公开课——地点描写写作ppt课件

1、11It is amazing that the ancient people could have built such a great architecture.让人吃惊的是，古代的人们居然能够建造出如此伟大的建筑物。2A cultural relic is a treasure belonging to all peoples rather than belonging to any individual.文化遗产是属于全民的宝藏，而不是属于某个人的。12-28日课前必背句子日课前必背句子23作文参考译文作文参考译文 最近怎么样？你说你想了解一下长城。在这里很难高兴告诉你一些关于长城的信

2、息。 长城建于2000年前，全长8851.8千米，高6至7米，宽4至5米；长城代表了中国悠久的历史，它是我国古代人民创造的伟大奇迹。现在，长城已成了著名的旅游景点，每年都吸引着许多来自世界各地的游客去参观。 我希望有一天你能来中国参观长城。我相信你会爱上它。45英语基础写作英语基础写作 6Reading and discussion: 1. 地点介绍通常写哪几方面的情况地点介绍通常写哪几方面的情况 （写作要点）（写作要点）? 2. 地点介绍常用的词汇和句型有什么地点介绍常用的词汇和句型有什么?7 AustraliaLocated in the smallest continentOceania

3、, Australia is the sixth largest country in the world. It covers a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of about 20 million. It is a mainly dry country with only a few coastal areas that have enough rainfall. It is made up of 6 states, in which Melbourne and Sydney are the lar

4、gest cities. Because it is famous for its bright sunshine, countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife, the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery.8 1. 地理位置地理位置 (location)及地位及地位 2. 人口人口 (population) 3. 面积面积 (area) 4. 气候气候 (climate) 5. 历史历史(history) 6. 名胜古迹名胜古迹 (places of i

5、nterest)地点介绍写作要点地点介绍写作要点:9写作必备词汇和句型写作必备词汇和句型:.地理位置和地位地理位置和地位位置位置: be situated in , _ _lie in, be located in（on，to）be in/on/to+方位词方位词,stand,on the coast of方向方向:_ _ ,south, west,north , northeast , northwest southeast,eastern, southern, western,northern地位地位:_, _ _ political/commercial/cultural centret

6、he capital of, the (second)largest in China/the worldeast101.Guangzhou , _(广东省会广东省会) ,_ the south of China . 2. The temple _on the top of/at the foot of the mountain. (stand)._ (locate) in the smallest continent-Oceania, Australia is _ ( (第六大第六大) ) country in the world.4 ._ (stand) on the top of the

7、 mountain, the temple has experienced many changes in this area.5.The beautiful town _ (locate) to/ on the west of the lake. standsLocated Standingis located句型句型lies in capital of Guangdong Provincethe sixth largest11Fill in the blanks1.Australia about 20 million.2.China is a developing country, 130

8、0 million.3.in this city is increasing year by year.4.It _10,000 square kilometers _ (人口人口) over 2million.人口人口has a population ofwith a population ofThe population covers an area of with a population of 1. The city has a large population of . 2. The population of is . 3.The population increases/ dec

9、reases; 4. The population has grown to . 5. The city, with a population of, is 句型句型: _ _ _ _ _121.Tiananmen Square, the largest square in the world, _ one million square kilometers.2.This square is 2000 meters long and 1500 meters wide.3.Our school,_（占地面积（占地面积130平方公里），平方公里），is very large in size. 面积

10、面积 covers /has an area of词汇词汇:_ _cover/have an area of square kilometers,take upsquare kilometers/meters句型句型:which takes up 130 square kilometers13句型句型:1.The weather is _ ( (冬天不会太冷夏天不会太热冬天不会太冷夏天不会太热) )2.China _5000 years.3.Egypt is an Arabian country _(历史悠久历史悠久)天气天气: _ _. 气候和历史气候和历史warm, dry,humid,c

11、old,sunny,stormy,rainy, cloudy, snowy, windy历史历史:_has a history of , with a long historyneither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer.has a history ofwith a long history.141. In Sydney, there are many _, such as the Opera House.2.Sydney is _（旅游胜地）（旅游胜地）with many tourists from all over the world .

12、3.Australia _ many places of interest.（以（以著名）著名）4.As _ (旅游城市）旅游城市）,it attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.名胜古迹名胜古迹词汇词汇:_ _places of interest , a city of tourism, tourist destination,be famous forplaces of interesta popular tourist destinationis famous fora city of tourism1516.地理位置和

13、地位地理位置和地位1.Guangzhou , capital of Guangdong Province (广东省会广东省会) , lies in the south of China . 2. The temple stands on the top of/at the foot of the mountain. (stand). Located (locate) in the smallest continent-Oceania, Australia is the sixth largest (第六大第六大) country in the world.4. Standing (stand)

14、 on the top of the mountain, the temple has experienced many changes in this area.5. The beautiful town is located (locate) to/ on the west of the lake. 17.人口人口1. Australia has a population of about 20 million.2. China is a developing country, with a population of 1300 million.3. The population in t

15、his city is increasing year by year.4.It covers an area of 10,000 square kilometers with a population of （人口（人口) over 2million.18. 面积面积1. Tiananmen Square, the largest square in the world, covers/ has an area of one million square kilometers.2. This square is 2000 meters long and 1500 meters wide.3.

16、Our school ,which takes up 130 square kilometers（占地面积占地面积130平方平方公里），公里），is very large in size.19. 气候和历史气候和历史1.The weather is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer. (冬天冬天不会太冷夏天不会太热不会太冷夏天不会太热)2.China has a history of 5000 years.3.Egypt is an Arabian country with a long history. (历史悠久历史悠久)20

17、.名胜古迹名胜古迹1. In Sydney, there are many places of interest _, such as the Opera House.2.Sydney is a popular tourist destination（旅游胜地）（旅游胜地）with many tourists from all over the world .3. Australia is famous for many places of interest.（以（以著名）著名）4.As a city of tourism (旅游城市）旅游城市）,it attracts millions of

18、 visitors from all over the world.21Writing time!22 If one of your friends wants to visit our city ZhongMu, How will you introduce our city using the sentence structure above? Imagine23Lets introduce our city ZhongMuStep4 Brainstorm Details about ZhongMu Vocabulary position:history:area:population；

19、famous place2. over 2,000 years(discussion-in groups)1.center of Henan3.1416.6 square kilometers4. 68,00024假如你是李华假如你是李华,你的朋友你的朋友Mary写信打算暑假来中牟旅游。请你写封回信，简单介写信打算暑假来中牟旅游。请你写封回信，简单介绍中牟以下内容：绍中牟以下内容：1.位置位置:河南的中部，郑开之间，交通便利河南的中部，郑开之间，交通便利2.气候：这里天气夏天不太热，冬季不太冷气候：这里天气夏天不太热，冬季不太冷3.人口：人口：680,000主要粮食作物主要粮食作物:小麦，小麦

20、，大蒜，花生，西瓜等驰名中外大蒜，花生，西瓜等驰名中外4.面积：面积：1416 .6 平方公里平方公里(square kilometers)，有二千多年的历史，有二千多年的历史 5.景点：雁鸣湖景点：雁鸣湖, 绿博园，方特欢乐园，官渡古战场，寿圣寺等绿博园，方特欢乐园，官渡古战场，寿圣寺等 中牟人民欢迎你中牟人民欢迎你参考词汇：参考词汇：Yanming Lake, Greenery Theme Park, Fantawild Adventure Theme Park, Guandu Ancient Battlefield. hairy crab(大闸蟹大闸蟹)大蒜大蒜garlic 西瓜西瓜wa

21、termelon 花花生生 peanut25Demonstration(示范示范)Which groups do it better?Lets appreciate a good composition together.Do you know?26 Welcome to our city ZhongMu .I am very delighted to introduce our beautiful city to you . ZhongMu is famous for garlic and watermelon .It lies in the center of Henna Province

22、 and between Zhengzhou and Kaifeng. It covers an area of 1416.6 square kilometers with a history of over 2,000 .The population of ZhongMu is 680,000 .ZhongMu has some famous places ,such as Yanming Lake, Greenery Theme Park, Fantawild Adventure Theme Park and so on. You can enjoy the sights and tast

23、e the local delicious food, such as hairy crab. Every year it attracts many visitors from all over the country. Im sure you will have a good time here. Wellcome to Zhongmu Besides,Dear Mary, the convenient transportation here can make your visit more enjoyable. Your faithfully, Xiaohua27How to intro

24、duce a placePosition: lies in /on /toHistory：has a history ofArea: has/covers an area ofPopulation: has a population ofPlace of interest:Step5 Conclusion(2)28We can also use :Position: be located in/ on/ toHistory: With a history of The history of isArea: With an area of The area of isPopulation: Wi

25、th a population of The population ofis 293031写作内容写作内容北京，位于中国东北部，是中国的首都，全国的政治、文化中心。北京，位于中国东北部，是中国的首都，全国的政治、文化中心。全市面积一万六千多平方公里，人口全市面积一万六千多平方公里，人口1400余万，是全国第二大城市。余万，是全国第二大城市。夏季炎热多雨，冬季寒冷干燥。夏季炎热多雨，冬季寒冷干燥。历史悠久，是旅游胜地，有很多著名文化古迹如紫禁城历史悠久，是旅游胜地，有很多著名文化古迹如紫禁城(Forbidden City)，颐，颐和园，长城等。每年都吸引众多世界各地游客。和园，长城等。每年都吸引

26、众多世界各地游客。写作要求写作要求1.只能使用只能使用5个句子表达全部内容个句子表达全部内容;2.介绍必须包括所有要点。介绍必须包括所有要点。写作训练：请你用写作训练：请你用5句话介绍我国首都北京。句话介绍我国首都北京。32Try to finish your passage within 10 minutes.33Pair workExchange your composition with your desk mate and help each other to improve your writing. 34Task :Peer assessment Grade your partne

27、rs composition according the following criteria , and underline both mistaken or confusing parts with “_” and excellent ones with” ”Criteria MarksContent（内容）（内容）(是否包括所有提示要点是否包括所有提示要点, 是否用是否用5句话表达全文）句话表达全文）Language（语言）（语言） (观点表达是否清晰、明确，句子是否得当观点表达是否清晰、明确，句子是否得当) Coherence（连贯）（连贯）（是否用恰当的连词，副词，短语来衔接句子）（是否用恰当的连词，副词，短语来衔接句子）35checklist1.是否只用了是否只用了5句句?2.要点是否齐全要点是否齐全?3.是否使用了正确的语言结构是否使用了正确的语言结构? 4.有无语法或拼写错误有无语法或拼写错误?5.是否用上了高级词汇或高级结构是否用上了高级词汇或高级结构?6.有无过渡性词语有无过渡性词语,使文章更连贯使文章更连贯?36Lets share beautiful writings 37Possible Version Beijing, situated in the northeast of China, is