012019英语一写作宝典12章

1、惊喜关注【最强】WeLearn 写作宝典英语一第一章、英语写作（一）简介达Part ADirections: Suppose you are a librarian in your university. Write a notice about 100 words, providing the newly-enrolled international students with relevant information about the library.You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.Do not sign your own name

2、 at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following your essay, you should1. describe the pictures briefly,2. interpret its intended meaning, and3. give your comments.picture inYou should writ

3、e neatlyon the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)第二章、英语写作（一）评分标准2 分首段描述The picture shows the father to play games, son let fathers. The other is a father1主讲：达惊喜关注【最强】WeLearn 写作宝典英语一and son study together.6 分首段描述This comic picture the two family life respectively that express dramaticly different education wa

4、ys to their child. A father who is watching TV order his son to do his homework seriously in the first picture. But in the second picture, the situation is another way round that the child of his hardworking father isadmiring him.10 分首段描述In the left picture, we see a room placed a sofa, where sits a

5、 man watching TV and making a demand of his son studying efficiently just as in an undisturbed environment. On the contrary, the father in the right picture studies hard withhis son even at 9:00 in the night.14 分首段描述We can see in the first picture a little boy writing his homework as well as his fat

6、her who is watching TV saying “focus on your study”. However, in the second picture, instead of amusing himself, the father is reading together with his littleson.18 分首段描述The two pictures compare two distinct methods of fostering children. In the picture on the left, a young boy his attention obviou

7、sly distracted by the TV program his father is watching behind is urged repeatedly by the latter to focus on his homework. In the picture on the right, however, the student and his father are working on their own assignments by desks at about nine in theevening.【评分细则】2主讲：达惊喜关注【最强】WeLearn 写作宝典英语一第五档

8、A 节（9-10 分）B 节（17-20 分） 很好地完成了试题规定的任务。包含所有内容要点；使用丰富的语法结构和词汇；语言自然流畅，语法错误极少；有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰；格式和语域恰当贴切。对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。第四档 A 节（7-8 分）B 节（13-16 分）较好地完成了试题规定的任务。包含所有内容要点，漏掉 1、2 个次重点；使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇；语言基本准确，只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别语法错误；采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰，组织较严密；格式和语域较恰当。对目标读者完全产生了预期效果。第三档 A 节（5-6 分）B 节（9-1

9、2 分） 基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但包含多数内容要点；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求；有一些语法及词汇错误，但不影响理解；采用了简单的衔接手法，内容较连贯，层次较清晰；格式和语域基本合理。对目标读者基本完全产生了预期的效果。第二档 A 节（3-4 分）B 节（5-8 分） 未能按要求完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点，写了一些无语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；有较多语法结构及词汇方面的错误，影响对于写；的理解；3主讲：达惊喜关注【最强】WeLearn 写作宝典英语一未采用恰当的衔接手法，内容缺少连贯性；格式和语域不恰当。未能清楚地传达信息给读者。第一档 A

10、节（1-2 分）B 节（1-4 分） 未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容，且有许多不相关的内容；语法项目和词汇的使用单调、重复；语言错误多，有碍读者对内容的理解，语言运动能力差；未采用任何衔接手法，内容不连贯，缺少组织、分段；无格式和语域概念。未能传达信息给读者。零档 （0 分）所传达的信息所使用语言太少，无法评价；内容与要求无关或无法辨认。【关于内容要点】6 分范文In our daily life, there are a majority of parents looking like the man in the left picture. They may have a heav

11、y work during the day, so that they watch TV when they come back home to relax. Meanwhile, the child asked to study may feel upset and unwilling. While there are also some parents looking like the right man, they work alongside the child studying hard, do the things that they wantchild to do rather

12、than ask.14 分范文Education methods, undoubtedly, exert enormous influence on childrens lives. The father neglects the childs feeling nothing more than ordering him. According to the recent research, as the demands are made by parents constantly, teenagers will have a tendency to rebel. Seldom can they

13、 taste thefruits of success. Conversely, the qualified father knows the principalrequirement of the childs domestic education is being a m, giving4主讲：达惊喜关注【最强】WeLearn 写作宝典英语一atmosphere of study. Consequently, his son has a good command of studyingvoluntary without fathers demands. The child bounds t

14、o succeed in the end.【关于语法结构和词汇】（外刊好词好句）Just as drones（无人机） can make up for poor roads, the theory goes, mobile phones can overcome a lack of well-functioning banks, portable solar panels can stand in for missing power stations and free learningapps can substitute for patchy education.（学生）We live in

15、 different countries, speak different languages, but loveis something common to us all. But howdifferent people in different countries.to showlovemay be differentwith（如何丰富语法结构和词汇）例 1：年轻人应该学会相互尊重。例 2：大多数老年人都渴望安度晚年。【关于语言错误】（2009 年范文）As is illustrated in the cartoon, eachsits in theirown work room. In

16、front of them is a computer. Everyone looks at the screen carefully, and communicate with their colleagues through the net instead of talking face to face. Their work places are placed like a net. And below thecartoon, there is a topic which says: the near and far among the Internet.5主讲：达惊喜关注【最强】WeL

17、earn 写作宝典英语一一眼可识别的语言错误整（主要表现为缺少谓语）句子成分句子成分多余（主要表现为连写谓语或连写句）名词短语类错误（主要表现为冠词、单复数、可数不可数）常见搭配(动词短语、形容词短语和名词短语)例 1：There are many ways to keep fit. Swimming, skating, climbing, jogging,and so on.例 2：Many people are afraid of making choices. Because they fear that whatare not chosen might turn out to be b

18、etter.例 3：Quite a few young people think that protect the environment is none oftheir businesses.7 分范文As is shown in the picture, a women make a elation who are holding a girl, looked innocent. When the girl grow up a beautiful lady, she came to the sameplace with her mother and the sis full of resp

19、onsibility and wisdom. As afamily member, we should support each other in our life.3 分范文Theres no doubt that this picture is touched me. When the girl was a child, shes mother was held her hand. Now the little girl has grown-up and she is supports her mother. The picture illustrates that the accompa

20、niment is the best love.【关于结构和连贯性】（2002 年范文）There is no reason to make a fuss about this phenomenon.6主讲：达惊喜关注【最强】WeLearn 写作宝典英语一With the rapid development of technology and economy, the world is becoming smaller and smaller, and international cultural exchanges have become more and more frequent, wh

21、ich is inevitably improving our mutual understanding andfriendship with other countries.（2012 年学生）Some people are always positive toward difficulties in life,while others are easy to give up. Whats worse, its a common sense that life is always hard, and difficulties, failures and so on may happen in

22、 our daily lives. So, how can we deal with this fact? Maybe, keeping a positive attitude to life can help us to turn the difficulties into favorable situations. What's more, we should also take actions at once to handle problems. Instead, what a pity it willbe if we fail to see hope and just giv

23、e up.A 节范文精讲Directions: You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to1) make an apology, and2) suggest a solution.You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.Do not sign your own name at

24、the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.Dear Bob,How are you these days? Please say hello to Liz and Maple.Ive got to say apology to you, due to my carelessness and the crammed schedule before I left Canada, I forgot to return to you the music CD of M.J. I discovered that only when I arrived ho

25、me and started to unpack myluggage. Fortunately, one of my colleagues is leaving for your city next week,7主讲：达惊喜关注【最强】WeLearn 写作宝典英语一and he has promised to take the some small gifts from my family.All my best wishes!CD to you directly. Also, hell take to youYours,Li MingB 节范文精讲“火锅”，既美味又营养Inthe picture above is a large hot pot. But differenthot pot, in which you see beef or lamb, luncheonfrom the traditionalmeet, mushrooms,and a variety of vegetables, in this hot pot are various “cultural foodstuffs” ofbothand foreign origins: Confucious, Aristotle, and Shakespea