2020北京市海淀区高三英语一模一模应用文讲评-final课件

1、命题依据 英语学科核心素养 思维品质指思维在逻辑性、批判性、创新性等方面所表现的能力和水平。思维品质体现英语学科核心素养的心智特征。思维品质的发展有助于提升学生分析和解决问题的能力，使他们能够从跨文化视角观察和认识世界，对事物做出正确的价值判断。命题依据 必修课程主要内容与要求-文化知识 学习并初步运用英语介绍中国传统节日和中国传统文化及其内涵，具有传播中国文化的意识。 选修一课程主要内容与要求-文化知识 使用英语简述中国文化基本知识，包括中国传统节日、中国传统文化的表现形式，主动传播和弘扬中华优秀文化。 选修二课程主要内容与要求-文化知识 运用中外典故和有代表性的文化标志表达意义和态度，有效

2、进行文化沟通。审题解题02 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim得知你对探月感兴趣，发来邮件和你讨论该话题。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 月亮在中国文化中的寓意； 2. 你对人类探月活动的看法。 写信人：高三学生收信人：朋友Jim写作背景：对方得知你对探月感兴趣，所以想与你探讨首尾段交际性表达：承上启下、（写信目的 ）+ 总结上文 、（反问对方） 1. 月亮在中国文化中的寓意； 月亮代表女性； 月亮代表对故乡、家人、朋友的思念； 圆月代表和家人团圆；圆满； 月圆月缺代表人生中的圆满与缺憾 月亮代表爱情； 月光代表纯洁；宁静 推荐结构：先总后分，寓意+支撑细节 2. 你对人类探

3、月活动的看法。 为探索宇宙打下基础； 推动科技发展，进而影响每个人的日常生活； 探月者有勇气，有牺牲精神； 体现大国实力； 改变人类对于地球的看法； 满足好奇心这一人类的本性； （有意义；不容易；好前景） 推荐结构：先总后分；具体看法+支撑细节Possible version: I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration. It started with what I had been told about the moon as a kid and grew stronger w

4、ith time. As you can guess, there is rich cultural meaning behind the faithful companion of the earth. In Chinese culture, as opposed to the masculinity of the sun, the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away. People feel reass

5、ured knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger. Human beings have never stopped exploring our closest neighbor. I believe it is of great significance. The development of relevant technology facilitates the progress of science in general, which benefit

6、s our everyday life. Whats more, I think moon exploration shows an important human trait, that is, curiosity about the unknown, which is the driving force that has brought our species this far. I hope you find what Ive mentioned above interesting and reasonable. By the way, what do you think of when

7、 you gaze at the moon? Write back and tell me about it!评分细则03评分原则 1本题总分为15分，按4个档次给分。 2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3评分时应考虑：内容是否完整，条理是否清楚，交际是否得体，语言是否准确。 4拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 5词数少于50，从总分中减去1分。第一档（13分15分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。 内容完整，条理清楚； 交际得体，表达时充分考虑到了交际的需求；体现出较强

8、的语言运用能力。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（9分12分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。 内容、条理和交际等方面基本符合要求； 所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求； 语法或用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（4分8分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 内容不完整； 所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。第四档（1分3分）未完成试题规定的任务。 写了少量相关信息； 语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。0分未传达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关。高考应用文阅卷标准释疑 残篇怎么处理？ 要具体看缺的是什么。缺要点，不及格。缺结

9、尾交际，不能上一档。理论上说，如果只是最后一句无关紧要的话，但是没有写完，依然可以上一档。 但是，不要留下一句没写完的话！没有写完不如不写！高考应用文阅卷标准释疑 交际性占多少分？ 不要小看交际性！交际不得体，不能上一档。高考应用文阅卷标准释疑 不符合事实的等于没有写，不倒扣分。（涉及价值观等重大问题的情况除外）其他评分中须注意的问题要点一中，如只写月亮上有嫦娥，这是传说，不算寓意，但是确实和中国传统文化，和月亮相关。最高10分（即最高二档下）。要点一中，如只提到月亮在中国的诗中多次出现，并未说具体含义，等于没有写出要点一，不及格。要点二中的“看法”，写负面的等于没有写。如果只有负面看法，或者

10、是负面看法为主，不及格。负面占的篇幅基本等于正面看法篇幅的，不能上一档。要点二中对探月的“看法”，如果仅仅是对古代观察月亮（观察和遐想）的看法，没有提到现代人类的探月（科技方面），不能上一档。注意要点二的“看法”指主要指对某一个人或某一件事的想法意见。要注意区分看法和“事实”。事实不是看法，只能作为看法的支撑细节。1.means-meaning2.make us dont miss home3.First is the meaning of gathering4.symbolsymbolize5.Hoping to your reply6.I am looking for your reply

11、7. moon 8. A symbol of luckyPossible version:Dear Jim, I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration. It started with what I had been told about the moon as a kid and grew stronger with time. As you can guess, there is rich cultural meaning behind the faithful compan

12、ion of the earth. In Chinese culture, as opposed to the masculinity of the sun, the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away. People feel reassured knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their

13、 messenger. Human beings have never stopped exploring our closest neighbor. I believe it is of great significance. The developmentof relevant technology facilitates the progress of science in general, which benefits our everyday life. Whats more, I think moon exploration shows an important human tra

14、it, that is, curiosity about the unknown, which is the driving force that has brought our species this far. I hope you find what Ive mentioned above interesting and reasonable. By the way, what do you think of when you gaze at the moon? Write back and tell me about it!Yours, Li Hua考场作文考场作文 15分分 Im m

15、ore than pleased to discuss about moon exploration with you. And I would love to share my personal perspective. The moon has always been a symbol with many meanings in Chinese culture. As the moon is bright and round in special days every month, the round shape implies the whole family staying toget

16、her . Also, because of the ancient tale that a beauty flew to the moon, the moon is regarded as a tranquil , lonely but mysterious paradise by people. In modern era, the moon becomes more significant for the benefits from its exploration . The knowledge we gain from the process facilitates further i

17、nto universe and eventually make space exploration possible. Whats more, the exploration could impel the science and technology development. The ability to discover the moon has been a reference to a countrys power. Have you seen a photo taken by Chinas satellite, unfolding the veil of the back side

18、 of the moon? I think its really beautiful and meaningful ,so I enclose it below to share with you. I would love to hear your opinions about the moon exploration as well.Please write me soon.9分。基本完成写作任务，语言简单，细节有添加字数之嫌，条理性有待提高。语言错误较多但不影响理解。9分。基本完成写作任务，但语言质量差，有效细节不多。10分。要点齐全，有部分语言错误。要点2看法细节过于抽象，措辞过于绝对

19、，欠缺逻辑性，无观点内涵。11分。要点1重点不突出，无关细节过多。有部分语言错误。11分。基本完成试题规定任务，要点齐全，结构完整，逻辑清晰，细节支撑稍显不足，有个别语言错误。12分。基本完成试题规定任务。逻辑完整，要点齐全，结构清晰。有部分语法和拼写错误，但不影响理解。内容层次性稍欠缺。13分。较好地完成了试卷规定的写作任务。要点1的第2个细节欠妥当，未明确指出月亮的免征意义。15分 语言流畅地道，表达准确、丰富，体现出较好的语言功底。逻辑清晰，内容详实，细节丰富，立意高远，完全达到了预期的写作目的。15分。完全完成了试题规定的写作任务。内容完整，条理清晰，交际得体，体现了较强的语言应用能力和较高的人文素养，有一定的时事性。7分。未恰当完成试题写作任务，语言错误较多，影响理