高中英语学案：Unit+4+Friends+forever+Period+Ⅳ+Word版含解析

1、高中英语讲义Period IV Writing |读后续写友谊技法指至本单元写作的要求是读后续写，主题是友谊，在续写部分要做到想象合理，上下衔接，内容通顺，逻辑合理，在写作时要注意以下几点：1 .通读全文，把握文本的脉络和画线词及用起文本的关键词，理清人物关系，在此基础上确定故事发展的方向，构思情节。2 .判断画线词与主题内容的关联度，确定要选用的词语。3 .阅读提示段的首句，进行解读、布局，注意要同时兼顾两段的首句进行谋 篇。4 .注意人称、时态、语言风格与原来文本的一致性；注意词汇的丰富性和准 确性。，经典句式1. I will value our friendship forever.我

2、将永远珍惜我们之间的友谊。2. A friend accepts you as you are.朋友就是接受原本的你。3. A friend will add beauty to your life, like a sweet-scented flower.朋友就像芬芳怡人的鲜花，总会为你的生活增光添彩。4. There is nothing better than seeing the smiling faces of friends.没有什么比看到朋友的笑脸更好的了。5. With tears streaming down her face, she expressed her heart

3、felt gratitude.泪水滚下脸颊，她表达了衷心的感谢。6. It is the books we donated that bridge the friendship between us and the students in that village school.正是我们捐赠的图书，架起了我们与那所乡村小学学生之间的友谊之桥。7. My best friend is the one who brings out the best in me.我最好的朋友促使我展现出最好的自己。8. Only through this experience did I have a deeper

4、 understanding of the sayingAfriend in need is a friend indeed.”就是通过这次经历，我才对“患难见真情”这句谚语有了更深的理解。，典例演练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Steve was the most amazing person in all of Minneapolis, and he was my cousin. By the age of 19, Steve was a star baseball player at the University of Minnesota. I wanted

5、 to be exactly like him. So when Steve asked me to go with him on a spring fishing trip in northern Minnesota, I was excited!After planning the trip, we gathered clothes and supplies, and began our great adventure. We reached the Superior National Forest in northern Minnesota by early evening. On ou

6、r way to the campsite,_Steve pointed to a small house faraway in one of the mountains, saying that it was the ranger station （护林站）where the forester worked.Finally, after a long walk, we reached the campsite and set up the camp as the sun was setting. Steve knew all the tricks of an experienced wild

7、erness camper. After we gathered enough wood from the forest, he started the campfire using only stone and steel no matches. For supper we feasted on freeze-ied beef, wild rice and pea soup. I ate greedily after all that work.Tired enough, we climbed into our sleeping bags early and talked about our

8、 plans for fishing the next day. We were still talking quietly when a sudden north wind picked up; the temperature dropped and it began to snow. Steve found a way to increase the temperature inside the tent. He dragged a 10g原木）from the forest to the opposite side of the campfire. Then he wrapped alu

9、minum foil （专吕箔）around the log. The heat from the fire reflected off the foil and into the tent. Soon images of lake fish were filling my dreams.The snow had stopped, but sometime later a powerful wind must have kicked up the flames of our dying fire. I was abruptly awakened by Steve. Our tent was o

10、n fire. Frightened, I ran out of the tent immediately. The tent collapsed （倒塌）with Steve inside. Without any thought of endangering myself, I reached into the burning tent and pulled him to the icy lake. Fortunately, we were not seriously hurt.汪忠：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段

11、，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 :Later, as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm, we considered our difficult situation.Paragraph 2 :Suddenly,we hearda noise in the forest.精彩范文Paragraph 1 :Later, as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm, we considered our difficult situati

12、on. Our campsite was in the deep of theforest,_really far away from the highway. We were in the middle of nowhere, wearing only underwear, with our supplies burnt into ashes, including our cellphones. Even Steve was unsure what to do next. The only thing we could do was just sitting in the cold air

13、and wondering how to get out of the forest.Paragraph 2 :Suddenly,we heard a noise in the forest. Anxiously we listened and stared into the darkness. A jeep appeared. A forester had spotted the light from the fire and had come to have a check. We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us

14、 to the ranger_station,_where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents. Steve and I had many more camping adventures from then on, but it was on this trip that Steve began to treat me more like a friend and equal, rather than a younger cousin. Our friendship continues to this day.总评 续

15、写文章整体自然流畅，故事安排合情合理，情节贴合各段提示句内容，分别写困境和获救，由铺垫到结局，凸显了他们之间友谊的发展，文末最后亮点呈现(1) “We were in the middle of nowhere, wearing . with .旬中使用了 wearing分 词短语作伴随状语及with复合结构，使语言简洁凝练。(2) . ranger station, where we中定语从句的运用准确到位。(3) “but it was on this trip that .强调句白运用突出了这次经历的重要意义。S3跟踪演练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I w

16、as taking a trip out of town and had to get up early to catch a flight. A friend who lives ten minutes ride from the airport had kindly offered to drop me there on his way to work that morning. I planned to drive to his house, park my car there, and carpool with him the rest of the way. It turned ou

17、t that I didnt leave early enough,as I hit up against some very unexpected traffic along the way. At 6: 10 am, I literally moved one mile in 45 minutes. (If the road was clear, it would only take 25 minutes to drive to this friends house.)Given the early hour, I hadnt budgeted much buffer (缓冲)time f

18、or traffic into this trip. It was a workday morning, and I didnt want to make my_friend late for work, so as I sat stalled in traffic, I called him to let him know I could just park the car at his house and take the subway to the airport. But he insisted that he wouldnt be late, and that he was stil

19、l happy to offer a ride. By the time I finally got through the traffic, he informed me, Youll miss your flight if you stop at our house. Well meet you at the airport! ”This meant that he, his wife and their infant would all pile into their car, just to meet me at the airport before the start of thei

20、r workday! I was hesitant to receive such an offer as they would be really going out of their way and doing all the heavy-lifting. But he immediately replied,_ What are friends for? ” At that time, all I wanted to do is to express my gratitude to him and his family for their kindness.The thing is, h

21、e is a friend I actually dont know all that well. He is a childhood friend of an older sibling ofmine, and I was always friendly with him, but from a distance. We were not very up-to-date or involved in each others lives. Given this loose kinship, I was truly disarmed 顺心）by his genuine intentions to

22、 go the extra mile for no other reason but to help me out. There was really nothing else in it for him.汪忠：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 :When I arri ved at the airport, they pulled up behind meshortly after.Paragraph 2 :As I w

23、alked up the ramp （舷梯），I received a 2-word text messagefrom my two generousfriends: Makeit? ”写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。一位作者并不认为很亲密的朋友对作者前往机场路上的无私帮助令作者对友谊有了新的认知。精彩范文Paragraph 1 :好好努力梦想终会实现-8 -When I arrived at the airport, they pulled up behind me shortly after. My friend and I exchanged kisses and quick hugs as

24、 I hastily expressed my profuse gratitude upon which they effortlessly and instantly replied, 7t3 no problemThe words were uttered in a way that I could tell they really meantitfrom the bottom of their hearts. Really. No problem. I rushed insidef moved through security, and ran to my gate, where the

25、 screen read Final Boarding Calland the only face in sight was that of the ticket attendant. Handing her my boarding passf I curiously asked, Am I the last one?”AImost；she replied with a smMParagraph 2 :As I walked up the ramp 3玄梯)/ received a 2- wordtext message from my two generous friends: Make i

26、t?” / entered the plane, sank down into my empty seat, and breathed a siqh of relief. On the ptanef, I texted backJYus! -JJrand “Woohoo!” were their immediate replies. A smile spread across my face as I turned my phone off for the flight. Nothing like an airport adventure can deepen the bonds betwee

27、n childhood acquaintances because of the genuine intentions.课外拓展阅读一一中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式The Mid- Autumn Festival, also _1_ (know) as the Moon Festival, is a traditional festival for both the Han people _2_ minority nationalities. In China and throughout many Asian countries

28、, people celebrate the Harvest Moon, because the night of the full moon _3_ (signal) a time of completeness and abundance.This festival celebrates three fundamental concepts that are _4_ (close) connected: gathering, thanksgiving and praying. It is a day for families _5_ (hold) a family reunion and spend time together. Celebrations kick off with a special meal at home, similar 6 a western Christmas or Thanksgiving dinner. Then everyone