参考范文一 how to protect the cultural heritages in our country?the great wall is one of the seven wonders of the world and a symbol of the ancient chinese civilization, but now it is in danger and some day it may disappe

31、ar because of some local peoples destroy.what a pity !as we can see,some other valuable and important relics in our country have been destroying as well. why are some people doing that so foolishly ?because the local people are not aware of their importance. culturalheritages are left to us by our a

32、ncestors and are also symbols of their wisdoms, which played a very important role in history.how should we protect our cultural heritages. in my opinion, firstly, we should make some people who lack of cultural knowledge know about the importance of the historic relics. destroying them means destro

33、ying ourselves. secondly, the government should take some measures to protect them, and if necessary, laws will be made to punish those who destroy them on purpose. only in this way can we make our history richer and richer.二阅读下面的短文,然后依据要求写一篇150 词左右的英语短文;you must have heard stress contributes to 80%

34、 of major illness and is responsible for 75% to 90% ofdoctor vsisits. but that nsot stress; it dsistress. “ stressis the only anti-aging agent we know ofthe exact opposite of what we think, says psychologist james e. loehr.what really brings happiness is meeting obstacles and overcoming them. the da

35、mage occurs when stress levels never go down. a recent study showed it took nine days longer for the constantly stressed family caregivers of chronically慢性地 ill patients to heal from wounds than it took other people the same age. stressis essential. life without it would be like having a brand-new c

36、herry-red porsche and driving it only in the driveway.写作内容 1) 以约 30 个词概括短文的要点;2) 然后以约 120 个词就 “你如何看待压力的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点: a你是如何看待压力的?b在你的学习或生活中压力是否大?如何正视压力? 写作指导 (1) 扼要概括:本文的论点、论据、结论;论点stress is the only anti-aging agent we know of论据distress contributes to 80% of major illness and is responsible for 75

37、% to 90% of doctor vsisits.结论stress would bring you happiness.用自己的话表达:论点stress is not an obstacle but a power in our life, it is good for us to stay young.论据和结论 according to the study, we know that stress is necessary in our life, which can motivate us to go ahead.(2) 构思经受:作者认为压力是抗衰老的有效药剂,生活的真正欢乐来源于

38、压力赐予我们的不断的动力;因此,可以介绍我们在平常学习中是如何将压力变为动力,及如何正视压力;二 stress keeps you youngthe passage tells us that stress is not an obstacle but a power of success in your life. whatsmore, it is good for us to stay young. according to the study, we know that stress is necessary in our life, which can motivate us to g

39、o ahead.everyone is affected by stressful situations. how to manage your stress. i hold the same view with the author: stress is essential and we should be lucky to be together with it. as for me, i am keen on studying and enjoy the stress from study now. once upon a time, i was discouraged because

40、of too much stress fromheavy study task. later, i found the key to taking stress head-on is being relaxed. the better you relax, the better mood you can get from study.dontbe pessimistic when stress comes into view, maybe it asturning point in your life.三阅读下面的短文,然后依据要求写一篇150 词左右的英语短文;scientists find

41、 that hard-working people live longer than average men and women. career women are healthier than housewives. evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders. a study shows that whenever the employment rate increases by 1%, the death rate increasecorrespondingly 相应地 by 2%.

42、all this comes down to one point: work ishelpful to health.why is work good for health. it is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing to do. instead, the happiest are those who are busy.work serves as a

43、 bridge between man and reality. by work, people come into contact with each other. by collective activities, they find friendship and warmth. this is helpful to health. the loss of work means the loss of everything. it affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease.besides, work gives one

44、a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement. work makes one feel his value and status in society. when a writer finishes his writing or teacher sees his students grow, they are happy beyond words.写作内容 1) 以约 30 个词概括短文的要点;2) 然后以约 120 个词就 “努力学习,欢乐生活的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:a) 你赞同 “努力学习也可以欢乐生活这一观点吗?为什么? b举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的? c简述如何才能做到努力学习并欢乐生活?写作要求 (1) 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子;(2) 标题自定;评分标准 概括精确,语言标准,内容相宜,篇章连贯;写作指导 1拟定标题:依据谈论的主题及写作内容确定标题:study hard and enjoy yourselves;3扼要概括:找出谈论文的根本要素,然后用自己的话表达出来;论点观点work is helpful to health论证理由a. work keeps people busy, away

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