托福写作让步写法3个步骤详解

1、托福写作让步写法3个步骤详解托福写作让步写法3个步骤详解想不出第3个分论点可以这么写托福写作让步段写法步骤:写出反方观点这一步大多数同学都做得不错,但是在提出反方观点之前,可再加上一些连接词,例如admittedly,nevertheless等等.还拿之前拿到题目做例子,Forfurthercareersuccess,isrelatewelltootherpeoplemoreimportantthanstudyinghardatschool?总观点是同意,让步段写学习好也挺重要的.第一步引出反方观点时,应写:Admittedly,acquiringane_cellentGPAisonesign

2、ificantproofofyourability,forstudyisoneofthemajortasksthatstudentsaresupposedtofulfillinschool.托福写作让步段写法步骤:进行一定程度的削弱这是大多数同学会忽略的一步.很多同学在写让步段的时候,喜欢跳过第二步,直接重申自己的观点,然而这样的写法会显得逻辑上牵强,行文也显得生硬.因此,在提出反方观点时要进行一定的削弱.例如在写完上文那句话之后,应加上:However,theoutstandingscoresonlyprovetheintelligenceofthestudent,whiletheEQ,la

3、rgelyreflectedbyhowwellyourelatewithothers,playsanutmostsignificantroleinthefuturecareersuccess.托福写作让步段写法步骤:重申自己的观点这一步非常重要,因为让步段的提出仅仅是小插曲,重要的还是自己的观点.切不可写了让步段,就忘了自己的立场,那样就是得不偿失了.因此,在写完上面两句话之后,需要再加上一句,therefore,Istillholdtheopinionthatrelatewellwithothersismoreimportantthanacquiringhighscoresinschool.

4、托福写作如何改进转折句therebe句型变为被动语态试比较1. Sheusedtobeindifferenttotheoutsideworld,butaninterloperchangedher.2. Herindifferencetotheoutsideworldwaschangedbyandinterloper.把but后面的句子改为短小插入语试比较1. Drivenbyaninterestinwords,Clairekepttryingpoetry,novelsandliteratureanalyses,butshehardlysucceededinanyoftheseendeavors

5、attheverybeginning.2. Drivenbyaninterestinwords,Clairekepttryingpoetry,novelsandliteratureanalysesallwithlittleinitialsuccess.把but后面部分改为更紧凑的从句试比较1. Itwasmeanttobeabriefparting,butitturnedintoalong,lingeringone.2. Whatwasmeanttobeabriefpartingturnedintoalong,lingeringone.第二句读起来更加集中.紧凑，并且去掉了Itwas,buti

6、t等鸡肋部分.积累一些可能替换but的连接词e.g.however/nonetheless/nevertheless/yet/whereas/while.试比较1. Oncearrivinghome,shestartstoreviewallthenotes,notnecessarilybecausetheteacherrequireshertodoso,butbecausesheencouragesherselftostudyhard.2. Oncearrivinghome,shestartstoreviewallthenotes,asmuchfromtherequirementofthete

7、acher,asfromherself-encouragement.总结对于but这一最为常见的转折,我们可以从是否可以直接去掉?是否可以改为插入语等句子成分?是否可以改为更为紧凑的从句?是否有其他替换表达?这个方面进行思考.但应该指出,应该建立在自己有把握判断原句与改进后句子的风格与质量的基础上进行.有时候,不一定改的就比原句更好,短的不一定就更简洁.托福写作解析常犯的6个语法错误1. 托福写作比较对象的对等在比较结构中,注意前后比较事物要对等.常用that和those来指代比较结构里先前提到的名词.比如:Themeritsofseriousmoviesfaroutweighfunnymov

8、ies.应改为:Themeritsofseriousmoviesfaroutweighthoseoffunnymovies.（those指代的是前半句的比较对象merits）2. 托福写作句子不完整不完整句子指的是句子当中缺少主语或谓语等,无法形成一个完整的句子.比如:Amoviethatinspiresdeepemotions.（只有名词加定语从句,不是完整的句子）应改为:ShewenttoseeTheSilverStar,amoviethatinspiresdeepemotions.3. 托福写作句子不间断不间断句子指的是用逗号来连接两个完整的句子.比如:Thereisincreasing

9、lywidespreadrelianceonelectronicmail,somepeoplestillresistusingit,especiallythosewhopreferhandwrittenletters.应改为:Althoughthereisincreasinglywidespreadrelianceonelectronicmail,somepeoplestillresistusingit,especiallythosewhopreferhandwrittenletters.（根据两句之间的关系,加入连词）4. 托福写作句子主谓不一致主谓不一致指的是句子中主语与谓语没有保持数的一

10、致.比如:Manystudentsthinkstomorrowisaholiday.应改为:Manystudentsthinktomorrowisaholiday.再比如:Theuseofcellphonesduringconcertsarenotallowed.应改为:Theuseofcellphonesduringconcertsisnotallowed.5. 托福写作可数名词完整可数名词裸奔指的是可数名词之前没有冠词,也没有变为复数形式.比如:Evene_pertorscholarspecializinginacertainfieldmightcoveravastspectrumofkn

11、owledgeinordertosucceed.应改为:Evene_pertsorscholarsspecializinginacertainfieldmightcoveravastspectrumofknowledgeinordertosucceed.（可数名词变复数形式）6. 托福写作but和however用法but和however都表示转折,但是but是连词,而however是副词,也就是说however是不能来连接两个独立分句的.比如:Printedbooksarelimitedinspace,however,spaceisnotanissueforelectronicones.应改为

12、:Printedbooksarelimitedinspace.However,spaceisnotanissueforelectronicones.（用句号将原句分成两个独立分句）托福写作模板4大开篇方法教你如何起头一.可以先表明自己的立场,再阐述原因Businessesareaslikelyasaregovernmentstoestablishlargebureaucracies,butbureaucracyisfarmoredamagingtoabusinessthanitistoagovernment.Contrarytothestatementspremise,myviewisthat

13、businessesarelesslikelythangovernmenttoestablishlargebureaucracies,becausebusinessesknowthattheyaremorevulnerablethangovernmenttodamageresultingfrombureaucraticinefficiencies.Mypositioniswellsupportedbycommonsenseandbyobservation.二.比较新颖.有创意的开头Astechnologiesandthedemandforcertainserviceschange,manywo

14、rkerswilllosetheirjobs.Theresponsibilityforthosepeopletoadjusttosuchchangeshouldbelongtotheindividualworker,nottogovernmentortobusiness.Asasayinggoes,Godhelpsthosehelpthemselves,whichistrueinmostcases.Butasfarasthelargenumbersoflaid-offworkerscausedbythetechnologicalandmarketchangesareconcerned,Ibel

15、ievethegovernmentandthebusinesscertainlyhaveanunshakableresponsibilitytotake.三.可以适当的复述一下题目,然后稍作让步,再表达自己的观点和立场Workgreatlyinfluencespeoplespersonallivestheirspecialinterests,theirleisureactivities,eventheirappearancewayfromtheworkplace.Thespeakerclaimsthatourjobsgreatlyinfluenceourpersonalinterests,re

16、creationalactivitiesandevenappearance.WhileIagreethatthepersonallivesofsomepeoplearelargelydeterminedbytheirwork,inmyviewitwouldbeamistaketodrawthisconclusiongenerally.Inmyobservation,thee_tenttowhichoccupationinfluencespersonallifedependsonthenatureofthework,ands sense of self.howcentraltheworkisto

17、one to mean thatWeshapeourbuildingsandafterwardsourbuildingsshapeus.Ibelievethisstatementshouldbeinterpretedbroadlyweareinfluencedbythee_teriorshapeofbuildings,aswellasbythearrangementofmultiplebuildingsandbyabuildingsvariousarchitecturalandaestheticelements.WhileIdoubtthatbuildingsdetermineourchara

18、cterorbasicpersonalitytraits,Iagreethattheycangreatlyinfluenceourattitudes,moods,andevenlifestyles.新托福写作可以以提问方式开头,阐述自己的观点,再表明自己的立场Astechnologiesandthedemandforcertainserviceschange,manyworkerswilllosetheirjobs.Theresponsibilityforthosepeopletoadjusttosuchchangeshouldbelongtotheindividualworker,nottogovernmentortob