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1、1之提纲式作文之提纲式作文2 .提纲作文提纲作文图表作文图表作文图画作文图画作文开放性作文开放性作文高考作文分类高考作文分类3 .提纲作文提纲作文它通常会以中文、中文+英文、文字+图画等形式罗列出一系列的要点，要求学生根据所列要点来组织语言， 按照一定的逻辑顺序正确无误地将信息表达出来。提纲作文是高考试题中最常见的一种命题形式。在2011年全国18套高考英语试卷中，提纲类作文占了14套，其中就包括江西卷。4假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Lets Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2骑自行车的益处，如节能

2、环保、有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；节能（energy saving）注意：1、词数：120词左右；2、演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。Good morning, everyone,I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Lets RideBicycles”._ Thank you!2011年高考江西卷作文写作步骤？5要点要点2体裁体裁人称人称时态时态 主题主题确定确定结构结构一般现在时一般现在时Para.1Para.1Para

3、.2Para.2Para.3Para.3要点要点1演讲稿演讲稿第一人称第一人称主题主题总结、发号召 Lets ride bicycles Lets ride bicycles1.认真审题，确定结构认真审题，确定结构目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。6假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Lets Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；节能（energy saving）注意：1

4、、词数：120词左右；2、演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。Good morning, everyone,I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Lets RideBicycles”._ Thank you!2011年高考江西卷作文要点1要点2主题7带来一些问题空气污染交通堵塞等 Para.1.空气污染交通堵塞等目前汽车带来一些问题cause /lead to /contribute to/bring some problemsair pollutiontraffi

5、c jams2. 理顺要点，增加细节理顺要点，增加细节目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；8骑自行车节能环保有利健康等 Para.2节能环保有利健康等 骑自行车的益处energy-saving; environmentally friendly；environment-friendlydo good to health/be good for health/benefit health/be beneficial to our health/have a good effect on healthriding bicycles2. 理顺要点，增加细节

6、理顺要点，增加细节骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。9 总结、发号召 Lets ride bicyclesIn conclusion, we shouldTherefore, lets So, lets2. 理顺要点，增加细节理顺要点，增加细节Para.310你觉得你的作文完成了吗？你觉得你的作文完成了吗？ 2. 理顺要点，增加细节理顺要点，增加细节1.认真审题，确定结构认真审题，确定结构3. 变点为句，灵活表达变点为句，灵活表达4. 连句成篇，衔接恰当连句成篇，衔接恰当5. 检查修正，誊写清楚检查修正，誊写清楚草稿11带来问题空气污染交通堵塞等

7、Para.1.空气污染交通堵塞等目前汽车带来问题cause /lead to /contribute to/bring some problemsair pollutiontraffic jamsA large number of cars have caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.3. 变点为句，灵活表达变点为句，灵活表达12骑自行车节能环保有利健康等 Para.2节能环保有利健康等骑自行车的益处energy-saving; environmentally friendlydo good to healt

8、h/be good for health/benefit health/be beneficial to our health/have a good effect on healthriding bicyclesRiding bicycles is energy-saving. Bicycles is environmentally friendly.Riding bicycles is beneficial to our health.Riding bicycles do good to our health.3. 变点为句，灵活表达变点为句，灵活表达13使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词逻

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10、s a result /consequence (of); thus; therefore in a word; in short; to sum up; in conclusionwhats more; besides; to make matters worse; whats worse; worse still; furthermore14 Nowadays the using of cars has contributed to many problems including air pollution and the traffic jams. Besides, car accide

11、nts appear more frequently owing to some drivers carelessness. However, bicycles can solve most of the problems caused by cars. Riding bicycles is environmentally friendly and energy saving. Moreover, it has a great impact on our health. It can build up our body significantly. Riding bicycles is a l

12、ow-carbon life which all of us should manage to live. Its of vital importance to ride bicycles wherever it is possible for us. So lets ride bicycles to live a low-carbon life! Thank you!学生习作学生习作15 As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means

13、of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems then? As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy-

14、saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas. Whats more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join

15、 us! Thank you!范文范文1617 信息信息3总结、发号召 Lets ride bicyclesIn conclusion, So lets ride bicycles to live a low-carbon life!Therefore, lets live a low-carbon life by riding bicycles3. 变点为句，灵活表达变点为句，灵活表达18 There are a large number of cars now in the city. It causes many problems at the same time. For one th

16、ing, the car pollution is caused by using fuels so that reduces the quality of the air. For another, more cars in the road lead to a lot of traffic jams. So I suggest that we should ride bicycles to go outside. It can not only save energy but also can be benefit to your health. It has many positive

17、effects than what you can expect. Id like to see that everyone can live a low-carbon life in the near future by riding bicycles. I hope that you can start it right now! Thats all. Thank you！学生习作学生习作19 When it comes to low-carbon life, a majority of people hold various views of it and take different

18、action to support it. As a student, I heartily subscribe to the ideaLets Ride Bicycles. With the rapid development of technology, an increasing number of cars are being produced. Not only has cars brought severe air pollution,but they contribute to more traffic jams as well. But if we use bicycle as

19、 our daily transportation tools, the situation might be greatly improved. First and foremost, riding a bicycle is undoubtedly energy-saving and environmental-friendly, thus boosting our sustainable developent. Plus,its a kind of physical exercise ,which does massive good to our health. Whats more, w

20、ere inspired to develop a merit of being economical by riding bikes. On the whole, riding a bicycle does benefit us a lot. And only through our joint efforts, such as riding a bicycle, can we human beings live in harmony with nature.20二二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档三三. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力巧用倒装增强句子表现力四四. 尝试多样化表达方尝试多样化表达方式式一一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力强调句强调句With短语复合结构