浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析

1、.2016.9浙江高考：One weekend in July,Jane and her husband, Tom, had driventhreehours to campovernight by a lake inthe forest. Unfortunately, on the wayan unpleasant subjectcame up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane wasso angry that she said to Tom.“I'm going to find

2、a better spot for us to camp"and walked away.With no path to follow,Janejustwalked on forquitea long time.Aftershe hadclimbedto a highplace.she turnedaround,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothingbut forestand, farbeyond, a snowcapped mountaintop.She suddenlyrealized that she was

3、 lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. Ifonly she had not left her mobile phone in that bag withTom. Jane keptmoving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night wasbeginning to fall,Jane was so tiredthatshe had tostopforthenight.Lyingawakein thedark,Jane want

4、edvery much tobe with Tom and herfamily.She wanted toholdhim and tell him how much she loved him.Janeroseat thebreakof day,hungryand thirsty.She could hearwater trickling( 滴落） somewhere ata distance. Quicklyshe followed the sound toa stream. To hergreat joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank

5、and ate a few berries. Neverin herlifehad she tastedanything better.Feelingstrongernow. Jane began towalkalong the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is thatfor me? Unfortunately,the treesmade itimpossiblefor peopl

6、etosee herfrom above.A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellowblouse,thinkingthatshe shouldgo toan open areaand flagthem ifthey came backagain.注意 :1. 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；2. 应使用 5 个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1But no

7、more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Paragraph 2It was daybreak when Jane woke up.2017.6On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, wascycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stoppedto make a bicycle repair, but they had enc

8、ouraged Mac to carry on, and they wouldcatchup withhim soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行)alongalone,he thoughtfondlyofhiswife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful placesomeday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“Man, that's a big dog!” hethought. But when h

9、e looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog atall, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Macsheartjumped.He foundouthiscan ofhearspray.Withone hand on thebars,he firedthespray atthewolf.A brightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,and toMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead. Buta minutel

10、ater,itwas by hissideagain.Then itattackedtheback of Mac's bike,tearingopen histentbag. He firedatthewolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）。Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful notto show down. He saw a steep up

11、hillclimbbeforehim.He knew thatoncehe hitthehill,hed be easy caught up and the wolf steethwouldbe tearingintohisflesh.At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. Theydidn tthinkmuch ofitwhen theysaw two cyclistsrepairingtheirbikeon thesideof the road. A bit later, t

12、hey spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog runningalongsidea man on a bike.As theygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthe dog was a wolf.Mac hearda largevehiclebehind him. He pulledinfrontofitas thewolfwas catchingup fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意 :1. 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；2. 应使用 5 个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3. 续写

13、部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1The car abrubtly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.2017 11.A vacation with my motherIhad an interestingchildhood:It was filledwithsurpriseand amusements,allbecause of my mother-loving, sweet,

14、and yet absent-minded and forgetful. Onestrange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parentsdecidedtospend a fewweeks drivingtothosestates and seeingallthesightsalongtheway. As the firstday ofour tripapproa

15、ched, David,my eight-year-oldbrother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed ever seethem again?Finally,the moment ofourdeparturearrived,and we loadedsuitcases,books,games, camping equipment,and a tent intothecarand bravelydrove off.Webravely drove off again two hours

16、later after wed returned home to get the purseand travelers checksMom had forgotten.Davidand I were alwaysa littlenervous when using gas stationbathroomsifMomwas driving while Dadslept:” You stand outside the door and play lookout while Igo,and I llstand outsidethe doorand playlookoutwhileyou go. ”

17、Ihad terriblepictures in my mind:“Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh I thoughtthey were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strangecity, but we weren t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifthnight, we had trouble finding ahotel with a vacancy. Afterdrivin

18、g in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt we finda housewitha likely-lookingbackyardand ask if we couldsetup tentthere?Davidand I became nervous.To our greatrelief,Dad turneddown theidea.Momnevercouldunderstandour objections.Ifa strangefamilyshowed up on herfrontdoorsteps,Mom

19、would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；.3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1: Thenext day we remembered the brand-new tentwe had brought withus.Pa

20、ra2: We drove through severalstatesand saw lotsof great sightsalongthe way.2018 6It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.Wetook a plane to Albuquerque,a big cityin the stateof New Mexico.We reachedAlbuquerque in th

21、e lateafternoon.Uncle Paul,my dads friend,pickedus up fromthe airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wifeTinacooked us a deliciousdinnerand we got toknow hissons Ryan andKyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening tothe frogsand water rollingdown the riv

22、ernearby.Very earlyin the morning,UnclePaul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said.Afterbreakfast,I went tohelpAunt Tina feedthe chickens.whilemy dad went withUncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草 ). I was impressed to see my dad andUncle Paul rid

23、ing horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride, and he said.yes, as long as my dad went with me.I wasn t going to take a horse rideby myselfanyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headedslowly towards the mount

24、ains."Dont belate for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "andkeep to the trackso that you dontget lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After awhile Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quietand the colorsof the brown rocks,the deep green pine trees

25、,and the lateafternoonsun mixed to createa magic scene.Itlooked likea beautifulwoven( 编织的） blanketspread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 l50 左右；2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.We had

26、no idea where we were and it got dark.参考范文一：Paragraph 1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stayalone in the forestforanothercoldnight.At thatmoment ( 时间 ),she felta littlesad, but she wasnt so frightened (情感). She reminded herself constantly, (心理) “ Tom must have

27、called for those helicopters. Maybe (情感 ) he was in one ofthem and will return soon(动作 )! I have to guide him tomorrow.” She felt asleep( 动作 ) and dreamed of seeing Tom (动作 ).Paragraph 2It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then(时间 ) walked.along the stream, hoping (心理 ) to fin

28、d a suitable place to guide the helicopter.She walked and walked,exhaustedbutfullofhope. Suddenly ( 时间 ), she spotted( 动作) a huge flatrock.She managed ( 动作 ) toclimbonto itand waitedwithpatience.The moment ( 时间 ) the helicopter appeared (动作 ) again. The nearer it got (动作 ),the more she waved ( 动作 )

29、the yellowblouse.To her greatjoy,(情感)thehelicopterdidn t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped offthe helicopter and rushed (动作 ) towards Jane. They hugged each other tightly (情感) and burst into tears (情感 ).参考范文二：The car abruptlystopped in frontofhim.Mac jumped offhi

30、sbicycleand dashed forthe back door of the car. It was locked. He then ran around to the passenger door,but it was locked, as well, so he began to climb through the open window. Whenspotting this ,Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man dived in,slamming the door behind him. Paul look

31、ed out the back window and saw the wolfstanding over Mac s bike as if it were a kill. Shortly after, the animal ran off.A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived .Mac emerged from the car andhugged his friends . “Ithought Iwas goingtodie,” Mac criedto them. Mac retrieved（取回） his bicycle, a

32、nd the three men resumed(继续） their road trip, agreeingto keep in one anothers sight line. A few miles down the road, Mac pulled overand burstintotears. “The restof the tripwas amazing,butIhad tolettheformeremotion out. ”参考范文三：Para1:The next day we remembered thebrand-new tentwe had broughtwithus. Mo

33、m insisted that we must make full use of it since we had broughtit. David and I looked at Dad, hoping he could stop her crazy idea. Toour great disappointment, he agreed. We spent a whole afternoon seekinga nice camping place and set up our tent before the night fell. It wasthe first time that I had

34、 thought mom could be wise as I admiring ourstunningtent.“Oh, I forgotthepillows!” what a misconception.Despitethe ache of my neck, we had some great nights.Para1:Wedrove through severalstatesand saw lots ofgreatsightsalongthe way. The brightblue sky,thelimitlessgreen grass,the group of sheep,the se

35、tting sun and the countless stars in the curtain of nights kept me.spellbound.Not only didwe see the picturesquescenery,we also managedto consider mom s scandals as a kind of fun.I really love my Mum.To our relief, we arrived at grandparentshomewith allof fourpeople.Itwas so fortunate范文四：place and w

36、ent back to ourto see my friendsagain.Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of myhorse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard inorder to stop the horse from hurtingthe littlecreature.Badlystartledby the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into anot

37、herdirection. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how tosoothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmeddown, but we seemedto get lost, unable to go back tothe mountain road.Paragraph 2Wehad no idea where we were and itwas gettingdark. Wanderingaround,we were s

38、tillstuck inthe dilemma. Muchto our delight,thesound of waterin the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dadproposed thatwe should walk along the river whichmayleadus tothe farmhouse and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrierand shorter when I stayed togeth