云南省2017-2019年三年中考英语试题分类汇编：书面表达

1、书面表达2019第三节 书面表达（满分15分）A Weekend to Remember提示：请以“A Weeke nd to Remember为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一个令你难忘的周末 以及你的感悟。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。第三节 书面表达One possible version：A Weekend to RememberIt was a bright and sunny weekend. I went fishing with my father.We star

2、ted fishing as soon as we arrived at a clear lake. Half an hour passed but we got no fish. Ibecame impatient and wanted to give up.“Just wait patiently, son. Nothing in the world is easy to get. father encouraged me. MyI sat patiently to fish with my father. Finally, I got a beautiful big fish. A se

3、nse and happiness came to me.Ill remember this weekend forever because I have learn that being patient is so important.书面表达评分标准一档：（12-15分）：内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、基本无语言表达错误。二档：（8-11分）：内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错误较少。三档：（5-7分）：内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语言表达错误较多。四档：（1-4分）：有一定内容、但语言表达错误很多。（注意：书面表达语法错误全卷扣分不得超过2分；单词拼写错误全卷扣分不得超过2

4、分；袭卷中阅读材料的,抄袭部分不给分。 ）201856.书面表达Doing Something Nice to.提示:每个人都向往美好的生活,美好的生活需要我们真诚的付出和给予。请以“DoingSomething Nice to.为题,”写一篇英语短文,谈谈你曾经或将要为他人、社会等做的一件美好 的事情。要求：1.请先将题目补全后再做答；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个；3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计；4.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。【答案】Doing something nice to my friendA true friend reaches

5、 for your hand and touches your heart!Jerry is my good friend. Hes very thin. Last winter, he got ill. He had to go to hospital once a week. Hetook lots of medicine. I hoped he would be as strong as me. So every weekend, I asked him to practiceplaying basketball with me. I taught him how to play it.

6、 Now he is much stronger and healthier.I feel very happy to have done something nice to my friend.【解析】 本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。 灵活运用各种句式， 采用不同的表达方 式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须 认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定短语， 为文章增色不少， 如go to hospital；once a week；lotsof；as as等；So；Now；I feel very happy

7、 to等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻 辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。2017七、书面表达（满分15分）A Special Day提示：在每个人的生活中，总会有些特别的日子请根据所给题目A Special Day写一篇英 语短文，记叙你特别的一天要求：语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计请将短文写在答题卡上写在本试题卷上无效【分析】【高分句型一】Whats worse，I got aCin my favorite subject更糟糕的是，我最好的学科考了Cwhats worse更糟糕的是【高分句型一】It w

8、as my first time to have a birthday party这是我第一次举办生日会 动词不定式做后置定语，修饰time【解答】A Special DayI had a very special day on June 11th，2012（特别的一天）It was a sunny dayOn the way to school，my friend did something rude to meIt made me sadWhats worse，I got aCin my favorite subject【高分句型一】After school，I went home unhappilyItwas dark in the roomSuddenly the lights were on，and I heard the songHappy birthdayI wassurprised to see many people and a big cakeOh，its my birthday（难忘的 事情和经历）I wasso excited and hap