2017-2019年初三一二模作文精析及高分句型梳理

1、2017-2019 学年九年级作文分类精析自我反思类18年二模崇明区作文Writing a passage of at least 60 words on the topic“ I have （ g请 rown up以“我已经长大了”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ）提示： 我们经过了四年的初中学习生活，或多或少在某些方面长大了、成熟了。请结合自己的1-2 个经历，谈谈你在哪个方面体现出长大了、成熟了，并有何感悟。范文（1） ：After three years life in the junior h

2、igh school, I has changed a lot and felt that I have grown up. On one hand, I learn to study by myself by finding my own ways. I start to realize the importance of study in the class and after the class. On the other hand, I become more patient to my family and other people around me. I will conside

3、r things in their shoes and try to treasure kinship and friendship. Growth is a process of challenges and changes, but I will face it bravely.相关高分谚语：1.成长是挑战和改变的过程，但我将会勇敢面对Growth is a process of challenges and changes, but I will face it bravely. 重点高分句型：On one hand,on the other hand一方面，另一方面 :Realize

4、the importance of study意识到学习的重要性:Consider things in their shoes站在他们角度考虑问题:18年二模松江区作文Write at least 60 words on the topic“ I tried my b以 es“t我尽全力 to ”（_了 ”为题，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）每个人都有一段为实现自己某个目标而竭尽全力的经历，请你补全题目，介绍自己的某次拼搏过程并谈谈自己的所感所悟。（注意：1.在答题纸上讲题目补充完整。2.短文中不得出现真实人名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）范文（ 1） ：I trie

5、d my best to learn to smileFrom my point of view, I once suffered a lot in the past. Every time I tried my best, but I failed at last, which made me upset. Nowadays, I am exhausted. So I have no choice but to smile. After all, smile is an attitude towards life. As we all know, life is not always smo

6、oth and something sad will happen to us, such as failure in the exam. However, we should learn to smile to ourselves. Smile makes us feel more confident. If we smile to the others, we will be much closer to our friends. Smile is the common language throughout the whole world that everyone can unders

7、tand. Therefore, in order to make life better, just keep smiling to ourselves as well as to everyone around us. I believe I can do it by myself.相关高分谚语： 微笑是人生的一种态度smile is an attitude towards life生活不总是平顺的，有时一些伤心的事情会来到我们身边life is not always smooth and something sad will happen to us重点高分句型：From my poin

8、t of view：在我看来have no choice but to smile：除了微笑之外，别无选择 in order to make life better：为了让生活变得更好18年二模徐汇区作文VII. Writing94.There is a sectiono“lunMteyeVr Work ” in the school newspaper. The editor wantsgood articles to be collected. Please write at least 60 words on the topic. 学校校报 有 “我的志愿者工作”这一栏目。编辑想收录好的

9、文章登载。请写写你的志愿者工作。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 标点符号不占格）【范文】My Volunteer WorkWhen I was a little child, my parents taught me that I should take part in volunteer work as much as possible in the future. I used to work in the Pets House. It asc tually a volunteer organization to help the abandoned

10、or homeless cats and dogs. So we take those poor animals back to the Pets House and feed them. Sometimes they are seriously ill, so we would take them to the hospitals. We take very good care of them and help them grow healthily. Then, we will post their pictures and information on the Internet, so

11、that people who are warm -hearted can come to adopt them . Therefore, these cute creatures can eventually have a real home. I doing these because I love pets so much and I think helping these poor animals is very meaningful to the whole society . I enjoy doing this and I will continue doing it.Wish

12、everyone can join us and help these lovely animals together!重点高分句型：I should take part in volunteer work as much as possible in the future.在将来我应该尽可能的多参加志愿者工作。volunteer organization志愿者组织We will do . so that 如此 . 就会 .helping these poor animals is very meaningful to the whole society帮助这些可怜的动物对整个社会意义重大。畅

13、想类18年二模崇明区作文VII. WritingWrite a passage in at least 60 words on the topic“ I（请以“我已经 have grown up ” .长大了”为题写一篇不少于 60 个字的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意，短文中不得出现任何人名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）提示：我们经过了四年的初中学习生活，或多或少在某些方面长大了、成熟了。请结合自己的1-2 个经历，谈谈你在哪个方面体现出长大了、成熟了，并有何感悟。【范文】I have grown upAfter three years life in the junior high

14、school, I has changed a lot and felt that I have grown up. On one hand, I learn to study by myself by finding my own ways. I start to realize the importance of study in the class and after the class. On the other hand, I become more patient to my family and other people around me. I willc onsider th

15、ings in their shoes and try to treasure kinship and friendship. Growth is a process of challenges and change,sbut I will face it bravely.相关高分谚语：1. 成长是个充满挑战和变化的过程。Growth is a process of challenges and changes重点高分句型：On one hand, On the other hand一方面，另一方面,consider things in their shoes 从他们的角度考虑问题18年二模青

16、浦区作文VII. WritingWrite a passage of at least 60 words on the topic“ My hometo以“十 wn in ten years年后的家乡”为题，写一篇短文，不少于 60 词，标点符号不占格。)提示： 十年后， 你希望家乡会有哪些变化？是希望她成为一格时尚之都，还是一个山清水静的现代化农村？请展开你的想象，围绕一个中心简单阐述一下。My hometown in ten yearsShanghai has been developing at an amazing speed in recent years, and as the r

17、ural part of the city, Qingpu, I expect it to take over its advantages of being a place with green water and pure air to attract people around the world.In ten years time, my hometown must be more beautiful with trees standing along the widened roads, cleaner water with fish in it and purer air. The

18、re will be fewer hazy days and people will live a happier life.All in all , I hope what I expected will come true.重点高分句型：all in all 总之19年二模崇明区作文Write at least 60 words on the topic My dream will come true. （ “以“我的未来不是梦”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）你对自己的未来一定有美好的梦想：但梦想的实现取决于勤奋、努力等诸多因素。请结合你自己的梦想，谈谈你将如何使美

19、梦成真。The following words or phrases are only for reference （以下词或短语仅供参考）My dream is to be/dowith the help e truetake part inhardworkingrealize（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）【范文】My dream will come trueThere is no doubt thate very person has a dream. Some people may want to be a superstar and o

20、thersare willing to be rich men. But my dream is to be a teacher just like my mom.As we all know , nobody can gain success without continuous hardworking. In order to make my dream come true, Ir ealize that I should take part in various kinds of activities which are organized by my teachers so that

21、I can improve myself to some extent and make myself a perfect person. What s mor,eI know that if I want to be a teacher, I must be a person who has a good command of knowledge. With the help of my mom, I know that no pains no gains. Whenever and wherever I meet difficulties, my mom will give me conf

22、idence and courage.In brief , in order to realize my dream, I will spare no effort to study hard and when I have trouble and learn from my classmates as well as my teachers. I firmly believe that I can make it.相关高分谚语：No pains no gains 不劳无获重点高分句型：There is no doubt that 是毫无疑问的be willing to 乐意做 as we a

23、ll know 众所周知in order to 为了 realize that+从句意识到 what s more而且，再说 in brief 简言之19年二模宝山区作文Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ My Ideal Weekend” .（以“我理想的周末”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following questiongs as a reference以下问题仅供参考） （1） What's your weekend like?2） What s your idea

24、l weekend like?3） Why do you want a weekend like that?（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）【范文】My ideal weekendAs I m always busy with different kinds of schoolwork during the week, an ideal weekend for me would be a leisurely and carefree one with a lot of fun.On Friday, I would like to do some sports

25、 with my friends after class. Both playing basketball with serval friends and jogging alone is a good way to put any schedule away and relax myself. After that, I would rush back to my dormitory as fast as I can to take a hot shower.On Saturday morning, I would have a lie-in till noon. For the lunch

26、, I would go to my favorite restaurant to have some Sichuan food. After lunch, going to the cinema would be a good choice for me. In the evening, it would be an enjoyment for me to surfing on the internet with my laptop settled on my bed before I am too tired to stayup.When it comes to Sunday, I wou

27、ld get up early in the morning to finish my homework. If there would be enough time, I would read some books which I am interested in.This is my ideal weekend.相关高分谚语： 无重点高分句型： is a good way to 是个好办法去When it comes to 当提到；就 而论友情类18年二模奉贤区作文VII. WritingWrite at least 60 words on the topic "That day

28、, I made a/an 以 “那天 ,我 （做 ） 了一 （个）” 为题,写一篇不少于60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格）（注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。）生活中的每一次体验、每一段经历都为你的成长助力。你或许交了一个新朋友、许了一个新愿望、作了一次新选择·· · · · · ， 请分享一段你的经历，并说明这段经历是如何帮助你成长的。范文：That day, I made a friendLast Saturday was my birthday. My parents opened a birth

29、day party for me. They invited many people to the wonderful party. I was very happy. The happiest thing was I made a new friend. She was a beautiful girl, wearing a yellow dress. When we ate cake, a piece of cake fell on her dress. I lent my own dress to her, she thanked memany times. We talked a lo

30、t and became friends that day. I learned that we would feel happy when we help others .(102 words)相关高分谚语：1. 人人都需要朋友。人生的旅途任何人都不能独力航行。Everyone needs friends. No one can sail the ocean of life sing-lheanded.2. 友情像一杯美酒。存放时间越长就越香醇。Friendship is actually like a bottle of wine. The longer it is kept, the s

31、weeter it will be.3. 我很庆幸我被这样一群人包围着，他们给我支持给我力量去面对我所有的困难。I feel so lucky that I am crowded by a group of people who offer me support and give me strength to face my difficulties.重点高分句型：invite sb to do sthmake friendshelp others/each otherthe happiest thing was that 18年二模普陀区作文Write at least 60 words o

32、n the topicWhen I have trouble with my best friend【以“我与好朋友闹矛盾后”为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不占格】提示：生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢?请就此话题谈谈你的做法以及这样做的理由，可结合自身经历进行阐述。(注意短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)When I have trouble with my best friendSimilar as we are to our friends, we are distinct and indepe

33、ndent individuals.Sometimes we may differ in views and have trouble with each other. However, it is communication and understanding that really matter.When I have trouble with my best friend, I won t withdraw but contact him timely,figure out what has gone wrong andw ork out a plan to rebuild friend

34、ship. To some degree, I owe a permanent, steady and dynamic relationship to mutual understanding.Attention should be paid to similarities rather than hovering over differences if Iam to cultivate our friendship . Furthermore, as I have chosen him to be an intimate friend, I should never be conquered

35、 by obstacles that are meant to test my heart and advance relationship.To conclude, whatever trouble I have with my friends, I will reserve differences, seek common ground.重点高分句型：differ in viewsit is that really matter(s)work out a planAttention should be paid to similarities rather than hovering ov

36、er differences if I am to cultivate our friendship.To conclude, whatever trouble I have with my friends, I will reserve differences, seek common ground.亲情类18年二模金山区作文Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ I am no lon以ger a little child“我不再是一个孩子”为题写一篇至少60 字的短文。背景： 如今， 我们的父母一方面对我们百般呵护，一方

37、面又时常抱怨我们长不大。 请给你的父母写一封信，证明你不再是一个孩子了（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入字数）。The following is for reference only （以下表达和图片仅供参考） used to make me （ be）full of范文 】I am no longer a little childDear parents,As a junior three student, I think I have grown up and I m no longer a little child. In the past, I always asked you to do

38、something for me and never thought about whether you were tired and busy . But now I can do almost everything myself and even help you do housework. I used to be shy but now I can talk to the strangers . In a word, I am no longer a little child. Thank you for always caring for me.YoursLinda相关高分谚语：1.

39、 The door of parents love for their children will never be closed.2. Having a healthy, loving family is a joy and it is a necessary part for building a strong society.3. A good relationship with your parents can make you a better and happier person. It is worth having a try.重点高分句型：no longer 不再 used

40、to do sth 过去常常做某事care for 关心 ; 照顾18年二模浦东区作文Write at least 60 words on the topic “ How lucky I am to have （以_ “我多 ”么幸运能够拥有”为题， 写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格，请在答题纸上把作文标题补充完整，如：a true friend，a warm family， aninteresting book ）在学习和生活中你可能因为拥有一位真诚的朋友、一个温暖的家、一本有趣的书等等而感到幸运，请选取一个方面谈谈自己的亲身经历，并说明为何感到幸运。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人

41、名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不子评分。）The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考）be satisfied withencourage sb. to do sthdo sb. a favorwith the help ofHow lucky I am to have my familyHow lucky I am! I have the best parents in the world. My mother cooks meals for me every day. She always spends money buying things t

42、hat I like best. My father takes me to the school and takes me home every day. I know he must be tired, but he never says that.W hen I am happy, they look happier than me. When I feel bad, they stay beside me and make me happy again. They give all that they have to me. I want to say to them loudly,

43、"I love you, parents!"重点高分句型：How lucky I am ! 感叹句的运用Spend money buying things that I like best 定语从句They look happier than me. 灵活运用比较级17年二模徐汇区作文You are graduating from Middle school soon.Your parents will give you a gift to celebrate the important time.Write a letter with at least 60 words

44、to your mun and dad.Tell what you want and how useful and important it is to you.The beginning part of the letter is given.你即将初中毕业，父母准备一份礼物给你庆祝这一重要时刻，写一篇至少60 字的信给你的父母。告诉他们你想要什么礼物，它对你的重要性以及用处。信的开头已给出。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分，标点符号不占格）d like to haveDear mum and dad,Thank you for your great lo

45、ve for me. As for the gift, IYours trulyMichelle【范文】Dear mum and dad,Thank you for your great love for me. As for the gift, I dli ke to have such a special gift that it is unique for me . The best gift, I believe, is to embrace the nature alone. When it comes to graduation, the majority of students

46、suppose that graduation is free of hardworking.Having spent about 9 years in study, I gradually lose the ability to stay alone. Both at school and at home, I spend the whole day with my parents and classmateSs.o it is high time that I should take the time to see the outside world alone. There is no

47、doubt that travelling alone provides a chance for me to live more independently.A proverb says “ Travel can cultivate people s end uFroarnmcee., tr”avel is a part of education. In the course of travelling, I may be faced with new challenges, which is beneficial to me . I never know what will happen

48、on the road. Maybe that is the point of life!In a word, nothing is more important than to travel alone and meet the unexpected challenges!Yours truly重点高分句型：It is unique for Suppose that It is high time that There is no doubt that Nothing is more important than to .19年一模嘉定区作文Write at least 60 words o

49、n the topic” makes me 以ful“l of_f_u_n_.使我_”(的生活充满乐趣”为题，写一篇不少于60 字的短文，标点符号不占格)初三的生活虽然紧张，但学习体验，集体生活，兴趣爱好 任能为我们带来很多欢乐。请选取一个方面，结合自身经历，他如何使你的生活充满乐趣。The following is for reference only:*Be fond of*Take part in*Enjoy oneself例文：Reading makes me full of funNowadays, the pace of everyday life is faster than b

50、efore. Most modern people are anxious living. However, I have entertainments to relax myself. One of them is reading.During my childhood, Mom always told me stories before I went to bed. They were so interesting that I loved them right away. With the passing of the years, I grew up and learned thous

51、ands of wordsT. o my great joy, I was soon able to read books by myself. As soon as I finished my homework, I always chose a book and sat in front of my desk to enjoy it.I mf ond of reading novels, and my favorite is “ HarryP otter. ”In .a ddition to Harry Potter book, I enjoy reading magazines, new

52、spapers and so on in my free time. Reading not only makes me happy but also gives me plenty of information and knowledge as well. Never do I feel bored or tired when reading.Although life in the fourth year of junior middle school is full of pressure, I carefree as a bird because of reading. I ll tr

53、easure the joy of reading forever.相关高分谚语：无 重点高分句型：relax oneself放松自我 to one's great joy另某人非常开心的是 be fond of对某事喜爱18年二模黄浦区作文In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic“以 “.我和and l. ” ”.为题，写一篇（60-120 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）每一个生命个体都和这个世界发生着联系，你也不例外。请分享一个你和他人、 社会或自然之间的故事，并谈谈自己的体验或感受。（注意： 短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信

54、息，否则不予评分。）Music and IMusic to me is what water to fish . On one hand, music can bring me relaxation. As a Junior 3 student, to reduceth e pressure of heavy stud,y I usually make full use of time to listen to music in spare time. On the other hand, music is really good to my mental health. It can ref

55、resh my brain after long time hard work. It also enables me to forget sadness .In music , I have found the virtue of human being , the value of ourselves and the beauty of nature. Music and I are so closely connected that we cannot separate forever.相关高分谚语： 无重点高分句型：Music to me is what water to fish.音

56、乐于我，如水于鱼。on one hand. on the other hand一方面.另一方面the pressure of heavy study学习的沉重负担 the beauty of nature自然之美学习类17年二模嘉定区作文Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “ A New Skill I have Learned”（以“我学会的一种新技能”为题写一篇不少于60 词的短文，标点符号不占格）生活中， 我们不断学习新本领，新技能。 请简单描述你学会某一种新技能的过程，并谈谈它给你的学习或生活带来了什么变化。范文（

57、1） ：The new skill I have learned recently is skating, which is the most popular activity during winter. And I am always having a great affection for ice and snow.When I was little, my cousins liked to hang out and they loved to chase each other on ice, which seemed a great fun. Sadly, they didn atl low me to join them because they thought I was too young. After I have been a middle school student, I got the chance to skate. However, it was not as easy as I assumed it would be. When I pu