仁爱版英语中考真题复习专题8书面表达(答案与解析版)

1、专题08书面表达第二节书面表达55.假如你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的，有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。要求：(1) 80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)信中不得出现真实人名和校名。Dear Henry,I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of lo sing the basketball game 【答案】Dear Henry,I learned that y

2、ou are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It's not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too hard on yourself.You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters i

3、s that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts

4、 to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua 【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料的书信作文。假如你是李华，就输球事件安慰Henry,谈谈你对此事的看法，并就 如何取得队友的理解提出建议。人称为第二人称，时态以一般现在时为主。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料 确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，但不要逐句翻译，补充两条个人的观点并提出建议。注 意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章

5、的文采。高分句型： What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. 重要的是你应该从比赛中吸 取教训，也要从错误中吸取教训。What matters is that重要的是，that引导的是表语从句。as well as常用来连接两个并列的成分，作 也，还“讲。高分句型二：And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to betteryour skills.你可以保证你会不遗余力地提高你的技能。that引导的是宾语从句，sp

6、are no efforts to do sth.不遗余力做某事。高分句型三： If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.如果大家齐心协力，你们一定会赢得下一场比赛。此句是if引导的条件状语从句；be sure to do sth.必定做某事。第三节情景作文51.假定你是李华，准备参加 /带一路”国家中学生英语演讲比赛，主题为 现在引领未来请你写一篇演讲稿，包括以下内容：(1)你最难忘的一个书包是怎么得来的？(2)你喜欢它吗？为什么？(3)描述你将来的书包。注意：词数80左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行

7、文连贯；(3)文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。【答案】I have a beautiful school bag. My grandma bought it for me last autumn as a birthday present. I like it very much.My bag is a blue one, and blue is my favourite colour. On the bag, you can see a little tiger, It's very lovely. There are many books in my bag, such

8、 as Chinese books, English books and others. And there is a nice pencil-box, too. Inside the bag, there is a small pocket. I often put some money and keys in it. When I study my lessons, the bag is always together with me. It is my close friend, I will take good care of it.In the future, the bag wil

9、l better than now. It will be smaller and more useful. I hope bag will not so heavy.Though bag in the future will be small, they have big capacity. Bag should be cheap and fashion, too. As far as I am concerned, our own bag will just be opened by ourselves. How great bag !【解析】【详解】1、题干解读：本文属于材料作文，主要介

10、绍你的书包以及你喜欢它的原因，最后畅想一下未来的 书包是什么样子的。2、例文点评：本文采用三段式，第一段讲述你的书包的来历，第二段讲述你喜欢这个书包以及原因，第三 段畅想一下未来的书包。3、tWj分凫点:单词短语： There be, such as, too, take good care of, in the future,as far as I am concerned 等。句型：How great bag中how引导的感叹句。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用至U的表达， 例如 There be, such as, take

11、 good care of, in the future, How great bag 中 how 弓I导的感叹句等； 然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如 too, as far as I am concerned；最后, 要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言， 大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。46.情景作文哈佛大学一项研究表明，爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感，更有前途.请你以 "Help with Som

12、eHousework”为题写一篇8o词左右的英语短文，描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法.参考词汇：Chorestake out the rubbishsweep the floorwash the clothes do the disheswater the flowers cook breakfast/lunchOpinionsPros： develop our independence take care of ourselves Cons： a waste of time no need to 注意：文中不得出现真实的校名和人名.Help with Some HouseworkI

13、t is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy . As for me ,【答案】Help with Some HouseworkIt is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy . As for me , I often help them do housework . I take out the

14、rubbish away and sweep the floor in the morning . I help my mother cook the lunch . I always wash clothes and do the dishesfor my family . My parents are very happy . Besides, Watering the flowers is also my duty . I like them very much and take good care of them . After supper, I always wash dishes

15、.（平时所作家务）I think it can develop our independence and take good care of ourselves .【高分句型一】In a word , the morehousework I do , the happier my parents will be .（家务的看法）【高分句型二】【解析】【详解】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，以 "Help with Some Housework"为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文， 描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法，要具体说出支持或反对的理由。本文主要时态是一般现在 时。写作

16、时，尽量避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英 语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 用到的词组：take out the rubbish倒垃圾；sweep the floor扫地；wash the clothes 洗衣服；do the dishes 洗餐具；water the flowers 浇花；cook breakfast/lunch 做早饭/午饭 。四、71 .情景作文湘西自治州正在进行美丽湘西”建设，我们要积极参与 美丽湘西”建设活动，从小事做起，让我们家乡变得更美

17、。作为学生，请以“Start out small为题，用英语写一篇倡议书。要点提示：1.多种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木。72 购物时重复使用袋子。73 不乱扔垃圾，保持河流等干净。74 遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。要求：1.80词以上。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；2 .文章须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思通顺、语气连贯、过渡自然。不得在作文中出现学校真实 的名称和学生的真实姓名。参考词7匚： protect the environment ； reuse bags； plant； cut down； throw； wait in line ； be wie； oboeysart out

18、snalStart out smallHello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown?【答案】Start out smallHello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our homet

19、own ? In order to make our hometown more beautiful , as students, I think we should start from small things. First of all, we should know the importance of protecting the environment. We should plant more trees and flowers and not cut down trees randomly. Second, we had better reuse the bag when sho

20、pping. We can't throw rubbish about, and we should keep the rivers clean and so on. In addition, we must obey public rules and be civilized students. When we got on the bus, we should wait in line.【解析】【详解】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下如何才能为美丽湘西”建设做出贡献。所提供的材料中列举了我们要积极参与美丽湘西”建设活动，从小事做起，让我们白家乡变得更美。主要从 1.多

21、种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木。2.购物时重复使用袋子。3 .不乱扔垃圾，保持河流等干净。4.遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。这四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时， 人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语, 尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓 一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】I think we should start from small things. 我认为我们应该从小事做起。we should start from sma

22、ll things. 做 think的宾语。【高分句型二】When we got on the bus, we should wait in line. 我们应该排队等候上车。句子 When we got on the bus 是由 when 引导的时间状语从句。五、B）作文51.最近， 你美国的笔友Tony 在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件-提出你的一些建议。建议内容包括：遇到问题多倾诉，多与他人分享情绪，尊重他人，与人为善，诚实守信要求：1.词数60-80,开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数；2可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。3文中不得出现真实姓名、学

23、校等信息。参考词汇: share solve respect friendly be honest toDear Tony,I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates: I'm glad to help you.I hope everything will go well with you soonyours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Tony.I'm sany to hear that you have problems with classmates. I'm ghd to hel

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25、osed 1 0 re 器口 Let live tn. Th- you “ uiild he tricqdly to 口口口口把 iiround you. You chti help 。"此匚 Lat but ikh IcawL you have【0 he hbnest U)ycur friends. Thsn 丫口" yil w】uk亡 电nr tridnd治 I hope everything will go well with you sucn,Yours, Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一封电子邮件。首先，用情态动词提建议，最后希望能交到跟多朋友。【详解】本文对

26、于遇到的问题提出建议，分步骤给出合理建议，最后对朋友要诚实，并希望能够交到更多 朋友。六、第三节书面表达56.在英语课上,老师将组织以 说出你的烦恼"(Speak out your worries的主题的交流活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下表格中提供的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，说出你的烦恼和愿望。WorriesWishestoo strict, too much homeworkless homework little time for outdoor activitiesmore chances hard to commu nicate with get on well with要求

27、：1短文须包含表格中的所有信息 ，并适当发挥；2词数：80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。Hello, everyone,I am Li Hua. I'd like to speak out my worries and wishes. That's all. Thank you.【答案】Hello, everyone,I am Li Hua. I'd like to speak out my worries and wishes. My teachers are too strict. They have too m

28、uch homework to do every day And I feel stressed too much I wish I can have less homework. I think my parents are too strict with me They give us little time for outdoor activities. It's hard for me to communicate with their parents I wish I can have more chances to play with my friends. I wish

29、I can get on well with my parents.That's all. Thank you.【解析】【详解】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。七、情景作文51.每年三月的最后一个星期一是“全闭中小学生安全教育日”。 为了提高同学们的安全意

30、识, 学校决定在毕业前再举行一次以安全教育为主题的班会。请根据所给提示, 就日常生活中需要注意的安全写一篇英语发言稿。提示： 1 上学、放学途中的安全；2 校园里的安全；3. 家里的安全。要求： 1. 80 词左右 , 开头与结尾已给出, 不计入总词数；2. 语法正确, 语句通顺、流畅；3 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。Hello, everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary andMiddle School Students. As middle school

31、 students, weshouldSafety is important. We should always keep it in mind.Thank you!【答案】Hello, everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary andMiddle School Students. As middle school students, we should pay more attention to safety. To be safe, we must fo

32、llow rules.When we go to school or go home from school, we must follow the traffic rules For example, we must walk on walk-side. When we cross zebra-crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across the road fast. We mustn't run through red lights when crossing the road. Don't play foot

33、ball on the road. At school, don't push when we go upstairs or downstairs, or we may hurt ourselves or others. Never use sharp things like the knife when we play with our classmates. We should get on well with our classmates. Don't fight with them, or we'll be hurt.At home, we should be

34、careful when we use electricity. If there is a fire or a thief, we should call the police for help in time. Also, food safety is important. Never eat the food that goes bad.Safety is very important. We should always keep it in mind.Thank you!【解析】【详解】本文属于话题作文，就日常生活中如何注意安全提一些建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思

35、连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如pay attention to, follow the traffic rules, play with, get on well with, fightwith, in time 以及祈使句 stop and look right and left 以及 don' t play football on the roa落，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。56.作文假如下面是你们班教室里的照片墙，

36、墙上记录了中考前学习和生活的点点滴流，以及考前老师的温馨提示。忘不了备战中考时充实而快乐的时光，请你以"Preparation for High School Entrance Exam （备战中考）为题,写一篇80-100词的短文。1 .请阐述图中信息，可适当发挥;2 .文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;3.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确。金Finish doingHave enough sleep0Be on timePreparation for High School Entrance Exam【答案】 Preparation for High School Entrance

37、 ExamHigh School Entrance Exam is arriving. I still remember the days when our teachers and students workedtogether to prepare for it. In order to get a good grade, we all listened to the teachers carefully in class and tooknotes at the same time. After class, we finished our homework on time. If we

38、 had some difficult problems, ourteachers would explain to us in details. All the teachers encouraged us not to give up and keep on studying. Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on. We also did exercise every day

39、 and had enough sleep. The teachers told us not to feel stressful and learn to relax.We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes. What' s more, we must be on time. We all felt tirednervous, but what a full and happy time!【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以Preparation for High School Entrance Exam 为题，

40、介绍备战中考的时光。题目中用照片墙的形式呈现了备战的具体内容，并给出了一些关键词，学生们应依据这些图片和关键词，展开合理的想象，充实细节内容，并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文的主要内容应包括三个方面：分学习、生活和提示三个方面解析介绍，注意分清层次和结构，合理安排各个方面的信息，注意上下文的衔接、过渡应自然。短文应以第一人称为主来叙述，时态应为一般过去时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，清晰、准确地表达自己的意思。而为了提升作文档次，应在文中穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂

41、句式和结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。这是一篇比较不错的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己和老师们一起备战中考的一段充实、快乐的时光。题目以照片墙的形式展示了备战的过程和内容，非常新颖独特，分析照片墙可知，文章应从三个方面进行介绍：学习、生活以及老师对学生的提示。这篇短文也正是按照这个思路进行展开叙述的。短文层次很清晰，叙述也很清楚。短文主要使用了一般过去时态，符合表达的需要，语法规范，注意了动词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。语句通顺，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句子以简单句为基础，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句等复合句句型，调整了文章的节奏

42、。短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如 I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it. 、 If wehad some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details. 、 Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat,

43、 vegetables and so on.、 We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes. 等等。九、书面表达。51.根据一项新的调查，学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育，请以“ How to Protect Yourself in a Fire 为题，提出你的建议。 ”要求：1. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。2. 书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于80.参考词汇：cover v. 遮盖 take the lift 乘坐电梯exit n. 出口 towel n

44、. 毛巾 shut off 切断【答案】How to Protect Yourself in a FireAccording to a new survey, student safety has become a big problem. You should know some ways to protect yourself .It will help to keep you safe in the fire .First, You should shut off the electricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towe

45、l. you mustn't take the lift or jump off a window, You should find the exit. The most important thing is to keep calm.If you can't go in the house, the safest place is close to water, like washroom .If the fire is serious,you should call 119 for help. These may help us.【解析】【详解】根据一项新的调查，学生安全已

46、经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育，请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire为题，提出你的建议。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连 接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误 及标点误用等。这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如First, You should shut off theelectricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towel等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。七、书面表达56."读万卷书，行万里路"，研学旅行现在受到教育主管部门和学校的高度重视，也深受学生和家长的欢迎.假如你们学校的英文网站就研学旅行中需要注意的事项发帖，征集建议.请你根据