二模英语作文集锦(2011)

1、2011 Writing Collection 第 1 页 （共 28 页）上海市各区县中考模拟试卷作文集锦1.长宁区Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic“ To be a student with good man 以 ef 做一个有礼貌的学生”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 ）（ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ） 短文需包含下列要点：Are you a student with good manners or bad manners?Why do you think s

2、o?To be a student with good manners, what should/shouldn t you do in public?For intermediate level:Good manners are important to a student. I am a student with good manners. I never leave paper on the ground. WhenI meet teachers, I always greet them with a sweet smile. I never speak loudly in the li

3、brary, either. When I take a bus, I alwayswait in line and take my turn to get on bus. On the bus, I often give my seat to elder people.To be a student with good manners, we should do everything in a proper way. First, we should obey rules. For example,we should never be late for school. We should l

4、isten to teachers carefully as well. Besides, we should learn to say somepolite words. For example, Remember to say please when we ask for help. In addition, we should never talk loudly in public.Everyone likes a person with good manners. As a student in modern city, we should try to make ourselves

5、becomestudents with good manners.For high level:As we can see, a student with good manners is always welcome. Luckily, I am a student with good mann ers. I n everbreak school rules. I always greet others with smile. I n ever in terrupt others whe n they are talki ng. If some one is in trouble,I alwa

6、ys try to do him a favor at once in stead of ignoring them.2011 Writing Collection 第 2 页 （共 28 页）However, it is not easy to have good mann ers. First, we must be polite to others and show respect for them. We mustnt laugh at people when they are in trouble. Insteadwe should try to help them. Wed bet

7、ter say Please before asking for help.We also need to say Thank you ” when we receive something .On the bus, don forget to give our seat to an old pers on or alady .In the cin ema, remember not to talk loudly.As a saying goes, “ politeness costs nothing and gains everything. L et s be a polite perso

8、n. Let s be astude nt with good mann ers.Suggested sentences for writing：Good manners play an importa nt role in our life. Every one should have good mann ers.Whe n we are in some special places like cin emas, libraries and so on, we should keep quiet.All in all, we d better obey rules in differe nt

9、 places. Take acti ons now!As a stude nt, we n eed not only good marks but also good mann ers.We should also remember to say some polite words. For example, whe n others give us a hand, weshould tha nk them. If we do somethi ng wrong, we should say sorry.But if we really want to be a student with go

10、od manners, nothing will stop us. As a saying goes:“ Nothincjs impossible to a willing heart.2.虹口区Write at least 60 words about the topict the momeAt, I smiled.以我笑了，在那一刻为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）2011 Writing Collection 第 3 页 （共 28 页）Use the following points as a r

11、eference. 以（ 下内容仅供参考 ）What made you smile at the moment?Why did it make you smile?What should you do to make you often smile in the future?For intermediate level:Last week, we had an exam and I got a good mark in the exam. I was very happy and smiled. But suddenly, I found therewas an uncorrected mi

12、stake in my paper. I hesitated for a while and then a saying came into my mind: “ Honesty is the bestpolicy.made”a SdeocIision at once. I went up to my teacherquickly and told the truth to the teacher. My teacher praised me for my honesty. At the moment, I smiled.Since then, I made up my mind to be

13、an honest boy and promised not to tell a lie. Honesty is one of the most importantthings.For high level:There are a lot of unforgettable moments in my life. And I thought that moment will never be forgotten in my life. That day,we went to take part in the P.E test for Grade-nine students. I felt ver

14、y nervous because I was not good at sports. In order topass the test, I had spent a lot of time and practiced a lot. When I stood on the playground, I felt even more nervous thanbefore. But I told myself to keep clam all the time. It was my turn to run. I tried my best to follow other students ahead

15、. “cheerup”“cheer up”I said to myself all the way. The moment when I was told the score, I smiled because I made a bigprogress.From then on, I know that in order to make myself smile, I should make every effort. The harder I will try, the morehappily I will smile.2011 Writing Collection 第 4 页 （共 28

16、页）Suggested sentences for writing:If we want to get somethi ng, we must work hard first.In order to smile more often in the future, I should study hard and never give up. As a saying goes,“ nopains, no gains.I am sure I will be more in depe ndent in the future and I should help my mum do more3.静安区Wr

17、ite an article of at least 60 words about the topic My Weekend ” 请以 我的周末”为题写话。词数不少于 60 个。要求内容连贯，表达清楚。标点符号不占格。）（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Use the following points as a guide.短文必须包含下列要点）What do you think of your weekend? Use at least two adjectives （形容词）to describe your weekend.Tell your reason

18、s （Show at least two main activities you often do）.For intermediate level:My weekends are always busy and meaningful. I often finish my homework first. After that, I surf the Internet and searchfor the latest news, it makes me closer to the society. Besides, I read some novels or masterpieces to bro

19、ade n my scope ofkno wledge. I really enjoy readi ng! My weeke nds are full of surprise and happ in ess.For high level:As a stude nt of Grade Ni ne, I feel pressure from my pare nts and teachers, eve n on weeke nds. Im always busy withstudy. Thus, my weekends are busy and boring. After finishing all

20、 my homework, I have to spend2011 Writing Collection 第 5 页 （共 28 页）spare time study in g. I get into the habit of review ing all the no tes. On the other han d, I believe All work and no play makesJack a dull boy, so I walk my dog for relaxation sometimes. In some way, it adds variety to my weeke nd

21、s.Suggested sentences for writing:My whole after noon is occupied by homework.I have to finish it before Sun day because I have less ons the whole Sun day.Although Im busy at weekend, I enjoy it as I feel fulfilled.As a Grade Nine stude nt, my weeke nd is always busy and tiri ng.I usually have to st

22、ay up to finish them.There is too much homework to do and too many less ons to have.It helps me relax myself and release the stress. I expect a different weekend!4.闵行区Write at least 60 words on the topic A story on a rainy day” according to the pictures given.（根据所给图片写一篇关于“一个雨天的故事”的短文。短文不少于60 个词，标点符号

23、不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）2011 Writing Collection 第 6 页 （共 28 页）Use the following phrases as a reference.（以下短语仅供参考2011 Writing Collection 第 7 页 （共 28 页）rain suddenly;get on;For intermediate level:One day, Kitty was waiting for a bus. Suddenly, it began to rain heavily. Luckily, Kitty h

24、ad an umbrella, so she held it forthe other passe ngers. Every one was tha nkful to her because of her kindn ess. On the bus, a little boy found her umbrellawas so wet that it made the floor wet and slippery. Then he gave the kind girl a plastic bag. There was a big happy smile onKitty face. Althoug

25、h it was still raining hard, every one heart was sunny. In short, if every one does others a favor, theworld will be full of love.For high level:One day, many people were waiting for a bus at the bus station. The sun shone brightly just now, but suddenly it began torain heavily. All the people were

26、standing under the shelter except Kitty because she took an umbrella with her. When thebus came, kitty was so warm-hearted that she held the umbrella over others headorder to protect them from the rain. All thepassengers praised her for her kindness. Kitty was smiling. After she go t on the bus, she

27、 didn t notice that the rain drops onher umbrella dripped to the floor. At that time, a little boy offered her a plastic bag. She was so thankful to the boy. What amoving story on a rainy day. Let s fill the world with love. We should help those who in need and care for each otherSuggested sentences

28、 for writing:Help ing people can be a good way to find happ in ess. If you want to find happ in ess, just do it.He offered the plastic bag to Sally in order to protect water from dripping.Unluckily, the water on the umbrella wet the floor.From this case I know if everyone tries his best to do someth

29、ing helpful, the society will become more and more lovely.wait for a bus;hold an umbrella;drip to the floor;offer a plastic bag;2011 Writing Collection 第 8 页 （共 28 页）5. 普陀区Write a passage of 60-80 words on the topic The first time I .（以 我第一次.为题写一篇60-80词的短文， 标点符号不占格。 ）（注意： 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评

30、分。 ）Use the following points as a reference.（以下内容仅供参考）What experience did you have?How was your experience?What did you learn from your experience?For intermediate level:The first time, I argued with my motherThe argument between my mother and me happened four years ago. My mother didn t like my fri

31、end. She forced me toleave her. I felt angry because I had my right to choose friends. I argued with her and shout rudely. Later, I calmed down anddecided to communicate with her. Finally, Mother understood me. I realized when people open their hearts, itll be better tounderstand each other.For high

32、 level:The first time, I got the first prizeI still remember the first time I got the first prize. I was in Grade Six and I took part in a compositioncon test. After prepari ng it for several weeks, I fin ally got the first prize! This experie nee en couraged me and made medeeply believe Where there

33、 is a will, there is a way. From then on, I tried my best in my study and never gave up. My firstprize would always give me power on my way to my destinations.2011 Writing Collection 第 9 页 （共 28 页）Suggested sentences for writing:The smell of the duria n was so stra nge that I thought I would n ever

34、eat it.To my surprise, it tasted sweet and soft. I couldnthelp eating more.From the experience I learned a lot. The first try is very essential.Though it was boring at the beginning, I believed the saying Where there is a will, there is a way ”，so I practiced drawing hard.I felt happy and proud. It

35、was really un forgettable.6.松江区Write at least 60 words about the topic The Ways to Improve My English （以提高英语学习的方法”为题，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）The following points are for your reference：（所给提示仅供参考 ）What do you do with your En glish study every day?What are the most effective（有效的）ways for you to improv

36、e your English?What progress have you made in your En glish study?For intermediate level:As we all know, En glish is one of the most popular Ian guages in the world. As a stude nt, I should lear nEn glish every day. I go over the En glish less on and do En glish homework after school. I also liste n

37、 to theEn glish text on the tape recorder and follow it every mornin g. I have some effective ways to improve my En glish. At weekends, I atte nd an En glish club and com muni cate with my classmates in En glish. I also liste n to some English songs. Moreimportantly, I do many exercises including gr

38、ammar, reading, listening and even writing. It very effective for me to improvemy English. With the help of these ways, I have made some progress I am better at speaking English. I often achieve A2011 Writing Collection 第 10 页 （共 28 页）grades in the English tests. My abilities of listening and writin

39、g are improved a lot as well. I will try to practise English as oftenas possible and be more con fide nt in speak ing En glish.For high level:Nowadays, En glish is used widely around the world. En glish is ano ther importa nt Ian guage in my daily life. As amiddle stude nt, I have an En glish class

40、every day. I talk in En glish with my classmates in class. After class, I liste n to theEn glish text on the tape recorder and follow it. I go over the En glish less on. In my opinion, the most effective way for me isto practise speak ing En glish as ofte n as possible. What more, I should ntbe afra

41、id of making mistakes. I en couragemyself to be con fide nt to speak good En glish. Readi ng En glish n ewspapers and watchi ng En glish programmes on TVare also effective ways to improve my En glish. I have made great progress by using these ways. I improve the ability oflearning English. I am more

42、 con fide nt in speak ing En glish. I also lear n more about custom and culture of Brita in andAmerica. As a saying goes, “ Practicenakes prefect. I should practise English more to make more progress.Suggested sentences for writing:As we all know, En glish is esse ntial for every one in such a moder

43、 n world.At weeke nds, I ofte n watch foreig n films and liste n to the En glish songs to improve my En glish.Sometimes I also go to the English corner to practice speaking English with others.I am able to speak English more fluently and often achieve A grades in English tests.But now I become more

44、confident in speaking English.After school, I always do some English exercises and then go over new words and the text.Itaslso wonderful to attend an English club because I can practise speaking English with others.Much practice enlarges my vocabulary and enables me to read English novels more easil

45、y as well.To my joy, I have made some progress. I can speak English more fluently than before.2011 Writing Collection 第 11 页 （共 28 页）7.闸北区Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topicThe most shocking news to me. （以“最令我震惊的新 闻”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 ） 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ）Sugge

46、sted question（s 以下问题仅供参考）What sthe most shocking news to you?Why do you think it s the most shocking news?What s your opinion about the news?For intermediate level:As it known to us all, many people went to various of supermarkets to buy salt because they believe that eating salt is agood way to hel

47、p prevent the nuclear radiation according to a post online, which caused the short of salt as well as the pricerising of salt in some supermarkets. I was shocked by this news because I think that it showed some serious problems ofsome Chinese people. To begin with, they believe in the post before ch

48、ecking the reality of it with experts. In addition, itshowed that people like the person who rumored（ 造谣 ） exist in our daily life. We should protect ourselves from them. Ifwe could avoid from the problems above, there will be no longer any shocking and unbelievable news like this one.For high level

49、:A 24-year-old university student poked（ 刺杀）his mother with a knife in Pudong International Airport, only because ofthe lack of mon ey.The terrible n ews shocked me a lot. In stead of show ing sympathy on his mother for bringing up him hard, the boy backfrom Japa n eve n wan ted to kill his mother!

50、It a miserable （悲哀的）eve nt, which made every one shocked.The extreme action showed an unhealthy mood（心理）.Nowadays, we emphasize（重视）a lot on study, but ignore（忽略）a vital part of growing for children-psychology（ 心理）.In order to prevent such events from happe nin g, lets try toimprove our psychology le

51、vel!2011 Writing Collection 第 12 页 （共 28 页）Suggested sentences for writing:I have heard that a serious earthquake happe ned in Japa n last mon th, and it also caused the great wave which killedlots of people in Japa n.On May 12th, 2008, a terrible earthquake took place in Wen chua n, Sichua n prov i

52、nce.I couldn imaginethe scene of the disaster area and I couldn even imagine how people live after the n atural disaster.As far as Im concerned, this kind of natural disaster is inevitable（ 不可避免的）and all we can do is to try our best todecrease the loss 减少损失）in the disaster.Although we cant foresee（预

53、测）the disasters, I believe we can conquer （战胜）them with love and care.On the other hand, we human beings must protect our Earth or consequence（ 后果）will be so serious that we will noIon ger exist on the Earth!8.宝山区Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topi“c Everyone Needs Help （”以“每人都需要帮助” 为题，

54、写不少于 60 个词的短文）Use the following points as a guide:Did you get any help from others before?Did you give any help to people when they needed?Tell your story.For intermediate level:I think everyone needs help. I got much help from others before and I felt very happy. I also like to help others when the

55、ywere in trouble. It was on a hot day, my deskmate didn tgo to school because he was ill. My teacher told me that mydeskmate would be absent for several days. After school, I took all his books and homework to his home and helped him to2011 Writing Collection 第 13 页 （共 28 页）go over his lessons. He f

56、elt very excited and his eyes were full of tears. As the saying goes, A friend in need is a friendindeed . After he went back to school, he did well in all the tests. In a word, we should always help each other. If so,everyone will be happy forever.For high level:As the saying goes that a friend in

57、need is a friend indeed. Nobody can live in the world without friends. So helping otherfriends is necessary and important. My friend, Jane helps me a lot andI also help her inreturn. One day after school, it was raining heavily. I left my umbrella at home. To my surprise, Jane walked to me and lenth

58、er umbrella to me without saying anything, but she went home in the heavy rain instead.Because of this, she was seriously ill later. After that, I went to her home and help her with her homework. From this specialexperie nee, I m sure that every one n eeds help. Therefore, let us start providi ng he

59、lp for other people and make our worldmore beautiful.Suggested sentences for writing:I am always tha nkful to those who help me before because they try their best to let me know I am loved.Si nee the n, I help others more ofte n. At the same time, I feel happier tha n before.It no doubt that every o

60、ne n eeds help. I also have the experie nee on help ing others.I hope more and more people will realize the importa nee of help ing others.During this experie nee, I know that the first step of grow ing up is to be warm-hearted and kind.2011 Writing Collection 第 14 页 （共 28 页）9.奉贤区Write a composition