(完整word)2015年高中英语写作第29课时写作中高级词汇和短语的使用教案

1、第 29 课时 写作中高级词汇和短语的使用辅导科目英语年 级：学科教师：课 时 数：授课类型TCT写作中咼级词汇和短语的使用教学目标1、了解高考写作的特点和要求。2、掌握写作中的高级词汇和短语并学会使用。星级授课日期及时段教学内容Sudde nly I had an idea that some one had broke n into my house.TAn idea oc curred to me that some one had broke n into my house.TIt occurred to me that some one had broke n into my hou

2、se.由此改写引出写作中高级词汇和短语的使用的主题。（建议20-25分钟）T-写作中高级词汇和短语的使用（建议2-5分钟）二*奇宴誓貝2写作中高级词汇和短语的使用3.关于安徽高考英语写作的评分标准第五档（2125分）中有这样一段话：应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。”这就是说，学生仅运用基础的词汇和基本的 句型,不能体现出较强的语言运用能力，即使表达无语法错误，也不能得高分；相反有些错误，目的在有意识地使用复杂结构或较高级词汇，也不扣分，仍属于最高档次。高考把写作要求提到了这样一个高度，有利于反映学生的水平层次，有利于指导教学。因

3、此要求考生在语言上做到准确和得体的同时，注重上、下文连贯和表达方式的多样化。新的评分标准提倡考生使用高级词汇和复杂句式，运用过渡性词语增强文章的连贯性。因此，运用高级词汇和复杂句式，运用过 渡性词语是写作得高分的重要手段。2）善用小词、使用高级词汇使用高级词汇并不是用偏词、难词，而是一些运用得体的习惯表达方式。像access，available，annoyed，appealing，charm ing，cute，con fused，con tact，challe nging，con siderably，excepti on al, fasci nated, locate, participate

4、, quit, sig ni fica nt, schedule, terrific,级词汇。con seque ntly,dema nding,esse ntial,等单词，均可视作高用短语代替单词I have made up my mind to study En glish better this term.(I have no idea how to enl arge my vocabulary.(A burning cigarette end resulted in/led to the big fire.(Since my childhood I have bee n fond o

5、f music.(We will take the matter into acco un t(c on sideratio n).(同义词:同义词:同义词：decide)dont know)同义词：cause)like)同义词：con sider)4在写作中巧用、活用某些小词，常常会起到画龙点睛、四两拨千斤的作用。典型例题一 一12005 saw the successful launch of Shenzhou VI in China.（动词see）典型例题 At the news of his death I was shocked.（名词词组at the news of）典型例题 No

6、 one can en ter the office without permissi on.典型例题宀一They returned home, safe and sou nd.（形容词做状语）3）巧用习语（idiom）英语中有大量习语，如果运用得当，则可大大增加文章的感染力，在平时的学习过程中不断积累。典型例题What she expla ined does nt hold water.Many families struggle to make ends meet.她的解释站不住脚。很多家庭只能勉强维持生计。典型例题典型例题I dont know why she is always in

7、low spirits我不知道她为什么总是情绪低落。典型例题He turned a deaf ear to what I said.他对我的话一点也听不进去。典型例题、This sentence does nt make sen se.这个句子讲不通。复合句可以把结构松散的句子连接起来。高考写作中用到的复合句包括下列几种:1）定语从句典型例题The girl is spoke n highly of. Her compositi on was well writte n.（般）TThe girl whose compositi on was well writte n is spoke n h

8、ighly of.（高级）2） 状语从句典型例题After I enter college, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning.3） 名词性从句典型例题Xiao Mi ng was always late for school. His teacher did nt know why.THis teacher did nt know why Xiao Ming was always late for school.5.3、使用惯用句型1）强调句典型例题He didnt finish his ta

9、sk until midnight.TIt was not un til midni ght that he fini shed his task.3）倒装句典型例题 I was not able to see him aga in un til he came back from abroad.TNot un til he came back from abroad was I able to see him aga in.3） 分词短语、由with或without引导的短语典型例题 The driver escaped and did nt stop; he left the old ma

10、n lying on the road.TThe driver escaped without stopping, leaving the old man lying on the road.典型例题We sang and dan ced. We told jokes and stories. We had a good time.TWe had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and stories.典型例题My father sat i n the sofa. He was smok ing and readi ng a n ews

11、paper.TMy father was smok ing in the sofa with a n ewspaper in his hand4） 被动句典型例题We will hold the party on Saturday after noon.TThe party will be held on Saturday after noon.4、适当运用过渡手段过渡词语（也称为衔接词）能起到连接句与句或段与段的中间媒介作用，如果使用恰当，就能增强文章的连贯性，使 整篇文章顺畅自然，严密紧凑。1） 表示起始的过渡词语first of all, above all, to begi n wit

12、h, in my opinion, accord ing to, as far as等2） 表示时间的过渡词语first ,the n, later, mean while, at last, i n the end, fin ally, after that, since the n, for the first time,6as soon as, the next mome nt等3）表示空间的过渡词语near, next to, far from, on the left, to the right of, on one side ofon the ether side of, at t

13、he foot/top/endof, in the middle of4）表示因果的过渡词语so, thus, therefore, as a result （of）,because of, tha nks to5）表示转折的过渡词语but, yet, however, n evertheless, on the con trary, in spite of, i n fact等6）表示列举的过渡词语like, un like, for example, takeas an example, such as, that is, as follows, in other words, and s

14、o on7）表示递进的过渡词语still, also, besides, moreover, whats more, further more, on one handon the other hand, in addition,as well, not onlybut also8）表示总结的过渡词语in a word, in short, in brief, in general, on the whole, to sum up（建议5-10分钟）、按要求改写下列句子。1）En glish is widelyused in the world. Most bus in ess letters

15、 are writte n in En glish.（合并为并歹U句）En glish is widely used in the world and most bus in ess letters are writte n in En glish.2）People thought of someways to solve the problem. These soluti ons did nt work.（合并为并歹U句）People thought of some ways to solve the problem but these soluti ons did nt work.3）I

16、suggestthat you visit the Great Wall. It has a history of more tha n two thousa nd years.（合并为定语从句）I suggest that you visit the Great Wall, which has a history of more tha n two thousa nd years.4）July 11 has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005. Zheng He began his famous voyage on7.Ju

17、ly 11.（合并为定语从句）July 11, whe n Zheng He bega n his famous voyage, has bee n n amed the Saili ng Day in our countrysince 2005.5）I will not be able to meet you at the airport. I have some experime nts to do that day.（语从句）I will not be able to meet you at the airport because I have some experime nts to

18、do that day.6）The problem was complicated. He solved it in only two hours with a computer.（合并为状语从句）Though the problem is complicated, he solved it in only two hours with a computer.7） In the past five years, there have been changes in peoples diet. It is a fact.（合并为名词性从句）It is a fact that in the pas

19、t five years, there have been changes in peoples diet.8） The weather was fine. We went to visit the ZhongShan Park.（独立主格结构）The weather being fine, we went to visit the Zhon gSha n Park.9）You should never give up when you arefaced with difficulties.（非谓语+倒装句）Never should you give up whe n faced with d

20、ifficulties.10）When a man and a woman meet, thewoman first offers her hand.（改为强调句）When a man and a woma n meet, it is the woma n who first offers her hand.11）众所周知,吸烟危害健康。（一句多译）a.It is known to all that smoking does harm to peoples health.b.As is known to all, smoking harms peoples health.c.Every one

21、 knows that smok ing is harmful to peoples health.二、完成句子1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.T_, our journey was comfortable.2. We all think he is a great man.TWe all_ _3.Sudde nly I thought out a good idea.合并为状8T4. The studentsthere neednt pay for their books_ .T_ .5. As a r

22、esult the pla n was a failure.T96. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.T,she went pale with sorrow.7. She went toAustriain order to study music.TShe went to Austria_8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excitedT9. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.T.10. You can find

23、my house easily.T11 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.T12. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many thin gs.（使用名词性从句）T13. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort.（使用倒装句）T14. He did not know what had happe ned un til he had read the news in the newspaper.（T15. I passed the physics exam beca

24、use of your help.（用虚拟语气）T16. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.（使用过去分词）T17. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.（使用V-ing形式）T18.I wont believe what he says.（使用状语从句）T19.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.（用并歹U句）使用强调句型）10T20.He had no sooner come back f

25、rom Beijingthan he was sent abroad.（使用倒装句）11三、基础写作某报设有一个求助信箱，请根据以下表中列出的信息，以高三学生李华的名义给短信。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入五句话。高三学生现状负担过重的原因每天在校时间10小时每天作业时间3-4小时1.面临咼考每天娱乐时间几乎没有2.家长期望高每天睡眠时间不足Dear Mr. Helper,Im a senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly sta nd the great pressure.I am lo

26、ok ing forward to your advice.Yours sincerely,Li Hua写作步骤:审题体裁格式写信内容描写咼二现状人称、时态第人称、般现在时信息点的整6项合和排列Mr. Helper写一圭寸英文第2步整合信息，译成英语。1）每天在校时间约10小时。每天完成作业时间34小时。Every day westay at school for about ten hours tohave less ons. We spe nd at least three to fourhours doing our homework.2）每天几乎没有时间娱乐、消遣。a. We hard

27、ly have any time for relaxati on.b. Hardly can we find any time to do what we want.3）每天睡眠时间不足，不利于健康。a. We dont have eno ugh time to sleep, which does harm to our health.b. We suffer from lack of sleep, which, in the long run, is not good for our health.4）负担过重的原因是面临高考。a. The main cause of our heavy b

28、urde n is the pressure from the college entrance exam in ati on.b. The reas on why we are carry ing such a heavy burde n is that we are facing the college entrance exam in ati on.5）父母对我们的期望很高。a. Our pare nts expect too much of us.b. Our pare nts have high expectati ons of us.第3步连句成篇Dear Mr. Helper,I

29、m a senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the greatpressure.Every day we stay at school for about ten hours to have less ons_ spe nd at least three to fourhours doing our homework. _, hardly can we find any time to do what we want. _ , Wesufferfrom lack of

30、sleep, which, in the long run, is not good for our health.The reason why we are carrying such a heavy burden is that we are getting the pressure from thecollege entrance exam in ati on._ , Our pare nts have high expectati ons of us.I am look ing forward to your advice.113Yours sincerely114Li HuaKeys

31、: and; As a result; Whats worse; In addition;回顾与自我总结学习法批注：第一步采用回顾学习法，让学生自己回忆在本模块学到了哪些知识点；鼓励学生自己梳理课堂思路和知识点，实在想不起来的再翻阅讲解的内容。第二步是通过所作的练习总结，即根据“斩妖除魔”环节，引导学生自行总结并有意识地使用写作中的高级词汇和短语。附：高中英语常用的重要句型1.It was not un til midni ght that he fini shed his task.2.Not un til he came back from abroad was I able to see

32、 him aga in.3.The harder you work, the greater progress you will make.4.He walked around the house, gun in hand.5.May you be in good health!6.Wish you a pleasa nt journey back home!score:_17.The professor was a humorous man with big nose and deep-set eyes.8.What surprised me most was his imagi nati on and patie nee.9.He lay on the grass, with his eyes look ing