北京中考英语作文分类精华篇

1、中考作文集锦1. 作文写作思路中考常考问题及形式：1. 中考作文常见文体：夹叙夹议2. 中考作文常见形式：写回信；中英提示写作，话题类作文。写作原那么：1231原那么1句问候，2句概括来信中的问题，3条建议及建议原因，1句祝福 3. 写作能力之外的得分因素：字迹、分段4. 写作注意以下几点：防止使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。注意长短句交错，几种句型可交替使用，以防止重复和呆板长短句交错使用注意：应突出主题句；长句子并非越长越好。【阅卷关注】阅卷关注哪几点一一一、要点：全部图片或问题要点决定分/语言准确；二、单词：提示词语全用上+单词拼写字数达标/标点符号和大小写/ fourteen

2、等数 字;三、 语法：高级多用句型/适当加点谚语+语法出错三单、时态、防止 Chinglish ；四、 卷面：书写标准过渡词可使上下文连贯+不要求漂亮但要求工整。作文分类击破【一、写人记事类】感恩/感谢朋友老师父母、难忘经历、微笑、鼓励、毕业感想、暑期方案等【01参考范文-适用于感恩/感谢、难忘经历、最喜欢的老师/朋友等：】Mylife in middle school will cometo the end soon. During the past three years, my English teacher gave me so muchhelp that I will never f

3、orget her.I was not good at English, I tried my best to learn it but Icouldn tget good grades, so I decided to give it up. My En glish teacher knew that, she not only encouraged meto go on learning but also helped mewith myEnglish after class. With her help, I made great progress.I was moved by her

4、and I was really tha nkful to her. Now I feel morecon fide nt tha n before. I msure I can lear n En glish very well in the future.【02参考范文-适用于难忘的学校活动，、鼓励、合作、坚持不懈的精神等：】During the three years, our school has held various activities, among which the activity of climbi ng Xian gsha n leaves me the deepes

5、t memory.Last term, my classmates and I had a school trip to Xiangshan Park. There, we were divided into groups and the first group that topped the mountain would win a big prize. Our group tried our best to climb as quickly as possible. But soon I felt dizzy and was out of breath. Noticing this, my

6、 teammates came to me immediately. Some of them gave me can dies so that I could get more en ergy. Others carried the bag for me so that I could climb the mou ntai n easily “ You can do it! every one en couraged me. At thatmoment, I felt deeply movedand really powerful. At last, we were the first to

7、 top the moun ta in.This activity not only gave us a chance to keep our body fit and enjoy the beautifulscenery, but also let mefeel the power of teamwork. A unitedgroup can bring us warmth and stre ngth and can lead us to success.【03参考范文-感恩父母：】There s no doubt that parents have given me a lot since

8、 I was born. With their care, I grow up happily. So I think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude.Both of myparents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. Last Sun day, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we wer

9、e having dinner together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best en courageme nt for me. I made up my mind to do thi ngs like this more ofte n.【04

10、参考范文-帮助他人、志愿活动：】I think helping others is important and necessary. Taking part in volunteer work is one of the greatest ways to give a hand to those who n eed help. And I like it very much.I remember I helped the old people in the old people s homelast Saturday. First, I cleaned the room and the win

11、dows for them because it was not convienient for them to do such thins. What s more, I told them someinteresting stories, sang some English songs for them and they moved to tears. When it was time to say goodbye, I hugged them and promised to see them aga in.Every one may have trouble in life and ou

12、r little kind act can make a big differe ncein their life. In fact, helping others is helping ourselves. I will do the same in the future because it can bring me and other people happ in ess.【05参考范文-喜欢的hobby、活动：】It is good to learn about your school activities. Now I ll tell you aboutmine.At my scho

13、ol we have many fun activities to take part in. We have swimming, basketball, badminton, and ping pong. Myfavorite activity is basketball. I play with my friends every day after school. Basketball is a team sport where team-mates pass the ball to each other to throw it into a hoop for points. The te

14、am with the most poi nts at the end of the game wins. In basketball it is good to be tall because it is easier to score poin ts.I like to play basketball because it is a team sport and it is also a good way to get exercise. Basketball is also a good game to lear n how to work well with others.【06参考范

15、文-Hobby、读书类：】I have great interest in reading magazines because I like reading manykinds of articles in them, such stories, n ews, scie nee, jokes and so on. The stories give me life lessons, the jokes makeme laugh and the news keep me knowing what hape ns around me. I can get lots of in formatio n

16、as well as enjoy a lot of beautiful pictures in the magaz in es.I enjoy read ing magaz ines because they can not only help me study better and but also make me relaxed and happy every day.【二、给予建议类】建议类作文写作思路1231一句问候、两句问题第一段：很快乐收到来信针对问题答复或体谅别人的感受主动提出给别人建议第二段：3条具体建议及原因第三段：提出希望和祝愿开头句：表达同情理解+主动提建议I under

17、stand your feelings because I once had the similar problem as you do now.It s very commorfor students to do sth. and manystudents have the sameproblem like you.Let me?offer?you?some?useful?advice.Here s my advice.My suggesti ons are as follows.建议类句型：? You are supposed to do.? Youd better do .? Why n

18、ot/ dont you do.? Its a good idea to do.? If I were you, I would do.结尾句：? I hope what I said can be of some help to you.? Just have a try. I m looking forward to hearing good news from you!? Try your best, and youll make great progress!【07学习类-参考范文：】Dear Lucy,I m very happy to hear from you. Don t wo

19、rry too much. It s very com mon for students to dislikememorizing and many students have the sameproblem likeyou. Here s my advice.First of all, you had better preview the new lessons and write down thedifficult poi nts before less ons, which can make you become in terested in whatthe teachers say i

20、n class. What s more (Besides), you should listen carefully and try to take part in the class activities. You ll find that English andhistory are not as bori ng as you thi nk. Last but not least, you also n eed to review the lessons regularly after class. In this way, you can understand better and m

21、emorize more quickly. If you still feel unhappy, why not have a talk with your teacher and ask for help?I really hope my advice can help you make great progress with your study.Yours,Zhang Fang【08解决与父母矛盾-参考范文：】Dear Alice,As a tee nager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get on/ along bett

22、er with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.First of all, whenyou to keep calm in stead of arguing with your pare nts, which can only makethi ngs worse. Whats more, to solve the problems, youd better make a schedule, set up a goal for each day and show them to your pare nts. Besides, we are suppo

23、sedto try to have a heart-to-heart com muni cati on with our pare nts in order to get their understanding and support. Last but not least, why not ask your teacher for help in stead of argu ing with your pare nts? Your teacher may have some good ideas.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.【09运动/

24、健康类-参考范文：】All of us want to be healthy. But some of the stude nts/people ofte n have a cold. Wesometimes have a fever and feel tired. In order to have a healthy body, we can do many thin gs.First of all, we should pay attention to our diet or meals. We should eat more fruit and vegetable to keep our

25、selves healthy and strong. What s more,we should often wash our hands and open the windows to keep the air in the room fresh. Then, we n eed eno ugh sleep or rest. Stay ing up too late is bad for our health. Last but not least, its also a good habit for us to do more sports, such as playing ball gam

26、es, running, swimming and so on. Because it can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illness.In a word, if we all do these thin gs, I believe we will have a strong body.So why not find some frie nds to do exercise and have fun together? I hope you are healthy and enjoy your

27、life.【三、环保类】【10治理空气污染-参考范文：】The air pollution is worse and worse today. Not only does it affect the place we live, it also has a great in flue nee on our health. Therefore, it s time for us to pay more attention to it.The firstthi ng we can do is to take buses or ride bikes in stead of driv ingpriva

28、te cars. It helps to reduce the dirty gas produced by the cars. What smore, we can plant more trees and flowers because they can provide us with more fresh air. Last but no t least, our gover nment can also take actions to preve nt factories from produci ng too much smoke.In fact, even the simplest

29、everyday activities can makea real differenee to the environment.I believe as long as we try our best to protect theenvironment, we can make the world a better place to live in.【11低碳生活-参考范文：】Nowadays, a new lifestyle called low carb on life is spread ing every corner of our country which means there

30、 is low en ergy and no waste.Low-carb on life is good for every one. To help with the en vir onmen t, I have someideas. First, we had better walk or ride a bike to school in stead of tak ing a car. Sec ond, we had better not use plastic bags any more. No one can sta nd the white pollution.So, it is

31、wise to use bags which can be reused again andaga in. Third, we should try to use things that can be recycled and we should reuse books as long as possible. Whats more, we should n ever forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time.I think it s our duty to live a

32、low-carbon life. And even the simplestactivities can makea real differe nee to the en vir onment. All in all, if every one does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place. Let s do it now.【四、介绍北京类】【12介绍北京旅游-参考范文：】I m glad to hear from you. The best time to come to Beij

33、ing is during thespring. The weather is not too hot or too cold, so it is the perfect time ofthe year to be outside. During the spring in Beijing everything seems fresh and n ew.I advise you to visit the Summer Palace, the Great Wall, and the Temple of Heave n. The Great Wall is one of the won ders

34、of the world and it is an amaz ing place to visit. The summer Palace and The Temple of Heave n are beautiful too. There are royal buildings, fantastic artwork, and scenic views for people to enjoy.Before you come to Beijing, you should know that Beijing is a very crowdedand big city. So it is necess

35、ary for you to travel with a map and you must bepatient about waiting in line or large crowds.I hope you will have a nice trip.【13介绍北京-参考范文：】Our country has a long history, and Beiji ng, the capital of Chin a, is oneof the largest cities in the world. There are many places of interests, such as the

36、Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world.Now, people pay more atte ntio n to the en vir onment. More trees and flowershave bee n pla nted. For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travelaround Beiji ng, because several ne

37、w subway lines have bee n built. If you cometo Beiji ng, you willfind people here are very frie ndlyandhelpful/warm-hearted. Besides, a lot of people can speak English. Whats more, there are a lot of fun you can do. Beijing opera is famous in the world, notonly Chinese but also foreigners like it. B

38、eijing duck and dumplings are popular in China, and many foreigners like them too. Beijing is really an attractivecity with a long history. I am proud of being a Chinese.rm look ing forward to heari ng from you soon.【五、暑期方案类】【14参考范文-暑期方案：】My Summer Holiday Pla nAfter three years of study, I feel hap

39、py but very tired. Now I show youmy summer holiday pla n.First I will have a trip with my pare nts. My pare nts say I should relaxmyself in the sea with someof our friends. Then I ll exercise as usual to keep healthy and read some books. I thi nk read ing books is a good hobby because we can get use

40、ful information for both work and study. And I will help my parents do some housework, such as cook ing, shopp ing and clea ning.A good pla n can make our holidays meanin gful and in terest in g/colorful.I m looking forward to the camp. I believe it must be excitingand will helpme a lot on my way as

41、 I grow up.I hope I will have a good time in the coming vacation.【15参考范文-暑期方案和志愿活动结合：】The summer vacation is coming and all students have made great plans, such as learning English, reading books, going traveling and so on. We can t waitto hug it.As for me, I amgoing to volunteer my time to help oth

42、ers. First, I amgoing to visit an old people s hometo cheer them up. I amgood at singing and dancing, so I can put this love to good use by spending time with these elders. Helping childre n with their En glish at an after-school teachi ng cen ter is also a good choice for me. English has always bee

43、n my favorite subject and I am among the best English learners in myclass. Not only can I take the chanee to do something meanin gful, but I can improve my own En glish by teach ing others. I am sure I will have a busy and won derful win ter vacatio n.If you have more questi ons, please ask me.【六、其他

44、类】【15参考范文-做家务类：】Nowadaysmanystudents say they are too busy with their study and they don t have time to help their parents with the housework. I don t think they are true, that s all excuses.In myop inion, doing somehousework such as wash ing our own clothes and making the bed can make us in depe nd

45、ent and we can take care of ourselves better whe n we grow up. Shari ng the housework is helpful for us to set up good relati on ship with our parents. On weekdays, I often help myparents clean my bed rooms every morning and wash dishes after supper. At weekends, washing clothes and mopping the floor is my duty. And I also help myparents carry something heavy from the supermarket.As the saying goes ，One cant make a big success without being self reliant,so I think that stude n