（整理版高中英语）第二部分高考英语书面表达专题练评

1、第二局部 高考英语书面表达专题练评专题一 文字提纲式作文练评练评二下面三道书面表达题都选自高考真题，且都是有关“英语学习的话题。这三篇书面表达题或多或少地有些相似之处。所以我们放在一起来进行讲评。第一篇 试题来源(高考卷)书面表达总分值35分1.对英语学习的认识；2.自己目前的英语水平；3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；4.对英语教学的两点建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.信的开头和结尾已给出。dear ms li, im very happy to have you as our english teacher. thank you! li hua第二篇 试题来源(高考卷)假设你应邀参加组织

2、的“英语学习师生座谈会，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对今后的英语教学提出建议。 自己英语学习的情况对英语教学的建议请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议。注意： 1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。 dear teacher and schoolmates,1ts a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning english with you. thank you for li

3、stening.第三篇 试题来源(高考卷)假设你是新华的学生李华，不久前在举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：1.参加英语角的益处；2.坚持写英语日记的作用；3.英文阅读网站(enjoy reading)对你的帮助。注意：1.词数：120150； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。讲 评第一篇 试题来源(高考卷)书面表达总分值35分1.对英语学习的认识；2.自己目前的英语水平；3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；4.对英语教学的两点建议。注意：00左右；2.信的开头和结尾已给出。dear ms li, im ve

4、ry happy to have you as our english teacher. thank you! li hua第一 攫取要点题目中已经说得很清楚，其表达的要点有五个：1.对英语学习的认识 一个要点 一个要点3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题 一个要点 4.对英语教学的两点建议两个要点第二 细化要点文章应围绕以上五个要点合理展开，可使用适当的词句使文章衔接自然、层次清楚。考生需要自己做合理的联想，可根据主题对要点进行适当发挥，内容要切合实际、符合逻辑。这是该题最大的难点所在。解决了这个难点，可以说本篇书面表达的写作就是水到渠成的事了。1.对英语学习的认识 对本要点的阐述必须表述必然要涉

5、及到“英语的重要性，但是落脚点应该在“英语学习 的重要性上。围绕“英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言来联想“英语学习的重要性。 english is one of the widelyused languages in the world. with adoption of china's reform and opening-up policy, it is getting more and more important for us to learn english well. because only by grasping english can we learn much more

6、 advanced experience and technology from other countries and make our country more powerful. english is getting more and more important to us. first, english is widely used in the world and most business letters are written in english. again if we grasp english, we can learn a lot of advanced experi

7、ence from other countries. if we learn english well, we can serve our motherland better.as the world is becoming a global village, english is getting more and more important, so mastering english means we can see the world through a new window.2.自己目前的英语水平 3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题 这两个要点最好放在一起去考虑，因为说了“自己目前的英语水

8、平后说出“自己英语学习存在的主要问题 才顺理成章。在这里考生有一个误区：认为“因为自己的英语差就存在英语学习上的问题。所以第一个想到的就是“my english is very poor“我的英语还好(my english is just ok / my english is just so-so)这个角度来考虑，用一个转折词“but/however引出“自己英语学习存在的主要问题，不是更好吗？！在表述“自己英语学习存在的主要问题方面，考生一定有不少切身的体会，所以可用的素材比拟多。比方：记忆单词方面的问题、开口说英语方面的问题、语法学习方面的问题、阅读理解方面的问题、写作方面的问题等等。但是

9、在具体表达时不要面面俱到，选其中的一两个问题说一下即可。my english is just ok and the two main problems in my study are that i feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that i often feel nervous when speaking english. my english is just so-so but i have two main problems in my study. one is that i have difficulty in readi

10、ng comprehension. the other is that i find it difficult to write a good composition. my english is just ok. however, the two main problems in my study are that i feel it very difficult to learn grammar well and that i have difficulty in reading comprehension.4.对英语教学的两点建议这两点建议应该围绕“自己英语学习存在的主要问题而提出来，这

11、样才显得有的放矢。i really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.i really hope that you can make a suggestions on how to deal with reading comprehension. another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice

12、writing.i appreciate it if you give me good advice on how to learn grammar well. besides, i really hope that yougive us more chances to do more reading comprehension.第三 整理成文 (请注意红体字局部)dear ms li, i am very happy to have you as our english teacher.as we know, english is one of the widelyused language

13、s in the world. with adoption of china's reform and opening-up policy, it is getting more and more important for us to learn english well. because only by grasping english can we learn much more advanced experience and technology from other countries and make our country more powerful. to tell y

14、ou the truth, my english is just so-so but i have two main problems in my study. one is that i have difficulty in reading comprehension. the other is that i find it difficult to write a good composition. therefore, i really hope that you can make a suggestions on how to deal with reading comprehensi

15、on. another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice writing. i believe we can make much progress in english with your help. thank you! li hua参考答案官方提供dear ms li, i am very happy to have you as our english teacher. as the world is becoming a global village, english is getting more and more i

16、mportant, so mastering english means we can see the world through a new window. my english is just ok and the two main problems in my study are that i feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that i often feel nervous when speaking english. i really hope that you can give me good advice on how

17、 to memorize new words. another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. i believe we can make much progress in english with your help. thank you! li hua讲 评第二篇 试题来源(高考卷)假设你应邀参加组织的“英语学习师生座谈会，请你根据下表所提示的信息，英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对今后的英语教学提出建议。 自己英语学习的情况对英语教学的建议请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议。

18、 注意： 1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。 dear teacher and schoolmates,1ts a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning english with you. thank you for listening.卷的书面表达与卷的书面表达极为相似。比方：“英语学习的目的可以比照“对英语学习的认识；“ 对英语教学的建议几乎等同于“对英语教学的两点建议。第一 攫取要点4.两至三点建议这样看来至少要有六个

19、要点，最多为七个要点。第二 细化要点文章应围绕以上至少六个要点合理展开，可使用适当的词句使文章衔接自然、层次清楚。考生需要自己做合理的联想，可根据主题对要点进行适当发挥，内容要切合实际、符合逻辑。这是该题最大的难点所在。解决了这个难点，可以说本篇书面表达的写作就是水到渠成的事了。1.英语学习的目的i'm interested in english and hope to be an interpreter in the future. naturally its very important for me to learn english well. english has been

20、my favorite class ever since i was in grade 1, because when i grow up, i want to be a diplomat, spreading hope, peace, friendship and prosperity all across the world. naturally its very important for me to learn english well. i'm interested in english and hope to learn much more advanced experie

21、nce and technology from other countries and make our country more powerful. naturally its very important for me to learn english well. 2.英语学习的方法vocabulary is an important part of language. i usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible.i learn the language in many di

22、fferent ways. in class, i learn new words and grammar with our teacher, mrs. wang and do exercises preparing for the entrance examination for universities.oral english is a basic tool to communicate with foreigners so i make great use of time to practice my oral english.3.课外自学的途径after class, i often

23、 listen to english programs on tv and on the radio. besides, i've learned a lot from the internet and other sources. after class, i often read english stories and novels to improve my ability of reading comprehension. besides, i join in english corner for english lovers, where i can not only mak

24、e friends with common interest but also practice oral english and exchange points with students from different grades.after class, i read news, articles and watch videos from well-known websites like new york times, abc and cbs. i also have a lot of fun learning english with cartoon characters, shre

25、k and donkey, for example, are my favorites.4.在你的书面表达字数达标后可以不考虑这一点。两至三点建议 we should be given more opportunities to use what weve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. i hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. i suggest we

26、 have more english activities, such as english contests and festivals.we should be given more good advice on how to memorize new words. another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.i really hope that our teachers can make a suggestions on how to deal with reading comprehension.

27、 i hope our teachers can bring some fun to the class, help us make some pen-friends with teens from english-speaking countries.i hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines improve our ability of reading comprehension. i suggest internet can be used in our english class to e

28、nhance learning and increase fun.   第三 整理成文 (请注意红体字局部)即官方提供的范文dear teacher and schoolmates, its a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning english with you. i'm interested in english and hope to be an interpreter in the future. naturally its very impor

29、tant for me to learn english well. as everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. i usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. after class, i often listen to english programs on tv and on the radio. besides, i'

30、ve learned a lot from the internet and other sources .now, i'd like to make some suggestions on english teaching and learning in our school. firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what weve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. secondly, i hope our teachers can recommend

31、more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. finally, i suggest we have more english activities, such as english contests and festivals.thank you for listening. 讲 评第三篇 试题来源(高考卷)假设你是新华的学生李华，不久前在举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：1. 参加英语角的益处；2

32、. 坚持写英语日记的作用；3. 英文阅读网站(enjoy reading)对你的帮助。注意：1.词数：120150； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。卷的书面表达把卷书面表达中的“自己英语学习的情况变成了“介绍你课外学习英语的经验。且有三点提示，这就比卷书面表达容易得多。作文可以分为三局部，第一局部点出写作主题， 第二局部介绍学习经验，从提示的三个要点入手：参加英语角的益处；坚持写英语日记的作用；英文阅读网站(enjoy reading)对你的帮助。在具体的写作中要注意写出这三个方面给你的英语学习带来的益处。同时还要注意层次性。第三局部总结全文，升华主题。第一段：可以采用直接开头，引出主题i

33、t is increasingly acknowledged that english, as a widely-spoken language in the world, plays an indispensable role in modern society; consequently, learning english well enable you to stand out in competition with others. here are some ways which are conducive for you.i'm glad i have won the fir

34、st prize in the english contest, which was the result of my after-class english learning. as a high school student, i consider english a very important subject. in order to learn it well, apart from english class, i took an active part in english corner and other after-class english activities, whic

35、h benefit me a lot.as we know, english is getting more and more important. learning english well enable you to stand out in competition with others. today, its a great pleasure for me to share my experience of learning english with you.as we know, english, one of the widelyused languages in the worl

36、d, plays an important role in modern society; consequently, learning english well enable you to stand out in competition with others. here are some ways which are conducive for you.第二段：核心段落按照罗列的要点介绍自己英语学习的经验，并且需要对每个要点进行适当的扩展join english clubs organized for english lovers, where you can not only make

37、 friends with common interest but also practice oral english and exchange points with people from different walks of life. take down what you experienced and what you thought every day, which can better your writing skill and grammar.visiting english websites regularly, enjoy reading for example, al

38、so severs a good way to improve your english in that the up-to-date words and expressions they convey can enrich you vocabulary bank.in the english corner, i meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. sometimes, some foreigners are glad to join us. by talking with them, my oral english

39、improved a lot. i also find it useful to keep english diaries. i keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my english. as a saying goes, practice makes perfect. only by practice will we make more progress. some good english study websites contribute a lot to my improvement. through these web

40、sites, i can read some classic english passages, poems and stories. i can learn some learning skills and methodologies, which play an important part in my study process.join english corners organized for english lovers, where you can not only make friends with common interest but also practice oral

41、english and exchange points with students from different grades. keeping a diary in english can better your writing skill and grammar.visiting english websites regularly, enjoy reading for example, also help you enlarge your words and expressions to enrich you vocabulary bank.第三段：总结结尾briefly, whatev

42、er ways you adopt, hold on to them and you can make a difference in english learning and in your life.all in all, every road leads to roma, but i believe hard work pays off.整理成文 (请注意红体字局部)即官方提供的范文一 it is increasingly acknowledged that english, as a widely-spoken language in the world, plays an indis

43、pensable role in modern society; consequently, learning english well enable you to stand out in competition with others. here are some ways which are conducive for you. to begin with, join english clubs organized for english lovers, where you can not only make friends with common interest but also practice oral english and exchange points with people from different walks of life. next, take down what you experienced and what you thought every day, which can better your writin