高三英语写作之审题课后检测

1、课后检测应用文写作：为了方便同学们购书，新华书店定于9月6日来你校设一天书市。书籍主要有各种参考 书、字典等。另外还有科普读物及一些文学作品，如诗集、中外小说等。书市设在你校大门 口，从上午9: 30开始到下午5: 00结束。今天是9月5日，现由你向全班同学口头通知并 欢迎同学们届时参加选购。提示： 书市 exhibition 科普读物 popular science books 文学作品 works of literature注意：(1)词数80左右，要求语句连贯通顺。(2)只需讲清要点，不要把说明部分逐条翻译成汉语。审题：1.文体：2 . 人称： 时态：3 .要点：读后续写：阅读下面短文，

2、根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Mo was waiting in the corridor outside her class. She was feeling sick. She had two exams that day and physics was first .She really hated physics. It was her worst subject. Terry Looked back at her from the front of the line, and then looked away quickly. Mo thought she looke

3、d guilty. She didn't have a problem with physics she didn't have a problem with anything .Miss Perfect!"Hi, Mo, it's your favorite exam today, "said Nima, laughing as she joined the line .Terry was looking at Mo again. "So what's wrong with her?" asked Nima."

4、I thought you were friends ."" Yes,so did I," said Mo." But she hasn't spoken to me for two weeks now. She promised to help me review for the physics exam too, but then she's ignored all my calls and texts. And when I rang her house, her mum just told me she was busy. She

5、's forgotten who her friends are!" said Mo angrily. "Are you listening to me?" Mr. Reed was talking to the class and the other students were going into the exam room. Mo gave Nima a worried look and followed them.Mo couldn't answer question number five. She looked up and saw T

6、erry sitting two rows in front of her. Mo couldn't believe it! Terry was holding her phone on her knee under the table and reading from it. Is that how Terry always got such good grades? She felt really angry at Terry, but she didn't know what to do. She thought about telling the teacher, bu

7、t what would everyone else think of her? "Stop writing and put your pens down" said Mr. Reed as he started to collect the exam papers. Oh no, Mo hadn't answered two of the questions. She was going to fail again!Mo wanted to talk to Terry at lunch time, but she couldn't find her any

8、where. The next exam was history. That was Mo's favourite subject but she wasn't feeling good. Mo went to the library to study, but she couldn't concentrate. She didn't know what to do about Terry. She thought about telling a teacher, but everyone would hate her if she did that. &quo

9、t;It wasn't fair! 'she thought. "Terry was getting good grades by cheating all that time. " thought Mo. Just then, Mr. Reed walked past her table." Mr. Reed.”Mo was sitting behind Terry again in the history exam that afternoon. Mo was feeling terrible. Why had she told Mr. Ree

10、d? But it was too late now. And anyway, Terry didn't want to be her friend! Mr.Reed wanted her to look at him and nod if she saw that Terry was cheating in the exam.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:She was working on the l

11、ast question when she saw that Terry had her phone under the table.6Paragraph 2:Mo was walking towards the school gate, when she heard footsteps behind her.审题：1.审体裁： 人称： 时态： 5 .审要素：When:Where:Who:What:6 .审情节线索7 .审续写段首句：paragraph 1: She was working on the last question when she saw that Terry had her

12、 phone under the table.可设问：Paragraph 2:Mo was walking towards the school gate, when she heard footsteps behind her.可设问：设计写作思路：应用文审题：1.文体：口头通知4 .人称：第一人称的口头通知时态：以将来时为主5 .要点：(1)新华书店将来我校设一天书市(2)书的种类(3)书市地点(4)书市开放时间(5)欢迎同学们参观选购Boys and girls, attention please!I have some good news to tell you. For the co

13、nvenience of us students, a book exhibition is going to be held at the school gate tomorrow from 9:30 a.m. to 5:00 p.m. Apart from various reference books and dictionaries, also available at the exhibition are other books such as popular science books and works of literature like collections of poem

14、s and Chinese and foreign novels. Everyone is welcome to go and buy.Thanks for your attention.读后续写审题：1.审体裁：记叙文5 .人称：第三人称；审时态：一般过去时6 .审要素： When: when having examsWhere: in the exam roomWho:Mo, Terry, Mr ReedWhat: Terry looked at her phone during the exam.情节线索：Mo和Terry是一对要好的朋友，Mo不擅长物理，Terry原本答应Mo帮她辅导，

15、但是连续两个星期，Terry都不接Mo的电话也不回她的短信。Mo认为Terry已经忘了她这个朋友。当 Mo在考试日发现Terry看手机时，她内心纠结、矛盾，最 终她把情况报告了老师，我们将续写她即将报告老师之后的情节。7 .审续写段首句：paragraph 1: She was working on the last question when she saw that Terry had her phone under the table.关键点是划线部分， 由此推段Mo提示老师，Terry被老师发现后的反 应以及Mo的心情。可设问： What would happen when I nod

16、ded to the teacher to notice Terry looking at herphone? What punishment would Teryy have? How would Mo' s feeling aftettiat?突出心里矛盾冲突的细节描写Paragraph 2:Mo was walking towards the school gate, when she heard footsteps behind her.提示校门口两人相遇，着重写Mo遇到Terry时的尴尬以及问题的解决，两人冰释前嫌。可设问： Who would follow Mo? How

17、would they feel and explain the matter in the examwhen seeing each other? In what way would they become good friends again? 此处结尾应 是积极正面的，同时突出语言描写如何解决的问题，可有一定的感情升华。8 .设计写作思路：思路一：Mo在一番纠结之后告诉了老师，结果 Terry被老师证明真的作弊了。两个人友谊的小船说翻就翻。一个学期的冷战后，Terry懂得了 Mo这么做是为了她好。两个人和好如初，一起努力进步。思路二：Mo在番纠结后告诉了老师，Terry补叫出了考场，Mo的

18、心里很不安。放学后，Terry找到了 Mo,跟她解释了自己不理她的原因一一她父亲病了。并且今天有一声十分重要的手术，所以她不顾考场纪律看手机，就是想知道父亲的情况。最终两个人和好如初。（我们可以选择第二条思路：因为它的情节出人意料又在情理之中，使文章跌宕起伏，增强文章可读性。当然思路不只一种，只要合情合理，与原文融洽度高就可以）Sample 1:Paragraph 1:She was working on the last question when she saw that Terry had her phone under the table.Though feeling uneasy a

19、nd restless, she looked at Mr. Reed and nodded. With her eyes glued to the phone, it wasn' thajteacher patted on her back that Terry noticed Mr. Reed. Immediately,Terry was asked to leave. Terry rushed out of the class, crying all the way. Instead of feeling relaxed, Mo had ants in her pants. Sh

20、e felt guilty for telling Mr. Reed about it, which had resulted in Terry ' s not finishing heam.Paragraph 2:Mo was walking towards the school gate, when she heard footsteps behind her. She turned tofind it was Terry who had just come out of the teacher' s office. Feeling embarrassed, Mo want

21、edto run away. Nevertheless, Terry stopped her and said," Mo, I ' m sorry I haven' t kept my promto help you review, but my father has been badly ill for two weeks. Today he had a significantoperation. I was so worried about him that I kept on reading the texts on the phone sent by mymo

22、ther to get the latest news about him, so Mr. Reed forgave me. Can you forgive me? " " Of course! Let ' s go to the hospital to see your father." Mo couldn ' t wait to reply.Sample 2:Paragraph 1:She was working on the last question when she saw that Terry had her phone under t

23、he table.Without thinking, Mo looked up and nodded to Mr. Reed. Terry was too busy looking at her phone and she didn't hear him as he walked silently up to her table. Mr. Reed didn't say anything. He just picked up her exam paper, tore it in half and pointed to the door, to tell Terry to leave the room. Terry was crying as she walked to the door. Everyone was staring at her and Mo felt really guilty now. Why did she tell Mr. Reed?Paragraph 2:Mo was walking towards the school gate, when she heard f