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1、76. 免费上大学使得家景不好的学生有同等的上学机会正确的句子:Freeuniversityeducationmakesitpossibleforstudentsfromlesswell-offbackgroundstohaveequalaccesstotertiaryeducation.我的句子：Freetuitionfeesencourages主谓不一致studentsfrompoorfamiliestohavetheequalopportunitytoaccesstoeducation.(haveequalopportunitiestoreceiveaneducation)形式主语：It

2、ispossibleforstudentsfromlesswell-offbackgroundstohaveequalaccesstotertiaryeducationduetofreeuniversityeducation.Haveequalaccessto对.有平等机会Access不可数n前面不用加定冠词或不定冠词。等同availableHaveeasyaccessto更容易Access(v)接触到信息动词形式用的较少上大学:Highereducation/universityeducation/collegeeducationFreetuition不可数美式/freetuitionfee

3、s英式可数/Freeuniversityeducation免费上大学fromlesswell-offbackgrounds省略whoare家境不好或disadvantaged/deprived穷well-offbackgrounds家境好Freecolegeoduedtionallotsthestudentwhocannotoffordedhaveequallytrancetostudy.Thestudent表示特指没有必要用students情态动词Can后接动词原形do改为affordHaveequallychance此处equally是副词不修饰名词应改为equal且本句语意不对，应改为t

4、ostudyatuniversity改：Freecollegeeducationallowsstudentswhocannotaffordtuitionfeestohaveanequalchancetostudyatuniversity.Rifr!-lj'Mliryfduirn,aiiI.r，smf*rfri'Hmdr'I上m1以七为mHmi*ipiir?.耳m_一_Mbiilir=-主谓不一致Students前不用加theGetequalaccessto不准确一般用have改：Freeuniversityeducationallowsstudentsfromdisad

5、vantagedbackgroundstohaveequalaccesstoeducation.uirntd&aJmtanill匡loriluderits.ffomibkgroiinde-qudltducaliori-定语从句没有谓语应加areMakeitpossibleforsbtohaveaneducation/receiveanequaleducation改：Freeuniversityeducationcanmakeitpossibleforstudentswhoarefromdisadvantagedtohaveanequaleducation.77. 很多人觉得自己有必要赶

6、时尚。正确的句子:Manypeopleconsideritnecessarytofollowfashion.我的句子:Alargenumberofpeoplethinkitisnecessarytochase不要直译fashion.形式主语：Itisnecessaryforpeopletofollowfashion但是没有体现觉得的意思觉得：Consider/think097Tonya31赶时尚:Followfashion/keepupwithfashion/keepuptodatewithfashion不时髦：Outoffashion/behindthecurve(非正式，可以用在口语里)M

7、anypeoplefeelitnecessarytofollowfashion.Feelitnecessary直译feel用在feelcomfortable较合适应用thinkorconsider改:Manypeopleconsideritnecessarytofollowfashion.manypeoplethinkthatthe>arenecessarytocatchfashion没有sbisnecessarytodosth这种表达一般catchthetrain较多书面语一般不用catchfashion.改:Manypeoplethinkitnecessarytokeepupwith

8、fashion78. 经费削减让很多年轻人很难接受大学教育。正确的句子:Budgetcutsmakeitdifficultformanyyoungpeopletoreceiveacollegeeducation.我的句子：Budgetcutsmakeithardforyoungpeopletoreceivethe(a)universityeducation.削减经费：Budgetcuts(n)主语是复数，谓语动词为原型/cuttingthebudget谓语动可数n预算之内词为单数Budget自己或组织可用的钱预算Statebudget政府经费Withinbudgetliveonatightbu

9、dget生活很困苦穷游：budgettraveltax/job/spending/paycuts一般用复数形式Cut(cn)表示reduction时，有词伙：78.Th*budgetreducediscoursesmanyyodogpeopletoretfivetertiaryeducation.Discourage不鼓励v没有budgetreduce用budgetcutsTertiaryeducation不要裸奔加不定冠词改:Budgetcutsdiscouragemanyyoungpeopletoreceiveatertiaryeducation.79. 有时候，很难去评估人类行为的环境代

10、价。正确的句子:Sometimes,itisdifficulttoevaluatetheenvironmentalcostofhumanactivities.我的句子:Sometimes,itisdifficulttoassesstheenvironmentalcostcausedbyhumansdailybehavior.再用这个词写人类行为我就打死你Sometimesadv有时候，偶尔表频率Sometime一段时间Sometimes几次不能用sbisdifficultCost可数/不可数表代价时为了达成某个目的失去的东西/成本Environmentalcost环境代价不要用price.Pr

11、ice指钱的价格Raiseenvironmentalawareness环境的意识评估assess/evaluate不强调结果，强调审核过程Judge评判，强调结果人类行为：behavior不可数n短暂的行为humanactivities词伙Sometimes,itishardtoasses5theenxironinentalcostofhumanbehavious.Behavior不可数不能加s改:Sometimes,itishardtoassesstheenvironmentalcostofhumanactivities.Sometimes.itishardtoevaluateenviron

12、mentalexpensesofpeople'sbehaviors.Environmentalexpenses错误Expense话费cost成本/代价expenditure开支Revenue收入毛利（会计）governmentrevenue政府收入profit利益纯利润（会计）Behavior不可数不能加s且用humanactivities词伙改：Sometimes,itishardtoevaluateenvironmentalcostofhumanactivities刁ItdifficulttoevaluatetheenvironmentcostoFhumandctivitieiti

13、me.Environmentcost应为environmentalcostSometimes才是正确写法改:Sometimes,itisdifficulttoevaluatetheenvironmentalcostofhumanactivities.80. 在大城市有一些贫困的社区。正确的句子:Therearesomeeconomicallydeprivedcommunitiesinlargecities.我的句子:Therearesomedisadvantaged(deprived)communitiesinbigcities.Therebe句型不能出现两个v贫困的社区：economical

14、lydeprived副词修饰形容词或用poor也可以Povertyneg.Thecountriesinpoverty.贫穷的Poverty-stricken贫穷的countries/areasM7LiivG0121Disadvantaged修饰人指的是一群因为没钱没法成功的人Therearesomepovertycommunitiesin津I日gecity.4184Six0107Poverty为n不能修饰名词改为communitiesinpoverty改：Therearesomecommunitiesinpovertyinalargecity.Inpoorcondition.Condition

15、为可数n但不表示贫穷表示状况糟糕In(a)poorcondition改：Inbigcities,therearesomecommunitiesinpoverty.81. 按照能力分班和学生的成绩没有明显的联系。正确的句子:Thereisnoclearlinkbetweengroupingstudentsbyabilityandtheirlevelsofattainment.我的句子：Thereisnoobviouscorrelations前面是is这里用复数？且单词用错betweenstudentsgrades表示分数andgroupingclassesbyabilities.Byabilit

16、yby为做某事的方法同bycar/bus/train等或用accordingtotheirabilities.根据他们的能力明显obvious/clear/apparent按能力分组groupstudentsbyability或用stream/track这两个单词已经表达按照能力分班后不用加abilityThereisnoclearlinkbetweenstreamingstudentsandtheirlevelsofattainment.分组不要用divide把整体分成部分divideintoclassify属于哪个小组或阶层的意思此处运用不恰当成绩：Academicperformance/

17、levelofattainment(学识，成就)level可数n另1J裸奔Theirlevelofattainment前面有形容词性物主代词后面名词可单可复不要用score或者mark表示分数不表示学术表现No后可加可数名词单数/复数形式82. 体育课可以促进身体健康，增强信心。正确的句子:ThePEclassimprovesstudents'physicalconditionsandbooststheirconfidence.我的句子:ThePEclasscanimprovestudents'physicalhealthandboosttheirconfidence.体育课P

18、Eclass/PElesson/PEcoursePhysical表示body,notmindPhysicaleducation表示体育这门科目PEImprove:makessthbetterPromote:encouragesthtoincrease/develop此处用恰当因为health是没法increase/develop促进身体健康:Improveone'sphysicalcondition/bodyhealth/physicalfitnessffan.tangliarothePEclasscanimprovesphysicalhealthandboostsconfidence

19、Can后面接动词原形改：ThePEclasscanimprovephysicalhealthandboostconfidence.南IPErlasffls1c»Jtprcum村studentybfiflilthcar*andanhsii尸强cmfiriTtraPromote使用不准确用improveHealthcare指医疗不指健康改：PEclassescanimprovestudents'physicalconditionsandboosttheirconfidence.Physicaleducation表示科目主谓不一致改：PEclasseshelptoimprovest

20、udents'physicalhealthandboosttheirconfidence.83. 竞争激烈，一些城市处于弱势，因为缺少资源，比如：天然气和化石燃料。正确的句子:Thecompetitionisintenseandsomecountriesareatadisadvantagebecauseofthelackofresourcessuchasnaturalgasandfossilfuels.我的句子:Thecompetitionisintenseandsomecitiesareatadisadvantagebecausetheylacknature(natural)reso

21、urcessuchasnature这是名词啊!naturalgasandfossilfuels处于弱势:Atadisadvantage词伙表示sbhasadisadvantageAdvantaged优越性的(adj)有钱有地位Disadvantaged贫穷的竞争激烈stiff/intense/fierce(程度较深)competitionCompetition表示竞争是为单数不可数n不能加s表达上匕赛意时，为可数neg.aphotographycompetition城市cities/countries缺少lack用法同accesslacksth(vt)a/thelackofsth(n)Eg.S

22、helackssth(vt)Becauseofthe/alackof(n)天然气naturalgas化石资源：fossilfuels，176rro-rkDl14f1:挣TEtH-n1(iH启奖ltrmpy®1n-riurdvotjblepositImGettrappedin在.中困住困在不好的情况口语Position位置有situation的意思beinapositiontodosth能做什么事情Unfavorableposition没有这么用的此处不适用应用atadisadvantage改：Thecompetitionisintenseandsomecitiesareatadisa

23、dvantagebecausetheylacknatureresourcessuchasnaturegasandfossilfuels.Disadvantaged贫穷的不表示不利的意思缺少lack用法同accesslacksth(vt)a/thelackofsth(n)Eg.Shelackssth(vt)Becauseofthe/alackof(n)天然气naturegas改:Somecitiesareatadisadvantageduetothelackofnaturegasandfossilfuels.84. 在发展中国家开设新的分公司可以降低生产成本，产生巨大的利润。正确的句子：Open

24、ingnewbranchesindevelopingcountriescanreducethecostofproductionandgeneratehugeprofit/generateahugeprofit.我的句子:Settingupnewcompaniesindevelopingcountriescanreduceproductioncostandcreate没有这个表达hugeprofits动名词做主语谓语动词单数开新公司open/start/setup/establishnewcompany/branchesBranch已经表示公司的意思了不要加company降低生产成本:Theco

25、stofproduction/productioncost/manufacturingcostProfit可数/不可数利润Makeaprofit/makeprofit或Earn/Generatehugeprofit产生利润发展中国家:Developingcountries发达国家：Developedcountries35“XX一EcffLif*tuBiBbtric±L9EcajijanymIhtjpirmCDLritne£cadi.Z.h&castonjiaJucticc.euictiKtsetiiatjjEofit-Branch已经表示公司的意思了不要加compa

26、nyThecostof为固定搭配巨大的用big或huge产生不用create用make/generate改：Runningnewbranchesindevelopingcountriescanreducethecostofproductionandgenerateprofit.85. 生活方式的轻微变化也能够产生巨大的变化，并且可以减少我们日常活动对环境的影响。正确的句子：Smalllifestylechangescanmakeahugedifferenceandcanreducetheenvironmentalimpactofourdailyactivities.我的句子:Slightcha

27、ngesinlifestylescanleadto没有这个表达hugedifferenceandreducetheenvironmentalimpactcausedby可以这样表达但是啰嗦一个of可以搞定了ourdailyactivities.Somechangesinlifestylescanmakehugedifferences.Change表式改变时有可数/不可数SmallchangesinlifestylescanEnvironmentalimpact环境影响词伙Healtheffect健康影响词伙日常活动dailyactivitiesDaily为adj当daily为副词时表示每日的e

28、g.Onadaily(adj)basis词伙(每天)轻微的small/slightadj一些alittle表示肯定的含义表示有一些后面加不可数名词Little否定含义几乎没有后面加不可数名词Few用在肯定句表示少后面加可数名词复数形式Afew用在肯定句表示有一点后面加可数名词复数形式Light灯光(n)很轻的(adj)eg.Lightfeather产生巨大的变化makeabig/majorchange/makeahuge/big/majordifferencetheittlechangeoflihedy岫canmaxpahitiQBdiflenercpandreducetheimpactofn

29、urdailyiactrviiiesonttieerrwiFor*mtBfineLhdrigHclbringhugedillBnencESdrdfeIieveLhe"vrcmnnentImpdtlfromhiiimar小没有thelittle且用在否定语言中较多只有little/alittleLifestyle别裸奔Environmentalimpact用词伙较准确改：Smallchangesinlifestylescanmakeahugedifferenceandreducetheenvironmentalimpactofourdailyactivities.Finechanges

30、没有这种表达fine表示小的时候是很难注意到和难以理解的意思用在这里不恰当fine(adj)表示很好动词时为罚款没有bringhugedifferences这种表达一般用makeahugedifferenceDifference前一般力日make/showRelieveimpact没有这种表达一般用reduce/mitigate(使缓和，使减轻)impactRelieve为减轻身上重担的意思感到很欣慰2CgtJIC114AsmallifMrtylechangescammakeahuedifferpricpandcanreduceimpacttotheernr-ornnemtlor时rdsily

31、sctivrties-Asmalllifestylechanges前面用a后面加复数5.5分Impacttotheenvironmentforourdailyactivities太啰嗦般用词伙environmentalimpactof改：Smallchangesinlifestylescanmakeahugedifferenceandreducetheenvironmentalimpactofourdailyactivities.-4Lllie-_1_Sifaghdyofliltlty*CJiHnlik*indCifirtdiKttfi#iTilturXtofhuPrUilKtivithK*f

32、rlYifOrlilWiLSlightly为副词不能修饰名词改：Slightchangesinlifestylescanmakeahugedifferenceandreducetheenvironmentalimpactofourdailyactivities.86. 因为没有实习机会，对他们来说提升工作技能是很难的。正确的句子：Itisdifficultforthemtoimprovejobskillsbecausetherearenoworkplacements.我的句子:Becausetheyarenoworkplacements,itishardforthemtoimprovethei

33、rjobskills.实习机会：workplacements可数名词别裸奔或者internship可数名词Intern实习生工作技能jobskills/employmentskills用are不用is是因为placements为可数名词复数therebe句型是就近原则be动词的形式跟最近的名词保持一致Skill可以用learn/hone/developaskill学习发展技能87. 大学生没办法赚到钱即使他们获得文凭。正确的句子：Universitystudentscannotearnmoneyeventhoughtheyhavegainedqualifications.我的句子:Though

34、表示尽管的意思，不是即使的意思undergraduateshavegainedqualifications,theycannotearnanymoney.Qualification文凭（可数n）Degree学位（postgraduatedegreecertificate证书（eg.计算机二级）大学生：undergraduates/universitystudents/collegestudents可数graduates表示毕业了的人postgraduates研究生即使evenif/eventhough连词前可加逗号获得文凭:get/gain/obtain/acquirequalificatio

35、nshave是有，不是获得的意思S7+Underqrodirte5cannotmoneywhichcanhelpthemtoqet定语从句运用不当导致语意偏差这里的意思是挣得可以帮助他们获得学位的钱。改：Universitystudentscannotearnmoneyeventhoughtheyhavegainedqualifications.DO?Lly<50121GradiaEestudentscannotearnthemoneyeven（houghtheyacquiredtnediploma.Graduatestudents不表示大学生用undergraduates前面一般现在时

36、后面过去时时态混乱Earnmoney中间不用加the文凭此处不能用diploma改：Undergraduatescannotearnmoneyeventhoughtheyhaveacquiredqualifications88. 因为竞争是激烈和技术的迅速发展，现在经营一家公司是一个艰巨的任务。正确的句子:Runninganorganisationintoday'sworldcanbeadauntingtask,becausethecompetitionisstiffandtechnologyisdevelopingrapidly.我的句子:Becauseofthestiffcompe

37、titionandthefastdevelopmentofthetechnology,itisahardtasktorunacompany.Nowadays现在或intoday'sworldDauntingtask表示让你没有那么自信的任务（词伙）Because引导原因状语接句子或者用becauseof后面接短语technologicaldevelopment词伙科技发展89. 事实是，一些工作已经被砍掉，因为机械化的原因。正确的句子:Thefactisthatsomejobshavebeenmaderedundantbecauseofmechanisation.我的句子:Infact,somejobshavebeencutbecauseof