2014届高考英语一轮写作综合训练8

1、2014届高考英语一轮写作综合训练8第一节 完成句子 阅读下列各小题，根据括号内的汉语提示，用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子。1. water, which seems so simple and common, is_（使生命成为可能的东西）(make)2. the summer palace _（被参观）by so many tourists that some of the relics are not well protected.（visit)3. _（多么激动人心的消息啊）it is that china successfully launched chang e i，the lun

2、ar orbiter！（news)4. _（考虑到各种情况）,the plan john put forward seems to be more practical.（take)5. the baby was given up for adoption_（刚出生）(immediately)6. it is_（丢失他的新mp4) makes him look so upset. (lose)7. you dont have to feel thankful to me, for all i did was_（说了我该说的）（say)8. a healthy diet should includ

3、e a variety of food, _（大部分富含）nutrients.（rich) 9. up into the sky _（淡蓝色的烟升起）just now. (go)10. xu sanduos wonderful performance has inspired many people to believe that success and happiness in life_（人人伸手可及）(reach)2013高考英语考前冲刺：书面表达高级句型锁定（1）1.我想我尽量少浪费你的时间。误：i think im going to waste your time as less a

4、s possible.正：i think im going to take up your time as less as possible. 分析： “浪费你的时间”实际上是“占用你的时间”的委婉说法，并不是真的去“浪费”。waste是指实实在在的浪费，并且有故意浪费的意思。2. 有困难请找警察。误：please look for the police if you have problems.正：please contact the police if you have problems.分析： “找警察”不是“寻找警察”，而是“与警察取得联系”，故look for与find都不妥。3.

5、旅行能开阔我们的视野。误：travel can open our horizon.正：travel can broaden our horizon.分析： “开阔视野”在英语里应该是widen/broaden/expand sb.s horizon,动词不能用open。4. 在没来这儿之前我已经学了三年英语了。误：i had learned english for three years before i didnt come here.正：i had learned english for three years before i came here.分析：很明显，错句受了汉语思维的影响。“

6、在没来这儿之前”和“在来这儿之前”在汉语里都是对的，而英语里用before i came。he had left before i came.我还没到他就走了。或：他在我来之前就已离开了。take the book before i change my mind.在我没改变主意之前，把书拿走吧。5. 他的足球玩得非常好，没有人能够赢他。误：he plays football very good, no one can win him.正：he plays football so well that no one can beat him.分析：汉语中的因果关系非常明确，用英语表达时，要用so.

7、that来表达此逻辑关系。win是指在比赛或战斗中“赢得或获得胜利”，其宾语多为表示比赛、战斗、奖品等的名词；beat一般用于比赛中打败或战胜对手，其宾语一般是人。6.你弄到足球比赛的票没有？没有，票价太贵了。误：have you got a ticket for the football match?no, the price is too expensive.正：have you got a ticket for the football match?no, the price is too high.分析：在英语表达中，修饰the price用high或low。7. 他生病了，这使他这几

8、天的精神状态非常糟糕。 误：his being ill makes his spirit state very poor these days.正：his being ill makes his state of mind very poor these days.分析：英语中表示“精神状态”用state of mind,而不是spirit state。8. 他们出发晚了，到达机场时只剩下几分钟的时间。 误：they started off late and got to the airport with minutes to leave. 正：they started off late an

9、d got to the airport with minutes to spare.分析：money/time to spare是习惯用法。9. 最近我的胃经常出问题。误：recently i often had problems with my stomach.正：recently i often had trouble with my stomach.分析：表示人的身体等部位出现了问题/不舒服时不用problem而用trouble。10. 警察正在那座房子里搜查罪犯。误：the police were searching the criminal in that house.正：the

10、police were searching the house for the criminal.分析： “在房子里搜查罪犯”指的是“搜查房子找罪犯”，地道的表达应该是“search the house for the criminal”。11.我想电脑已经关了，但我最好还是去看一下。误：i think the computer has been turned off, but id better go and see.正：i think the computer has been turned off, but id better go and make sure.分析： “go and s

11、ee”是典型的中式翻译，make sure则是“弄清楚，弄明白”的意思。12. 门口有个告示牌，上面写着“禁止吸烟”。误：there is a sign at the gate, writing “no smoking”.正：there is a sign at the gate, reading “no smoking”.分析：门口的告示牌应该是我们看到的内容，所以要用reading或saying。13. 他不能接受这份工作的原因是他要照顾他的母亲。 误：the reason why he couldnt accept the job was because he had to take c

12、are of his mother.正：the reason why he couldnt accept the job was that he had to take care of his mother. 分析： “the reason why.is that.”意思是“的原因是”。why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句。多数人容易受汉语思维影响选用because。14. 我会使用电脑，但若一谈到修理它们，我就一窃不通了。误：i can use the computer, but when i talk about repairing them, i know nothing. 正：i

13、can use the computer, but when it comes to repairing them, i know nothing.分析： “when it comes to.”为习惯用语，意为 “一谈到，涉及到”。15. 他是我最不想见的一个人。误：he is the person i dont want to see very much.正：he is the last person that i want to see.分析：the last person/thing最不想见的人/物。16this is the last thing i would never want

14、to do. 这是我最不愿做的一件事情。辨析：“the last + n +to do; the last + n.+定语从句”中的 last的意思为“least willing/likely”，译为“最不愿意，最不可能”。 hes the last man i want to see. 他是我最不想见的人。 he is the last person to tell a lie.他是最不可能撒谎的人。 shes the last woman i want to sit next to at dinner.她是我在宴会上最不愿与之挨着坐的女人。*结束第二节：写作假如你是李华，准备邀请你的美国朋

15、友peter来中国观看2008年北京奥运会。请根据提示写一封邀请信。 1北京奥运举世瞩目；2欢迎来观看； 3北京新貌；4感受“新北京，新奥运。”注意：1词数： 100左右； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。dear peter， yours sincerely， li hua1what makes life possible/ something that makes life possible2. has been visited3what exciting news4. everything taken into consideration/ tak

16、ing everything into consideration5. immediately after birth/ immediately it was born6losing his new mp4 that7.（to) ,say what i shouldought to8most of which is rich in9went some light blue smoke10. are within everyones reach或are within the reach of everyonewriting the 2008 olympic games，which draw th

17、e worlds attention，are coming on. the eventis so splendid that i sincerely invite you to visit beijing at this special moment. great changes have taken place in beijing. the people here are ready to welcome friendsfrom all over the world. the beautiful scenery，wide roads，many newly built buildings andstadiums will make a deep impression on you. when you co